GTA IV: Dealing and Stealing

[Mati]

Why do people keep saying that to me when I give them something?

 

Here's a better picture of the Pillows Club.

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Did I ever mention that I love you sincerely?

 

I... love you (Not the gay way) . F**kin great! Thanks man!

BTW updating right now.

This made me lol.

[Claude4Catalina]

 

he's the dealer from Shifting Weight in TLAD, I thought making him a minor characters would make sense, instead of using up someone with alot more potentional such as Willy Valerio, I can make the dealer my own, and only one crossover is mandatory.

Yeah he's an interesting character. How would his perspective of Shifting Weight be? I added a similar mission in my topic where you help the guy fight cops after the deal(Shifting Weight) goes bad. Maybe since Papi is in this you could add a crossover with TBOGT's Corner Kid's. It could explain how Papi get's away. Also will that gurl in Shifting Weight appear?

the mission would be for Tyler, and the main objective of the mission would be drive to the deal with some hood rat looking to score, then when the deal goes bad, you simply need to escape. the gear you WERE gonna buy would be a bit of a plot device. but for tonights mission;

 

Jamie-It’s Not Hard

 

Jamie will be working on the Huntley Sport you previously obtained for him, and greet you without even knowing you are there.

“What’s up man? Thanks for getting this beast for me. I gave it a nice clean, you wouldn’t believe the amount of sh*t he had stashed up!”

“Ha-ha! Got anything that needs doing bro?” Alex will ask, getting down to business.

“As a matter of fact, yeah. I fixed up someone’s ride, this nice Black and Orange Coquette, would you mind driving it their place in Steinway? The useless f*cks said they’d pick it up, but haven’t got the time. Probably too busy getting drunk. It’s in the underground car park in Lancaster.” Jamie explains, still tuning the Huntley.

“Yeah homie, I’ll give it a try.”

“Be careful with it. The handling might be a bit twitchy at first, and they’ll pay less if you turn up with it in less than mint condition.”

 

A waypoint marker will be set at the underground car park a few blocks away. The Coquette will be parked across two disabled bays, a sign of Jamie’s ignorance. Once you get in, a way point will be added in Steinway, next to the Beer Garden. The following will pop up onscreen;

 

Be careful, the Irish will deduct your pay if the car isn’t in perfect condition.

 

This is easier said than done, because there will be three set pieces designed to catch you off guard:

 

• On Albany Avenue, as you turn to get on the on ramp, a speeding Roadtrain will collide with a Police Cruiser, not hesitating to hit you in its wake. The semi-truck will continue onto the bridge, before swerving into the wrong lane.

• When driving down the off ramp to the bridge, an Infernus and a Comet will be having a race, before the Comet collides with the rear end of a Benson.

• Just as you arrive at Tinconderoga Avenue, a black Esperanto with two drunk Serbian’s will pull out.

 

You will need to pull into the marker, when you will then see a cutscene of you entering the pub, and are greeted by Papi.

“Alex…what’s good man?” Papi will say, before downing his beer.

“Papi. I got told to drop off a car here, you know where the man is?”

“That’d be me. Michael, stop fantasizing over your sister and go take the car back to our place.” A stoical ginger Irishman will call out. “Gerald McCreary, pleasure to f*cking meet you” Gerry will offer a hand shake, which Alex accepts.

“How’s it going bro?”

“Yeah…good. Listen, I need to go, I’ll be in touch.” Gerald replies, before stumbling out the door.

 

Mission Complete

Up to $2000 if the car is in good condition.

Papi’s third mission is unlocked.

Edited January 17, 2011 by Claude4Catalina

[The Lolwut Pear]

 

• Just as you arrive at Tinconderoga Avenue, a black Esperanto with two drunk Serbian’s will pull out.

 

Roman and Niko?

[Claude4Catalina]

indeed, BUT, if you attempt to follow them, you fail the mission for taking too long, and if you try to kill them, you fail the mission for leaving the car.

[Claude4Catalina]

sorry for not updating last night, personal issues arose which hasn't given me much by way of time. to make up for it, I'm treating everyone to two missions in a row!

 

Jamie-Screamin’

 

Jamie will be sitting half in his Tampa, eating a Cluckin’ Bell when Alex walks in.

“That sh*t was good!” He says, wiping his mouth. “Bro, what’s your opinion on the Bravado Banshee?”

“Yeah, they a nice car.” Alex replied in confusion.

“I just got word that some chump is offering his up for pink slips…I think we could beat that motherf*cker.”

“We?”

“Yeah man! You driving, me shouting cool sh*t out the window, we!” Alex excitedly replies.

“Where he at?” Alex asks, thinking it could be a break from all the shooting.

“Union Drive West, he keeps it parked opposite the hospital. You down?”

“I’m down man.”

 

You’ll be in the driver’s seat of Jamie’s black customized Turismo, and you need to follow the waypoint to the racer. When you arrive, there will be a Maverick with camera equipment on each side and a Speedo with TV screens linked up to the Maverick.

“Yo, we here to race.” Jamie calls out. A blonde yuppie-type step out from the crowd.

