Claude4Catalina Posted February 22, 2011 Author Share Posted February 22, 2011 one supporter is better than nothing, atleast I'm staying on the first page and not double/triple posting, bright side to every story I suppose. Ben-Product Go back to Ben’s place to see a crew of his loading up shotguns and submachine guns, preparing for a job. “Alex, lucky you got here when you did. Thanks for that thing the other day, turns out the alley where you had that bastard cornered lead to a building which is where they are keeping some of our boys and a sh*tload or product. You in?” Ben greets, shaking hands with Alex. “I can be, we raiding the place?” Alex asks. “Yeah, you got a piece?” “As always!” “Good, take a carload of my boys over to the spot, there’s a few toys in the back of my car if you need. I’ll send a carload of boys to follow you. Claim whatever you can and get our crew free.” Ben explains, leading you outside to two black Cavalcades, the front one having an SMG and Pump Action Shotgun leaning against the back of it. “Good luck boys, drop the sh*t off at my garage on Carrollton.” Take the SMG and Pump Action Shotgun if you need and get in the front Cavalcade, and drive to the building. When you arrive, pull into the marker on Ellery Street to trigger another cutscene of one of the shotgun wielding allies shooting the hinges off the door and kicking the door in. “We’ll get up the scaffolding while you guys clear the lower levels, we’ll meet you on the middle floor.” Says the driver of the other Cavalcade as his passengers start climbing the scaffolding. “Alright man, meet you there.” Alex replies. You will be back in control and need to clear out the bottom floor with your three Mafia allies. There will be nine enemies shooting at you from behind cover, so a shotgun will come in handy here. Clear them out and proceed to the second floor where eleven more enemies are hiding. You can hear your allies killing the thugs upstairs and when you clear out the second level, you’re four Mafia members come down the stairs, reporting what they found. “Got about eight of our boys up there and about ten bags of product, we gonna need to break them out, they’re locked in a room up on the top floor. Alex heads upstairs and shouts through the door. “Stay back, we’re gonna blow the lock on this bitch!” One of the thugs shoots out the lock on the door and the prisoners are freed. They scramble to pick up weapons as the rest of the crew takes a duffel bag of drugs. You are instructed to grab a duffel bag then walk back to the garage because you are now leading an army of up to 15 Mafia members! When you arrive back at the garage, you receive payment for your services and get $1000 for every Mafia member that makes it back. Mission Complete +$1000 for each gang member that makes it back alive, a maximum of $15000 can be earned from this mission! Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/465829-gta-iv-dealing-and-stealing/page/5/#findComment-1060349374 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyla Posted February 22, 2011 Share Posted February 22, 2011 I'm still following this Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/465829-gta-iv-dealing-and-stealing/page/5/#findComment-1060349389 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Claude4Catalina Posted February 24, 2011 Author Share Posted February 24, 2011 Rique's back for the Shifting Weight crossover.... Alex decides to pay Rique a visit to find out about the phone calls he’s been getting from ‘Agent Jones.’ Rique-Live Your Life! Back at Rique’s brownstone, Alex lets himself in and sees Rique’s house is full of assholes partying, some crashed out, others dancing to T.I. and Rihanna’s Live Your Life. “Alex! My homie! Yo yo! Gonna roll on some nigga’s today bro?!” Rique offends Alex in every way as he pretends to wield two pistols, firing at the crowd. “Prefer it is you didn’t use that word to be honest, you cokehead f*ck. I need to talk to you.” Alex coldly replies. “Me and one of my bitches we’re about to go pick up some product, ain’t that right Kim baby?” “Whatever you say babe.” The whore replies, just wanting some coke. You’ll be outside in a silver PMP 600, Rique and Kim sitting in the back. There will be a waypoint for Uprock Street in Boulevard. Rique: So what did you need to talk about? Alex: I keep getting calls from some number…Agent Jones…FIB? Rique: Jones…? I don’t know him. Alex: I was thinking Andriy or something. Rique: SHH! Don’t bring him up! Alex: Why the f*ck not? Rique: He’s a f*cking cokehead scumbag! Alex: Would have thought you’d get on with him like a project on fire. Kim: Riq’s! You gonna take that? Rique: Shut the f*ck up slut. I love this song! Alex: The radio isn’t even on? Rique: That’s what you think. Alex: f*cking idiot. Rique: When you get there, you’re not paying for this sh*t by the way. Alex: What?! Rique: Yeah…it’s been paid for. Alex: You sure? Rique: Yeah homie, I wouldn’t walk you and my baby girl into a setup. Alex: Hold up! You ain’t coming? Rique: Dude, I can’t drive straight, let alone walk! Alex: If you say so… When arrive at Uprock Street overlooking