Build Up Your San Andreas Gang

[Notna]

Got my computer working, so here is the first mission of The Leone's:

On The Way Back Home

It is not a long mission and doesn't involve much gameplay, but, anyways.

[alucardiff]

Roleplaying feeling? I'm in LOVE!

Secronom, don't do this sh*t anymore though (Question and Answer). Such a high cash value for the beginning is utterly stupid. If you really wanna continue this, do something like 5% profits increase or something, but not brute net huge money wad.

[Mati]

@Notna: Pretty nice mission and a good intro. There were some grammar mistakes (at one point you had to use ''her'' instead of ''she'' for example) but nobody's English is prefect. I didn't get why Giovanni looks Chinese..

You're getting 50$ like the rest got for their intro mission.

[alifjenius]

Uploaded my first mission. I'm buying 10.5 grams of Marijuana in the mission, which mean I only have $25 in the bank (what a poor Ruskies -_-)

 

Pervaya Robata

 

The title of the mission means "First Job" in Russian. Enjoy and rate the mission !

[Notna]

Thanks mati.

 

For my next mission to the story, I am buying a 1 litre of Love Juice.

[alucardiff]

Here's the mission selling dem DURGZ.

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=14732

Forgot to publish it.

 

Mission profit + drugs profit = GREAT SUCCESS!

Let me think some time about my next step, also gotta reinstall SA.

[alucardiff]

Sorry for double-posting.

New mission for the Ballas. I'm doing this in style. When you guys gonna update my drug profit and mission profit? Also, this mission's profit. I'm in for some money, YEAAAH!

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=14734

[Mati]

I played both of them.

 

Ballas drug mission 2 - This mission was... decent. The drug deal looked like most of the other drug deal missions. Plus, it was quite short. But I know you just wanted to gain drug money on this one

A strong + was the dialogue. You're already one of my favorite DYOM dialogue writers instead of the usual ''Hey bro, let's do that drug deal''.

 

You're getting 41$ for the mission + the drugs profit of 90$. For this mission, you're gaining a total of 131$.

 

Ballas robbery mission 1 This was better than above. This robbery actually looked like a real gangsta robbery. I love the logic you're putting in your mission. 90% of the mission designers wouldn't think about the police station. Nonetheless, the robbery itself was just the usual sh*t.

I'll give you 60$ for this mission.

 

This makes a total of 191$ that needs to be added.

 

Anyway, working on my mission now.

[alucardiff]

Gimme a ball of meth. Secronom, sign in goddammit!

[Mati]

Gimme a ball of meth. Secronom, sign in goddammit!

This wouldn't happen if we had a BUYSAG account -_-

@alifjenius: sh*t sorry, somehow I didn't see your post. I'll let someone else rate it.

[General Scrotum]

I already said I wasn't going to make a BUYSAG account, so stop asking or moaning about it.

 

Going to rate alifjenius mission now and I will edit the main post after that.

[Mati]

It's only because you don't want to loose the 50+ pages...

I'll post my mission tomorrow, I'm watching Paranormal Activity right now

[Gorgonit]

I uploaded the mission 2, I selled the drugs.

Contact

Mah profit plz.

[General Scrotum]

alifjenius: Nice mission, it contained some nice dialogues but a few Russian words. Still, it was nice for an intro. What I didn't really like is the drug dealer selling like that in the street. I see you added the San Andreas Traitors which are from your mission pack SA Noire (I believe).

 

Anyway, here's the money: ($100+$50)-$75)=$75.

 

10.5 Grams of Marijuana added.

[General Scrotum]

'The new gang leadership system is to add a roleplaying feeling to the game.' Secronom President

 

Since having only two ranks was quite boring, in my opinion, I decided to add more ranks to bring diversity and a roleplaying feel to the game. At the beginning, you start at the bottomof the ladder. That means that if you are in the Russian Mafia, you start out as a Shestyorka. To reach Pakhan rank, which is leader, you need to complete a certain number of criterias such as a certain number of missions, quality missions, etc. Or, you can be elected Pakhan by the rest of the gang. This way, gangs can be more complex and pro designers won't be qualified as new designers (in BUYSAG game) seeing a new guy might be Shestyorka level and another one might be a Majordomo.