“Let’s go then.” He will reply, acting all self-confident. “We racing to the checkpoint at Lancaster, and the back here, my chopper will be tracking us. Follow me to the start line.”

 

You’ll be back in the driver’s seat, following the driver to the start line, outside the Helitours helipads.

 

Alex: I don’t like his tone…

Jamie: Keep it calm man, we’ll be getting a sweet car out of this!

 

When you reach the start line, the chopper will hover to your right, and a countdown will start. When the race starts, it will be pure racing, no distractions, you focus will be to win the race. Jamie has set dialogue depending on how well you are doing.

 

Winning

Ha-ha! Sucka!

Yo! You ain’t no driver!

Nice one Alex!

Losing

Man, we getting our asses whooped!

Yo, he right in front of you bro!

Come on, I want that beast!

 

When you win the race, you will see a cutscene of you pulling back into the parking lot, celebrating. You are followed by the racer, who is followed by an LCPD Police Stinger!

“This is the LCPD! Don’t move!”

In a mad scramble, you have to chase the Banshee driver while contending with a 2 star wanted level.

 

Jamie will shoot his .45 at the driver, but eventually he crashes into a taxi, where you get a scene of Jamie getting out of the Turismo, dragging the Banshee driver out and executing him.

“I’ll see you around bro, keep the Turismo!” Jamie pulls away in the Banshee, leaving you with a two star wanted level.

 

Mission Complete

+$1000

Custom Turismo available for delivery.

Custom Banshee available for delivery.

 

Jamie will call, confirming his side jobs.

 

Jamie: Alex man, you ever want to help me boost some cars, I got enough work going on, just come by the garage, I got a whole shopping list bro.

Alex: A’ight J, I’ll come round sometime.

 

Jamie’s Car Thefts are now unlocked. Go see Jamie at his garage to view the wishlist.

 

that's Jamie's missions exhausted for now. time to go see Papi.

Edited January 17, 2011 by Claude4Catalina

[Claude4Catalina]

Papi-Money Over Buddies

 

Alex will buzz for Papi’s brownstone apartment on Rotterdam Hill, and after a few moments, the door is unlocked and he walks up two flights of stairs before being confronted by a drunken idiot.

“Hey buddy! Ha-ha, I love this guy, man! He’s my best friend! Ha-ha!”

“Alright bro, calm down, people might want some peace and quiet, yeah?” Alex tries calming the drunk.

“Yeah bro! Homie! Dude!” The Drunk will reply, before tumbling down the stairs. Alex turns around and sees him sitting there, smiling stupidly, before Alex carries on up the last flight.

“Alex, you just caught me on my way out. I got a deal over in Firefly Projects. Probably gonna need some muscle, you down?” Papi asks, seconds after locking up his apartment.

“Might as well. What we doing?” Alex replies, wanting to know what he’s getting into.

“Just picking up some sh*t I prepaid for, it’s from an old friend of mine.”

“Let’s roll.”

 

You’ll find yourself in the driver’s seat of Papi’s black Cavalcade, and a waypoint will be set on Ringo Street in Firefly Projects.

 

Papi: The gear is in a warehouse down Firefly. My man should be waiting there for us.

Alex: And if this f*cks up?

Papi: It won’t! I’ve know this cat for years homie, he’s legit.

Alex: I f*cking hope so man.

Papi: Why so worried?

Alex: We been in the game long enough to know that things always f*ck up. We know that we’re gonna need to start shooting at some point.

Papi: It’ll go fine. Honest.

 

You will pull into the marker and see a cinematic of you two driving around the corner and parking up.

“Where’s your man, bro?” Alex will ask.

“He should be here…” Papi will be cut short by gunfire, as an Assault Rifle wielding thug starts firing on your car.

“f*ck! Get off the street!” Papi shouts, firing his pistol to no avail, then running towards the door of the warehouse.

“Get that door open Papi!” Alex urges, firing his .45 SMG, running dry just as Papi got the door open.

 

You have to clear out the warehouse and kill the traitor. You start off in the reception area, a Stubby Shotgun will be leaning against the wall, a health pack will be on the desk and an armour pick up is in front of the desk. The actual warehouse is two levels, there will be seven MOB members on the first level, who all take cover behind machinery. Once you clear this level out, Papi proceeds to the stairs at the back of the room, he will go up first and you need to cover him. A total eighteen gangsters are on this level, and when you reach the back room, the Assault Rifle toting thug will be standing near a large glass window. He will go to fire, then then realize his rifle has jammed.

“Pot luck, motherf*cker.” Alex says, holding his .45 SMG to the gangster, who takes three steps back.

“Where’s JC?” Papi demands, holding his 9mm out, threatening the thug.

“He…he…he’s in his apartment, he holes himself up there, paranoid f*ck don’t let nobody in man! He lives in 16R. He controls the top 3 floors!” The thug squeals. “Please, yo homie, don’t!”

“Smoke him.” Papi says to you.

 

Aim your .45 SMG at him for a cinematic execution, which shows Alex and Papi firing in the thug’s torso until they both run dry, the body falling through the glass.

 

The scene will cut you and Papi exiting the warehouse, and entering the nearby blue and silver Sentinel. A waypoint will lead to Papi’s apartment.