the courts, pull up into the marker and you and Kim will get out of the PMP 600. “Be back in a flash, I’ll keep her running.” Alex says to Rique. The two of you approach the spot and soon enough three bikers turn up, two African Americans both on sports bike and one white boy on a chopper. “Oddest combo I ever seen.” Alex mutters as the trio approach. “What up, kid. I got that package for you.” The main dealer says. “Yeah, man, overnight express.” The second African American adds as the white man hands the package to Kim. “What? You been stepping on this sh*t?” Alex replies, holding out his .45 “f*ck you. Test it and see. It's pure as punks like you gonna find.” The second dealer retorts. “Listen, you do your job... and let us do ours.” Alex says back calmly. “Huh, whatever, man.” “Go ahead, girl.” Alex offers, knowing it’s already been paid for. Kim dips her finger into the bag and snorts a quick line, revealing an ecstatic expression. “That f*cking good?” Alex asks, surprised. “Yeah, it's good.” “So what you going to do about it?” Alex asks, hoping Kim is gonna accept it. “I'm going to take it for our own!” Kim replies, drawing her 9mm and aiming at the Bikers, who aim back, Alex following suit, wanting to protect Rique’s girl. “I don't think so.” The main African American dealer warns. “Well, you best change your mind-set, 'cause this right here, man, is happening.” Alex says, thinking he’s getting ripped off. “Yeah, motherf*cker!” Kim shouts, firing her handgun at the chopper, blowing it up. “Oh, you f*cked up now, bitch.” The main African American says, firing a burst of his Micro SMG into Kim’s stomach, killing her. “Holy sh*t! f*ck! God damn you motherf*ckers!” The white Biker exclaims, pissed off about his bike. “Yo, you see what you did? This sh*t's f*cked up, man!” Alex says in shock as he runs off, dropping the package, the second dealer picking it up as the three of them make a hasty escape. Alex runs up the stairs, and Rique is nowhere to be seen, but two Police Cruiser’s appear, one at each end of the street, so Alex runs straight ahead into Welham Parkway. You have now regained control and have a one star wanted level and are on foot. If you carry on running you will escape the wanted zone with ease. When you escape, Alex calls Rique. Alex: Rique man what the f*ck? Rique: You betrayed me for Andriy! Alex: What?! You made the introduction! I’m not going to argue with you over the phone, where are you? Rique: Far away from you! Alex: You f*cking bitch! Wait ‘til I find you! Rique hangs up. Mission Complete An unknown caller calls… Alex: If this is Agent f*cking Jones, leave me the f*ck alone! ?: You’re language leaves a lot to be desired Alexander. Alex: Listen bro, f*ck off, I’m not in the mood. ?: I know, that f*ck up in Bohan has been costly. Alex: How would you know what went down? The line goes dead. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/465829-gta-iv-dealing-and-stealing/page/5/#findComment-1060353256 Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuisBellic Posted February 24, 2011 Share Posted February 24, 2011 Great mission, man. Maybe Agent Jones could be an antagonist? Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/465829-gta-iv-dealing-and-stealing/page/5/#findComment-1060353265 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akavari Posted February 25, 2011 Share Posted February 25, 2011 Great mission! You really have a knack for dialogue and the like. Although I feel like Alex should have had the intent of ripping off the deal beforehand to match his attitude in the cutscene better. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/465829-gta-iv-dealing-and-stealing/page/5/#findComment-1060353281 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Claude4Catalina Posted February 25, 2011 Author Share Posted February 25, 2011 I wanted to change peoples expectations on Alex, he was doing Rique's dirty work for a paycheque, so he followed orders, and when Kim expectedly follows the same order, Alex thinks that they are getting forced to pay up twice, it shows how niave he can be in blindly following what a coked-up Rique says. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/465829-gta-iv-dealing-and-stealing/page/5/#findComment-1060353288 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyla Posted February 25, 2011 Share Posted February 25, 2011 Great crossover! A lot of things make sense now, and I liked how you placed the girl into the mix. Can't wait to see what happens to Rique. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/465829-gta-iv-dealing-and-stealing/page/5/#findComment-1060353512 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Claude4Catalina Posted February 25, 2011 Author Share Posted February 25, 2011 cheers Tyla, things are returning to normal for the next 3 missions, still be action-packed mission, but Alex will begin his short term of work for Galeno Rivera after Ben's next mission, suffice to say, it doesn't end amazingly, given Galeno's connections. Ben-Spin and Dry Enter Ben’s house to see him loading a magazine for his SMG, armed guards surrounding him. “Yo Ben, it’s me!” Alex shouts. “Could one of you assholes keep an eye on the door?!” Ben screams. “What we tooling up for?” Alex asks. “That Turkish motherf*ckers remaining crew are threatening to take me out…pre-emptive strike my friend.” Ben replies as he makes his way to the door, his crew following. Gunfire erupts as an Emperor and a Ruiner pull up, gunmen with .45 SMG’s, 9mm’s and Assault Rifle’s start shooting up the house. “f*ck, grenade!” One of Ben’s thugs screams, diving for the frag grenade that was thrown through a broken window, the grenade exploding before he could reach it. The remaining Turk’s start to drive away as Ben and Alex are the only ones left. “Follow me man, we’ll get them f*ckers. You drive.” Alex says, him and Ben running out the back to a parked Stallion, Alex firing his .45 at the escaping Emperor, killing one of the thugs as Ben gets in the driver’s seat. “Let’s move, take my SMG!” Ben says, passing you his SMG. Alex can now shoot the SMG from the Stallion while Ben drives, and there is an Emperor escorting the Ruiner, which has pulled ahead and down into Meadows Park. The chase leads past the towers and then onto Cleves Avenue. A cinematic plays of Alex firing the SMG at the Emperor, which loses control and rolls, hitting the gas tanks and exploding on impact. “Let’s get the other f*ckers.” Ben says, putting his foot down and chasing the Ruiner onto the Broker-Dukes Expressway, heading back into Dukes. The Ruiner puts up a good chase, but if you manage to destroy it, the car will blow up. If not, the chases carrier on into East Island City and hangs a right onto Harrison Street, when a Trashmaster pulls out of Tinconderoga Avenue, knocking the rear of the Ruiner, sending it spinning and into a Laundromat, ironically the same one you robbed back in Modern Day Criminals. Ben brakes just in time as you and him advance on the crash. You need to see if there are any survivors of the crash. The driver has pulled himself from the wreckage and is covering himself with a Micro SMG from behind the back end of the Ruiner. He will blind fire but is easily taken care of. The entrance to the Laundromat is blocked, so go around the back to see the driver face-down on the steering wheel of the Ruiner. Alex fires his .45 into the driver four times, finishing him off. You now need to in a car with Ben. When you do, a waypoint will be set for Westdyke, and the conversation will follow. Ben: Taken care of? Alex: Hung the f*cker out to dry. Ben: Ha! Nice! Alex: Where we going to go? Ben: Galeno should probably put me up, he’s got a place out in Westdyke. Alex: There it is then. Ben: What’s the problem? Alex: Andriy, he said Galeno’s not to be trusted. Ben: Andriy is full of sh*t! He’s a drug abusing Commie! Alex: He gave me the house in Beachgate, can’t get the smell of vodka out of the place! Ben: That place has run in the Bratva for years, Rascalov had it for a bit, the Faustin Family held it for years before that, then when Mikhail was killed, Rascalov didn’t want it on his hands so he used it as a meeting place for him and the Petrovic’s. Alex: Damn bro, you speaking Russian to me! Ben: I don’t understand why the Bratva’s don’t operate like us, come together when needed, fall to sh*t when we want. Alex: All you boys politics confuses me, you shoot each other up in hotel lobbies, subways, in the street, but are gentlemen in a boardroom. When my crew used to have meetings, we all came strapped, knew someone would start busting caps. Ben: We’re no better, at a Commission meeting, every bastard has something concealed, we just don’t carry it in our waistline. Alex: Yo, it’s the look! Ben: And shoot yourself in the balls in the process? Alex: You watch too many films bro. Ben: Could say the same for you. I don’t know how much work I can give you now, I’ll have a word with Galeno, he should be cool with running jobs through you. Alex: He seemed to earn enough to pay well! When you arrive at Galeno’s mansion, Ben walks up to the door and knocks. Galeno answers, and after a short conversation, approaches you in the car. “Alex, I hear you need work.” He says. “Yeah, I could do with it.” “How about you drop by some time? Got some things that need handling.” Galeno offers. “Yeah man, sounds good.” Mission Complete $3000 Custom Ruiner available for delivery. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/465829-gta-iv-dealing-and-stealing/page/5/#findComment-1060353735 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyla Posted February 25, 2011 Share Posted February 25, 2011 Alex: Hung the f*cker out to dry. Hah, was that a nod to Niko's mission Hung Out To Dry? Excellent mission again, you're really strong at the dialogue. Especially the talk about the Russians. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/465829-gta-iv-dealing-and-stealing/page/5/#findComment-1060353749 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TommyMufc-Champs Posted February 25, 2011 Share Posted February 25, 2011 Great mission man It was good read Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/465829-gta-iv-dealing-and-stealing/page/5/#findComment-1060353768 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Claude4Catalina Posted February 25, 2011 Author Share Posted February 25, 2011 cheers fella's, I should have the last mission complete by tonight, I've been a bit negligent recently, Black Ops didn't seem to want to get out of my disc tray, but I've finally got the will power to say no expect the next mission tonight. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/465829-gta-iv-dealing-and-stealing/page/5/#findComment-1060353800 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyla Posted February 25, 2011 Share Posted February 25, 2011 Looking forward to it! Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/465829-gta-iv-dealing-and-stealing/page/5/#findComment-1060353805 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TommyMufc-Champs Posted February 25, 2011 Share Posted February 25, 2011 ^ Me too! Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/465829-gta-iv-dealing-and-stealing/page/5/#findComment-1060354006 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Claude4Catalina Posted February 25, 2011 Author Share Posted February 25, 2011 I'm a bit unsure of this, I had a rough idea for this type of mission a while back, then I saw the next Fast and Furious trailer.... Galeno-That sh*t’s Mine Alex returns to Galeno’s Westdyke mansion and sees a convertible Stallion parked to his right, very tasteless considering the location. He knocks on the door and Ben opens up, ushering Alex in. “How’s things after sh*t hit the fan?” Alex asks Ben. “Galeno’s been kind enough to put me up for a while, how’s things going?” “Been getting calls from The Feds, told them to go f*ck themselves.” “Good, a rat is a dead man in this game.” The two of you enter the lounge where Galeno is seated, Automatic 9mm on the coffee table in front of him. “Alex, take a seat.” Galeno greets. “Galeno, how goes it bro?” “Not too bad, did you see that piece of sh*t parked outside?” “The Stallion?” “Yeah, think you could drive that?” “It’s a V8, what’s the job require?” “Keeping up with a truck, carrying a sh*tload of product. It’s not the product I’m interested in, it’s f*cking up a fellow runners work.” “I can give it a try, got anyone else in on this?” “I do, Ruiz, Jai, get in here.” Galeno shouts to two of his thugs who come strolling in. “Yeah boss?” Jai asks. “Alex here is gonna be your driver, you know the plan.” You will be outside in the Stallion, Ruiz sitting in the passenger seat and Jai wedging himself across the back bench seat. A marker will be at the onramp to Plumbers Skyway in Leftwood. Jai: Get us on Plumbers Skyway man and follow the truck. I’ll need you to pull us alongside so Ruiz can jump on the Flatbed and secure the crate, and you’ll need to spin around and throw her into reverse so I can attach the chain to our tow hook. Alex: You boys watch too many movies. Ruiz: It’ll work though, and we’re getting paid for this. Jai: Damn straight homie! When you get to the onramp, drive up the wrong side of the road and catch up to the truck. Pull up on the left so Ruiz can jump on the Flatbed. Hold your position for five seconds then Ruiz will make the jump. When Ruiz is on the Flatbed, slow down, hit the handbrake then reverse behind the Flatbed, again holding there for five seconds before Ruiz throws the chain, which Jai attaches to the tow hook. Jai: We’re good! Start cutting the links! As the truck carries on, you will have no control over the Stallion. As Ruiz cuts each four links, you can gain more control until he cuts the last one. You will have a large crate behind you, and when you drive it will swing, similar to as if you were towing a car. Ruiz: I’ll take care of the driver, you dump that sh*t! You now need to get the drugs to your project up in Northwood, Jai leaves you too it. Alex pulls into the projects, crate swinging about behind him and calls Tyler. Alex: Yo, I got a present for you homie! Tyler: What? Man, where are you? Alex: Outside, come take a look! Tyler walks out of the projects to see Alex sitting on the hood of the battered Stallion, crate behind him. “What the f*ck?!” Tyler gawps. “Nice ain’t it?” Alex chuckles, cracking open the crate, bags of coke tumbling out. “Street value on that sh*t, sky high!” Tyler exclaims. “Nice little gift, homie to homie.” “’til the end brother, until the end.” Mission Complete +11000$ Unknown caller tries calling. Alex: What? ?: It’s me, Agent Jones. You are going to meet me at the Diner on Grenadier Street when I instruct you too. Time’s up with the games babe. Alex: Don’t patronize me. I’ll be there, pig! Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/465829-gta-iv-dealing-and-stealing/page/5/#findComment-1060354406 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TommyMufc-Champs Posted February 25, 2011 Share Posted February 25, 2011 I think that mission worked Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/465829-gta-iv-dealing-and-stealing/page/5/#findComment-1060354549 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Claude4Catalina Posted February 26, 2011 Author Share Posted February 26, 2011 anyone like shooting? how about boats? how about helicopters? how about a mounted f*cking machine gun? look no futher. Galeno-Set Sail Alex once again enters Galeno’s compound, this time the Drug Lord is sitting in his armchair, discussing something with Ben. “Well something needs to be done about Andriy, he brings too much heat.” Ben says, taking a sip of his whiskey. “Perhaps Alex can offer his services?” Galeno suggests. “Good point…Alex, how do you feel about earning a quick buck?” “If it involves killing Andriy, I couldn’t do that…he gave me a house, man!” Alex replies, attempting to be rational but ended sounding materialistic. “It will not be killing him, just destroying that ship of his. That f*cking thing causes more trouble than its worth!” Ben argues, pissed off with the late delivery. “Where is it?” Alex asks, showing interest. “Coming from Vice, it’s at the mouth of the Humboldt. I can get someone to fly you over there, can you handle a gun?” Galeno replies. “I’ve seen my fair share of pieces in my time.” “Then how about this motherf*cker?” He says, pulling out a Heavy MG from behind his lounge chair. “Vietnam classic! Had it loaded with explosive rounds, this bitch will tear that ship to pieces. “Damn…let’s go!” Alex replies enthusiastically. You will be in Galeno’s Armadillo, one of his thugs is flying while you are manning the Heavy MG. Similar to previous missions, you have unlimited ammunition for the Heavy MG which fires explosive rounds. The chopper flies South-East to the mouth of the Humboldt River that separates Broker and Algonquin. “Ready for this?” The pilot asks. “The tanker’s coming into view, we’ll do a few sweeps around it then leave the f*cker where it is, just keep firing the MG yeah?” “Gotcha bro, I’m ready.” Alex replies. Fire the Heavy MG on the ship as the pilot loops around it three times. The boat wont sink but watch the fireworks as the explosive rounds tear the ship’s deck to pieces. Russian’s will fire Assault Rifles at you from the ship but they are easily dispatched. Once the pilot has taken you around three times, a Maverick with four Assault Rifle wielding Russian’s will arrive, firing at you from the skids. The pilot keeps you steady as a dogfight takes place, your Heavy MG ripping the helicopter to shreds. Alex: Ha-ha get some! Pilot: We’re gonna head back, that should have done the job! You find yourself back at Galeno’s mansion, Galeno and Ben waiting in the back yard for you. “I hear there was a disturbance at sea earlier, I take it the Coast Guard ain’t quick enough?” Galeno smirks. “Andriy shouldn’t be bringing any more product into the country, his boat got f*cked up!” Alex laughs back, feeling pleased with himself. “Nice work Alex, I’ll call you if I need anything else done.” “Catch you around bro, and you Ben.” Alex replies, departing. Mission Complete +$15000. Alex receives a call from the unknown contact. ?: It’s time me and you had a little talk. Alex: When and where, you disgusting motherf*cker? ?: The Diner on Grenadier Street. Get here. NOW! Alex: Jesus, anyone would think you’re date ain’t showed up! ?: Oh I’ve got company…somebody you might recognize. Alex: Who the f*ck? ?: You’ll find out. We’ll be waiting. A ‘?’ icon appears in South Alderney. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/465829-gta-iv-dealing-and-stealing/page/5/#findComment-1060355279 Share on other sites More sharing options...
vertical limit Posted February 26, 2011 Share Posted February 26, 2011 (edited) Not be a dick. You should add more information just than that what has been posted add vehicles and what about some boxart and HUD. If you want I could do the boxart for you? Some criticism. Edited February 26, 2011 by vertical limit Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/465829-gta-iv-dealing-and-stealing/page/5/#findComment-1060355590 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TommyMufc-Champs Posted February 26, 2011 Share Posted February 26, 2011 Not be a dick. You should add more information just than that what has been posted add vehicles and what about some boxart and HUD. If you want I could do the boxart for you? Some criticism. DLC's don't really use boxarts only for things like Episodes From Liberty City. Here Is something DLC's use: Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/465829-gta-iv-dealing-and-stealing/page/5/#findComment-1060355633 Share on other sites More sharing options...
