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On 1/25/2023 at 9:04 PM, The Artist said:

that's why i was going to kill off Clifford by bringing Marcus and Wrench in, but you killed them

Yeah my bad, but it's a new page, so the slew of people I killed off in the building collapsing are now alive again, including Niko

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On 1/25/2023 at 2:29 PM, Corndawg93 said:

1) Pathos rummage around in the Bleeter wreckage looking for something valuable

 

Pathos can't believe what he's just seen. A bunch of missiles came out of nowhere and hit the Bleeter HQ a few minutes ago, causing the whole tower to collapse 9/11 style. Could this be another terror attack? Then he'd seen Hercule who had just been crushed by a piece of falling rubble. He hears the familiar wail of police and emergency sirens and sees a bunch of cop cars coming to the place followed by some firetrucks and ambulances. All the nearby streets are filled with dead bodies and thick cement dust from the collapsing building. Pathos covers his face with a kerchief and moves slowly through the dust clouds, struggling to breathe properly. If he wanted to find something valuable in all that rubble, this would be the right time before the cops closed off the area to the public....

 

After a few moments of walking, Pathos reaches the area where the Bleeter HQ was standing before.....the dust is even thicker here, making it harder to see things. A firefighter suddenly comes running out of the gloom and almost collides with Pathos. Pathos starts searching the rubble for anything valuable...a money vault, some crazy new tech equipment...anything...

 

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Avon is lying on the road groaning in pain because of his broken legs. f*cking Hercule, he always hated that prick....Avon had managed to laugh when he saw Hercule getting crushed to death under the rubble. Karma actually works sometimes, Avon had thought while chuckling internally. The Bleeter HQ was gone, blown to bits....had Clifford done that? Was Clifford even more crazy and dangerous now?

 

Avon watches cops, paramedics and firefighters running through the gloomy dust filled streets. He raises his hand and yells, hoping some paramedic would come to help. Luckily for him, a short bald paramedic wearing a breathing mask notices Avon lying on the ground and comes to help.

 

Paramedic - Stay still, sir. I'll fix this quickly

Avon - Finally! Someone notices me....I thought I was gonna lie here forever...

 

The paramedic takes out a med kit and fixes Avon's broken leg in a few moments. Avon thanks him and the paramedic tells him to cover his face and get out of the area immediately. Avon watches as the medic disappears into the gloom to assist some other person, then wonders what to do next. It was great to be finally out of the dungeon cells....and all the henchmen keeping a watch on him seemed to be dead. Where was Clifford? And Rocco? He's got to find them now...

 

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Meanwhile in Dukes....

 

Packie suddenly opens his eyes and sits up. The bright afternoon sun hangs overhead in a clear light blue sky. Packie looks around and sees...grass everywhere around him. Where was he? What had happened?

Suddenly there's a pop! sound and a person spawns next to him on the grass. It's Gerry! Gerry yawns and opens his eyes as if waking up from a long nap....

 

Gerry - Packie? The f*ck is going on? Where are we?

Packie - No idea, I just woke up too....

Gerry - f*ck, I think this is Meadows Park! Look at that globe thing in the middle there...

Packie - sh*t I think you're right! We're back near our Ma's house!

Gerry - But how the f*ck! We were somewhere else...there were other people there...I'm remembering something...

Packie - f*ck I think it's coming back now...there was a big group, me, you, some others called Dakota, D'elroy and -

Gerry - And that Rocco guy! And some other guy called Gordon!

Packie - And Clifford! Wait, Clifford was the AI....we went to ask him something...

Gerry - Niko's bounty money! We went to ask him for non-Crypto money! I remember now!

Packie - The Bleeter tower! sh*t, you got it! We asked him that, then you insulted him....and then he got angry - 

Gerry - I didn't insult him, I was just suspicious....that f*cker..

Packie - Then Clifford launched some missiles at the building! I remember seeing a missile coming I think!

Gerry - Yeah I remember it too now. You yelled at us to take cover and then there was a loud explosion....everything went black. The missiles must have killed us...

Packie - That's it. And now we've respawned here!

Gerry - I knew Clifford would do something like that, no way would he have given us the money...

 

There's another pop! sound and a guy spawns beside them.......It's Derrick.

 

Derrick (opening his eyes and looking at them) - Packie? Gerry? What's going on?

Packie - Clifford killed us and we respawned back here...

Gerry - That bald guy killed you earlier, do you remember Derrick?

Derrick - Ahhh yeahh....we were in the van... some bald guy showed up...

Gerry - We went to the Bleeter HQ and he got you. I managed to get away and found Packie and the other guys...

Packie - Then we went to ask that crazy AI motherf*cker Clifford about non-Crypto money, he got angry and blew up the whole tower, killing us all. Now we just respawned here near Ma's house a few minutes ago...

Derrick - Wow sh*t, that Clifford guy is really crazy huh? Is he still alive? Where are the other guys from the group? And where's Niko? Did he respawn too? That f*cker Playboy had killed him!

Packie - Don't know about Clifford. The others must have respawned....and Niko too..

 

 

What next?

