TonyCJ Posted January 5, 2011 Share Posted January 5, 2011 (edited) Story:It's year 1997 gang's are living normal life at San Fierro but it has all changed for now There is triad gang San Fierro Blue's gang The triads are weakest gang in San Fierro the leader in triad's is Woozie. Woozie lived at China but when he's mother and father were killed then he ran to San Fierro joined triad gang and became Leader Of Triad's.Then joined Dan Johnson With triad's and is one of the best triad's at San Fierro but now when TRIAD'S are always destroyed Dn need to do something. San Fierro Blue's have a BIG base at San Fierro they are not strong but they are norma they always battling with tirad's the leader is James Westen CHARACTERS This is Dan Johnson protagonist/playable character he joined triads 1990 after hes mother and father were killed by burglers now he wanted to start new life in triad gang. GANG:TRIADS STATUS:ALIVE Hes name is Woozie he joined triad when he was young he joined because hes mother and father were killed and now hes boss of triads Woozie is 29 years old GANG:TRIADS STATUS:DEAD This is John Delavega he joined Death syndicate X when he was 16 he got beated up by lo of gangs he joined gang because he was murderer and police was looking him at everywhere but now he's boss of Death Syndicate X now he's 30 years old GANG:Death syndicate X STATUS:ALIVE This is Co-leader of Death Syndicate X hes John Delavega right hand hes name is Steve Nov GANG:Death Syndicate X STATUS:ALIVE She is new gang leader Shes name is katherine GANG:Eternal paradise STATUS:DEAD This guy name here is Xin Yang second playable character hes always in triads gang but he joined gang after he ran out of home he was 19 years old when he joined triads now hes 25 he dont have mother or father he only have grandfather. GANG:TRIADS STATUS:DEAD This is SFB member John Barston who kidnapped you he betrayed the SFB and now he trying to destory them. GANG:SFB STATUS:DEAD Hello my name is Mike Brill i was gang war with San Fierro Blue's then came triad gang and helped me out and they called me in to thei gang GANG:TRIADS STATUS:DEAD He's brother of Mike Brill hes name here is always Tony Brill he didn't joined triads gang because he don't want to be in gang's cuz he thinks it will bring him some problem's GANG:NONE STATUS:DEAD This is one of the best triad member what Woozie ever had but he played hero and that was too bad for him GANG:TRIADS STATUS:DEAD MISSIONS CHAPTER 1 - GANG WARS Intro - Triads going to gang war with san fierro blues San Fierro Blue's - You are going to find out some plans from San Fierro Blue's Revenge part 1 - You are going to wait until San Fierro Blue's come Revenge part 2 - Dan got new problem Lost night Dan is in a big sh*t Job from enemy - Dan accpeting John job Xin Yang - Xin Yang gets some new job CHAPTER 1 RAR FILE CHAPTER 2 - TAKING DOWN YOUR ENEMYS The plan - Dan has a plan to tke out John The takedown part 1 - mystery The takedown part 2 - Taking down... The unknown - Dan meet's with new friend's The bad day - There's really bad day for Mike Friend or enemy part 1 - Friend or enemy? Friend or enemy part 2 - Death syndicate X CHAPTER 2 RAR FILE CHAPTER 3 - GETTING DOWN TO BUSINESS A new friend - Dan meet's with death syndicate boss End of SFB - Its time to end with SFB City madness - John and Dan are going to City but theres a nice suprie The paradise - Dan and others are going to see new base Reborn - Reborn from coma Car training - Dan is going to train some car skills Shooting training - mystery... Gone,gone and gone... - is this the end? CHAPTER 3 RAR FILE CHAPTER 4 - THE LEGIT Good move - This is good move for Dan Suprise motherf*ckers - Dan and John got the nice suprise from... The end part 1 - Dan and John are going to take down Legit The end part 2 - Mystery... THE END Edited January 28, 2011 by TonyCJ Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466839-san-fierro-stories/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
