fenom Posted November 12, 2010 Share Posted November 12, 2010 Hi! So I've had an Idea about a car...and I drawn it. Ive drawn a lot of cars but this one is most original, it just a little bit resembles and audi i think. What do you think do I have something here or just another dumb cartoon car. Sorry low detail... Here is a drawing pic: http://file.si/pfiles/129779/P1110781024.jpg here is a gimp edited pic: http://file.si/pfiles/129780/avtov6%2Bbackground1024.bmp And here is a high detail pic which is not finished (It probably newer wont be becouse I dont know how to make shine on the car) http://file.si/pfiles/129782/avtov6.5.bmp Links becouse the pics are not .gif s Please comment Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/462955-my-car/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Narcis_speed6 Posted November 12, 2010 Share Posted November 12, 2010 Looks good for a start, i recognized the R8 by looking at it... btw, gif is not the only format that supports transparency, you can save it as .png Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/462955-my-car/#findComment-1060200944 Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenom Posted November 12, 2010 Author Share Posted November 12, 2010 yea it look like r8 becouse of the big air vent in the front... Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/462955-my-car/#findComment-1060200948 Share on other sites More sharing options...
!!GC!! Posted November 13, 2010 Share Posted November 13, 2010 Are you after any critical comments? Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/462955-my-car/#findComment-1060201693 Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenom Posted November 13, 2010 Author Share Posted November 13, 2010 (edited) yes please do Edited November 13, 2010 by fenom Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/462955-my-car/#findComment-1060201741 Share on other sites More sharing options...
!!GC!! Posted November 13, 2010 Share Posted November 13, 2010 Sweet. Tyres. Now, i know from experience that these are one of the most annoying and difficult parts of the car to perfect, but they should definitely be rounder. First thing i noticed when it loaded was that the back tyre was a rectangle. Perhaps you could erase the inner darkness and emphasise the rim a bit more on that back one, too, like you have on the front one, but the angle that you've drawn the rim is good. Um, there should be a gap between the front mount intercooler and the bottom of the car. They always have a stabilising piece of carbon fibre or fibreglass there because the front mount is inside the front bumper, not just hanging out the front. Either you should drop the far right corner of the car's left headlight (our right) or curl the the right headlight up a bit more before it disappears to the other side of the car, so that they're equal. Last pedantic thing - you should be able to see the support of the car's righthand wing mirror through the windscreen and out the passengers window. It doesn't just disappear behind the roof support. But, dont get me wrong, this is a really nice drawing. Well done. These little things won't make the car, just perfect it. I would put up my drawn cars but i give them all to my gf who puts them on her wall. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/462955-my-car/#findComment-1060202728 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Muffins Posted November 14, 2010 Share Posted November 14, 2010 I love it, and the style you gave to it. The R8 is a beautiful car. Just follow what !!GameCH33TA!! said above Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/462955-my-car/#findComment-1060203023 Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenom Posted November 14, 2010 Author Share Posted November 14, 2010 thanks !!GameCH33TA!! ill try to fix those things, and when im done ill upload it. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/462955-my-car/#findComment-1060203479 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pico Posted November 14, 2010 Share Posted November 14, 2010 It's far from bad, but nothing spectacular. From an artistic standpoint, its got decent perspective and clean lines. From an autmotive standpoint, it looks like the Audi R4 concept, it what ever the mini-R8 was called. I don't really see much originality, to be honest. Not that that's a bad thing, but you're posing it as so, that's why I'm mentioning it. Keep up the work though, practice makes perfect. I started drawing cars from time to time about 8 years ago and I still pretty much hate each one I come up with, although I've got a picture up with about 15 different car sketches on deviantart that has been favorites way more than I would have expected. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/462955-my-car/#findComment-1060204120 Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenom Posted November 14, 2010 Author Share Posted November 14, 2010 thanks! I thought so... well back to the drawing. Hey is anything original on the car? Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/462955-my-car/#findComment-1060204167 Share on other sites More sharing options...