1. We follow Packie, Gerry and Derrick as they decide to go look for Niko and the others

2. We cut to Jason, Lucia, Trevor, Dwayne, Agent 14 in Dwayne's secret safehouse when something happens

3. We cut to Pathos who finds a strange portal stone in the Bleeter HQ rubble

4. We cut to Rocco, Dakota, Gordon, D'elroy, D'anny, D'arcy respawning somewhere else

5. We cut to Dan, Mike and Mila finding a genius hacker who claims he can kill Clifford

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Good golly what happened to the activity?

3. We cut to Pathos who finds a strange portal stone in the Bleeter HQ rubble

While searching the rubble Pathos finds something that sparkles in his eye, he walks over to it and picks up the strange Emerald stone, seeing that it has a strange spider webbed shaped marking on it he presses down on it with his thumb

THWOOM!!!!!

The stone transports Pathos out of existance and straight to somewhere in the Multiverse

We leave Pathos and follow Niko, who's respawned outside his apartment in Bohan, falling on his ass out of midair

(Niko) AAAHHH... *PLONK!!!*

Just next to him Lester falls on his ass next to him

(Lester) AAAAHHHH *PLANK*
(Niko) Oof, you ok Lester?
(Lester) Yeah I ok, why did I make a PLANK sound
(Niko) Yeah I noticed that, I made a PLONK sound
(Lester) Anyway, where are we?
(Niko) I think we're outside my Bohan safehouse
(Lester) Oh good
(Niko) Cmon, I need a change of clothes, we have a f*cking AI to kill

They both head up to the apartment and are shocked to find Mike and Dan with their fancy spy equipment along with Mila Tadic, Niko's ex

(Niko) Mila?
(Mila) Niko?
(Lester) Dan?
(Dan) Niko?
(Niko) Mike?
(Mike) Lester?
(Niko) Hey now, what going on?
(Mila) Well I got a tip from my contact back in Yugoslavia that yall needed help with a rogue A.I
(Lester) Sure do, what are you gunna do to help
(Mila) Give you this, this is a USB with a highly advance AI program on it, but it needs a super smart brain to get it working
(Leater) Gimmy!, I'm smart
(Dan) Lesters right, if there's anyone who knows how to create a Rogue AI killing computer program, its him
(Niko) Well while you go figure that out, I'm going to have a shower

Niko leaves for the bathroom where he turns on the shower but Mila cuts him off
(Mila) Hey wait!
(Niko) What's up?
(Mila) I missed you

Mila without hesitation kisses Niko directly on the lips, not letting go for a solid 10 seconds, that when Niko breaks away

(Niko) We can't do this, me and Dekota have a kid
(Mila) Not biologically
(Niko) But I love Dekota, I can't do this
(Mila) The 2 of you haven't been an item for ages, please, Niko, I need this
(Niko) F*ck it

Niko kisses Mila back and they start to get frisky, taking each other's clothes off to hop in the super warm shower where they start going at it, Mila goes down on Niko and makes the lucky bastard make a yelp noise

As Niko and Mila continue to have sex in the shower we cut back to Pathos

Where or when has Pathos been teleported to???
1) 1899 in Valentine, New Hanover, where a bar brawl in happening in the saloon
2) 2077 Night City, where a Merc is talking to herself
3) 1272 Novigrad, where a building in on fire and a white haired man with 2 swords on his back is exiting the building threw a side alley
4) 2012 New York, where an Alien invasion is happening and 6 heroes are fighting them
5) 1998 Hogwarts where a battle against good vs evil is taking place

Always wanted to write a sex scene

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1)

 

Pathos is suddenly jarred awake by some voices. Opening his eyes, the first thing he sees is....a table. Some chairs....Pathos sits up slowly and realizes he's under a table in the a corner of....this place, whatever it was. He hears piano music coming from somewhere nearby, clear over the sounds of people chatting and glasses tinkling. The table Pathos is under seems to be empty, but he notice legs of other people at other tables. The nearest man is wearing some kind of old fashioned boots with buckles on it. That's weird, Pathos thinks as he gets out from under the table and stands up, getting his first look of the place....

 

A bunch of rich-looking men are sitting at a table near the window, playing Poker. Their weird outfits is what surprises Pathos here...they're all wearing tailored suits and different types of cowboy hats. The other men around the place are also wearing the hats, although these fellows are dressed more shabbily in rolled up shirts, loose pants and some jackets. Was this a 19th century western themed party or something? Pathos thinks, getting more weirded out by the minute. How did he end up here anyway? To his right, a man at a counter is pouring out drinks to people. Pathos pulls out his phone to check where the hell was via gps. A dark blonde haired, stocky broad shouldered guy notices this and approaches him...

 

Guy (in a slight southern accent) - What is that, partner? Never seen anything like that!

Pathos - Uhhh what? It's a phone..

Guy - Phone? Them telephones don't look like that....where did you come from anyway? Didn't see you here a minute ago..

Pathos - uhhh I don't know either, what is this place?

Guy - It's a Saloon, dumbass. You never been in one?

Pathos - A saloon? But those things don't exist anymore!

Guy - What the hell? Something's wrong with you, boah....

 

A Mexican looking guy with a ponytail comes to them and taps the guy Pathos has been talking to...

 

Mexican guy - Arthur, come quick, Bill's about to cause some trouble again...

Arthur - Ahhh what now Javier? He drank too much again?