pauliux2 Posted January 5, 2011 Share Posted January 5, 2011 so i guess no Agent Life?.. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466839-san-fierro-stories/#findComment-1060281429 Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Scrotum Posted January 5, 2011 Share Posted January 5, 2011 Are you gonna delete this one too after a week? Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466839-san-fierro-stories/#findComment-1060281439 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyCJ Posted January 5, 2011 Author Share Posted January 5, 2011 (edited) FRIENDLY GANGS This is triad gang STATUS:WEAK LEADER:WOOZIE CO-LEADER:??? This is Death Syndicate X gang STATUS:STRONG LEADER:John Delavega ENEMY GANGS STATUS:NORMAL LEADER:James Westen DESTROYED This is Legit gang STATUS:MEDIUM LEADER:Mike Jarston DESTROYED This is eternal paradise gang STATUS:MEDIUM LEADER:Katherine DESTROYED Edited January 28, 2011 by TonyCJ Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466839-san-fierro-stories/#findComment-1060281471 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Levindski Posted January 5, 2011 Share Posted January 5, 2011 Sorry, but your characters are hardly believable. A Chinese guy called James Pablo... really? Try to think your story through a little bit more and add some more meaningful details. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466839-san-fierro-stories/#findComment-1060281497 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyCJ Posted January 5, 2011 Author Share Posted January 5, 2011 (edited) FIXED AND WHATS VERY MEANINGFUL DETAILS Edited January 5, 2011 by TonyCJ Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466839-san-fierro-stories/#findComment-1060281570 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheTomster Posted January 5, 2011 Share Posted January 5, 2011 FIXED AND WHATS VERY MEANINGFUL DETAILS Lee Bruce? FAIL. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466839-san-fierro-stories/#findComment-1060281666 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kratos2000 Posted January 5, 2011 Share Posted January 5, 2011 This guy name here is Lee Bruce hes best friend of Dan they joined with triad together he is 25 years old lives in San Fierro hes been in triad gang 6 months WUT? And I think they try to suggest you to think a bit more about the story before you make the actuall missions. (Thank me later for being captain abious.) Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466839-san-fierro-stories/#findComment-1060281705 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Levindski Posted January 5, 2011 Share Posted January 5, 2011 No, no, no... The problem with James Pablo was that it was not a Chinese-sounding name, which one would categorically expect for Triad members. And Lee Bruce does not fix that problem. Furthermore, people will see that you simply inverted Bruce Lee's name, and will laugh at you. 'meaningful details' ... that means, more details on the characters aside from their age and their gang affiliation. So for example, you could say "Woozie was born in Shanghai and moved to San Fierro at a young age. He joined the Triads when both his parents were killed in an underwater hockey game." This is much more meaningful than "Hes name is Woozie he is boss of triads hes 34 years old lives in San Fierro". Lastly, the frequency with which you're abandoning DYOM mission series and churning out new ones is unsettling. If you keep doing this, people won't take your missions seriously anymore (I'm not even sure if they do right now). Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466839-san-fierro-stories/#findComment-1060281789 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyCJ Posted January 6, 2011 Author Share Posted January 6, 2011 I know they dont even Chimpso dont i always play others missions i played 007 missions i played episodes from las venturas i played S.A.S.F.A.S.O and lots of more but thx for meaningful details Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466839-san-fierro-stories/#findComment-1060282256 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chimpso Posted January 6, 2011 Share Posted January 6, 2011 Why bring me up? I have not had much time to play ANYONES missions these days. I'm far to busy making my own and doing other things. Really though. You create too many mission packs. Pick one and stay with it, don't make a new bunch of missions everytime and idea pops in your head. I toyed with the 007 GoldenEye idea for months before I started the missions. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466839-san-fierro-stories/#findComment-1060282259 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyCJ Posted January 6, 2011 Author Share Posted January 6, 2011 Ok Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466839-san-fierro-stories/#findComment-1060282260 Share on other sites More sharing options...
