jetjatin Posted January 3, 2011 Share Posted January 3, 2011 (edited) Grand Theft Auto : Cleaning The Crime The GTA Cleaning the Crime Like The Criminals in the City Are Such as Kiddnapper, Smuggler, Rob, Gangmember, Killer Etc. In this Series You are CJ (Carl Johnson) who is a Normal Guy in City, He Lives in Groove Street, One Upon A time He Find Some Criminal, And CJ Is Following them.. CJ Runs!! And An Officer Arrests the Criminals, And Made CJ A Cop! Now! Which Side You Take? A Life Of Criminal Or A Freedom Life? Your Choise! If You are on Freedom Life Download Mission... Uploaded with ImageShack.us First Episode First Job Second Job (Canceled) Episode Second (SWAT Job) Mission First Characters : Kyle Uploaded with ImageShack.us Kyle is A SWAT Officer he is Called As "Expert" He Expert in Some Situations Like If Want to Diffuse a Bomb, Broke Door\Safe ETc Etc. Frank Uploaded with ImageShack.us 3 years ago he is a Police Officer, Now he is SWAT Officer his work is to Eliminate Enemies.. Leader Officer Uploaded with ImageShack.us Finally The Default Officer Which work is to Lead\Training Etc Etc. Edited January 7, 2011 by jetjatin Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466660-gta-cleaning-the-crime/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
jetjatin Posted January 3, 2011 Author Share Posted January 3, 2011 (edited) Don't Comment!!! Edited February 5, 2011 by jetjatin Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466660-gta-cleaning-the-crime/#findComment-1060277096 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chimpso Posted January 3, 2011 Share Posted January 3, 2011 Don't double post/triple post/etc. too much. It's understandable to feel the temptation to bump your topic, but only do that sparingly, and when you do, try to add something meaningful to say. The worst example is when topic creators repeatedly make posts that say "omfg please play my missions guys im desperate", sometimes within hours of each other. Learn to be patient; if others have something to say about your missions, they'll say it. ...Don't overuse smileys either (eg "OMFG This sucks! ")... Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466660-gta-cleaning-the-crime/#findComment-1060277099 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyCJ Posted January 3, 2011 Share Posted January 3, 2011 Those missions sucks make your topics cooler really i even dont wanna download this sht right now add characters here do more cooler Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466660-gta-cleaning-the-crime/#findComment-1060277235 Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Scrotum Posted January 3, 2011 Share Posted January 3, 2011 Don't be an asshole. I can't say this enough. Don't go around insulting peoples missions/missionpacks. If you have critiscm to offer, make it constructive. Don't jump into someones topic and say "This sucks!". Because the main reason people post missions on this forum is to get feedback and suggestions, not to hear how much their missions suck. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466660-gta-cleaning-the-crime/#findComment-1060277248 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chimpso Posted January 3, 2011 Share Posted January 3, 2011 (edited) Don't be an asshole. I can't say this enough. Don't go around insulting peoples missions/missionpacks. If you have critiscm to offer, make it constructive. Don't jump into someones topic and say "This sucks!". Because the main reason people post missions on this forum is to get feedback and suggestions, not to hear how much their missions suck. Haha! Witty, very witty . I see my guide is going to good use . Edited January 3, 2011 by Chimpso Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466660-gta-cleaning-the-crime/#findComment-1060277253 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyCJ Posted January 3, 2011 Share Posted January 3, 2011 Yes but i did my agent life topic cuz i wanted to make them famous and get feedback ok i wanted to say those missions here dont suck these just dont like me Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466660-gta-cleaning-the-crime/#findComment-1060277254 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chimpso Posted January 3, 2011 Share Posted January 3, 2011 Yes but i did my agent life topic cuz i wanted to make them famous and get feedback ok i wanted to say those missions here dont suck these just dont like me Bear in mind that some people are new to DYOM. If you were new, and you just submitted your first missions and someone jumped in and said "your missions suck omfg" how would you feel? I admit the stroryline and concept thread could use a little more work, but this user is new. We can't expect the world from him. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466660-gta-cleaning-the-crime/#findComment-1060277261 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyCJ Posted January 3, 2011 Share Posted January 3, 2011 Ok hes miissions dont suck they are good after all you are beginner Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466660-gta-cleaning-the-crime/#findComment-1060277292 Share on other sites More sharing options...
jetjatin Posted January 3, 2011 Author Share Posted January 3, 2011 (edited) Sorry For Bad Missions And After Your All Comments,Reaction., I'm Not Making Another Missions Of This..........You All Disappeared Me!!! Edited January 3, 2011 by jetjatin Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466660-gta-cleaning-the-crime/#findComment-1060277314 Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Scrotum Posted January 3, 2011 Share Posted January 3, 2011 Woah! Did not expect to see this kind of reaction. Don't let two comments bother you. You are a beginner and we can understand that. With the time, you'll make better and better missions. Just don't quit, please. I will play them and give you feedback. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466660-gta-cleaning-the-crime/#findComment-1060277327 Share on other sites More sharing options...