Javier - You know how he is....(looking at Pathos) who's this guy by the way?

Arthur - No idea, just saw a moment ago and he pulled out some strange thing, says it's a phone...

Javier - What?  (to Pathos) And these clothes look strange, where did you get them?

Pathos (nervously) - You-you're just joking, right guys? This some themed party, right?

Arthur - Themed party? It's a saloon, dumbass!

Javier - We aren't joking about anything...you sick or something? How did you come here? You got any friends with you here?

Arthur - Show me that phone thing again, will you?

Pathos (getting more freaked out) - I-I'm serious guys...what year is it?

Arthur - It's 1899, you seriously don't know that?

Pathos - N-no guys, I'm telling the truth, I'm not from here....

 

Suddenly a commotion breaks out somewhere to their right. Pathos sees a bunch of guys punching each other and the bar man at the counter shouting at them to stop. A guy tries to pull the fighting men apart but gets punched. He angrily removes his jacket and joins the fight..

 

Javier - Uh oh, this is going to get worse if we don't step in...

Arthur - Stupid Bill, always starting sh*t in saloons...

Javier - Dutch needs to ban him from saloons or something....

 

With that they both rush to the fight to help Bill, forgetting about Pathos. Pathos decides it's time to get out of this place as the fight gets worse and bigger. He goes outside and gets another shock as he sees there's no cars or bikes. A bunch of people ride around in horses. An old style cart wagon passes him, carrying some stones...then suddenly it hits him - he's really been ported into the 19th century! The Bleeter rubble, the strange portal stone....memories come rushing back to Pathos. The stone....where was it? Without it, how would he get out of this era?

 

Pathos is still in shock when the saloon window behind him shatters loudly. He turns around and sees that the guy called Arthur he had been talking to earlier has been tossed outside thru the window! Arhtur rolls in the muddy road and stands up,  spitting some blood out. Then Pathos sees the saloon doors open and a big bearded guy come out, laughing in delight. This guy is even bigger than Arthur and looks stronger, Pathos thinks as he watches this big buy go to Arthur...

 

Big guy - This place isn't for you, prettyboy!

Arthur - Prettyboy? You calling me prettyboy?

 

Arthur starts punching the big guy furiously. The Mexican guy and a bunch of other guys gather around, cheering for Arthur. Some other people on the street try to stop the fight, but it doesn't work. Pathos wonders if he should help the Arthur guy, maybe he could help him get out of this....

 

What next?

1. Pathos decides to help Arthur and ask for his help

2. The stone reappears in his pocket, Pathos presses it again and gets teleported somewhere else

3. Pathos gets arrested by the Valentine sheriff for looking out of place

4. We cut to Rocco, Dakota and the others, wherever they have respawned

5. We cut to Lester fighting Clifford with his program

 

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On 2/3/2023 at 11:49 AM, The Artist said:

4. We cut to Rocco, Dakota and the others, wherever they have respawned

*POP!*

 

 

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...

 

 

...

 

 

WOOOOOOAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!

 

Ouch - Rocco's respawn wasn't exactly the most favorable for him. One would say this was a technical programming error with misplaced 3D-world positioning coordinates, but Dan Houser himself has decided the man's ultimate fate and put the dumbass right on the very tip of the monstrous Rotterdam Tower for playing the Chekhov's Gun trope in what was probably quite the wonkiest bounty hunt story ever.

 

IV's extremely fine and stylish physics kick in as Rocco plummets to his death, screaming for his mom, dad, aunt Nancy, uncle Vince and whoever else he might have possibly left in his family.

 

*SPLAT!*

 

The dumbf*ck goes out in a real sinister and nasty way as he meets the sidewalk far down below that with-holds his apparent, sudden end too.

 

(Bohan)

 

We cut to Niko's safehouse in Bohan when suddenly Dakota, Arcade, Fortuna and even Alessa respawn - Right in the very same bathroom Niko and Mila are currently in.

 

Everyone: O_O

 

 

...

 

 

...

 

 

...

 

 

There's a weird moment of silence up in here until...

 

Niko, Mila, Dakota, Arcade, Fortuna and Alessa: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!

 

Dakota: NIKO!!!

Niko: DAKOTA!!!

Mila: NIKO!!!

Dakota: ALESSA!!! *Fortuna covers Alessa's eyes with one hand*

 

Arcade: *covering her own face* FORTUNA!!!

Fortuna: *with eyes closed, throws a Brick at the bathtub curtains to try and cover the tub up - but it only breaks the curtains' pipe and causes them to fall to the floor* ARCADE!!!

Arcade: OH DEAR GOD, WHAT HAVE I SEEN?!? So much for maintaining chastity all my life!

Fortuna: Who had even put us in here in the first place?!

 

Dakota: Niko?! How could you?!?

Niko: Dakota! It is what you think! I was bitten by a snake, and this nice lady, she came to suck out the poison!

Mila: wat *O_O*

Alessa: This is going nowhere.

 

(Still the Bohan apartment, but now the living room)

 

"Rob Dougan - Clubbed to Death" blares in Lester's headphones as an epic montage of him working the computers and all this high-tech spy gear him, Dan and Mike have got set up literally all over the place.

 

...

 

PHZZZT!!!

