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Grand Theft Auto : Cleaning The Crime

The GTA Cleaning the Crime Like The Criminals in the City Are Such as Kiddnapper, Smuggler, Rob, Gangmember, Killer Etc.

 

In this Series You are CJ (Carl Johnson) who is a Normal Guy in City, He Lives in Groove Street, One Upon A time He Find Some Criminal, And CJ Is Following them..

 

CJ Runs!! And An Officer Arrests the Criminals, And Made CJ A Cop!

 

Now! Which Side You Take? A Life Of Criminal Or A Freedom Life?

Your Choise!

If You are on Freedom Life Download Mission...

 

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First Episode

First Job

Second Job (Canceled)

 

 

Episode Second (SWAT Job)

Mission First

 

 

Characters :

 

Kyle

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Kyle is A SWAT Officer he is Called As "Expert" He Expert in Some Situations Like If Want to Diffuse a Bomb, Broke Door\Safe ETc Etc.

Frank

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3 years ago he is a Police Officer, Now he is SWAT Officer his work is to Eliminate Enemies..

 

Leader Officer

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Finally The Default Officer Which work is to Lead\Training Etc Etc.

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Don't double post/triple post/etc. too much. It's understandable to feel the temptation to bump your topic, but only do that sparingly, and when you do, try to add something meaningful to say. The worst example is when topic creators repeatedly make posts that say "omfg please play my missions guys im desperate", sometimes within hours of each other. Learn to be patient; if others have something to say about your missions, they'll say it.

 

 

...Don't overuse smileys either (eg "OMFG This sucks! devil.gif  devil.gif  devil.gif  angry.gif  angry.gif  angry.gif")...
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Those missions sucks make your topics cooler really i even dont wanna download this sht right now add characters here do more cooler

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General Scrotum
Don't be an asshole. I can't say this enough. Don't go around insulting peoples missions/missionpacks. If you have critiscm to offer, make it constructive. Don't jump into someones topic and say "This sucks!". Because the main reason people post missions on this forum is to get feedback and suggestions, not to hear how much their missions suck.
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Don't be an asshole. I can't say this enough. Don't go around insulting peoples missions/missionpacks. If you have critiscm to offer, make it constructive. Don't jump into someones topic and say "This sucks!". Because the main reason people post missions on this forum is to get feedback and suggestions, not to hear how much their missions suck.

Haha! Witty, very witty tounge2.gif. I see my guide is going to good use biggrin.gif.

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Yes but i did my agent life topic cuz i wanted to make them famous and get feedback ok i wanted to say those missions here dont suck these just dont like me

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Yes but i did my agent life topic cuz i wanted to make them famous and get feedback ok i wanted to say those missions here dont suck these just dont like me

Bear in mind that some people are new to DYOM. If you were new, and you just submitted your first missions and someone jumped in and said "your missions suck omfg" how would you feel? I admit the stroryline and concept thread could use a little more work, but this user is new. We can't expect the world from him.

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Ok hes miissions dont suck they are good after all you are beginner

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Sorry For Bad Missions

 

And After Your All Comments,Reaction., I'm Not Making Another Missions Of This..........You All Disappeared Me!!!

 

 

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Woah! Did not expect to see this kind of reaction.

 

Don't let two comments bother you. You are a beginner and we can understand that. With the time, you'll make better and better missions. Just don't quit, please.

 

I will play them and give you feedback. wink.gif

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Yes jetjatin.You're a beginner.You will be a good mission designer,just don't give up.Not problem if your first missions not good,just continue your missions creating smile.gif.And if you need help just post HERE.

 

Good Luck! wink.gif

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Played them and they're quite good. icon14.gif

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who sais this sucks?These missions are really good.

TonyCJ, in another blatant act of idiocy, cried out that the missions "sucked"... probably without even playing them beforehand, and later, admitted himself that his motivation was to draw attention to himself and his own mission series. confused.gif

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u know man u are idiot f*ck you really i already said hes beginner and he cant do very good missions so shut up really

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u know man u are idiot f*ck you really i already said hes beginner and he cant do very good missions so shut up really

Your stupidity is quite surprising. You can't just say "Man this sucks im not playing this sht" and then run back 5 minutes later and say "I'm sorry this don't suck" and expect everyone to forgive you.

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Ok jetjatin i really said they suck before i even played them dont quit your missionpack of that u are beginner continue this missionpack plz forgive me im really idiot and stupid.

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kk guys clm down really

You're telling us to calm down? We're not the ones who just said "u are idiot f*ck off ur missions suck". Rethink your attitude. Don't expect us to forgive you instantly.

 

By the way, your sentences lose effect when you use words like u, sht, clm and no grammar at all. Try to improve there.

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kk guys clm down really

You're telling us to calm down? We're not the once who just said "u are idiot f*ck off ur missions suck". Rethink your attitude. Don't expect us to forgive you instantly.

 

By the way, your sentences lose effect when you use words like u, sht, clm and no grammar at all. Try to improve there.

Im really sorry dude

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Can't you guys quit spamming this thread with this argue and send you what you have to say by PM?

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I just want to sorry for all what ive done in this thread ive been idiot today forgiveme guys

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Can't you guys quit spamming this thread with this argue and send you what you have to say by PM?

You have to make an example out of these sorts of people in public for anything to work. Now, I doubt TonyCJ will be spammey and abusive anymore due to our little discussion. If you have a personal problem with someone then yes, take it to PM. This was not a personal problem. I'm just trying to support new users so they're not driven away by people like the former TonyCJ.

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Dude can u just calm down i already sorryed like 10 times cmon dude ive been idiot im sorry

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Lets not start again and leave it at this. ph34r.gif

 

In general I'm really impressed with the attitude towards new members in this subforum (Unlike some areas of this board),

lets keep it this way, so that it is fun for everybody. Everyone is trying to do their best and having a good time with DYOM. cookie.gif

 

If there is anything that can be improved in a mission, don't hesitate to comment on that, but always do it in a positive and constructive manner.

 

 

From now on please stick to comments on the missions in this topic.

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And I'm 13 Year Old Guy, I'm Famous In My City About Computer Technology and games...

I can't tell you just how ridiculously funny that is.

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I'm Not in Good Mood and you are telling that it is Funny

Well... you're saying that you are only 13 years old and are famous in your city for computer technology and gaming. You don't understand how ridiculous that sounds.

 

Are you sure you live in a city? PErhaps you are mistaking your village for a city?

 

Anyways. For god sake, keep on topic here.

 

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