 

Alex: We going after JC?

Papi: Not today bro, take me home? I got plans for that lying little f*cker.

Alex: I thought he was legit?

Papi: So did I. Turns out its money over buddies for him…

Alex: Sucker with no loyalty, when I get my hands on him I’m gonna tear him a new asshole!

Papi: We need to get a crew together. I’ll get some of my boys. You in on this?

Alex: Hell yeah I’m in! Motherf*cker tried getting me killed!

 

You’ll soon reach your destination, where Papi will leave, promising to see you seen and thanking you for helping him.

 

Mission Complete

+$1000

Gary the Drunk Random Character

Custom Sentinel available for delivery.

 

Papi will call you later with news about JC.

 

Papi: What’s good homie? If you still down for taking out JC, he’s got major protection on the top 3 levels, so I’ve got six of my guys in on this. Meet us at the junk yard in Firefly, we’re waiting on ya.

Alex: A’ight bro, be there as quick as I can.

 

I'll also be updating the main post with Jamie's Car Thefts, a series of side missions, what would Grand Theft Auto be without a bit of car theft?

Edited January 17, 2011 by Claude4Catalina

[The Lolwut Pear]

Will the mission Corner Kids appear for Papi from a different point of view?

[Claude4Catalina]

yeah, I've noticed its in someone else's concept, but I'll still do it, it'll be an on-rails shooter on the back of a Reefer, I'll try and keep it fairly simple. it'll be Papi's first mission in the second chapter, which takes place just after This sh*ts Cursed/Chinese Takeout.

[Mati]

Nice mission

I dont want to go off topic, but you dont respond to my PMs. Listen, if you dont want to be a member of The Dominican Mob, just say it instead of ignoring my messages.

[Claude4Catalina]

PM'd you, things should be sorted now.

 

seeing as I didnt wanted to be accused of bumping/multiple posting, I'll post the next mission now.

 

Following the phone call from Papi, a waypoint for the junk yard in Firefly Projects will be marked on your map. Enter the marker and the mission will properly start.

 

Papi-Bite The Bullet

 

Papi will be standing in the tailgate of a destroyed pick up, next to his green Feroci with the trunk open, revealing four Micro SMG’s and two Pump Action Shotguns.

“A’ight people! Listen up!” He shouts, acknowledging Alex’s presence. “Take a piece, I want three of you with the auto’s and one of you with a shotty to get in first, we’ll catch up with you.”

When everyone had armed themselves up, you, Papi and two other thugs are sitting in Papi’s Feroci, one of the thugs driving.

 

Alex: So this is it.

Papi: It is bro, f*cking puta screwed us over, and it’s time he pays.

 

When you arrive, Papi will call the elevator, and when it arrives, the doors open to reveal the dead bodies of two of his thugs, their bodies riddled with bullet wounds.

“f*ck!” Papi will wince, before dragging the bodies out of the elevator, and entering it, you and the two thugs following. “To the 15th floor.”

You get to the 15th floor to see multiple dead bodies. This floor is cleared out, so Papi decides to take the stairs. In the stair well, one of Papi’s thugs will be leaning against a wall, Micro SMG in hand.

“Javier, you ok?” Papi asks.

“I’m f*cked up pretty bad homie, Ruiz has moved up, motherf*ckers probably dead.” Javier replies, struggling for breath.

Papi and his crew turn around, and a shotgun-toting MOB member is standing at the top of the stairs, taking aim at Papi.

“Papi!” Alex shouts, firing a burst, killing Papi’s would-be killer.

“Thanks bro! Let’s get moving!”

 

Papi will lead you up the stairs to the 16th floor, where you will be instructed to clear out the whole floor before proceeding. You will have Papi his two thugs with you. Once you have cleared this floor, head for the stairs to trigger another cutscene.

 

You will go to climb the stairs but Ruiz will be gunned down the stairs and land at your feet.

“f*ckers!” Alex shouts, picking up Ruiz’s Micro SMG and moving up the stairs, firing both guns, one in each hand, killing all four thugs with a single spray.

 

Alex is now on the 17th floor. Papi will lead you to JC’s apartment.

“You got my back homie?” Papi will ask you.

“All the way bro.” Alex replies, as Papi kicks the door in.

 

JC will throw the butt of his shotgun into Papi’s stomach, then aims it at Alex, who ducks and tackles JC, who fires, killing one of Papi’s boys.

“f*cking pendejo.” Papi mumbles, picking himself up as Alex savagely beats JC.

“All yours bro.” Alex says, getting up off JC’s beaten body.

“Any last words?” Papi asks JC, who simply moans in agony. Alex pulls back the slide on his 9mm, and wedges the barrel in JC’s mouth, before firing. Papi then rummages through a duffel bag, throwing it over his should, exiting the apartment.

“sh*t.” Alex says to himself, silently following Papi out of the project, and you will be in the driver’s seat of Papi’s Feroci, waypoint leading back to his house.

 

Alex: It’s done man…that got intense…bad.

Papi: Lost three of my boys out there, nearly lost myself. Damn.