!!GC!! Posted November 15, 2010 Share Posted November 15, 2010 Hey is anything original on the car? I'd say headlights. And the length of the car. For the width, it is certainly an original length. If it was an actual concept by a vehicle manufacturing firm, they would've calculated the length of it in comparison to the width, proportion-wise to give the most aerodynamic outcome. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/462955-my-car/#findComment-1060204721 Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenom Posted November 15, 2010 Author Share Posted November 15, 2010 ok. When ill be in the mood for drawing ill post a pic and then you can criticize it again Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/462955-my-car/#findComment-1060205005 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pico Posted November 16, 2010 Share Posted November 16, 2010 The length of a car doesn't really matter as much as the width... it's more about handling dynamics when it comes to length vs width. And really, I'm sure the measurements of the car weren't completely intentional on fenom's behalf. At least from my experience, I always find it difficult to get the length/width down correctly. Here's a link to the drawings I was referring to in my last post. As you can see a lot of the cars have too short of a wheelbase and very short front and rear over-hangs. But, they're all concept-car style which look like this a lot. Yeah, that's my excuse! http://picolini.deviantart.com/#/d196ri1 And here's a couple more recent ones. http://picolini.deviantart.com/art/Car-Ske...3Apicolini&qo=1 Not trying to hi-jack the thread. Just posting these as more of a reference point for my ability after drawing cars in my free time for the past 8 or so years. If I had all my old drawings in my apartment I'd post some of the very first car drawings I seriously tried on. They're pathetic in comparison, and I don't say that to be cocky of my current work. I like it, but there's PLENTY of room for improvement. Btw, I f*cking HATE drawing wheels and tires. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/462955-my-car/#findComment-1060205686 Share on other sites More sharing options...
PHCharls Posted November 16, 2010 Share Posted November 16, 2010 I like your drawing. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/462955-my-car/#findComment-1060205825 Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenom Posted November 18, 2010 Author Share Posted November 18, 2010 oh god I cant come up with nothing nice right now...need some rest, kill some gypsies and then maybe ill get an inspiraton Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/462955-my-car/#findComment-1060208735 Share on other sites More sharing options...
!!GC!! Posted November 19, 2010 Share Posted November 19, 2010 Here's a link to the drawings I was referring to in my last post. As you can see a lot of the cars have too short of a wheelbase and very short front and rear over-hangs. But, they're all concept-car style which look like this a lot. Yeah, that's my excuse! http://picolini.deviantart.com/#/d196ri1 I suppose everyone has their own opinions, but i cant say i like those ones tooooo much. Some are very nice and it is good to get some from different angles, but they seem to be far too cartoon-ish, if you know what i mean. They are very angular and their curves are highly exaggerated, giving the appearance of a cartoon drawing. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/462955-my-car/#findComment-1060209638 Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenom Posted November 19, 2010 Author Share Posted November 19, 2010 great drawings Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/462955-my-car/#findComment-1060210226 Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenom Posted November 20, 2010 Author Share Posted November 20, 2010 well today I was in a mood for drawing and I modified the car. Here it is: http://file.si/view/full/24182_ezatm I hate it, it's just drawn better and with some things changed... Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/462955-my-car/#findComment-1060211165 Share on other sites More sharing options...
txdeditor Posted November 20, 2010 Share Posted November 20, 2010 Better draw something new You already got a bunch of comments for a small drawing, you should be proud. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/462955-my-car/#findComment-1060211323 Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenom Posted November 25, 2010 Author Share Posted November 25, 2010 so this car isnt, so good?? pool time!! Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/462955-my-car/#findComment-1060218629 Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Guru Posted November 26, 2010 Share Posted November 26, 2010 You understood wrong. He meant that you got a lot of good comments on your first drawing and then you improved those mistakes you had made. Now you should try drawing something else. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/462955-my-car/#findComment-1060219058 Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenom Posted January 15, 2011 Author Share Posted January 15, 2011 Hey Im back...with a slightly modified car: And a gimeped out one: Please comment Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/462955-my-car/#findComment-1060296603 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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