vertical limit Posted February 26, 2011 Share Posted February 26, 2011 Can't see the image. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/465829-gta-iv-dealing-and-stealing/page/5/#findComment-1060355665 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyla Posted February 26, 2011 Share Posted February 26, 2011 Can't see the image. Image hosts have been playing up for me all day aswell. I think some side missions could be a nice addition, I've seen some of the new vehicles introduced within the missions posted up, so I don't think they're a problem. Nice mission by the way. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/465829-gta-iv-dealing-and-stealing/page/5/#findComment-1060355674 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Claude4Catalina Posted February 26, 2011 Author Share Posted February 26, 2011 inbetween working on the main story, I've been piecing together the side missions, one would be styled like TLAD's bike thefts, only with cars, I'm writing the Random Character missions as they happen, I've compiled a vehicle list, it's just a case of finding the images to go with it. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/465829-gta-iv-dealing-and-stealing/page/5/#findComment-1060355684 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Claude4Catalina Posted February 26, 2011 Author Share Posted February 26, 2011 ladies and gentlemen....Alex's crowning moment of awesome. Unknown-The Last Supper Alex enters the disgusting bar, flies swarming, and sees a middle aged man sitting with one bodyguard. “Alex Jackson…please, take a seat. I’m Agent Jones.” The contact says, sparking up a cigarette. “By the looks of you, you didn’t get many dates back in high school, nothing changes.” Alex remarks. “Cute…now what isn’t cute is the fact that you killed Stuart Astell, you, my friend, are a nuisance.” “And you’re an uptight corrupt prick.” “Rique…come in here.” “You back stabbing, two timing f*ck! Rique, I’m gonna kill your ass!” Alex shouts as Rique walks though from the restroom. “Times are changing bro…Jones here controlled everything, he had Stuart Astell under his belt, he has Galeno under his belt. You’re just a dirty hood rat, scum from the gutter!” “Yo f*ck you!” Alex replies in anger. “The only f*cking going on will be your life, I’ve got a warrant out on you and a tip that you’ll be here. Right now, LCPD and my NNT will swoop in like flies to sh*t…it’s over for you Alex…you f*cked too many people.” Agent Jones taunts, taking a drag from his cigarette. “I don’t think so!” Alex says in a moment of desperation, standing up and firing his .45 into Agent Jones’s chest three times, turning to his bodyguard who is trying to draw his 9mm but is killed in the process. “Yo I’m out of here!” Rique says, sprinting out the back door. Two Police Cruisers pull up outside along with an NNT Enforcer. THIS IS THE LCPD, WE KNOW YOU ARE IN THERE! DROP YOUR WEAPONS AND WE WILL NOT RESORT TO VIOLENCE. You are now stuck in a diner, surrounded by Police with just a .45, a Stubby Shotgun and a .45 SMG. Alex is behind the counter, waiting for the Police to breach the diner. YOU HAD YOUR CHANCE, WE ARE PREPARED TO USE BRUTAL FORCE. Police breach the diner from the front, leaving you with a clear line of sight to gun them down. Once they are taken care of, the NNT Members outside start firing on the Diner. Alex now has three Molotov Cocktails in his possession and the idea is to burn them out of business. Throw one through the open door which will ignite the NNT Agents, leaving you with a clear escape path. Alex jumps over the bar and makes a run for it, finishing off the charred remains of the NNT Agents and breaking into a nearby Cavalcade, then drives up Plumbers Skyway. You have a four star wanted level and need to outrun the cops. Carry on along Plumbers Skyway and when you reach the Hickey Bridge, the screen fades to black… …Alex is sitting in Tyler’s apartment, shaking with anger. “f*cking Rique…f*cking Galeno, Beniamino, Andriy!” He shouts. “Rique is a nothing, the other three are problems. We can’t touch Beniamino, and Andriy is in the hands of the Pigs at the moment, and Galeno is probably gonna bust on out of here once he knows what went down.” Tyler consoles Alex. “We’re gonna hit that bastard when it f*cking hurts. I’m gonna get over to mine and tool up. Go round up a crew and meet me back outside.” Alex orders as he leaves. Mission Complete the penultimate mission, I've got the final mission and then the 'bonus' mission left to post, then thats the story finished! Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/465829-gta-iv-dealing-and-stealing/page/5/#findComment-1060356125 Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Lolwut Pear Posted February 26, 2011 Share Posted February 26, 2011 The sh*t has just hit the fan...amazing, man. Waiting for the last mission. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/465829-gta-iv-dealing-and-stealing/page/5/#findComment-1060356243 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TommyMufc-Champs Posted February 27, 2011 Share Posted February 27, 2011 Wow your so good at writing and you always seem to have the time to do a mission, Well done Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/465829-gta-iv-dealing-and-stealing/page/5/#findComment-1060356712 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mati Posted February 27, 2011 Share Posted February 27, 2011 Man, those mission are just plain awesome. I even started to like the name of the concept. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/465829-gta-iv-dealing-and-stealing/page/5/#findComment-1060356762 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akavari Posted February 27, 2011 Share Posted February 27, 2011 That was beautiful, can't wait for the climax. This concept is extremely underrated (probably because of the name). Hell, it's easily got the most sophisticated story of any DLC concept, Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/465829-gta-iv-dealing-and-stealing/page/5/#findComment-1060357246 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TommyMufc-Champs Posted February 27, 2011 Share Posted February 27, 2011 That was beautiful, can't wait for the climax. This concept is extremely underrated (probably because of the name). Hell, it's easily got the most sophisticated story of any DLC concept, I agree, this Is underrated but the thing Is I love the name. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/465829-gta-iv-dealing-and-stealing/page/5/#findComment-1060357408 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Claude4Catalina Posted February 27, 2011 Author Share Posted February 27, 2011 I'm going to consider re-writing the final mission before I post it, I wanted to give it a Bad Boys 2 vibe, storming a mansion then an SUV chase, but I think I'll give it the once over for more originality before posting. I'm also going to post my epilogue, a bonus mission that will tie up a loose end and reward you with a new safehouse. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/465829-gta-iv-dealing-and-stealing/page/5/#findComment-1060357423 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Claude4Catalina Posted February 28, 2011 Author Share Posted February 28, 2011 awh what the hell, just gonna post it as a work in progress, I'm back at college this week so probably wont get much to time to make major updates, so without futher ado, here is my first draft of the final mission! Alex-Finishing Moves When you enter Alex’s Bohan Safe house, a cutscene plays, triggering the final mission. Alex goes into a large cupboard serving as his gun stash, and pulls out his .45, lays it on the bed, then a Pump Action Shotgun, then a Grenade Launcher. He then takes his Carbine Rifle out and loads it, slinging it over his back, tucks his .45 into his waistline, slings his Grenade Launcher over the other shoulder and picks up the Shotgun, walks outside and loads them all into the trunk of his Faction. You know have to drive over to Tyler’s apartment. Alex calls Papi along the way. Alex: Yo Papi? Papi: Alex, what can I do you for holmes. Alex: Bro, can you get a crew together and be at the mansion at the end of Big Horn Drive? Papi: Tyler already told me about this, you in some deep sh*t. I’ve got some of my boys waiting here with me, we’re gonna bust in when you boys give the word, and take out the security wing. Alex: sh*t’s starting to come together, I’ll see you in a bit homie. Pull into the marker to trigger the cutscene. Alex gets out of his Faction to see Jamie and Tyler, Jamie holding an Advancer MG and Tyler with a Carbine Rifle. “We ready for this?” Alex asks. “Busting into a drug lords mansion and blowing it to sh*t…yeah I’m down.” Jamie replies. “Let’s do it then.” Tyler says, walking to his Landstalker. You are now in the driver’s seat of the Landstalker and need to drive to Galeno’s mansion in Alderney. Alex: I still can’t believe that rat f*ck Rique. Tyler: And Galeno. He’s f*cked with the wrong crew now. Alex: Beniamino ain’t gonna be too happy when he finds out Rivera was working with the Feds. Jamie: Probably worked with the NNT too, you know what it’s like. Alex: And Andriy, I heard ‘bout him getting arrested on his ship…which I attacked. f*ck, if I hadn’t agreed to work with Galeno, this wouldn’t have happened! Tyler: But now it has, and we gotta end it. Jamie: Before it’s too late. Alex: We ain’t out of time yet, hopefully Rique will be there. Tyler: I damn hope so, remember back when we saved his ass the docks, what was it, ’03? Alex: Something like that, the ungrateful prick better be there! Jamie: Chill boys, we’re gonna put them out of business. Alex: I f*cking hope so. When you arrive, Alex pulls up outside and the scene cuts to Galeno’s back yard, panning over the mansion. Armed guards roam the grounds and Galeno is seen over watching the back yard. The scene cuts back into the car, and a silver Presidente screams into view. “Who’s this joker?” Tyler asks. “f*ck, heads down boys!” Alex replies, ducking. “It’s Andriy.” Andriy is seen ploughing into the concrete post outside Galeno’s mansion and gets out, wielding two .45’s, wearing body armour and two 9mm’s in his chest holsters. “Galeno…come out to play you f*cking rat!” He mutters as he guns down one of Galeno’s guards, making his way through the grounds. “f*ck, we gotta get to him before he can kill Rique!” Alex says. “Tyler, tell Papi to raise hell!” The three of you enter the mansion’s grounds, and come across more dead bodies. “sh*t man, that Andriy’s one bad ass!” Jamie laughs as they enter the back yard and hear an explosion, one of Papi’s boys has blown up the east wing which contained the security offices. Andriy is standing near the pool and turns around with two 9mm’s. “You…! Alexander…my friend, join me.” Andriy offers, smiling. “I’m sorry man, things ain’t like that no more.” Alex stutters, aiming his Carbine Rifle. “Whatever do you mean?” “I mean…” Alex’s sentence is cut