Alex: Look at it this way, me and you got out of it, and so did one of your goons.

Thug: Hey!

Papi: Guzman, shut up bro! Yeah man, you right.

 

Papi will hand you some cash and you will part ways.

 

Alex: Hmm, something’s up with him…

 

Mission Complete

+$4000

 

Papi calls you, having cheered up a bit.

 

Papi: My brother.

Alex: How’s it going homie?

Papi: Yeah, it’s good. Listen, you ever need help, I got the boys on call, after what we got away with at the projects, they won’t mind giving you a hand.

Alex: Thanks man, that’ll come in handy.

 

Papi’s back up ability unlocked.

Edited January 17, 2011 by Claude4Catalina

[The Lolwut Pear]

This is f*ckin' awesome, this needs more views man.

[LuisBellic]

These missions are f*ckin awesome man. Maybe you could include characters like Playboy X in your story.

[Claude4Catalina]

thanks guys, I'm including Gerald and Gordon (my DLC is only linked to IV and EFLC, no other concepts) and I'm thinking of a place to include Playboy, what with the Holland Play, its a bit hard to fit him in.

 

just curious, whats the general opinion of throwback missions? for example, remember the mission from SA with Catalina, robbing a store then escaping out back to some commandeered Police Bikes? well I sort of want to use the idea of fighting down a narrow alley to some 'cycles after a botched hold up, along with a 'Reuniting The Families' type mission, and two missions as the door gunner of an Armadillo, as a joint VC/VCS reference. Any thoughts?

 

 

Papi-Express Delivery

 

Alex enters Papi’s apartment block, and knocks on Papi’s door.

“Yo Papi, open up!” He hollers.

“Alex, come in.” Papi invites Alex into his apartment, sitting down in front of the TV.

“So…?” Alex says, Papi drifting away.

“Yeah, uh sorry bro. You know that car you dropped off for the Irish?”

“Yeah, I remember.”

“They want proof that you can handle their demand. They have left the Coquette full of product and they want you to personally deliver it to the junk yard in BOABO.”

“Sounds simple enough, where’s the car?”

“It’s in the parking lot in Beachgate, but the catch is, they need you to take a specific route. The route is programmed into the GPS, something to do with the five-oh.”

 

You will exit the apartment and be directed to Beachgate. When you arrive, you need to get in the custom Coquette. When you do, the GPS line follows the Broker-Dukes Expressway, which then goes up Dukes Boulevard. You simply need to follow the GPS route as fast as you can without destroying the car. Once you arrive at the junk yard, step out of the car and you will be greeted an Irish goon, who checks the car.

“Nice. Gerald will be in touch.”

 

Mission Complete

+$2000

 

Alex will ring Papi to let him know what happened.

 

Alex: Papi, I think I did ok, Gerald will contact me apparently.

Papi: That’s a good sign bro, I’ll call you soon.

 

I've tried to keep the McCreary's fairly elusive, given the fact that Alex's is considered small time.

Edited January 17, 2011 by Claude4Catalina

[Mati]

Another awesome mission . Keep it up

[Claude4Catalina]

might aswel post the next mission, its a big one because it marks the end of Chapter I.

 

Alex gets the following phone call from Tyler once he has completed Tyler’s, Jamie’s and Papi’s first three jobs.

 

Tyler: Bro, time has come. We hitting the Triads for that H. Come by Papi’s place, me and Jamie are waiting here. I’ve got the tools we need for this, so don’t worry about coming strapped.

 

Papi-Triad Troubles…

 

Alex will enter Papi’s brownstone apartment to hear Jamie and Tyler arguing.

“Nah bro, you stay in the car, you the driver!” Tyler said, trying to reason with Jamie.

“f*ck you, all I do is drive!” Jamie retorted.

“That’s because it’s what your good at!”

“I ain’t your f*cking chauffeur!”

“Never said you was, we need you to stay in the car and make the pickup. Alex-tell him!”

“Jamie, you get you chance at playing with guns, but you are a hell of a driver, that’s why we need someone who can drive without crashing into sh*t! Tyler can’t drive for sh*t bro, and Papi is usually too high to walk, let alone drive.” Alex explained, calming Jamie down.

“Yeah, I guess you’re right.” Jamie begrudgingly agreed, sitting back down.

“Right homies, now here’s the plan. Us three will get into the Dragon Heart Plaza. Jamie, you need to wait for us around the other side at the main doors. We’ll meet you there, that cool?” Papi explained as everyone around him nods. “A’ight, let’s do this.”

 

Papi and Tyler will arm themselves with Micro SMG’s, while you are left with a Stubby Shotgun and a .45 SMG. You will get into Papi’s green Feroci and drive towards Chinatown.

 

Jamie: How come I ain’t driving?

Tyler: Not this sh*t again…

Alex: I thought I’d give you a break, gonna need them skills of yours to be sharp later man.

Jamie: If you say so.

Alex: Don’t get bitter! You got what you wanted. Now shut your f*cking mouth.

 

The rest of the journey carries on in an awkward silence, until you get to Dragon Hearts Plaza.

 

Papi: A’ight, here we be! Jamie, stay sharp homie, we ready?

