jetjatin Posted January 29, 2011 Share Posted January 29, 2011 (edited) Status - Finished! Story - 1997 the city of Los Santos, "Michael Kennedy" lives in Liberty City brother wants him to come and help together on Los Santos. The Brother name is "Adam Kennedy" he's very nice guy in Los Santos everyone knows him, he lives in "Mullholand" at Los Santos. His Cousin is Alive but novbody knows where he is. Everything is OK, but Los Santos is a Worst City which is dangerous. So many gangmembers and there hoodz. The Gang Called "Ballas" is a Most Dangerous gang there. Michael, who visited first time on Los Santos, Don't know about the city, When He comes in the city, he'll find (Mike Watson) his father is work at Shop. He also work to Clean the Gangmembers in the City. Now Michael is back with his new friend Mike work together help and take control the Streets... _________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Videos\Trailer _________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Screenshots :(Please Click on Screenshots for HD) Missions: Chapter 1 - The Hardcore 1. Intro - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=11011 Back to Life! - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=11018 Death in the Darkness - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=11030 Explode! - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=11058 Crime? - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=11059 The Case - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=11060 The Hardcore [Missionpack] - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=11111 ===================================================== Chapter 2 - The Chronicles of Adam Kennedy The Management - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=11110 The Gang - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=11115 The Boss - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=11116 The Journey - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=11126 The Zombies - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=11129 The Zombie Jungle - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=11130 Reality or Nightmare? - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=11143 The Los Santos - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=11154 The Chronicles of Adam Kennedy [Missionpack] - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=11166 ===================================================== Chapter 3 Gang Wars Gang War - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=11160 The Dogs! - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=11170 Stealth Day - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=11192 Blood in the Dance floor - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=11193 Cops Plan! - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=11208 Starting work with you? - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=11210 RsR Revenge - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=11215 Gang Wars [Missionpack] - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=11216 ===================================================== Chapter 4 The Left Bringing back Family - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=11232 The Plan! - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=11233 Finish it! - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=11235 Finish it! Part 2 - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=11240 The Left [Missionpack] - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=11241 Missionpack! Edited February 14, 2011 by jetjatin Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/468574-gta-hardcore/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
jetjatin Posted January 29, 2011 Author Share Posted January 29, 2011 (edited) Michael Kennedy He's the main character who visited first time in Los Santos, Little brother of Adam Kennedy. Status - Injured Alive Gang - Friendly ____________________________________________________________________________________ Mike Watson A Friend who meet the guy (Michael Kennedy) they help together to find a way to get rid of there enemies. Status - Injured Alive Gang - Friendly ___________________________________________________________________________________ Rebecca Sister of Adam and Michael Status - Dead Gang - Friendly ___________________________________________________________________________________ Jethro A Dealer who's work is repairing vehicles...(An old friend of Mike) Status - Alive ___________________________________________________________________________________ Adam Kennedy He's also a main character. Brother of Michael, Lives in Mullholand in Los Santos. Status - Alive Gang - Friendly ___________________________________________________________________________________ Uncle Loony He's the Mike's Uncle, Who is killed by Los santos Vagos Status - Dead __________________________________________________________________________________ Officer Jimmy Hernandez The Officer. Mike know him.. But now he is the Enemy. Status - Alive Gang - Enemy __________________________________________________________________________________ Ron A one of Friendly gang member of Adam and John. But now he is killed by Los santos vagos. Robbert and Steve with Michael take the revenge and kill the Motherf*ckers, Who killed him. Can be found in this. Status - Dead Gang - Friendly _______________________________________________________________________________ Robbert Also a Friend of John. Status - Alive Gang - Friendly _____________________________________________________________________________ Steve Haff! Finally a Friendly gangmember of John and Adam. Status - Alive Gang - Friendly _____________________________________________________________________________ John Capland An old friend of Mike lives in San firriro somewhere in Hashbury with his gang (Ron, Robbert & Steve) You'll find him in the mission "The Gang" Edited February 13, 2011 by jetjatin Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/468574-gta-hardcore/?do=findComment&comment=1060316346 Share on other sites More sharing options...