short as Andriy is cut down by gunfire from one of Galeno’s goons. “f*ck!” You are now back in control of Alex and need to clear the yard of guards. Papi and his men are on the other side of the gardens and there are roughly 20 armed guards between you and him. Once you take them out, you need to blow a hole through the back doors and into the mansion. Place a Sticky Bomb on the doors and detonate it, then enter the mansion. Once inside, sweep all the downstairs rooms until clear, then head upstairs. Head for the master bedroom. A cutscene plays of Alex entering the bedroom and a goon fires his Sawn Off Shotgun but misses and Alex takes him down with his .45. Galeno is then seen exiting out the front doors as two Cavalcade FXT’s and one Rancher pull into the courtyard, the FXT’s firing mounted Heavy MG’s at the mansion. “Alex, get out of there, we gotta chase Galeno, f*ck Rique man!” Tyler urges from the lobby, gunfire tearing the house down. Get out from the mansion and join Papi, Tyler and Jamie making your escape around the side, where you came in. Start firing at the FXT’s and they eventually explode, and just as you enter the garage and pick up the keys to the yellow customized Patriot, the mansion explodes, gutting it completely. “Ha-ha, the explosions worked!” Papi laughs while they enter the Patriot, driving over the wreckage and onto Owl Creek Avenue. Chase the Rancher over the rough terrain leading down onto Beaverhead Avenue and a thug will be firing an Advanced MG at you from the tailgate. The Rancher then dives onto the concrete outside outside the Abandoned Casino and beneath the road before coming back onto Beaverhead Avenue. It then cuts between the houses on Sacramento Avenue and turns left on Percell, then right going alongside the Police Station, a Police Cruiser will pull out responding to a call, but the Patriot makes short work of it. Stalk the Rancher on to the Hickey Bridge and down Topaz Street. It then heads for Union Drive East where an Armadillo with Assault Rifle firing goons are shooting at you, albeit poor shots. The chase continues down Union Drive and the Rancher heads down the ramp and beneath the freeway, launching itself down the steps and carries on along the waterfront, before stopping at the small docks, the helicopter lowering itself so Galeno can board it. “I can’t let him escape, cover me, I’m going for him!” Alex orders his crew. You are back in control with only a .45 and need to take out Galeno Rivera at all costs. Papi, Tyler and Jamie take out the helicopter for you while you chase Galeno down the small wooden docks, his whole entourage dead. Aim your .45 for a cinematic execution. “Where the f*ck is Rique?!” Alex demands, advancing on Galeno. “I wouldn’t know…he was small time.” “But you were all under Stuart Astell! You, Rique, f*cking Andriy probably was at some point!” “Andriy was, until Astell decided Andriy was a f*cking liability. Why do you think I got you to destroy his ship? And that shipment I had you steal-Albanians coke!” “Still ain’t answering my question!” “Did you really think that after screwing you, Rique would run to me? Astell told me about Rique, he also told me about Agent Jones. They kept me untouchable, and you f*cked it up!” “Did Ben know you worked with the pigs?” “Of course he did! Open your eyes! Astell and Jones had LC’s drug business locked down, and you destroyed the harmony!” “Harmony? What, killing all who stand in your way? Oh what the f*ck, it don’t matter! Man you done f*cked up!” Alex replies angrily, cocking the hammer on his .45. “Do it then, LC’s gonna be a sh*t storm if you do.” “You’ll be out the picture at least.” Alex firmly grips his pistol and takes aim for Galeno’s head. He zeroes in on his target and squeezes the trigger, firmly placing a bullet between Galeno’s eyes, the body slumping down and backwards, landing in the Humboldt River. Hell On Earth by Mobb Deep starts playing as the camera pans out on Alex walking back to the Patriot and then a wide shot of the city, then zooming back in on Rique gazing out the window of his Colony Island Witness Protection condo, who watched the execution. He looks down at his feet, closes his eyes and shakes his head. Alex re-spawns outside Tyler’s apartment block. Mission Complete +50000$ Epilogue Mission Unlocked Hell On Earth achievement unlocked. please bear in mind that this isn't the final product, it's my first draft, consider it the dress rehersal for the real thing. 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Akavari Posted February 28, 2011 Share Posted February 28, 2011 That was f*cking incredible. Personally I love Andriy, and him gunning in as a one man army strikes a double-image with Il Duce in the Boondock Saints. The whole conspiracy behind the drug cartel is brilliant too. Congratulations on finishing the story more-or-less. What's the epilogue gonna be about? Alex taking over the empire? Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/465829-gta-iv-dealing-and-stealing/page/5/#findComment-1060359797 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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