theleoncj Posted January 1, 2011 Share Posted January 1, 2011 (edited) These series contains DYOM V6. 1997 years, San Andreas. It was a bad year... for me... It's the year when me and my friend had to kill Las Venturas president. I was standing near him, watching how he was aiming at the President and I was thinking... What will happen next? After the president's death, we ran away. I ran behind my friend and suddenly he stopped. Turned around and said these words: "I'm sorry, pal, it's business." And he aimed at me and shot me... And I can't forget those words... 2 months later, after my recovery of that shot. The police of Las Venturas came for me that day. I had to go to prison... When I remembered that it was a set up and for that I had to die, I escaped the prison. I knew the police won't look for me in other town, so I ran to San Fierro. I had friends there, real friends that could help me out... Chapters: GTAGarage Pack Chapter 1 - The Beginning of New Life (COMPLETED) Chapter 2 - Memories of The Army (COMPLETED) CANCELED Edited January 22, 2011 by leoncj Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466529-the-right-man-in-a-wrong-place-missionp/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
theleoncj Posted January 1, 2011 Author Share Posted January 1, 2011 (edited) Adam Brown (1997|1990) - Adam is 35 years old. He started working as a hitman in 1994 years when he was still 32 years old until 1997 (now). His partner in business and friend in outside betrayed him and set him up. His partner shot him so he could stop him and the police could get Adam. After some months of recovery, he was transported into Las Venturas Prison. Some days later, Adam finds out that he'll be executed, so he manages to escape the prison and running away to San Fierro to his real friends. In 1990 years, Adam was a soldier of San Andreas while he was still 25 years old. Friendship: This character is playable character... Status: Alive Harry Jones (1997|1990) - Harry is 34 years old. He started working as a hitman in 1992 years when he was still 29 years old. He betrayed his partner Adam under orders of Order of Hit business and also he hates Adam. When he found out that Adam escaped the prison, he started to hunt him down by sending some of his goons. Harry also wants to take control of the Order of Hit. In 1990 years, Harry was the captain of San Andreas Army and their objective was to retake Bayside Marina while he was still 27 years old. Friendship: Enemy Harry betrayed Adam. Status: Alive Diego Trudez (1997) - Diego is 31 years old. He's an old friend of Adam and Harry. Diego is the one that can help out Adam, Diego started to run the Rifa gang along with his friend Gerard in 1993 years when he was still 27 years old. They split the gang into North Rifa and South Rifa, Diego controls the North Rifa. But they're still allies and still good friends that can help Adam in San Fierro. Friendship: Friend Status: Alive Gerard "G" Dibutzi (1997|1990) - Gerard is 30 years old. He's an old friend of Diego and Adam. Gerard started the Rifa gang along with Diego in 1993 years when he was still 26 years old. Gerard was the one who gave the idea to split the Rifa into North and South Rifa. The North Rifa (Diego) deals weapons and the South Rifa (Gerard) deals drugs. In 1990 years, Gerard was a soldier and a partner of Adam while he was still 23 years old. Friendship: Enemy Betrayed Diego and Adam under orders of Harry. (Previous: Friend) Status: Alive Michelle (1997) - Michelle is 25 years old. She started to work as a mechanic in 1996 years while she was still 24 years old. She's also a good friend of Gerard and the South Rifa respects her. Friendship: Enemy Betrayed Gerard under orders of Lisa. (Previous: Normal) Status: Dead Killed under orders of Gerard. (Previous: Alive) Chuck (1997) - Chuck is 52 years old. He started working as a gun dealer when he was still 20 years old. Until now he still deals guns and sells them to South and North Rifa. Also he's a good friend of Adam. Friendship: Friend Status: Alive Lisa Wu Wing (1997) - Lisa is 26 years old. She started the Vietnam Co Gang in 1990 years while she was still 19 years old. Her father died and gave her the control of Vietnam Co. She is very powerful when she has her favorite weapon. She helps her brother Sa Xi while he is her bodyguard. Friendship: Enemy Status: Alive Sa Xi Wu Wing (1997) - Sa Xi is 21 years old. He's a brother of Lisa and also a bodyguard of her. She started working as her bodyguard in 1995 years while he was still 19 years old. Sa Xi fighting is not that good as Lisa's, but he's a good sniper. Friendship: Enemy Status: Alive More soon! Edited January 5, 2011 by leoncj Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466529-the-right-man-in-a-wrong-place-missionp/#findComment-1060274537 Share on other sites More sharing options...