 

Hope this clears out a few doubts. If you need any more information, feel free to give a hola at me.

[Gorgonit]

 

'The new gang leadership system is to add a roleplaying feeling to the game.' Secronom President

 

Since having only two ranks was quite boring, in my opinion, I decided to add more ranks to bring diversity and a roleplaying feel to the game. At the beginning, you start at the bottomof the ladder. That means that if you are in the Russian Mafia, you start out as a Shestyorka. To reach Pakhan rank, which is leader, you need to complete a certain number of criterias such as a certain number of missions, quality missions, etc. Or, you can be elected Pakhan by the rest of the gang. This way, gangs can be more complex and pro designers won't be qualified as new designers (in BUYSAG game) seeing a new guy might be Shestyorka level and another one might be a Majordomo.

 

Hope this clears out a few doubts. If you need any more information, feel free to give a hola at me.

Could you add more ranks to my gang? And check out my mission please.

Edited October 6, 2011 by Gorgonit

[Mati]

'The new gang leadership system is to add a roleplaying feeling to the game.' Secronom President

 

Since having only two ranks was quite boring, in my opinion, I decided to add more ranks to bring diversity and a roleplaying feel to the game. At the beginning, you start at the bottomof the ladder. That means that if you are in the Russian Mafia, you start out as a Shestyorka. To reach Pakhan rank, which is leader, you need to complete a certain number of criterias such as a certain number of missions, quality missions, etc. Or, you can be elected Pakhan by the rest of the gang. This way, gangs can be more complex and pro designers won't be qualified as new designers (in BUYSAG game) seeing a new guy might be Shestyorka level and another one might be a Majordomo.

 

Hope this clears out a few doubts. If you need any more information, feel free to give a hola at me.

I hope this doesn't go for the mission themselves. I still want to tell my own story and have multiple protagonists (maybe even the leader).

[alifjenius]

'The new gang leadership system is to add a roleplaying feeling to the game.' Secronom President

 

Since having only two ranks was quite boring, in my opinion, I decided to add more ranks to bring diversity and a roleplaying feel to the game. At the beginning, you start at the bottomof the ladder. That means that if you are in the Russian Mafia, you start out as a Shestyorka. To reach Pakhan rank, which is leader, you need to complete a certain number of criterias such as a certain number of missions, quality missions, etc. Or, you can be elected Pakhan by the rest of the gang. This way, gangs can be more complex and pro designers won't be qualified as new designers (in BUYSAG game) seeing a new guy might be Shestyorka level and another one might be a Majordomo.

 

Hope this clears out a few doubts. If you need any more information, feel free to give a hola at me.

Man, how do you find these Russian words ? And what it is, one by one, exactly mean ?

 

I see that Mafia in Russian is Mafiya, am I right ?

[General Scrotum]

alirfjenius: You are right. Mafia is Mafiya.

 

Anyway;

 

Shestyorka: Lowest rank. Comes from a Russian cards game called Durak (which means 'fool') where the six is the lowest card.

 

Boyevik: Someone in charge of recruiting new guys. It is also divided in three groups;

-Kryshas; Violent enforcers

-Torpedo; Contract killers

-Byki; Bodyguards.

 

Majordomo: It's like an underboss and a high ranked member of the organisation.

 

Pakhan (Krestnii Otets); Leader (Godfather).

 

Gorgonit: I will add more. If you have any sugesstions of ranks, tell them to me. Currently, you are like the leader because 'Snakehead' in the original game is like the leader of the Da Nang Boys (source: mission 'The Da Nang Thang').

 

Gorgonit: Well, apart from the driving, mission two was quite short. The color of 'Vendor' word tricked me because when a name is red, it's usually because the guy is an enemy. You could try to add a few Vietnamese words in your missions. Your story is interesting until now, which means you should keep it like this. Make your missions longer and you should be ok.

 

Overall; $53 for the mission, plus $115 as your current cash and $50 for the sell of the Love Juice's Litre ($115+$50+$53)=$218.

[Gorgonit]

 

alirfjenius: You are right. Mafia is Mafiya.