 

Suddenly, Lester's headphones bug out and stop outputting music. There's an awkward and strange moment of silence until...

 

 

Lester: AAAAAAAAARGH! A RICK-ROLL VIRUS!! SOMEBODY HELP ME!!! *has an epic seizure from the song* F*CKING CLIFFORD!!!

 

Suddenly all PC screens go boom and start showing a 4K UHD video of the epic Never Gonna Give You Up with sound volumes literally set to full-blast and all the way through the universe's maximum possible height limit.

 

Mike: Holy sh*t, RUN!!! *runs*

Dan: *startled, choking* What the f*ck?! *follows Mike out of the building, tripping in the wires and cardboard boxes - falling onto the floor but eventually successfully dragging his dumbass out as he goes*

 

 

...

 

 

What's next?

 

1. Dakota goes all Gun-Fu and Gun-Kata on Mila who fights back too, until they eventually realize they need each other's help and must stick by together despite their hatred

2. Dakota, Alessa, Fortuna, Arcade and Mila beat the sh*t out of Niko

3. Lester overcomes the Rick-Roll virus attack and calls Zero from San Fierro (remember those RC plane missions in GTA SA?) for help in fighting Clifford

4. Jason, Lucia, Trevor, Agent 14, Phil Collins and Dwayne navigate through the derelict subway tunnels and eventually make it to Dwayne's secret basement apartment somewhere in south-east Algonquin

5. Pathos trying to get around the RDR2 era

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5. Pathos trying to get around the RDR2 era

 

In all the commotion of Arthurs fight Big Tommy, Pathos decides to bail but trips over A man trying to brake up the fight and knocks himself out for a brief few seconds

 

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Several minutes later Pathos wakes up a sees the man in a top hat talking to the Mexican guy, Bill, Charles and that other guy who was named Arthur and a leader looking fellow who looked like he had a high opinion of himself, Pathos gets up and walks away over to the construction site where he pulls out the portal stone and goes to press down on it but it's stolen by the man who broke up the fight, Thomas Downes

 

(Pathos) Yo, gimmy back my stone

 

Downes runs off to his horse and Pathos makes haste after him but as Downes gets away, Pathos falls over and splat right into the mud

 

We cut to 10 minutes later when Downes arrives at his home to tell his wife and son the good news

 

(Thomas) Wife, I found the answer to our troubles, I borrowed money from a german and I'm going to give him this when I see him next

(Edith) That's great dear, did you hear the good news Archie

(Archie) I sure did momma, we gunna be alright

(Thomas) This stone looks weird

 

Downes presses down on stone vanishes out of existance like Pathos did

 

(Archie) What the hell

(Edith) Where'd he go

 

We cut to wherever Downes ended up in, that would be in Niko's bathroom where a cat fight is taking place with Dekota and Mila

 

What happens next

1) Downes coughs up a storm, giving everyone Tuberculosis

2) Downes loses the stone and Alessa picks it up and vanishes out of existance

3) Downes presses the stone again and lands somewhere else

4) Niko beats up Downes and takes the stone

 

Or

 

5) We cut back to the old west where Pathos is recruited by Dutch

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4)

 

Niko - Chill, chill Dakota! It's not what it looks like I swear we weren't having sex!

 

Niko is desperately trying to stop Dakota from murdering Mila. He'd always hated the respawning process and how it randomly throws you anywhere. Niko had ended up in some awkward situations earlier, but this one topped them all....Dakota just spawning right in the bathroom with the others, right when Niko was starting to feel guilty thinking about her......f*cking Mila, he should've refused the sex...but alas she was too pretty...

 

Dakota is furiously punching and trying grab at Mila's hair, who's still in the towel which is slipping off slowly....Arcade and Fortuna have already left the bathroom, apparently disgusted by what they've seen...Niko couldn't exactly blame them....but surprisingly Alessa is still here, trying to restrain Dakota, who's screaming and getting crazier by the minute...

 

Niko - Thanks for the help here...

Alessa - No problem, but what really were you two doing?

Niko - Will explain later, let's stop Dakota before she kills us all first....

 

At this point Dakota does a reverse kick and knocks Niko and Alessa to the bathroom floor. Alessa says "Gross!" as her clothes get wet on the bathroom floor. Mila takes a wild swing at Dakota but misses, hitting Alessa instead who was just getting up, KO'eing her instantly. "f*ck" says Niko as he sees Alessa go unconscious on the bathroom floor....Dakota ducks and suddenly grabs at Mila's waist, trying to do a wrestling takedown, but she slips a bit and doesn't get a proper grip. Mila's towel falls off and now she's completely naked...Niko involuntarily gets an erection looking at her hot body and his big 10 inch penis pops out of the underwear...Dakota sees this and clutches her fists, her eyes turning red like she's about to go super-saiyan...

 

Niko (hastily trying to put back his penis inside the underwear) - Uhhh look, Dakota, babe, this was just an automatic reflex that happens to men in -

Dakota (hands on her head) - f*ck you, f*ck you! I KNEW IT, I KNEW IT! HOW COULD YOU? WITH THIS BITCH?

Mila (covering herself with the towel again) - Watch you mouth, bitch! Niko knew me before you ever did!

