C!TRU5~M!XX3R Posted December 21, 2010 Share Posted December 21, 2010 (edited) Hi Dyom User and Designer, today I wanna show you my first DYOM Horror & Mythos Missionpack. ~~~~~~~~~~~Info~~~~~~~~~~~ Theme: Horror&Mythos Release: √ Trailer: √ Missions: 7 Language: English Difficutly: Easy - Normal ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Story: Your Name is "SiN" a Security guard from Rocket Center nearly San Fierro. On one day a accident destroyed the area´s around the factory. You survived. The most not. You wake on a damaged country road in Red Country. A heavy storm from the acident in factory block every view to the external world. You try to find help,failed. In a town called: Palimao Creek is your new home. Home of nightmare. "CR" = Country Road "CT" = Crash Truck "SH" = Save House "SC" = Scientist "ZB" = Zombie Blockade "(SC)" = Scientist (Alternate Ending) Charakters: SiN Name: SiN Age: 35 Job: Security Guard of Rocket Center Objectiv: Surviving and search help. SWAT MEMBER Name: Unknown Age: Unknown Job: Member of the 5th Domination Squad Objectiv: To complete the orders of the Leader "Cube" Cube Name: Cube Age: 45 Job: Squad Leader of the 5th Domination Squad Objectiv: Kill the Scientist. Scientist Name: Unknown Job: Scientist Objectiv: Controll with help of a machine the Brain of people´s. Trailer: Mission Storyline The Road to Palmino Creek GREETINGS FROM PALNIMO CREEK ! P.E.R.F.O.R.M.A.N.C.E Food for Life Hello Human´s ! Final for SiN ~~~~~~~~~~ Alternate Ending <-----Some german words are not in english words translets ~~~~~~~~~~ Famous DYOM REVIEWER AznKei ! reviewed SiN Nuke ! Hello everyone and Merry Christmas! Today, I'm going to review 4 missions made by C!TRU5~M!XX3R. They're part of the SiN Nuke series. The missions can be download at: http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=465704. Now, it's time for the review, - Writing: Good. While the author doesn't speak english fluently, hence a good amount of spelling and structural mistakes, the writings are at least understandable to know what the storyline is all about. There is a lack of apostrophes (') though. - Presentation: Excellent. Nice viewing angle between different cutscenes. The sandstorm weather effects, combined with dead bodies and burned cars give the impression of an apocalyptic scenario, which is really impressive. The Road to Palmino Creek - Length: Short, as it can be done in 3 minutes. The player plays as Sin, a lone survivor and who just wakes up from a nuclear fallout aftermath in the Red County crountryside. He sees a lot of human corpses and burned cars. Fortunately, the Palomino Creek is the closest town he can go to take refuge and proceeds to go there with a sparing car. - Difficulty: Easy. The player has to go to the directions given from the radar map. There's no shootout involved. Watch out for the fire sources and random explosions though. - Variety: Very Good. The characters include the security guard protagonist Sin and many pedestrians as dead people, with many different vehicles, either totally burnt, wrecked or seriously damaged. GREETINGS FROM PALIMNO CREEK ! - Length: Decent, as it can be done in 4 minutes. The player Sin, just comes to the Palomino Creek town and sees that it is still devastated as earlier in the countryside. Without thinking too much, he must find a safehouse where he can take refuge for a while and must collect woods in order to make a barrage to the new safehouse. - Difficulty: Easy. The player has to go to the directions given from the radar map. There's no shootout involved. Watch out for the fire sources and random explosions though. There's actually 6 packs of woods to be collected in gameplay instead of the author claims that there's 8 in total. - Variety: Very Good. The characters include Sin and many pedestrians as dead people or illusions, with many different vehicles, either totally burnt, wrecked or seriously damaged. There's also some platforms objects that the player must collect as pack of woods. P.E.R.F.O.R.A.N.C.E - Length: Decent, as it can be done in 4 minutes. The player Sin sees a lot of illusions since he came to Palomino Creek (ped + traffic enabled), but still takes a look around the city. When he gets to a surrounding roadblocks of car wreckage and collects the weapons, he found himself surrounded by zombies. - Difficulty: Easy. The enemies only rush towards to the player. And since they're spawned in small quantities, are having a hard time to get through of the player's defense and that the player is very well equipped, they can be dealt without too much trouble. - Variety: Excellent. The characters include Sin and many pedestrians as dead people, illusions or zombies, with many different vehicles, either totally burnt, wrecked or seriously damaged. The player is equipped with micro-uzi, ak-47, sawn-off shotgun, desert eagle and armor. Food for Life - Length: Decent, as it can be done in 4 minutes. One day later after his fight against zombies, Sin is getting hungry as there isn't enough food inside his safehouse. So, he has to find food at the edge of the town from a destroyed truck. As he starts to go back to his safehouse, someone follows him. - Difficulty: Normal. The enemy that the player has to kill is a little bit more challenging, as she tries to run over the player with her car. Try to go to the places where it can be unreachable for the enemy car to follow you, such as the rooftop of a house and shoot the enemy with the provided weapons from the safehouse. - Variety: Excellent. The characters include Sin and many pedestrians as dead people, illusions or zombies, with many different vehicles, either totally burnt, wrecked or seriously damaged. The player is equipped with desert eagle, ak-47, sawn-off shotgun and armor. Overall the missions sure look very promising . The storyline is great so as the presentation. The only thing that needs to be improved would be the writings. Otherwise, great job for the author and keep up the good work . Edited December 26, 2010 by C!TRU5~M!XX3R Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/465704-sin-nuke/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mati Posted December 21, 2010 Share Posted December 21, 2010 This sounds f*cking awesome! I try it out tomorrow and give feedback. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/465704-sin-nuke/?do=findComment&comment=1060257664 Share on other sites More sharing options...