jetjatin Posted January 29, 2011 Author Share Posted January 29, 2011 Trailer Released! Very nice trailer go and check out Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/468574-gta-hardcore/?do=findComment&comment=1060316403 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rewas Posted January 29, 2011 Share Posted January 29, 2011 ohhh nice Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/468574-gta-hardcore/?do=findComment&comment=1060316445 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rytuklis Posted January 29, 2011 Share Posted January 29, 2011 Well... Trailer is cool... I didnt tried missions yet, because i cant right now, but when i will be able to, i will play it. But one problem- you need to improve your english... It has SO MUCH grammar and spelling mistakes... Like " Is meet to" should be "is going to meet (And the guys name)" ... But well, still , very good Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/468574-gta-hardcore/?do=findComment&comment=1060316570 Share on other sites More sharing options...
jetjatin Posted January 30, 2011 Author Share Posted January 30, 2011 Well... Trailer is cool... I didnt tried missions yet, because i cant right now, but when i will be able to, i will play it. But one problem- you need to improve your english... It has SO MUCH grammar and spelling mistakes... Like " Is meet to" should be "is going to meet (And the guys name)" ... But well, still , very good I Agree With you you said is right, I'm just lives in another country, very different language. So I'm not so good in english but i will try to learn english... Thanks Anyway Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/468574-gta-hardcore/?do=findComment&comment=1060317194 Share on other sites More sharing options...
jetjatin Posted January 30, 2011 Author Share Posted January 30, 2011 ohhh nice Thanks Coolman You always nice guy Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/468574-gta-hardcore/?do=findComment&comment=1060317201 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rytuklis Posted January 30, 2011 Share Posted January 30, 2011 Well... Trailer is cool... I didnt tried missions yet, because i cant right now, but when i will be able to, i will play it. But one problem- you need to improve your english... It has SO MUCH grammar and spelling mistakes... Like " Is meet to" should be "is going to meet (And the guys name)" ... But well, still , very good I Agree With you you said is right, I'm just lives in another country, very different language. So I'm not so good in english but i will try to learn english... Thanks Anyway Dont worry about that.. I'm from Lithuania, far away from any english country, but look- Internet and english video games are the best english teachers.... At first my english was horrible, but step-by-step i learned it, believe me, sooner or later, your english will be better Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/468574-gta-hardcore/?do=findComment&comment=1060317458 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rewas Posted January 30, 2011 Share Posted January 30, 2011 ohhh nice Thanks Coolman You always nice guy lol Not always Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/468574-gta-hardcore/?do=findComment&comment=1060317502 Share on other sites More sharing options...
jetjatin Posted January 30, 2011 Author Share Posted January 30, 2011 (edited) NEW! Videos, Missions, Screenshots and Characters Released. Go and check out! Edited January 30, 2011 by jetjatin Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/468574-gta-hardcore/?do=findComment&comment=1060317506 Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Scrotum Posted January 30, 2011 Share Posted January 30, 2011 I played them and they are nice. You should make them longer and tone up the difficulty and watch your spelling. Apart from that, good work. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/468574-gta-hardcore/?do=findComment&comment=1060317888 Share on other sites More sharing options...
jetjatin Posted January 30, 2011 Author Share Posted January 30, 2011 I played them and they are nice. You should make them longer and tone up the difficulty and watch your spelling. Apart from that, good work. Thanks! Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/468574-gta-hardcore/?do=findComment&comment=1060317893 Share on other sites More sharing options...
jetjatin Posted January 30, 2011 Author Share Posted January 30, 2011 MORE SCREENSHOTS ADDED. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/468574-gta-hardcore/?do=findComment&comment=1060317903 Share on other sites More sharing options...
jetjatin Posted January 30, 2011 Author Share Posted January 30, 2011 New Mission Released and Characters Updated. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/468574-gta-hardcore/?do=findComment&comment=1060318069 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyCJ Posted January 30, 2011 Share Posted January 30, 2011 I'm going to play them right now i give you feedback when i finish Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/468574-gta-hardcore/?do=findComment&comment=1060318084 Share on other sites More sharing options...