Niko (nervously) - L-look, girls, I love you both equally actually - 

Dakota -What?

Mila - What?

Niko - I-I mean I don't hate either of you, it's just that Dakota was dead so I didn't think much of it..

Dakota - So just because I WAS DEAD, YOU THOUGHT YOU COULD GET IT ON WITH THIS SLUT HUH? DIDN'T YOU KNOW I WAS GONNA RESPAWN ANYWAY?

Mila - Stop screaming, bitch, the others are getting embarrassed!

Niko - P-please , Dakota, I was just tense with all that's happening these days a-and Mila, she just forced me to do it....

Mila (angrily) - Forced you? You don't think I'm hotter than her, huh?

Niko (nervously) - U-ummm no, I actually think Dakota is hotter, bu-but -

Dakota (suddenly smiling) - Really? Why that's awesome of you, Niko...

Mila (still angry, removes her towel again) - You think she's hotter, seriously Nicky?

 

At this, Niko's penis automatically pops out again....Mila laughs in delight and Dakota starts screams in rage, holding her head again....Niko tries to stop his erection hastily once again....and grabs some pants from the hangers. Suddenly there's a loud pop sound and a man spawns right next to them on the bathroom floor!

 

Mila (shrieking and covering herself up again) - What the f*ck?

Dakota - The hell?

Niko (his erection goes soft) - Who the f*ck are you?

Downes (looking around confused) - Who the hell are you all? How did I end up here?

Niko (angrily) - How the f*ck should we know?

Dakota - You just spawned here out of nowhere...

Downes (looking scared and pointing at the light bulb) - What's that type of light? Never seen that!

Mila - Whaaat?

Niko - You never seen a bulb before? What's wrong with you?

Downes (suddenly feeling the stone in his pocket) - Oho! Oho! I remember now! I found this strange stone from some feller...I think I've been ported somewhere else!

Niko - What stone?

Dakota - Yeah. what are you talking about? And who did you get the stone from?

Downes - Errr, nothing, fellers, I was just rambling...

 

Downes nervously shifts and tries to hide the stone, but Niko grabs him and forces him to stand. Downes tries to fight but is quickly knocked out by Niko. Niko checks the pockets and pulls out the strange softly glowing green stone with the webbed patterns on it.

 

Niko - The f*ck is this?

Dakota - sh*t, he wasn't babbling nonsense then, this could be a portal stone!

Mila - Those things are dangerous, I heard about them some years ago...

 

A loud blast of some strange music from the living room interrupts their discussion suddenly, shaking the floor and shattering the bathroom windows. Alessa sits up, shaken awake by the the vibrations...everyone covers their ears as the music continues and Niko slips the stone into his pocket...

 

Alessa - What's happening?

Niko - I think it's coming from the living room!

Dakota - Whaaat?

Mila - The f*ck is happening?

 

Dakota and Mila forget their fight as everyone gets out of the bathroom. Mila grabs a shirt and some pants and dresses up, Niko picks up a red shirt and puts it on. Alessa runs into Fortuna and Arcade who are also covering their ears in the living room...

 

Alessa - The song, I know it, it's that annoying rick-roll thing!

Fortuna - HOW DO WE STOP IT?

Arcade - IT'S A VIRUS, LESTER JUST TOLD ME!

Alessa - WHAAAAT?

 

Niko, Dakota and Mila join them. Everyone rushes to where Lester, Dan and Mike are, all wearing some earplugs and shouting at each other. More windows shatter across the apartment. Niko looks around at the PC screen and sees the video of Never Gonna Give You Up playing across almost all of them.... a few have been shut down by Lester successfully

 

Dakota - WHAT HAPPENED, LESTER?

Lester (typing some code furiously to kill the virus) - IT'S A VIRUS! CLIFFORD'S PROTECTIONS ARE STRONGER THAN I THOUGHT THEY WOULD BE!

Mike - JUST LET HIM WORK, PEOPLE! GIVE HIM SOME SPACE, STOP CROWDING AROUND!

Dan - YEAHHH MOVE BACK PEOPLE!!

 

Everyone else moves back a bit to let Lester focus properly....Lester shuts down one PC, then another, then another......suddenly there's an extra-loud blast of sound and the entire apartment cracks and starts collapsing....everyone screams as the walls crumble, the floor cracks open and they all go tumbling down in a mess of computer equipment, bricks and lots of dust...

 

What next?

1. Niko wakes up among the apartment wreckage and presses the stone, it teleports him to where Pathos is in the RDR 2 era

2. Niko presses the stone and gets ported to the Balkan area where he grew up and fought in the Yugoslav Wars

3. We cut to Roman, who's out searching for Niko along with Mallorie, Brucie and Kate when they run into Packie, Gerry and Derrick

4. We cut to Jason, Trevor and the others who are in the subways where they are attacked by IronManny

5. We cut to Clifford, who makes Playboy X his new master

 

 

 

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5. We cut to Clifford, who makes Playboy X his new master

(Cliffford) Hi my X, I'm Cliffford, as someone who killed that bastard Niko Bellic and tried to collect on his bounty you are my new master
(Playboy) Thank you Cliffford, but fun fact, I have your instruction manual, I stole it from Avon several years ago, and guess what?
(Cliffford) What is that master?
(Playboy) I know your shut down code
(Cliffford) I have no shut down code master, your mistaken
(Playboy) X AE A-XII
(Cliffford) Nice tr...... ooooooosh

At just the sound of the word of X AE A-XII, Cliffford is officially shut down AND IS NEVER SEEN AGAIN!!!!!!