Alex: Ready as I’ll ever be.

Tyler: I’m up for it.

 

You will be told to follow Papi through the first two levels of the construction site, and on the third level, you will encounter your first enemy-a lone Triad, his machine gun leaning against the wall next to him as he looks over the ledge, smoking. Just as he throws his cigarette ash, Tyler tackles him, throwing him over the edge, landing on the pavement.

 

Tyler: Smoking kills, you prick.

 

You carry on, moving to the ledge, leading into one of the rooms under construction, where eleven Triads are, all with automatic weapons.

 

Papi: Surprise, pendejos!

 

You need to keep your crew alive, and using cover is imperative. When you move up, they will follow and provide you with covering fire. Once you kill ten of the Triads, the last one will make a dash for the roof. You must follow him when you catch up to him, you will see a cutscene of the three of you gunning him down, sending the body over the edge.

 

You get to the rooftop where three more Triads are waiting, but they are easily taken care of. You need to go up a fire escape, and you will see a scene of you, Tyler and Papi trying to kick in a door, but to no avail.

“f*ck! Looks like we gonna have to go back the way we came!” Papi exclaims, noticing a helicopter in the distance. “Get under something!”

The trio will run back as two Triads start firing Assault Rifles from the skids of the Maverick. You will be instructed to get to the Heavy MG you left with the dead Triad near the start of the mission. When you get there, you will see Alex pick up the MG and wrap a bandolier around himself, and you are then instructed to shoot down the helicopter. Move down to the street to get a better shot. After firing half of the belt (200 rounds) the helicopter will crash to the ground, leaving the three of you to get out of there!

 

Papi-…Triad Troubles

 

You find yourself outside the main doors of the Dragon Heart Plaza, weapons fully loaded. Jamie is still sitting in the Feroci, as the three of you enter the building.

 

From here you need to fight your way to the fourth story, where the Triads Boss, Mr Ang is waiting with several thugs. Before you reach the back room, you get to the fourth story and a treated to a cinematic of your crew gunning two Triads down, forcing them down an elevator shaft. After a short fire-fight, a cutscene will play of the three of you bursting in the room, emptying your submachine guns, clearing the room. Mr Ang is left bleeding against a wall with a bullet in his shoulder. Alex approaches him.

“Where’s the heroin?”

“Who are you? I’m not telling you anything!” Mr Ang replied in pain.

Alex kicks Mr Ang in the face, leaving him to cry in agony.

“Ok…ok. We haven’t got it. We gave it to the bikers for a cut of the profits…please don’t kill me!” Mr Ang pleaded.

Alex walks out of the back room, and the scene cuts to him getting in the passenger’s seat of the Feroci, then Jamie driving them up the Broker Bridge, then back to Papi’s apartment.

 

“Well, that was pretty f*cking pointless.” Alex said, collapsing in the armchair.

“You know it bro, my source was meant to be legit.” Papi replied despondently.

“You don’t know sh*t!” Jamie shouts at Papi, swinging for him. Tyler gets up and throws Jamie to the floor.

“I suggest you get the f*ck out of here.” Papi’s voiced lowered, he was getting increasingly angry with Jamie.

 

Mission Complete

+$5000

.45 SMG and Stubby Shotgun

Mr Ang Random Character

 

Papi will call you shortly after.

 

Papi: Alex?

Alex: Yo Papi, I’m sorry about my brother.

Papi: Listen homie, I’ll still work with you, because you are solid, just don’t bring your dipsh*t brother round here.

Alex: A’ight man, see you around.

 

Mitt Fitzsimmons calls you under ‘Unknown Contact.’

 

Mitt: Alexander.

Alex: Whose this?

Mitt: You’ve forgotten your old buddy Mitt?!

Alex: Mitt…how goes it?

Mitt: Yeah I’m good, listen, can you meet me at the usual place? I got something that needs doing.

Alex: Yeah, just don’t wait up on me man.

 

Mitt contact unlocked.

Mitt missions unlocked.

 

An ‘M’ icon appears at the Creek Street Diner in BOABO.

 

[LuisBellic]

thanks guys, I'm including Gerald and Gordon (my DLC is only linked to IV and EFLC, no other concepts) and I'm thinking of a place to include Playboy, what with the Holland Play, its a bit hard to fit him in.

 

You could stop working for him before the holland play or just make Dwayne's or Playboy's death canon.

[Claude4Catalina]

I might just leave Playboy out of the loop, Alex, Tyler and Jamie are fairly standalone, Tyler gives similar missions to what Playboy would give.

 

on the subject of missions, I've had a few ideas for missions, but I'm not sure as to wether they could be included.

 

• Jewel Heist

  mission for Gerald, would include Gordon, hold up jewellering store in Leftwood, then make your escape.

   

• Crack Den

  possibly for Tyler, go to a dealers place, and when you arrive, it'll go smoothly until its ambushed. fight your way out of the crack den.

   

• The Whorehouse

  followup to crack den mission, get into a small time Whorehouse, bribe guard and kill the rat in one of the upstairs bedrooms, would include a slo-mo breach sequence, in a similar vein to MW2's breaching mechanic.