theleoncj Posted January 1, 2011 Author Share Posted January 1, 2011 (edited) - North Rifa. The North Rifa are the most dealers in San Fierro. They have allies with South Rifa. North Rifa leader is Diego Trudez. Gang: Friends Difficulty: Normal Alliance: South Rifa - South Rifa. The South Rifa are drug dealing gang in San Fierro. They drive vans from base A to base B. South Rifa leader is Gerard "G" Dibutzi. Gang: Friends Difficulty: Weak Alliance: North Rifa - Vietnam Co Org. The Vietnam Co Gang is the most powerful gang in San Fierro, they even control half of the town. Vietnam Co Org. leader is Lisa Wu Wing. Gang: Enemy Difficulty: Strong Allies: None - County Mexicans. The County Mexicans are everywhere, Red County, Flint County and Bone County. They are robbers, driving around all County and robbing people. County Mexicans leader is (unknown). Gang: Enemy Difficulty: Normal Allies: None More Soon Edited January 2, 2011 by leoncj Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466529-the-right-man-in-a-wrong-place-missionp/#findComment-1060274542 Share on other sites More sharing options...
pauliux2 Posted January 1, 2011 Share Posted January 1, 2011 Story is a little similar to GTA3.But it looks fun. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466529-the-right-man-in-a-wrong-place-missionp/#findComment-1060274592 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Platinum Card Posted January 1, 2011 Share Posted January 1, 2011 Sounds promising. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466529-the-right-man-in-a-wrong-place-missionp/#findComment-1060274646 Share on other sites More sharing options...
theleoncj Posted January 1, 2011 Author Share Posted January 1, 2011 Thank you for the comments guys. Going to start working on Chapter 1. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466529-the-right-man-in-a-wrong-place-missionp/#findComment-1060274694 Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Scrotum Posted January 1, 2011 Share Posted January 1, 2011 The concept is nice but, the gang that you put as the North Rifa is the Varrios Los Aztecas. Just thought it was worth to mention. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466529-the-right-man-in-a-wrong-place-missionp/#findComment-1060274699 Share on other sites More sharing options...
theleoncj Posted January 1, 2011 Author Share Posted January 1, 2011 The concept is nice but, the gang that you put as the North Rifa is the Varrios Los Aztecas. Just thought it was worth to mention. Dude, I know all that Aztecas, Vagos, Front Yard Ballas and other. They're from original San Andreas, but in this story they're North Rifa Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466529-the-right-man-in-a-wrong-place-missionp/#findComment-1060274796 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rewas Posted January 1, 2011 Share Posted January 1, 2011 Hmm... I should wait and see what kind of missions will be... Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466529-the-right-man-in-a-wrong-place-missionp/#findComment-1060274801 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chimpso Posted January 2, 2011 Share Posted January 2, 2011 Looks like you got another good one coming up here . Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466529-the-right-man-in-a-wrong-place-missionp/#findComment-1060275060 Share on other sites More sharing options...
BDR Posted January 2, 2011 Share Posted January 2, 2011 A new mission pack of yours... I can't wait to play it. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466529-the-right-man-in-a-wrong-place-missionp/#findComment-1060275354 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Satourn Posted January 2, 2011 Share Posted January 2, 2011 Hey,Leon,how did you do the pictures of characters? Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466529-the-right-man-in-a-wrong-place-missionp/#findComment-1060275398 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mati Posted January 2, 2011 Share Posted January 2, 2011 I am sure this will be a great mission pack Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466529-the-right-man-in-a-wrong-place-missionp/#findComment-1060275417 Share on other sites More sharing options...
theleoncj Posted January 2, 2011 Author Share Posted January 2, 2011 Thank you for the comments! The Chapter 1 will be out soon. Hey,Leon,how did you do the pictures of characters? With PhotoScape. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466529-the-right-man-in-a-wrong-place-missionp/#findComment-1060275638 Share on other sites More sharing options...
theleoncj Posted January 3, 2011 Author Share Posted January 3, 2011 (edited) CHAPTER 1 COMPLETED!!! Give me a feedback about it. Going to start working on Chapter 2... EDIT: (TRY DOWNLOADING NOW HAD 2 BUGS TO FIX. 1. A bug with Mission trigger 2. with the uploaded file) Edited January 3, 2011 by leoncj Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466529-the-right-man-in-a-wrong-place-missionp/#findComment-1060276627 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mati Posted January 3, 2011 Share Posted January 3, 2011 Gonna try it out soon after I finish my 6-mission pack. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466529-the-right-man-in-a-wrong-place-missionp/#findComment-1060277002 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rewas Posted January 3, 2011 Share Posted January 3, 2011 Hmm... not bad... not. bad. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466529-the-right-man-in-a-wrong-place-missionp/#findComment-1060277047 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyCJ Posted January 3, 2011 Share Posted January 3, 2011 Ok i liked it its good not bad keep up Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466529-the-right-man-in-a-wrong-place-missionp/#findComment-1060277218 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mati Posted January 3, 2011 Share Posted January 3, 2011 I loved those mission, as always Great story and gameplay, no crashes... This is my 3rd favorite mission pack yet (being Johnny Nixon Chronicles first, San Andreas Stories by leoncj second) Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466529-the-right-man-in-a-wrong-place-missionp/#findComment-1060277922 Share on other sites More sharing options...