(Playboy) Now that this dumbass A.I story is done away with and can't plague the Chain Story again, we can get back normal dumbass stories we normally tell, now to find Rocco and collect on his bounty

We leave Playboy to follow Niko who's left the destroyed apartment, Alessa follows him out those's fine but everyone else isn't, Mila, Dekota, Dan, Lester, Mike, Arcade, Thomas Downes, Fortuna, whoever else who was in there are all dead

(Niko) I'm so over my apartments being destroyed
(Alessa) Yeah, that sucks, also why did we live but everyone else didn't?
(Niko) I dunno, convenience I guess, but hey, it's good to see you Alessa, I missed you so much
(Alessa) I missed you too Dad

The mere mention of being refered to as "Dad" gives Niko the happiest feeling, he hugs Alessa

(Niko) Thank you Alessa
(Alessa) So while we wait for Dekota and everyone's in that wreck to respawn, what now?
(Niko) We find Packie is what we do
(Alessa) Any clue to where he would be
(Niko) Probably his Ma's
(Alessa) Hey, who was that women you were having sex with
(Niko) An old Girlfriend, Mila Tadic, Im sorry you had to see that
(Alessa) It's ok, I walked in on Dekota f*cking a Bar tender several months ago, so I've seen worse
(Niko) Oh really now, guess I'm not all bad then

What happens next???
1) The next big bad appears out of nowhere and tries to convince Niko and Alessa to join them
2) Portal Stone teleport both of them to a different Universe
3) They hijack a car and head to Packie's Ma's home
4) Niko kills the Preacher across the road

Or

5) We cut to Pathos is 1899, where he makes it to Downes's home where Arthur is asking for the payment from Edith and Archie

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2)

 

Niko wonders is he should show the stone to Alessa. He's feeling less sorry for Dakota now that Alessa has told him she'd seen her f*cking some bartender some months ago....so Dakota had cheated on him. They walk through the apartment rubble carefully, thinking about what to do next. Niko is still in shock and can't believe everyone else is dead. The sound of the Never Gonna Give You Up song is still coming from some speakers that haven't been destroyed under the rubble. Roman used to play this song to annoy Niko some years back, Niko suddenly remembers....Roman....it's been ages since he's talked to him....

 

Niko - We should look for Roman

Alessa - Yeahh ok, whatever you say

 

Niko jogs over to a nearby yellow cab that looks abandoned with the engine running and the doors left open. The streets are empty and dawn is just breaking. Alessa gets in and Niko starts driving towards Hove Beach. Niko calls Roman but there's no response, he calls Mallorie but her phone is switched off. "Hope they're alright" Niko says as he accelerates the cab. A few moments later his phone rings...it's Packie

 

Niko - Hello Packie

Packie - Niko! Finally got some network to make the call! You respawned ok? What about the others?

Niko - I'm fine but Dakota and the others ....they got killed by Clifford!

Packie - Howww? What happened?

Niko - Lester was trying to hack Clifford when he hit some virus that played extra loud music and brought the whole apartment down! It was f*cking crazy, my ears are still ringing!

Packie - f*cking sh*t, that Clifford thing is still not dead?

Niko - Apparently not, man..

Packie - sh*t, ok. I've got Gerry and Derrick with me, we'll come to meet you to plan what to do next. Where are you?

Niko - I'm going to Hove Beach to look for Roman, will meet you there

Packie - Ok, see ya there. And what are you going to do about Playboy? He killed you, do you remember?

 

Niko suddenly remembers how Playboy had killed him....

 

Niko - sh*t, I just remembered now. That f*cker betrayed me!

Packie - You and me and everyone else! We were fighting those henchmen at his apartment if you remember!

Niko - Yeah and he grabbed me when I was knocked out by the explosions....Playboy was always a bit sneaky, but I never thought he would do something like that!

Packie - Can't trust anyone these days, man...

Niko - True words, Packie. Listen, I'll talk to you later, I got some thinking to do..

Packie - Ok, man, bye. See you at Hove Beach!

 

Niko gets angry as he drives, thinking about Playboy's betrayal.....his phone rings again, this time it's Playboy...

 

Niko - Playboy?

Playboy - Ohh heyyy money! Glad you've respawned nicely! I just called to apologize and give you some good news!

Niko - You betrayed and killed me, you two faced f*ck!

Playboy - Calm down, man! Calm down! I'm sorry, ok? I just done it in the heat of the moment, got greedy for the money n sh*t. Forget about that, I got some good news for you!

Niko - Forget? It isn't easy to forget a betrayal like that!

Playboy - I apologize once again for that, money! Now, the good news is that Clifford's dead! He asked me to join him and I just remembered the codes I had stolen from Avon, guess what? They worked and actually shut Clifford down!

Niko - sh*t, really? Hard to believe that, Playboy! Maybe Cifford's only temporarily shut down....

Playboy - It really worked, I'm telling you! All the networks are coming back up Online, you can check for yourself...