JOJOXX Posted January 3, 2011 Share Posted January 3, 2011 Yes jetjatin.You're a beginner.You will be a good mission designer,just don't give up.Not problem if your first missions not good,just continue your missions creating .And if you need help just post HERE. Good Luck! Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466660-gta-cleaning-the-crime/#findComment-1060277354 Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Scrotum Posted January 3, 2011 Share Posted January 3, 2011 Played them and they're quite good. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466660-gta-cleaning-the-crime/#findComment-1060277385 Share on other sites More sharing options...
pauliux2 Posted January 3, 2011 Share Posted January 3, 2011 who sais this sucks?These missions are really good. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466660-gta-cleaning-the-crime/#findComment-1060277402 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Levindski Posted January 3, 2011 Share Posted January 3, 2011 who sais this sucks?These missions are really good. TonyCJ, in another blatant act of idiocy, cried out that the missions "sucked"... probably without even playing them beforehand, and later, admitted himself that his motivation was to draw attention to himself and his own mission series. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466660-gta-cleaning-the-crime/#findComment-1060277764 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyCJ Posted January 3, 2011 Share Posted January 3, 2011 (edited) u know man u are idiot f*ck you really i already said hes beginner and he cant do very good missions so shut up really Edited January 3, 2011 by TonyCJ Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466660-gta-cleaning-the-crime/#findComment-1060278223 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chimpso Posted January 3, 2011 Share Posted January 3, 2011 u know man u are idiot f*ck you really i already said hes beginner and he cant do very good missions so shut up really Your stupidity is quite surprising. You can't just say "Man this sucks im not playing this sht" and then run back 5 minutes later and say "I'm sorry this don't suck" and expect everyone to forgive you. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466660-gta-cleaning-the-crime/#findComment-1060278300 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyCJ Posted January 3, 2011 Share Posted January 3, 2011 kk guys clm down really Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466660-gta-cleaning-the-crime/#findComment-1060278302 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyCJ Posted January 4, 2011 Share Posted January 4, 2011 Ok jetjatin i really said they suck before i even played them dont quit your missionpack of that u are beginner continue this missionpack plz forgive me im really idiot and stupid. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466660-gta-cleaning-the-crime/#findComment-1060278309 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chimpso Posted January 4, 2011 Share Posted January 4, 2011 (edited) kk guys clm down really You're telling us to calm down? We're not the ones who just said "u are idiot f*ck off ur missions suck". Rethink your attitude. Don't expect us to forgive you instantly. By the way, your sentences lose effect when you use words like u, sht, clm and no grammar at all. Try to improve there. Edited January 4, 2011 by Chimpso Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466660-gta-cleaning-the-crime/#findComment-1060278311 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyCJ Posted January 4, 2011 Share Posted January 4, 2011 kk guys clm down really You're telling us to calm down? We're not the once who just said "u are idiot f*ck off ur missions suck". Rethink your attitude. Don't expect us to forgive you instantly. By the way, your sentences lose effect when you use words like u, sht, clm and no grammar at all. Try to improve there. Im really sorry dude Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466660-gta-cleaning-the-crime/#findComment-1060278312 Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Scrotum Posted January 4, 2011 Share Posted January 4, 2011 Can't you guys quit spamming this thread with this argue and send you what you have to say by PM? Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466660-gta-cleaning-the-crime/#findComment-1060278315 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyCJ Posted January 4, 2011 Share Posted January 4, 2011 I just want to sorry for all what ive done in this thread ive been idiot today forgiveme guys Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466660-gta-cleaning-the-crime/#findComment-1060278318 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chimpso Posted January 4, 2011 Share Posted January 4, 2011 Can't you guys quit spamming this thread with this argue and send you what you have to say by PM? You have to make an example out of these sorts of people in public for anything to work. Now, I doubt TonyCJ will be spammey and abusive anymore due to our little discussion. If you have a personal problem with someone then yes, take it to PM. This was not a personal problem. I'm just trying to support new users so they're not driven away by people like the former TonyCJ. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466660-gta-cleaning-the-crime/#findComment-1060278341 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyCJ Posted January 4, 2011 Share Posted January 4, 2011 Dude can u just calm down i already sorryed like 10 times cmon dude ive been idiot im sorry Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466660-gta-cleaning-the-crime/#findComment-1060278343 Share on other sites More sharing options...
PatrickW Posted January 4, 2011 Share Posted January 4, 2011 Lets not start again and leave it at this. In general I'm really impressed with the attitude towards new members in this subforum (Unlike some areas of this board), lets keep it this way, so that it is fun for everybody. Everyone is trying to do their best and having a good time with DYOM. If there is anything that can be improved in a mission, don't hesitate to comment on that, but always do it in a positive and constructive manner. From now on please stick to comments on the missions in this topic. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466660-gta-cleaning-the-crime/#findComment-1060278422 Share on other sites More sharing options...
jetjatin Posted January 4, 2011 Author Share Posted January 4, 2011 (edited) Edited January 9, 2011 by jetjatin Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466660-gta-cleaning-the-crime/#findComment-1060279384 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Levindski Posted January 4, 2011 Share Posted January 4, 2011 And I'm 13 Year Old Guy, I'm Famous In My City About Computer Technology and games... I can't tell you just how ridiculously funny that is. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466660-gta-cleaning-the-crime/#findComment-1060279711 Share on other sites More sharing options...
jetjatin Posted January 5, 2011 Author Share Posted January 5, 2011 I'm Not in Good Mood and you are telling that it is Funny Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466660-gta-cleaning-the-crime/#findComment-1060280762 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chimpso Posted January 5, 2011 Share Posted January 5, 2011 I'm Not in Good Mood and you are telling that it is Funny Well... you're saying that you are only 13 years old and are famous in your city for computer technology and gaming. You don't understand how ridiculous that sounds. Are you sure you live in a city? PErhaps you are mistaking your village for a city? Anyways. For god sake, keep on topic here. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466660-gta-cleaning-the-crime/#findComment-1060280768 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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