jetjatin Posted January 31, 2011 Author Share Posted January 31, 2011 (edited) For those who already said - Please don't comment about my bad English.... Its not good, but i improve my English Sorry for my Bad English If anybody don't like my mission serie\Topic, Please PM me, I'll improve it. (Well i hard work on making this Topic, Such as - Screenshots = If you can make screenshots like these, let's show me , Trailer - After Watching it, everybody is saying "Trailer is cool, missions good" ?) I'm not angry, or if you don't like my topic, no problem. I'll make my missions and complete them Edited January 31, 2011 by jetjatin Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/468574-gta-hardcore/?do=findComment&comment=1060318867 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doublepulse Posted January 31, 2011 Share Posted January 31, 2011 Ok So I completed the first 3 missions . Its a very good start! I like the length in mission two and little bit in Chapter 3. Ofcourse dont make them too long or too short . It is a simple start.. and I like how you used the coloring text and timeout objectives to make it more interesting. Hmm.. Im trying to find something you can improve on, but you will learn many new good techniques as you play other people's missions and create your own. Try not to make driving too long.. but I dont have a problem with it, others might. Overall Great work Jetjatin! I will be curious how the future missions are. Also these missions are great examples how it is not hard to learn DYOM in a short amount of time Cant wait for more! Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/468574-gta-hardcore/?do=findComment&comment=1060319038 Share on other sites More sharing options...
jetjatin Posted January 31, 2011 Author Share Posted January 31, 2011 I don't have any words Anyway Thanks! Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/468574-gta-hardcore/?do=findComment&comment=1060319058 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doublepulse Posted January 31, 2011 Share Posted January 31, 2011 Sorry for the long message! Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/468574-gta-hardcore/?do=findComment&comment=1060319065 Share on other sites More sharing options...
jetjatin Posted January 31, 2011 Author Share Posted January 31, 2011 Sorry for the long message! Why are you saying sorry? For nothing bro? Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/468574-gta-hardcore/?do=findComment&comment=1060319075 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rytuklis Posted January 31, 2011 Share Posted January 31, 2011 Okay, now this is my opinion on the missions. And remember, that it is only MY opinion.... There will be 5 different stages: Awesome, Good, Not bad, bad, Could have been better, Awful INTRO: Setting: Awful: Ok now first of all, when ballas attacks you, that guy with pink t shirt dissappears, then appears some kind of guy with yellow bandana, after gunfight he dissappears and then appears the same guy with pink t-shirt..... Story: Good Story is good, i dont have any complaints about it Grammar/Text: Bad.. It had a lot of grammar mistakes which made story almost impossible to understand..... Difficulty: Not Bad Length: Good I think you will read this and understand what is bad. But anyways, mission was great.. Gonna test some others soon and give you my feedback Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/468574-gta-hardcore/?do=findComment&comment=1060319517 Share on other sites More sharing options...
jetjatin Posted February 1, 2011 Author Share Posted February 1, 2011 (edited) CONTENT OF POST REMOVED Edited March 13, 2011 by jetjatin Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/468574-gta-hardcore/?do=findComment&comment=1060320582 Share on other sites More sharing options...
jetjatin Posted February 1, 2011 Author Share Posted February 1, 2011 (edited) REMOVED Edited March 13, 2011 by jetjatin Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/468574-gta-hardcore/?do=findComment&comment=1060320597 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rytuklis Posted February 1, 2011 Share Posted February 1, 2011 Dude.. Why the hell are you posting topics on forums if you dont want people to feedback? You want everybody to say "Omg your missions is cool!!" When they're not the best missions in the universe... I just gave you my opinion, i didnt meant that your missions is VERY bad or something.. Its very good, story is catchy, but i gave you the tips WHAT is WRONG in the mission and WHAT you should IMPROVE.. You should learn one thing- if you dont want to get negative comments.. Dont even post a damn topic in forums..... IF somebody says to me something bad about my missions, i accept it, i dont go flaming them around like you do... So learn tolerance please.. And accept EVERYBODY's opinion even if they are negative, you probably understand that you will not get positive comments every time right? Whatever good luck on this project, i played another missions and i have to say they were better then INTRO and was cool. See ya Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/468574-gta-hardcore/?do=findComment&comment=1060320598 Share on other sites More sharing options...
