m.luqman Posted December 5, 2010 Share Posted December 5, 2010 (edited) Here are some of my works done in photoshop, which the license has been expired now though BTW i have a tank image of which i made a 3d model, it looks pretty cool, but its file size is way.... too big to be uploaded. Edited December 5, 2010 by m.luqman Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
txdeditor Posted December 5, 2010 Share Posted December 5, 2010 sorry dude, but they are really bad. They are far not professional and far not good. It's nothing but a bunch of blending options and photoshop effects. That's what beginners do in Photoshop. I wouldn't have posted those if I were you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
m.luqman Posted December 5, 2010 Author Share Posted December 5, 2010 What about the PSP it seems good right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ats. Posted December 5, 2010 Share Posted December 5, 2010 What about the PSP it seems good right? Yeah, but it only seems good. It isn't very good if you go into the details. What can I say, keep practicing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pico Posted December 5, 2010 Share Posted December 5, 2010 They are quite bad... sorry. But don't take this the wrong way, it just takes practice. However since your license is up (how?) I don't know how you'll get more practice. Believe me, everyone who makes works of art starts off crappy, especially when using something new to create that art. It all takes practice and patience. I wouldn't say don't post them, but posting a dozen things at once makes it hard to get criticism you can use to expand your abilities. I'll just go with the PSP one, since you mentioned that one: The gradient effect looks bad for the screen. Most screens are supposed to have a glare effect, which can be easily created by simply creating a layer above the screen layer of a white area that has a straight, sharp edged cut off point. For a good example of screen glare, http://www.technewsdaily.com/images/storie...x-100623-02.jpg The text looks bad. It doesn't fit the buttons well, and I'm pretty sure that's the wrong font. The buttons at the right (triangle, circle, x and square) are transparent, I can see the circle lines behind them. The raised areas (buttons, primarily) have no definition. The shading is too spread out and makes them all look painted on. Same with any crease lines, they're all just just lines with some slight shadow or outer/inner shadow. The texture on the knob button at the bottom left looks really bad. It's scaled too large, and the highlights are completely white when they should just be a brighter shade of gray. I'll leave it at that for now. Again, practice will only help. Don't be discouraged. If you need more help it's always best to imitate other works of art that have already achieved a similar look that you want. For the PSP that's easy, just try to copy a picture of a PSP as close as possible. For ones like Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geomy Posted December 5, 2010 Share Posted December 5, 2010 For ones like Um, did you get tired of typing or what? @OP: Tutorials, trial and error, and lots of practice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
m.luqman Posted December 5, 2010 Author Share Posted December 5, 2010 (edited) Thanks i'll keep practicing Edited December 5, 2010 by m.luqman Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kaptainkoolkat Posted December 5, 2010 Share Posted December 5, 2010 (edited) Id delete that blacked out text if I was you. Edited December 5, 2010 by kaptainkoolkat Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Narcis_speed6 Posted December 5, 2010 Share Posted December 5, 2010 I doubt you did the psp one... You guys should take it easy with that islam religion, you're way to proud of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
m.luqman Posted December 5, 2010 Author Share Posted December 5, 2010 I doubt you did the psp one...You guys should take it easy with that islam religion, you're way to proud of it. I Really, Really, did it, Why do u doubt? What do u mean "you are very proud of it" ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
coin-god Posted December 5, 2010 Share Posted December 5, 2010 I doubt you did the psp one...You guys should take it easy with that islam religion, you're way to proud of it. I Really, Really, did it, Why do u doubt? What do u mean "you are very proud of it" ? You seem to be obsessed with your religion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
m.luqman Posted December 5, 2010 Author Share Posted December 5, 2010 Not like that,......... I did that for the "Best Islamic Art For The school Magazine" I had it with me so i showed it off Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pico Posted December 5, 2010 Share Posted December 5, 2010 You guys should take it easy with that islam religion, you're way to proud of it. That's a pretty stupid thing to say. Let this guy be proud about his religion. Hassling people showing off their artwork on a forum isn't going to make a difference, and you come off like a cock. @geomy, I guess so, lol. I don't remember where I was going with that sentence... maybe it was a fragment from a modified one I left in on accident. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Narcis_speed6 Posted December 5, 2010 Share Posted December 5, 2010 You guys should take it easy with that islam religion, you're way to proud of it. That's a pretty stupid thing to say. May be, that's what I was thinking. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
m.luqman Posted January 24, 2011 Author Share Posted January 24, 2011 (edited) Any Improvement Guys? EDIT: Did Them In G.I.M.P Edited January 24, 2011 by m.luqman Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Narcis_speed6 Posted January 24, 2011 Share Posted January 24, 2011 I wanted to say I am sorry for the other comment, I shouldn't be interested in other members religion, had a rough day and everything was bothering me, like you can see, I usually don't post things like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
m.luqman Posted January 24, 2011 Author Share Posted January 24, 2011 I wanted to say I am sorry for the other comment, I shouldn't be interested in other members religion, had a rough day and everything was bothering me, like you can see, I usually don't post things like that. Yea.. I Can Understand, That's Ok, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Jonny_Tightlips Posted April 1, 2011 Share Posted April 1, 2011 (edited) I started out the same way, just f*cking around with blending options, text layers and simple shapes and whatnot. Keep it going! The only way you get better is by getting more and more fluent in the software interface and functions. You do that by experimenting, reading tutorials, and looking at artwork you like and trying to recreate it in some way. You should check out Abduzeedo, it's a big artist blog with plenty of tutorials and resources for graphic designers. Personally, I don't care when people consider a piece of work "bad". You keep doing what you're doing and down the line you'll find a style you enjoy. The reality is you're going to make alot of crap before you get there, but that isn't something you should take personally. Just learn the lessons of the art and apply them. Edited April 1, 2011 by Zak. ...besides that I ain't sayin nuthin. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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