NickRad Posted December 2, 2010 Share Posted December 2, 2010 (edited) Summary Better one Coming Soon. Characters Takaya Kuroda: You are the son of boss of the Kuroda Clan. Takaya's dream is to become a better leader than his father Kuzuma Kuroda. Unlike his father he has empathy for the weak and wishes to help them.Ando Lee: The owner of Lee's Laundromat, Tak's childhood friend. He is also in heavy debt. Weapons Fixing it Up Vehicles W.I.P New Combat System Gta V: Japan has a more in depth and different combat system compared to past Gtas. Learning moves are back from Gta: SA. During combat you can counter moves with different effects. You can break limbs ie arms and legs of your opponents forcing them to retreat or to attack weaker and slower and you can do lethal counter attacks. But your enemies can sometimes resist counters as well which then you'll have to counter attacks again. New Parkour System In Gta V: Japan their is a new parkour system. This system allows you to climb fences and walls while running so that it's easier to get away from the cops etc. Depending on your fitness level it affects how well you preform your parkour moves. The stronger you are the more easy it is to climb but the smaller you are can change your speed and agileness. New Weapon System You'll now be able to dual wield weapons freely and not just the same category. By using different combos ie pistol and Katana the sword combat will intergrate the pistol similar to the hidden gun and sword combat in ACB Missions 1.Welcome Back DLC Packs Gta V: Rise to HonorGta V: Blood and Steel Radio Stations Visual FmWest Fm Money Making Their are now various ways you can make money now. By robbing stores for money, by breaking into stores and stealing goods and selling them in your own stores, by dealing drugs/weapons, by entering fighting tournaments, by doing street racing and by robbing banks Safehouses Coming Soon Gangs Downtown TigersCentral Dragons The Triads The Riders More Coming Soon Respect, Honor and Fear System Now this is similar to the system in SA but with a couple of key differences. You earn honor, respect and fear by doing missions in particular was or how you treat outside of mission events. But you won't lose or gain any of those 3 things by going on rampages so that you can still have fun. If you were to stop a crime for example a mugging or fight, you'd earn honor by using Kung Fu to stop it, you'd earn fear by shooting the criminals and you'd earn respect by breaking it up without violence. Depending on your stats you'll be treated differently in missions and by possible recruits This is a work in progress more will be added soon. I'd appreciate suggestions for what cars etc to add. Edited December 6, 2010 by NickRad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finn 7 five 11 Posted December 2, 2010 Share Posted December 2, 2010 (edited) Okay I apologize, i thought i should edit my post rather than waste space with another. But i still think you could have added much more detail on the first post (save stuff to notepad and post later when more detail is added) because these WIP's rarely go anywhere. Edited December 2, 2010 by finn4life Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NickRad Posted December 2, 2010 Author Share Posted December 2, 2010 (edited) Read my signature please, and also i am sure the weapons you posted specifically said DO NOT COPY THESE AS LOTS OF HARD WORK WENT INTO THEM!!!! You are just quoting other people work, this is a waste of a thread and i hope you learn something from this post I found these on Google Images and GTA Wiki and it's a Work In Progress. Read my post yeah. Edited December 2, 2010 by NickRad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mati Posted December 2, 2010 Share Posted December 2, 2010 I know its WIP but still, you need to put more info in it, the quotes thing scares me. You can better put it in tables. Here is a guide how to make good concept threads. The story is alright, a typical GTA story, there is nothing wrong about it. The combat system is a good new twist. Keep it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NickRad Posted December 2, 2010 Author Share Posted December 2, 2010 I know its WIP but still, you need to put more info in it, the quotes thing scares me. You can better put it in tables.Here is a guide how to make good concept threads. The story is alright, a typical GTA story, there is nothing wrong about it. The combat system is a good new twist. Keep it up Thanks, my story isn't finished yet so I'll add more later. Thanks for the topic link too! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finn 7 five 11 Posted December 2, 2010 Share Posted December 2, 2010 I think you should talk to sammi doogles and ask him if its okay to use those pictures, because he may not want you to use those pics, whether or not you got them from google images. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NickRad Posted December 2, 2010 Author Share Posted December 2, 2010 I think you should talk to sammi doogles and ask him if its okay to use those pictures, because he may not want you to use those pics, whether or not you got them from google images. http://gta.wikia.com/Weapons theres my source Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TommyMufc-Champs Posted December 2, 2010 Share Posted December 2, 2010 I think you should of posted more. Yes I know Its WIP but I believe people should post more (on there first post) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AceRay Posted December 2, 2010 Share Posted December 2, 2010 sounds cool. you should be called Kizashi Ninja though... and the plot sounds a lot like CW. The evil uncle, the cliche "tries to be morally hero but still kills hundred of peds out of cutscenes" protagonist, the Asain style... still, it has promise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NickRad Posted December 2, 2010 Author Share Posted December 2, 2010 (edited) sounds cool. you should be called Kizashi Ninja though...and the plot sounds a lot like CW. The evil uncle, the cliche "tries to be morally hero but still kills hundred of peds out of cutscenes" protagonist, the Asain style... still, it has promise. Oh I never played CTW. I guess i'll change some stuff. Try not to be too hard this is my first concept thread Edited December 2, 2010 by NickRad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AceRay Posted December 2, 2010 Share Posted December 2, 2010 actually, the plot is identical to CTW, except that Uncle doesn't kill Hero's dad (before the plot) How about this: Kuzuma Kuroda is returning after a trip to the US, and when he comes back, his relative/best friend's laundry business is being harassed by local thugs. So, one thing leads to another, leading into a plot of some sort. hopefully, it'll be more than Kuz builds up a gang and defeats the mafia or something, but your in charge. do what you want. but because Tokyo is a hub for car customization, I'd say involve that. anyway, duel wielding katana and pistol is awesome. I'd love to combine many different weapons. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NickRad Posted December 2, 2010 Author Share Posted December 2, 2010 actually, the plot is identical to CTW, except that Uncle doesn't kill Hero's dad (before the plot)How about this: Kuzuma Kuroda is returning after a trip to the US, and when he comes back, his relative/best friend's laundry business is being harassed by local thugs. So, one thing leads to another, leading into a plot of some sort. hopefully, it'll be more than Kuz builds up a gang and defeats the mafia or something, but your in charge. do what you want. but because Tokyo is a hub for car customization, I'd say involve that. anyway, duel wielding katana and pistol is awesome. I'd love to combine many different weapons. That's actually a good idea, do you mind if I use that and build onto it? I'll give credit. As for car customisation I was thinking of adding it and making street racing a big part of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AceRay Posted December 2, 2010 Share Posted December 2, 2010 Sure, go ahead. Do whatever you like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyler Posted December 2, 2010 Share Posted December 2, 2010 Why do people constantly post unfinished works? If you're not done, then don't post it. There's every once and a while editing needs, then there's a post with three paragraphs total of writing, spaced out to look presentable - which it doesn't pull off. I'm not insulting your work by any means, to do that I'd need to see something actually posted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NickRad Posted December 3, 2010 Author Share Posted December 3, 2010 New logo added. Thanks to Rojo89 and UNRATED69 for their killer efforts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akavari Posted December 3, 2010 Share Posted December 3, 2010 Scrap those quotes, they make the topic look sh*tty. Use tables instead, if you don't know how... Start with [ Tableb ] to initiate a new table Then [ Tr ] to make a new row with a [ Td ] after it to start a new column/cell. Type your stuff in it and end it with a [ /Td ] [ /Tr ] Then when you are done with your table type [ /Tableb ] (type tags without spaces) or just read this: http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=281605 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NickRad Posted December 3, 2010 Author Share Posted December 3, 2010 Thanks akavari112 I was actually going to ask about that soon. Added Respect, Honor and Fear system. Please give some constructive critism on it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mrpain Posted December 3, 2010 Share Posted December 3, 2010 I'm not impressed with this at all. Your coding is all wrong and really is just unfinished. Plus, thumbs down for liking My Chemical Romance. Sorry just had to say it, move along now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrownBear Posted December 3, 2010 Share Posted December 3, 2010 It's a great idea, poorly executed. Love the logo though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mati Posted December 3, 2010 Share Posted December 3, 2010 You have to put much more effort in it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NickRad Posted December 4, 2010 Author Share Posted December 4, 2010 I'm not impressed with this at all. Your coding is all wrong and really is just unfinished. Plus, thumbs down for liking My Chemical Romance. Sorry just had to say it, move along now. Troll some where else dude Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NickRad Posted December 4, 2010 Author Share Posted December 4, 2010 (edited) Okay so I was thinking of this too be the first mission. Welcome Back: Takaya arrives back in Japan after committing