theleoncj Posted January 4, 2011 Author Share Posted January 4, 2011 Thank you for the comments! Anyway, Chapter 2 - Memories of the Army RELEASED! Play it and give me a feedback about it! Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466529-the-right-man-in-a-wrong-place-missionp/#findComment-1060278385 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyCJ Posted January 4, 2011 Share Posted January 4, 2011 Nice Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466529-the-right-man-in-a-wrong-place-missionp/#findComment-1060278668 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doublepulse Posted January 4, 2011 Share Posted January 4, 2011 Like always LCJ! Your Mission packs never disappoint me ! Ive only done few of the missions, but they are already going good. I loved the opening and how the opening is the same text on what you wrote on the thread My only complaint, and its not your fault, is if I die on one of the missions in SF.. I spawn at LS hospital.. so i have to drive back! lol or i can use rocketman and fly back.. but still. I found that out when I killed myself by jumping out my car and my car crushed me to death . Keep up the great work man. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466529-the-right-man-in-a-wrong-place-missionp/#findComment-1060278704 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyCJ Posted January 4, 2011 Share Posted January 4, 2011 Yes i like 1 chapter intro its so amazing best design Best regards from TonyCJ keep up good work Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466529-the-right-man-in-a-wrong-place-missionp/#findComment-1060278712 Share on other sites More sharing options...
theleoncj Posted January 4, 2011 Author Share Posted January 4, 2011 (edited) Chapter 2 is fixed. You can play it now, there was a bug in Bloody Sand mission that makes a crash, but it's OK now. BUGS|CRASHES FOUND AND FIXED: 1. A crash in Bloody Sand mission of Chapter 2. (Objective Adjust Timelimit deleted) 2. A bug in Soldier in the Air of Chapter 2. (The Sea Sparrow is no longer on water, now it's on ground.) 3. A crash in Pilot Time of Chapter 2. (Objective No Peds/Cars deleted) Going to start working on Chapter 3 Edited January 6, 2011 by leoncj Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466529-the-right-man-in-a-wrong-place-missionp/#findComment-1060279515 Share on other sites More sharing options...
JOJOXX Posted January 4, 2011 Share Posted January 4, 2011 The first chapter was nice.Enjoyed it .Keep up for the coming chapters Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466529-the-right-man-in-a-wrong-place-missionp/#findComment-1060279575 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyCJ Posted January 8, 2011 Share Posted January 8, 2011 Heey dudeeeee when u are going to make chapter 3 plz dont cancel this missionpack Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466529-the-right-man-in-a-wrong-place-missionp/#findComment-1060286207 Share on other sites More sharing options...
pauliux2 Posted January 8, 2011 Share Posted January 8, 2011 Heey dudeeeee when u are going to make chapter 3 plz dont cancel this missionpack He NEVER cancels missionpacks dude. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466529-the-right-man-in-a-wrong-place-missionp/#findComment-1060286323 Share on other sites More sharing options...
theleoncj Posted January 8, 2011 Author Share Posted January 8, 2011 (edited) Heey dudeeeee when u are going to make chapter 3 plz dont cancel this missionpack He NEVER cancels missionpacks dude. Hell no I won't cancel it... I'm just thinking what kind of missions to make. It's hard to think and design when all of my good ideas went to Episodes From Las Venturas and GANGSTER and Proud of it story-lines... Edited January 22, 2011 by leoncj Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466529-the-right-man-in-a-wrong-place-missionp/#findComment-1060286365 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyCJ Posted January 8, 2011 Share Posted January 8, 2011 yes AND episodes of las venturas was long and hard missionpacl:D Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466529-the-right-man-in-a-wrong-place-missionp/#findComment-1060286369 Share on other sites More sharing options...
theleoncj Posted January 22, 2011 Author Share Posted January 22, 2011 I am sorry to say, but... I'm canceling this story-line. It's a failure, I can't get any more ideas, I played other people missions, but still nothing. I need to come up something new, not always EFLV style story-lines, so: The Right Man in a Wrong Place IS CANCELED. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/466529-the-right-man-in-a-wrong-place-missionp/#findComment-1060306595 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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