 

Anyway;

 

Shestyorka: Lowest rank. Comes from a Russian cards game called Durak (which means 'fool') where the six is the lowest card.

 

Boyevik: Someone in charge of recruiting new guys. It is also divided in three groups;

-Kryshas; Violent enforcers

-Torpedo; Contract killers

-Byki; Bodyguards.

 

Majordomo: It's like an underboss and a high ranked member of the organisation.

 

Pakhan (Krestnii Otets); Leader (Godfather).

 

Gorgonit: I will add more. If you have any sugesstions of ranks, tell them to me. Currently, you are like the leader because 'Snakehead' in the original game is like the leader of the Da Nang Boys (source: mission 'The Da Nang Thang').

 

Gorgonit: Well, apart from the driving, mission two was quite short. The color of 'Vendor' word tricked me because when a name is red, it's usually because the guy is an enemy. You could try to add a few Vietnamese words in your missions. Your story is interesting until now, which means you should keep it like this. Make your missions longer and you should be ok.

 

Overall; $53 for the mission, plus $115 as your current cash and $50 for the sell of the Love Juice's Litre ($115+$50+$53)=$218.

Both were short because basically when I was designing the first one I had no time to make it longer, so I split it in two parts. I have some suggestions for my ranks.

 

Mới làm quen. (Novice)

Đường phố người đàn ông. (Street Man)

Katana mới bắt đầu. (Katana Begineer)

Thuốc nghiện. (Drug Addict)

Lớn. (Major)

Lóc. (Snakehead)

[General Scrotum]

Do you have any ideas how we write those Vietnamese words in 'our' letters?

 

EDIT: Look at the Russian Mafia ranks. They are said like that in Russian but written in English.

[Gorgonit]

 

Do you have any ideas how we write those Vietnamese words in 'our' letters?

Can you copy and paste it? I'm not Vietnamit, I just use Google's translater and got the translation.

EDIT: I want sum' Micro Uzi's for my gang. 218 - 145 = 73$

Edited October 6, 2011 by Gorgonit

[Gorgonit]

Sorry for double post, here my idea:

 

Moi lam quen. (Novice)

Duong pho nguoi dan ong. (Street Man)

Katana moi bat au. (Katana Begineer)

Thuoc nghien. (Drug Addict)

Lon. (Major)

Loc. (Snakehead)

[General Scrotum]

I'll just copy and paste it in the original language.

 

Adding the weapon right now also.

 

EDIT: Nevermind, I decided just to put the English word.

Edited October 6, 2011 by Secronom President

[Gorgonit]

I'll just copy and paste it in the original language.

 

Adding the weapon right now also.

Okay then, I'll use the ranks in my next missions.

[alifjenius]

Uploaded the 2nd mission. Selling the Marijuana (all of them)

 

Prodazha Narkota

 

DYOM website cannot put the a in the end due to the text limitation

The title of the mission means "Sell The Drugs" in Russian. Enjoy and rate the mission !

[General Scrotum]

alifjenius: The mission was nice, but try to avoid whole sentences only in Russian. A few Russian words followed by English ones are ok, but not whole sentences. Nice text coloring. I found the part where the SAT attack you at the deal hard, especially if you reach three stars as your wanted level.

 

$75 (current cash) + $63 (mission rating) + $40x3 (sell of the three 3.5 Grams of Marijuana) = $258

[Notna]

Can I ask, why you didn't update my list in the main post? Cause I already made the first mission and buyed some drugs, you can find those posts from the previous page.

[General Scrotum]

Main post updated.

 

I added Notna's things and added information about the new gang leadership system at the bottom of the post.

 

EDIT: Selling the Maverick and the AK-47 I, the Loco Syndicate, own. Raises my cash to $1680.

Edited October 7, 2011 by Secronom President

[alucardiff]

Main post updated? Bullsh*t. My gang status is still the same.

Where's my meth ball?

Here's a misc mission.

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=14750

This is a pretty hard one, so I tweaked it to make it easier. Still, if you're half blind and you're having spasms all the time, this mission is pure hell. TIP: NEVER let Mess out of your sight, he is important as f*ck.