Grand Theft Auto living in Liberty City to avoid being arrested. After returning back to Japan your childhood friend Ando who own a small business greets you at the airport and takes you back to his apartment. On the way back Ando takes you to his laundromat to show you what he' made of himself and spots 3 thugs breaking in. Ando approaches them to confront them and is knocked to the floor immediately, Takaya leaves Ando's car and goes to stop them from killing or injuring Ando. The 3 thugs threaten Takaya, but Takaya doesn't back down and the thugs go to attack him. The cutscene ends and your introduced to the new combat system. Your objective is to take down the 2 lower thugs who are fighting for their boss. Once you beat them 2 the boss pulls out a knife and you are introduced on how to disarm your opponents or counter their weapons. Once you've injured his boss he will leave and threaten to come back with more men. Youu go to help Ando up and take him inside. He explains that they are local low ranked Yakuza and that he owed them protection money that he wasn't able to pay due to not making enough. He takes you upstairs in the laundromat to his apartment and lets you have a room there. Please give some constructive critism Edited December 5, 2010 by NickRad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuisBellic Posted December 4, 2010 Share Posted December 4, 2010 It look's ok. If you are having trouble with stuff I can fix the topic to make it look better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NickRad Posted December 4, 2010 Author Share Posted December 4, 2010 It look's ok. If you are having trouble with stuff I can fix the topic to make it look better. It's mainly the tables that i'm having trouble with Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mati Posted December 4, 2010 Share Posted December 4, 2010 The 1st mission is pretty good, my only small issues are: - You could tell more about the location. Where is the laundromat? - You can tell a little more how the apartment and the laundromat look like. - What is Ando´s car? - This is not an issue but just a suggestion: After Ando greets Takaya, he could better let him drive back to the apartment cause in every GTA we had to drive on the starts and the players would see more of the city. But I like the idea Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NickRad Posted December 4, 2010 Author Share Posted December 4, 2010 The 1st mission is pretty good, my only small issues are:- You could tell more about the location. Where is the laundromat? - You can tell a little more how the apartment and the laundromat look like. - What is Ando´s car? - This is not an issue but just a suggestion: After Ando greets Takaya, he could better let him drive back to the apartment cause in every GTA we had to drive on the starts and the players would see more of the city. But I like the idea Yeah I forgot to add some of that stuff - The location is more of a small city, like Chiba. The Laundromat is near the center of this area. - The Laundromat is a 2 story building with an interior similar to the ones in IV but with a staircase behind the counter. The apartment is a very rundown one with 2 bedrooms a toilet and a small kitchen. - Ando has 2 vehicles. One is a Moonbeam which is for his business and the other is Hakumai - Oh and thats what I meant to write :S Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NickRad Posted December 4, 2010 Author Share Posted December 4, 2010 Ok heres what I was thinking of for the 2nd mission You Gotta Go Downtown...: Ando is cleaning up his laundromat after the trouble the previous night before and Takaya asks him wear the gang hideout is of the thugs. He tells Tak that their a part of the "Downtown Tigers" a gang that controls this district and that their hideout is down the street from here. Tak borrows Ando's "Lee's Laundromat" Moonbeam and drives to their headquarters. Upon pulling up 2 members approach the van and point a gun at Tak's head and tell him to get inside their hideout. Once inside the 2 members bring Tak to the main boss of the Downtown Tigers named Kensei Nakamura. He tells Tak that he can pay off Ando's debt by doing a couple of debt collector missions and a couple of thefts. Your first job is to go to a local general store and retrieve $600 protection money. Going their will trigger a cutscene with the owner refusing to pay, you threaten to force your way in so the owner gets his Katana out. You will have a choice to use Kung Fu or grab for an improvised weapon. When you beat him you have a choice, kill him and gain money for yourself and also gain fear or let him leave and take the money to Kensei. After your choice you return to Kensei to give him the money. He will tell you to come to him regularly to pay off Ando's debt. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mati Posted December 4, 2010 Share Posted December 4, 2010 Nice mission Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NickRad Posted December 4, 2010 Author Share Posted December 4, 2010 Nice mission Thanks any ideas are appreciated as most of my ideas sound like IV stuff Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AceRay Posted December 4, 2010 Share Posted December 4, 2010 when will you meet the street racers? And, add some clothes! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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