DYOM Contest #4

[Platinum Card]

I'm almost finished writing the 8th part of the story. I had planned to make five but I wanted to go more in dept, so now it's 8. So far I'm 2/8's of the way in.

[Mati]

f**k 11th December?! I have to make 7 missions in 9 Days! I better keep going.

Edited December 2, 2010 by mati1501

[SevilleCheng]

I'm happy to see there's a new contest.But unluckily I can't take part in because I need to study......

[Doublepulse]

lol mati.. Both of us are waiting til the last minute.. lol I might make 2 small series for the contest, but usually most stories go for the gang and mafia theme, I am trying to make a comedy and action story, with an original theme. But I have not even finished the first mission! lol

[JOJOXX]

Keep up guys!

[Mati]

EDIT:

I have a question: Well, want to post 2 stories: The Storm and The Don and his Gun. The second one is not finished yet. But I posted a thread already. Can it still post it in the competition?

Edited December 3, 2010 by mati1501

[C!TRU5~M!XX3R]

How many now ?

8 or 5 mission should be included ?

[Tug66666]

I'm cancelling my mission pack. No time and no inspiration.

[JOJOXX]

 

I'm cancelling my mission pack. No time and no inspiration.

Don't give up Tug! You're a cool mission designer.(You are in my favourites designers).You have unique ideas to make missions!

 

@C!TRU5~M!XX3R -8 missions included.

Edited December 4, 2010 by JOJOXX

[Mati]

I would join but I already created a thread for my missions

[Chimpso]

Ladies and bitches, Chimpso is IN on this contest!

 

I am placing two storylines into this competition:

 

Storyline name: Perfidy (Don't know what this means? Check your dictionary)

Number of Missions: 5

 

Here is my first storyline. It contains 5 missions, the first two of which are heavily cutscene driven (to establish the storyline). The others however, are action packed.

 

Storyline description: Byron was working for the man know as "Mr. Tentus", one of the (or perhaps the) most powerful crime bosses in Las Venturas, rising to be his second in command. When Byron's wife was due to have her baby however, Byron asked Mr. Tentus if he could leave for a short time to be with his family. Tentus told Byron that if he decided to leave, he must leave a life of crime behind and never come back to his organisation. Byron aggreed.

 

But a few weeks later, his wife left, taking their baby girl with her. A month after leaving Tentus' organisation, Tentus done something that altered Byron's life forever. Now he has to enlist the help of his younger cousin, Ray and his sister Cassidy, to help finish Mr. Tentus' perfidy once and for all.

 

Link to the mission(s): Realeased (Download)

 

 

Storyline name: Tenpenny's Dream

Number of Missions: 1

 

Here's my other storyline that I shall enter. An here's the surprise, it's ONLY ONE MISSION with 100 objective and 100 actors.

 

Storyline Description:It's been a long time. Things have settled down. Tenpenny is dead, the groves are back, but best of all; the gang war in Los Santos is over! The gangs have met up, and are having a wonderful peace conference. But Tenpenny, thought to be dead. Has other plans...

 

Link To missions: Released (Download)

Edited December 10, 2010 by Chimpso

[JOJOXX]

It's been ok if I upload in zip? There will be 5 missions.

Edited December 11, 2010 by JOJOXX

[Doublepulse]

I might be able to enter the contest if i get my missions done by the 11th.. >.>

 

BUT I am so mad.. I was doing one of the missions for the story.. then I acidently overwrite the previous mission I did.. so that work i did on the first mission was erased... -.- Still that wasn't the first that happened. It happened 2 weeks ago when I was workin on my big story LVC. -.-

 

 

Anyway If I get them done I will sure be in .

[lol232]

Sounds Interesting Dutchy I'll vote for:

Chimpso

Number of Missions:32

Bacuse he has a very nice storyline on the SAPD Chronicles

And the storyline is like The normal GTA San Andreas's but you play as Police Officer called James Potter

[Chimpso]

Sounds Interesting Dutchy I'll vote for:

Chimpso

Number of Missions:32

Bacuse he has a very nice storyline on the SAPD Chronicles

And the storyline is like The normal GTA San Andreas's but you play as Police Officer called James Potter

Thanks! But you can't vote for the SAPD Chronicles, as I did not enter it in the contest. The missions I entered are above. Only one is complete right now. But the other storyline is on it's way!

[Mattatatta]

Anybody else entering? Time is beginning to run low and only one user has entered so far.

 

I really would like to enter, but I'm having a major creativity block and just want to sit this out and see who creates what.