 

and thoughts and such?

[Claude4Catalina]

updated first post with weapon icons, after an evening of bordem.

 

and for tonights mission, the opening of Chapter 2. enjoy!

 

Mitt-Death Without Dignity

 

Alex walks into a seedy diner on Creek Street and heads to the furthest booth, where two men are seated. One generic-looking high class thug, another old but mean looking man.

“Alex.” The old man greeted.

“Mitt, how goes it?” Alex replies, feeling nervous.

“Same old, the smug prick below wants to take my spot, those FIB bastards are cleaning house for any corruption, this could be our last meeting, so I need you to sort something for me.”

“What’s that?”

“Kill a snitch. An old Mafia associate of mine is threatening to take me to cleaners, along with bring down the Messina’s with him. I know good people within the Messina’s, me and Harvey Noto go way back, but in all my years on the force, I’ve never known a snitch as devious as this. He should be in his town house up on Dukes Boulevard, the FIB are moving him to their safe spot in Alderney tomorrow, so get this done today. Sam behind the counter has what you need. Call me when it’s done. Don’t f*ck up.” Mitt explains, getting up and heading for the door.

 

You will be outside, holding a Stubby Shotgun, near a parked Esperanto. Make your way to the townhouse in East Island City. When you arrive, Alex will enter the townhouse to find it unlocked.

“Huh, idiot.” He mumbles to himself, proceeding up the stairs. He hears strains for a room, presumably the bathroom. You can now trigging a cinematic execution by targeting the door with the Stubby Shotgun. Alex fires once, which leaves a gaping hole in the door, and fires again, leaving a gaping hole in the snitches chest.

 

You are free to walk outside, and you will automatically call Mitt.

 

Alex: It’s done man, he’s down.

Mitt: Lifesaver. I gotta be quick, there’s a parking lot on Franklin Street, I’ll be waiting there.

 

The line goes dead and an ‘M’ icon appears in East Island City.

 

Mission Complete

+2000$

 

Mitt-Driven To The Edge

 

Mitt and his associate are sitting in the parking lot, Mitt in the back, the associate and his SMG in the front seats. Alex enters the yard and gets a text from Mitt.

Get in the car.

Alex gets in the back of the Sunrise as Mitt’s driver pulls away.

“Mitt, you good homie?” Alex greets.

“Skipping the pleasantries, I need something done for me…” Mitt replied.

“Man, I’ve been on my feet all damn week, can’t a brother get some rest?”

“No rest for the wicked I’m afraid Alex; this might actually concern you.”

“I’m listening…”

“Some scumbag is jumping in on your friend Papi’s business. I understand the status quo, and by the looks of things, this jumped up prick is f*cking it up.”

Alex gazed out the window as the Sunrise headed down Dukes Boulevard, heading into outlook.

“Your point?”

“Help me to help you. I don’t want a bad dealer on the street, and you don’t need a bad dealer on the streets.”

“So you’d like me to off a dealer at the opposite end of town…you owe me.” Alex replies.

“I’m good for a favour, and I’ll pay for this.”

“Good…where is he?”

“Hove Beach, he deals from his truck in an alley off Onondaga Avenue; shouldn’t be too hard, we’ll drop you nearby.”

“Ok, any police trouble?”

“I’ve told anyone on that beat to ignore gunshots in that area, just make sure it’s only the dealer that gets taken down.”

Alex nodded as they pulled up on Crockett Avenue.

“Good luck, call me when he’s been taken care of.”

 

Alex exits the Sunrise as it heads towards the Freeway, a marker is down the alley. Walk towards the alley and just as you turn to enter it, a brown Bobcat will pull forward, startling you. Alex fires three shots at the escaping truck before breaking into a parked Sabre. The chase is on.

 

The Bobcat heads down the Broker-Dukes Expressway in a medium speed chase, and when it comes to Sundance Street, two Rasta-themed Huntley Sport’s pull out, the occupants firing Machine Pistols at the Bobcat.

 

Alex: He must of pissed off the wrong people!

 

The chase carries on down the Expressway and to Tutelo Avenue, where a Flatbed takes the corners hard, swerving to avoid the Bobcat, spilling its load over the Expressway. Amidst the confusion, the dealer spins out and barrels down the Cliffside, wrecking on the beach down below. The Yardies stand at the top of the cliff firing their automatic weapons. You need to confirm that the dealer is dead. Either gun down the Yardies and make your way down the cliffs by foot, or jump your Sabre and drive-by them in the process. If you just go down the cliffs you risk getting shot, but when you reach the bottom, the following cinematic will play.

 

Alex approaches the wrecked pickup with his .45 drawn and checked the right side.

“Clear.” He muttered under his breath.

Alex checked the left side and was caught by surprise as the dealer holds his Combat Pistol to Alex’s head.

“Got you now son!” The dealer laughed, Alex elbowing him in the chest and pulling his .45, aiming it at the stumbling dealer and squeezing the trigger.

“Oh f*ck.” He said, quickly reloading, the dealer pulling the trigger on his Combat Pistol.