C!TRU5~M!XX3R Posted December 21, 2010 Author Share Posted December 21, 2010 @mati1501 Yeah... I hope you will like it. The most have low nerve cell you know Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/465704-sin-nuke/?do=findComment&comment=1060257672 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyCJ Posted December 21, 2010 Share Posted December 21, 2010 VERY NICE MISSIONS very very nice but i only have one question to you citrus did u puted those fires and all those cars over and over again Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/465704-sin-nuke/?do=findComment&comment=1060257685 Share on other sites More sharing options...
C!TRU5~M!XX3R Posted December 21, 2010 Author Share Posted December 21, 2010 No,thats were alot of work First I have mapping Palino Creek with cars and trash. I save it as backup. And every new mission I load the backup and begin to design. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/465704-sin-nuke/?do=findComment&comment=1060257692 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyCJ Posted December 21, 2010 Share Posted December 21, 2010 ok Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/465704-sin-nuke/?do=findComment&comment=1060257720 Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Scrotum Posted December 21, 2010 Share Posted December 21, 2010 Nice trailer. Will start to play now. Between, the trailer makes me want to have a movie of it. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/465704-sin-nuke/?do=findComment&comment=1060257721 Share on other sites More sharing options...
C!TRU5~M!XX3R Posted December 21, 2010 Author Share Posted December 21, 2010 SiN is once of the surviver in SiN nuke. Chapter one is all about SiN In chapter two is coming another charakter in an other village with a other story. I hope I can wish the bad ideas from Chapther one and top it in chapter two EDIT: Tomorrow I will upload a Add on. Alternate Ending. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/465704-sin-nuke/?do=findComment&comment=1060257745 Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Scrotum Posted December 21, 2010 Share Posted December 21, 2010 Played the missions and they are good. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/465704-sin-nuke/?do=findComment&comment=1060257904 Share on other sites More sharing options...
C!TRU5~M!XX3R Posted December 22, 2010 Author Share Posted December 22, 2010 Thank you for the feedback Add on uploaded °!° Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/465704-sin-nuke/?do=findComment&comment=1060258276 Share on other sites More sharing options...
JOJOXX Posted December 22, 2010 Share Posted December 22, 2010 Good to see you again C!TRU5~M!XX3R.You're back with a cool,extrem horror missionpack.It was extremly good .I liked the lot designs,nice tricks (like the dead cop in the car).Very good work! Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/465704-sin-nuke/?do=findComment&comment=1060258388 Share on other sites More sharing options...
C!TRU5~M!XX3R Posted December 22, 2010 Author Share Posted December 22, 2010 Hey JOJOXX nice to see you after the some months. Thanks for your feedback and that you like it Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/465704-sin-nuke/?do=findComment&comment=1060258393 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rewas Posted December 22, 2010 Share Posted December 22, 2010 I love the missions Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/465704-sin-nuke/?do=findComment&comment=1060258423 Share on other sites More sharing options...
C!TRU5~M!XX3R Posted December 22, 2010 Author Share Posted December 22, 2010 Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/465704-sin-nuke/?do=findComment&comment=1060258448 Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Scrotum Posted December 22, 2010 Share Posted December 22, 2010 Nice but, I liked the original ending more. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/465704-sin-nuke/?do=findComment&comment=1060258724 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mati Posted December 22, 2010 Share Posted December 22, 2010 I loved these missions- Have a catloaf Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/465704-sin-nuke/?do=findComment&comment=1060258737 Share on other sites More sharing options...
C!TRU5~M!XX3R Posted December 22, 2010 Author Share Posted December 22, 2010 I want it eat NOW Thanks for your feedbacks. Actually I want the alternate ending for the original replace. But I think how it is now is the best. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/465704-sin-nuke/?do=findComment&comment=1060258834 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chimpso Posted December 23, 2010 Share Posted December 23, 2010 Hey man! Amazing missions and awesom trailer. The only things that bought it down was the writing. It went too fast and I could barley read it. Apart from that keep up the good work . Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/465704-sin-nuke/?do=findComment&comment=1060259812 Share on other sites More sharing options...
C!TRU5~M!XX3R Posted December 23, 2010 Author Share Posted December 23, 2010 Yes I self couldnt read the dialog xD Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/465704-sin-nuke/?do=findComment&comment=1060260088 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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