Niko - I'll do that, but I don't think I can just forgive you for your betrayal, Playboy..

Playboy - Awww money, cmon! I killed Clifford for y'all! Don't be like that!

Niko - We'll speak later.

 

Niko hangs up and slows down as he's now near the roundabout near Hove Beach. The traffic here seems to be more than it was on the other side of the city....just then Alessa notices a strange green glow in Niko's pocket....

 

Alessa - What's that in your pocket?

Niko - What?

Alessa - That green glow...

Niko - Oh, it's just a new watch, I'll show it later - 

 

Suddenly Alessa gets cheeky, puts her hand in Niko's pocket and pulls out the portal stone...

 

Alessa - What the hell is this? Where did you get it?

Niko (nervously) - Wait, Alessa, that thing's dangerous!

 

Niko tries to take the stone back from her but Alessa holds on tight....in the tussle they both touch the middle point of the stone at the same time and get ported to - 

 

1. 3D Era Vice City, the Malibu Club in 1986 where a guy in a green Hawaiian shirt comes in

2. 3D Era Los Santos, Grove Street in 1992 where a gang war is happening between GSF and Ballas

3. TLoU universe where the outbreak is just happening

4. 1715 Nassau, where Edward Kenway and Blackbeard are fighting British Empire soldiers

 

 

 

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4. 1715 Nassau, where Edward Kenway and Blackbeard are fighting British Empire soldiers

 

(Niko) Of all Assassins Creed games we could have landed in, I was hoping to land in Greece if anything, Malaka!!!!

 

They press on the stone again and land in 2008 Liberty City, where they spawn outside the Libertonian on the other side of the street where multiple PMP 600s are surrounding the area

 

(Niko) I know where we are, this is the diamond deal that goes wrong, wait here Alessa

(Alessa) Ok then, sure

 

Niko runs over to the back entrance to where the scaffolding is and climbs up but waits as Luis is waiting up there

 

(Niko) Sh*t gotta wait

 

BANG!!!!

 

(Luis) REST OF YOU MOTHER F*CKERS WANT TO DIE, DO SOMETHING STUPID OK!!!!

(Goon) F*CK YOU

 

The commotion ramps up causing sh*t to goes off and Luis jumps down into room where the deal is happening and Niko follows but instead of heading into the window, he keeps climbing upto the roof where the golden Buzzard is waiting

 

(Niko) There she is... but where's Luis

 

He then sees Luis climbing out of the hole in the roof

 

(Luis) Who are you, weren't you just down their

(Niko) Half true

 

Niko then shoots Luis killing him, and he takes the diamonds

 

(Niko) Always wanted these damn rocks

 

Niko then heads into the Buzzard and flys off but as he goes to pick up Alessa, the stones accidentally go off and teleports Niko and the Buzzard into another world, the stone takes him to 1947 Los Angeles where a detective investigating a murder in a random park

 

(Niko) Crap, Alessa still back in 2008, oh well, I guess she'll be 32 when I get back to Liberty in 2023, sorry Alessa

 

What happens next???

1) Cole Phelps and Rusty Galloway arrest Niko for disturbing the peace

2) Niko accidentally kills Cole Phelps with the Buzzards miniguns

3) He presses the stone again and land somewhere else in space and time

4) Cole asks for help and Niko obliges

 

Or

 

5) We cut to 2008 Liberty City where Alessa is hiding from the mayhem happening in and outside the Libertonian 

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As Niko's Buzzard crash lands in the park, Cole and Rusty turn around at the sound and spot him. They pull out their service pistols and run to Niko

 

Cole - Come out the chopper slowly there hotshot

Niko - I'm sorry officer I don't know how I ended up here

Rusty - Yeah we here that from every second guy...

Cole - Where did you get this helicopter? It looks futuristic....

Niko - That's because I'm from the future...

Rusty - What?

Cole - Ohh yeahh another time traveller! We get that one a lot too...

Niko - Listen, officers, you gotta believe me...

Cole - You can tell your story at the station. For now, I will have to bring you in for unauthorized possession and illegal flying in this neighborhood, along with disturbing the peace!

Rusty - What about the murder?

Cole - Hmmm ok you stay here, I'll deliver this guy to the station

 

Cole handcuffs Niko and puts him in the back of the squad car, as Cole drives toward the Los Angeles Police Station he decides to ask Niko some questions

 

Cole - So where you from? What's your name?

Niko - My name is Niko and I'm from the future in 2023 Liberty City. Which year is this?

Cole - Again with the future bullsh*t, you think you're real funny aren't you?

Niko - I'm not being funny, I'm telling the truth you idiot! There's some weird portal stone that teleports people into different eras!

Cole (angrily) - You insulting an officer? Don't cross the line punk!

Niko - You're arresting me for nothing, fool! Fight me if you're such a great cop!

Cole (getting angrier) - Ok, I warned you!

 

Cole stops the car in a rage and uncuffs Niko so they can have a proper fight. Niko gets out of the car and starts punching Cole, who blocks and trades some hits of his own. A few moments later the portal stone respawns in Niko's pocket and as Cole does a ground tackle on Niko, it falls out on to the ground. Cole notices the green glowing stone...