jetjatin Posted February 1, 2011 Author Share Posted February 1, 2011 Dude.. Why the hell are you posting topics on forums if you dont want people to feedback? You want everybody to say "Omg your missions is cool!!" When they're not the best missions in the universe... I just gave you my opinion, i didnt meant that your missions is VERY bad or something.. Its very good, story is catchy, but i gave you the tips WHAT is WRONG in the mission and WHAT you should IMPROVE.. You should learn one thing- if you dont want to get negative comments.. Dont even post a damn topic in forums..... IF somebody says to me something bad about my missions, i accept it, i dont go flaming them around like you do... So learn tolerance please.. And accept EVERYBODY's opinion even if they are negative, you probably understand that you will not get positive comments every time right? Whatever good luck on this project, i played another missions and i have to say they were better then INTRO and was cool. See ya I Don't want your Feedback!! LEAVE ME ALONE!! Stop hanging around on my topic!! Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/468574-gta-hardcore/?do=findComment&comment=1060320605 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rytuklis Posted February 1, 2011 Share Posted February 1, 2011 @Rytuklis: Please don't comment!!!!!! LEAVE ME ALONE!!!!!!!!!!!! Will you tell this to anybody who will say something wrong to your missions? You have to understand that YOU'RE NEW and your missions is not perfect... Mine isnt good either, they're bad, i know, because i'm new with DYOM too.. When we will reach such a level like leoncj or pauliux22 did, then we can say that we're GOOD mission designers... I just gave you a tips, what can be better, but if you want me to stay out of your topic? Ok , i will, i was about to play your missions, i enjoyed 2nd mission but now i dont want to play them anymore, if author has no tolerance to other opinions and wants ONLY GOOD opinions in his topic... Thats why more people dont like you,... OK so see ya Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/468574-gta-hardcore/?do=findComment&comment=1060320606 Share on other sites More sharing options...
jetjatin Posted February 1, 2011 Author Share Posted February 1, 2011 @Rytuklis: Please don't comment!!!!!! LEAVE ME ALONE!!!!!!!!!!!! Will you tell this to anybody who will say something wrong to your missions? You have to understand that YOU'RE NEW and your missions is not perfect... Mine isnt good either, they're bad, i know, because i'm new with DYOM too.. When we will reach such a level like leoncj or pauliux22 did, then we can say that we're GOOD mission designers... I just gave you a tips, what can be better, but if you want me to stay out of your topic? Ok , i will, i was about to play your missions, i enjoyed 2nd mission but now i dont want to play them anymore, if author has no tolerance to other opinions and wants ONLY GOOD opinions in his topic... Thats why more people dont like you,... OK so see ya Hey Dude! Please plz plz leave me alone.....and stop viewing my topic..... Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/468574-gta-hardcore/?do=findComment&comment=1060320608 Share on other sites More sharing options...
jetjatin Posted February 1, 2011 Author Share Posted February 1, 2011 (edited) The Project is not canceled! Edited February 1, 2011 by jetjatin Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/468574-gta-hardcore/?do=findComment&comment=1060320615 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rytuklis Posted February 1, 2011 Share Posted February 1, 2011 Why the hell did you just ... CANCELED IT? Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/468574-gta-hardcore/?do=findComment&comment=1060320622 Share on other sites More sharing options...
jetjatin Posted February 1, 2011 Author Share Posted February 1, 2011 Why the hell did you just ... CANCELED IT? Yes. My one project is pending Death to Spies and another "Prison Break" (Finished) Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/468574-gta-hardcore/?do=findComment&comment=1060320626 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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