pauliux2 Posted January 8, 2011 Share Posted January 8, 2011 So i guess this one is canceled too? Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466839-san-fierro-stories/#findComment-1060286375 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyCJ Posted January 8, 2011 Author Share Posted January 8, 2011 No its not its not canceled i will upload mission today or tomorrow why u care about this u dont play it anyway Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466839-san-fierro-stories/#findComment-1060286387 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doublepulse Posted January 8, 2011 Share Posted January 8, 2011 hmm..only reason why I havent played many of your missions, because I know you have cancelled like 3-4 mission packs. :\.. but if you stick to one mission pack, you might have a better chance of people enjoying the missions.. So I would play hoping to see more from the mission pack, but instead disappointed that you cancelled it Just try something out and see where the story comes from. Good luck dude Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466839-san-fierro-stories/#findComment-1060286409 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyCJ Posted January 8, 2011 Author Share Posted January 8, 2011 GUYS I DONT CANCEL IT Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466839-san-fierro-stories/#findComment-1060286420 Share on other sites More sharing options...
0G THUG Posted January 8, 2011 Share Posted January 8, 2011 I don't give a sh*t about names. so come on guys don't be so mad with names. I will try it tomorrow. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466839-san-fierro-stories/#findComment-1060286423 Share on other sites More sharing options...
pauliux2 Posted January 8, 2011 Share Posted January 8, 2011 No its not its not canceled i will upload mission today or tomorrow why u care about this u dont play it anyway Who sais i wont play it? Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466839-san-fierro-stories/#findComment-1060286426 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyCJ Posted January 8, 2011 Author Share Posted January 8, 2011 i dont know it was just looking like this anyway 2 second mission releases tomorrow or TODAY Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466839-san-fierro-stories/#findComment-1060286439 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doublepulse Posted January 8, 2011 Share Posted January 8, 2011 Yea I dont really care about names.. lol Ive created weird names.. in one mission of mine there is a dude name Mon Jarston ( similar to John Marston from RDR). I guess it just lacks originality if you use real life names.. or names that are known. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466839-san-fierro-stories/#findComment-1060286447 Share on other sites More sharing options...
pauliux2 Posted January 9, 2011 Share Posted January 9, 2011 (edited) Who made that logo for you Tony?Its awesome ;O Edited January 9, 2011 by pauliux2 Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466839-san-fierro-stories/#findComment-1060287842 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyCJ Posted January 9, 2011 Author Share Posted January 9, 2011 Thx i made it myself i really maded it myself i dont lie Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466839-san-fierro-stories/#findComment-1060287916 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyCJ Posted January 9, 2011 Author Share Posted January 9, 2011 Anyway im sorry for let you guys wait new mission released try it and give me feedback Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466839-san-fierro-stories/#findComment-1060287924 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kratos2000 Posted January 9, 2011 Share Posted January 9, 2011 Dude! use commas. (,) Especially with that speeded up avatar Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466839-san-fierro-stories/#findComment-1060288069 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyCJ Posted January 9, 2011 Author Share Posted January 9, 2011 (edited) I'm using ok i'm from estonia not from england anyway did u tryed my misssion Edited January 9, 2011 by TonyCJ Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466839-san-fierro-stories/#findComment-1060288085 Share on other sites More sharing options...
pauliux2 Posted January 10, 2011 Share Posted January 10, 2011 I tried it.Good missions Tony.Keep up the good work! Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466839-san-fierro-stories/#findComment-1060289042 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyCJ Posted January 11, 2011 Author Share Posted January 11, 2011 UPDATED NEW MISSION ADDED enjoy and give me feedback Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466839-san-fierro-stories/#findComment-1060290973 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyCJ Posted January 12, 2011 Author Share Posted January 12, 2011 UPDATED NEW MISSION RELEASED REVNGE PART 2 ENJOY GIVE ME FEEDBACK ABOUT IT!!!! Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466839-san-fierro-stories/#findComment-1060291789 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyCJ Posted January 12, 2011 Author Share Posted January 12, 2011 UPDATED PLAY AND GIVE ME FEEDBACK MORE MISSIONS ON THE WAY Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466839-san-fierro-stories/#findComment-1060291907 Share on other sites More sharing options...
pauliux2 Posted January 12, 2011 Share Posted January 12, 2011 Played them.They are cool. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466839-san-fierro-stories/#findComment-1060291928 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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