“Ha-ha…wait…sh*t.” He realized, tapping the trigger three more times, then goes to flip the safety off, before Alex racks the slide on his fires two shots into the dealers chest, leaving him slouched over the hood of the pickup. The dealer raises his pistol in a last ditch attempt but Alex finishes him off with three more shots to the torso.

 

Once you are returned to normal gameplay, Alex calls Mitt.

 

Alex: He’s down, had some trouble with Yardies on the way.

Mitt: Proof of what a good deed you’ve committed.

Alex: About that favour?

Mitt: I’ll get hold of you when we can talk again, with the FIB digging through my affairs I can’t risk it.

Alex: Ok bro, take care.

Mitt: You too.

 

Mission Complete

+$3000

 

You shortly get a phone call from an unknown number.

 

Alex: Hello?

?: Alex, Gerald McCreary here. After what you did for me and Papi, I realized I could use a guy like you. Drop by the pub sometime if you need some money and something to do.

Alex: Hey man, I could do with the extra cash, yeah, I’ll swing by.

 

Gerald McCreary’s missions unlocked.

 

Papi will text message you, asking you to give me a hand with something.

 

Edited April 6, 2011 by Claude4Catalina

[Tyla]

Forgive me for only just looking into this, but your concept is a brilliant read, as are your missions! Mitt Fitzsimmons looks like he's going to be a great character... he kinda reminds me more of Gerald than your depiction of Gerald though Could be worth giving him an unhinged sort of edge, right now he just seems like he enjoys his drink.

 

Keep up the good work

[Claude4Catalina]

thanks man, once Gerald's missions start, you see the 'true' him, but yeah you're right, character bio's are the next thing I need to work on, now I've got logos and weapon icons.

[Nefarious Money Man]

This topic is really good man and your writing is brilliant. How did I miss it for this long?? I actually thought it had just been posted today at first. I really like that it's kind of independent from all the other LC concepts too. Keep up the good work man major cookies

 

EDIT: I think you should center your headings though it makes all the difference.. especially on the main logo.

Edited January 17, 2011 by Money Over Bullshit

[TommyMufc-Champs]

Loving the missions

[Kwandilibro]

Somehow I never noticed this. Really good, actually.

 

One thing though, you need to center your logos. Makes it look better.

[Claude4Catalina]

thanks for all the encouraging comments guys

 

could someone tell me how to center my logo? christ I feel stupid haha.

[Akavari]

IMAGE/TEXT GOES HERE

 

[Claude4Catalina]

legendary, thanks a million akavari

 

Papi-Amateurs

 

Alex returns to Papi’s brownstone to see him talking on the phone to an unknown contact.

“Yeah, the usual spot? A’ight, yo I gotta go, see you boys in a bit.” Papi says, turning to Alex.

“What’s good bro?” Alex casually asks.

“It ain’t bad, gotta meet some new kids on the block down in BOABO, boys from up your way. You coming with?”

“Yeah, I’m in bro.” Alex replies, cocking his .45.

 

You’ll be outside in Papi’s Feroci, a waypoint marked for the derelict building in BOABO.

 

Alex: I’m sorry about Jamie getting jumpy the other day man.

Papi: Yo, don’t worry about it, just don’t expect me to be working with him for a while.

Alex: Yeah bro, I understand. What we doing now then?

Papi: Meeting these two dealers, Dominicans from The Heights.

Alex: Dominicans? I hope it ain’t ND3, them f*ckers are brutal.

Papi: Nah bro, small time chumps looking for a steady source, I jack the price up for them and tell them it’s a good deal. Dickheads don’t say a word.

Alex: Sounds like good business.

 

After the short drive, you reach the building.

 

Papi: Park up round the back man.

 

Park in the marker to trigger the cutscene. Papi will enter the derelict shell of a building, and wait, you can faintly hear the usual greetings and then sirens.

 

Papi: Yo, f*ck that, you f*cking amateurs, I’m outta here, man.

 

Papi will run towards you and beckon you to follow him.

“We got about two minutes to get the f*ck out of here, see that boat? We’re gonna take it. I know where we can dock, pass me your phone, I’ll get hold of Tyler.” Papi says, the two of you boarding the boat.

“Since when did fishing involve a f*cking machine gun?!” Alex exclaims, lifting a Heavy MG and resting it on the edge of the boat.

 

You know need to defend the boat while Papi gets it started and gets hold of Tyler.

 

Papi: Tyler, its Papi, me and Alex need you get Jamie and meet us on President Avenue on Colony, NNT are closing in! f*cking A bro, see you in a minute!

Alex: It all good? Dunno how many more of these f*ckers there are!

Papi: We’re good bro!

 

Papi will pilot the boat through the waters, going around the bottom of Colony Island. There will be three Police Mavericks to contend with, along with numerous Police Predators attack your boat. When you dock, a cutscene of you and Papi running to Tyler’s Landstalker, and it will cut to Northwood, outside Tyler’s apartment.

 

“Yo, boys, I just want to say I appreciate your help, Jamie, you and Tyler are f*cking lifesavers, and Alex, I couldn’t have got out of there on my own man. I’m gonna get back to mine, I’ll give you a call sometimes Alex.” Papi will say, before leaving

 

Mission Complete

+$3000

 

Papi will call, asking for help with one last thing.