[Platinum Card]

Anybody else entering? Time is beginning to run low and only one user has entered so far.

 

I really would like to enter, but I'm having a major creativity block and just want to sit this out and see who creates what.

We should collab on something. I wrote alot for my story but only have 2/8 parts finished. I get frustrated with the crashes. I wrote everything out, its just a matter of finishing it in-game.

[Chimpso]

Anybody else entering? Time is beginning to run low and only one user has entered so far.

 

I really would like to enter, but I'm having a major creativity block and just want to sit this out and see who creates what.

We should collab on something. I wrote alot for my story but only have 2/8 parts finished. I get frustrated with the crashes. I wrote everything out, its just a matter of finishing it in-game.

We all left it for the last minute didn't we? Lucky I worked out a schedule.

[Jackal1337]

Anybody else entering? Time is beginning to run low and only one user has entered so far.

 

I really would like to enter, but I'm having a major creativity block and just want to sit this out and see who creates what.

We should collab on something. I wrote alot for my story but only have 2/8 parts finished. I get frustrated with the crashes. I wrote everything out, its just a matter of finishing it in-game.

i have problems with crashes too D: i only miss one more part and im finished but crashes are soooo annoying

workin on last part was mostly fighting with crashes D:

 

anyway when missions have to submitted?

[Chimpso]

My Perfidy mission pack has now been released! Better hurry the hell up people. The missions are due tomorrow!!!

[Platinum Card]

I will try to finish it today. I may have too shortening it.

[Doublepulse]

HAHA! nice word choice about creativity block. same here... I would of been workin on them..but i do have school..

 

 

I dont know if I will be entering.. If I pull any idea to post on here out of my ass.. then you should see me post something.

 

 

My original plan was to rewrite Minimum Wage..which is about Fast food companies are having a war after the peace treaty broke up. You play as an employee at Wellstacked and must kill the other fast food bosses. Cluckin Bell and Burger shot. That idea was a smooth one, but I remember when I last worked on it..the story was very weak and I was still a noob at DYOM.

 

 

Anyway.. even if the mission is only 1-4 missions I will try to do something quick even if it wont be great.

 

 

Also, While I like the fact that contests are more about fun and do not have a motive-drive reward, sometimes it feels like any other day .

 

 

I dont really care if I win, lose, or even enter.

[JOJOXX]

OMG! I have some hours to complete 4 missions left in my missionpack.

[GTA!!!]

Looks like I will be skipping this contest. Seems fair enough coz I won the last one. Older members know that I create single missions, so creating a missionpack, well......

[Kratos2000]

Creating missionpacks is my proffesion, well kinda .

problem is, I missed this contest, probably no more slots left for me to enter it. (even if there are still a few, I'll probably just skip it as I'm too lazy to concentrate on a new mission pack.)

[Mati]

Just to let you know, I dont join the contest

[SevilleCheng]

Storyline name: Tenpenny's Dream

Number of Missions: 1

 

Here's my other storyline that I shall enter. An here's the surprise, it's ONLY ONE MISSION with 100 objective and 100 actors.

 

Storyline Description:It's been a long time. Things have settled down. Tenpenny is dead, the groves are back, but best of all; the gang war in Los Santos is over! The gangs have met up, and are having a wonderful peace conference. But Tenpenny, thought to be dead. Has other plans...

 

Link To missions: Released (Download)

I played "Tenpenny's Dream",but after the player took down the chasers.I took a wrong bike to the next checkpoint(LOL) and the player died......

[JOJOXX]

Storyline name:The Life In The Mafia

Storyline description:Bob is a mechanic.He has a little working place,where repairs the cars.But one day his life change and join to the family.

Link to the mission(s):http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=9757

[Jackal1337]

Yay im finished finally

 

okay here it is:

 

 

 

Storyline name: They Never Returned

Storyline description: Series about man named Eric Thomas struggling with memories of Vietnam war in USA.

 

Link to the mission(s):

Part 1:

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=8783

Part 2:

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=9231

Part 3:

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=9284

Part 4:

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=9368

Part 5:

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=9417

Part 6:

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=9447

Part 7:

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=9646

Part 8: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=9755

 

Edited December 21, 2010 by Jackal1337

[UNRATED69]

Storyline name: Ghosts From The Past

 

Storyline description: John Freemont has normal life. Or so he thinks. After a crash in the woods leaves him stranded in his hometown, he discovers that his life may not be normal at all.

 

Links to the missions:

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

Part 5