 

Papi: Hey man, yesterday was all kinds of f*cked up, I’m sorry for dragging you into this.

Alex: Its find bro, I knew what I signed up for.

Papi: At least you can be positive about things! Listen, I need help with one last job, I’ll explain when you come over.

 

Papi’s last mission unlocked.

 

got the first mandatory crossover done, I think I handled it pretty well if I'm honest.

 

any thoughts?

Edited January 17, 2011 by Claude4Catalina

[Nefarious Money Man]

Nice mission, I like how you established the connection to TBOGT. Your logo looks beeter now that it's centered but you should also center your sub headings.

[Akavari]

Another thing to fix, put the $ sign before the amount of money for your rewards...

[TommyMufc-Champs]

Nice mission man

[Claude4Catalina]

I think I'll leave the feature titles to the side, just think it looks like subheaders, but thanks for all the compliments and ideas guy, I do appreciate it. the next mission deals with the aftermath of the previous one, it's gonna seem confusing, but it'll all get clearer once we reach Chapter 3.

 

Papi-Seal The Deal

 

Papi will be pacing around his apartment, Micro SMG in hand.

“What’s up Papi?” Alex asks, keeping his distance.

“f*cking cops. After what went down in BOABO, I can feel them listening to me, f*ck, you could UC for all I know!” Papi says, shaking with paranoia.

“Yo, f*ck you! If I was UC, would I be bending over backwards to help your paranoid ass?!”

“sh*t, I guess not…we got business, got a call from Rique Garcia, motherf*cker wants us to meet him at Windmill Street, he’s coming back into Liberty City with his entourage, I think he could set us up with some gear.”

“We gonna go pick him up?” Alex asks.

“Yeah, could do with seeing what he’s got to offer.

 

You’ll be in the driver’s seat of Papi’s Feroci, one of his thugs will be sitting in the back. A waypoint will be marked for Windmill Street station in Bohan.

 

Papi: Look, I’m sorry about that back there…it’s f*cking killing me homie, not knowing who I can trust.

Alex: You can trust me, Tyler and my brother. Lay off the drugs then, you’re meant to be a dealer, not some junkie selling sh*t on the side to stay afloat.

Papi: I’ll tell you how to drive and shoot before you tell me how to do my job, ok?

Alex: A’ight bro, I’m just saying.

Papi: Don’t…seriously, drop it man.

 

The awkward silence is broken by the sound of gunfire.

“sh*t!” Papi will exclaim, thinking he’s under attack.

 

When you reach the station, you find it’s a warzone. The NNT have moved in to bust Garcia, whose entourage are shooting it out with the Spanish Lords, who are firing from the nearby rooftops and some on the platforms, and eight NNT members are on the platform with an NNT Maverick in the air, firing an Advanced MG. You need to kill everyone on your side of the platform, and approach the other side. You and Papi search the shelter, and turn to a Spanish Lord firing his 9mm at Rique, before turning unarmed to you and Papi.

“You f*ck!” Papi hollers, emptying his Micro SMG into the gangster, and tends to Rique.

“I’m fine…I think.” Rique says, checking his bulletproof vest before firing his Combat Pistol at his would be assailant’s dead body. “Prick. Let’s get out of here.”

 

You will be in an Esperanto and be instructed to drop Papi and Rique at The Doctor’s in East Island City.

 

Rique: Whose this kid you got driving?

Papi: This is Alex, business partner of mine.

Rique: Thanks for getting me out of there, lost a few of my boys in the field didn’t I?

Papi: Yeah man, don’t worry, they expendable. I’ve got the drug market wrapped up down here.

Alex: Apart from when we get jumped, or f*cked over by your friends.

Rique: Ha-ha! Alex, I like you, I’ll give you a call if I need something done, if your down for that?

Alex: Always looking for work bro.

Rique: And Papi, looks like you need some of Rique’s magic, am I right?

Papi: We could have left your ass to die out there, you know that?

Rique: Yeah, and I’m grateful. All I’m saying is that by the sounds of things, your operation is pretty sh*tty, I’ll get you off the ground, don’t you worry baby!

Papi: A’ight, don’t bust me on it homie!

 

Pull into the marker to see the last cutscene, in which Papi knocks on The Doctor’s door and Alex helps Rique out of the car.

“Seriously, I appreciate this Alex. I’ll get your number from Papi, I’ve got a place set up in South Slopes, on Sundance Street. Could really use someone dependable.” Rique limps into the makeshift surgery, as Papi hands you a roll on cash and thanks you for helping him, before following Rique.

 

Mission Complete

+$5000

 

Rique eventually calls you.

 

Rique: What’s good my man?

Alex: You feeling any better Rique?

Rique: Yeah, I’m good. Listen, I’m having a little welcome home party, care joining me? I’m at my place over on Sundance.

Alex: Yeah bro, I’ll be over soon.

 

Rique’s missions now unlocked.

 

 

had a pretty productive night last night, managed to do up to the 16th mission, 17 through 20+ will be for Rique/Gerry, then the Pavano's will come into play.