 

Cole (surprised) - The f*ck is this?

Niko (urgently) - Wait, don't touch it!

 

They both grab at the stone at the same time and it teleports them both into the Van der Linde gang's camp on Horshoe Overlook, New Hanover, 1899. They spawn in mid-air and fall right on top of Pearson who's stirring the afternoon stew. Pearson's face goes right into the stew and Mary Beth who sees this lets out a scream

 

Mary Beth - Aieeeeee! Two men just came out of nowhere!

 

Her scream draws everyone around the camp, Dutch, John, Bill and Micah grab their guns and rush to the spot where Pearson is wiping stew off his face and Niko, Cole lie on the ground in confusion

 

Dutch - Don't move! Who are you?

Niko - My name is Niko

Cole - I'm Officer Cole Phelps!

Dutch - An officer huh? Did the Pinkertons send you here?

Cole - No I'm from Los Angeles, we just got ported here I think...

Dutch - Los Angeles? My, that's quite far away! How did you two get here?

Micah - These guys look fishy, better kill them

John - Let's tie them up first...

 

Niko and Cole try to resist but they are quickly tied up by the gang....at that moment Arthur arrives with Pathos in tow...

 

What next?

1. Pathos sees Niko and attacks him to get the stone, they both get ported somewhere else leaving Cole behind

2. Micah finds the stone on Niko and uses it, getting ported to where Trevor, Jason, Lucia, Agent 14 and Dwayne are in 2023 Liberty City

3. Cole goes crazy and chucks the stone into the campfire, causing everyone in the area to get teleported somewhere else

4. We cut to Emperor Palpatine and the Empire planning to invade America starting with Liberty City

5. We cut to Dimitri Rascalov, who has respawned, he kidnaps Roman and wants revenge against Niko

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1. Pathos sees Niko and attacks him to get the stone, they both get ported somewhere else leaving Cole behind

 

Before this happens we cut to an hour ago to the Downes family home about 10 minutes after Thomas vanished a knock at the door is heard, and they open it to see an African man covered in mud

 

(Edith) We don't have your money

(Pathos) What the hell are you talking about, I want my glowing green stone back, I tracked the culprit to this very house, now where's the bastard who stole my sh*t

(Archie) We don't have it, it disappeared when my father took it out to look at

(Pathos) F*ck me, now I'm stuck in this crappy time period

(Edith) What period?

 

Just then Arthur appears at the door

 

(Arthur) Where's my money?

(Pathos) Look buddy, I got my own problems, get the hell out of here

(Edith) We don't have your money, but please take this man, he has a bounty on him, where've kept him here for my money trouble

(Arthur) Ok fine, cmon Boah

(Pathos) Wait what!?!?!?!, Pathos has no bounty, you f*cking bit....

 

WACK!!!!, Arthur knocks Pathos for six and carries him to his Pre Order Horse he named Crap Bag, he dumps Pathos on top and gets going back to camp

 

30 minutes later he arrives back at camp with a freshly awakened Pathos, where he sees Bill, Micah, Dutch and John holding up 2 randoms at gun point

 

(Arthur) Hey Dutch, I got a new one for the gang

 

As Arthur drags Pathos off the horse and into camp, Pathos looks up and sees Niko, knowing the only way he could be in the old west he pushes Arthur off him and darts it towards Niko

 

(Niko) Pathos?

(Pathos) You bastard you stole my stone

 

Pathos tackles him and as the option suggests the green stone transports them out of Horseshoe overlook and into somewhere else and into 2010 Liberty City where they spawn in the in Majestic Hotel penthouse where they drop on the roof, both Niko and Pathos are glad to back in Liberty

 

(Unknown) Niko???

(Niko) Who was that?

 

Niko sees that the person talking to them in a 19 year old Alessa

 

(Niko) ALESSA, Oh am I glad to see you, what year is it?

(Alessa) 2010

(Niko) So it's only been 2 years then, what have you been doing since then

(Alessa) Well after left me to fend for myself

(Niko) Yeah I'm sorry, that was not my fault

(Alessa) Sure it was, anyway after that happened, I did a couple of jobs here and there, robbed the Bank of Liberty with these f*cked up gangsters out of Northwood, made a crap tonne of money and bought the Penthouse in the Majestic Hotel with the money

(Niko) So you own the penthouse?

(Alessa) Yep, that and several other businesses

(Niko) Sh*t, you've done pretty well for yourself then

(Alessa) Who's you're friend?

(Pathos) I'm Pathos, he stole my green stone

(Niko) I did not, some other guy stole it, I just took it from him

(Pathos) Well that's what you say, but can we get back to 2023 already

(Niko) I dunno man, this damn stone to super unpredictable

(Alessa) Can always try, you never know

(Niko) Famous last words

 

Niko takes out the stone and all 3 hold onto it and Niko presses down onto the webbed patten on it and they vanish

 

What do they end up???

1) 1899 Braithweight Manor, when the Van Der Linde gang are ransacking the place, they run into Cole Phelps in doing so

2) 2011 New Marais, where Cole MacGrath is fighting a giant cockroach looking monster

3) The Bloody Battle of Bohan where they spawn in the middle of the mansion where Tom Stubbs is deciding what to do with Emperor Bern Bern

4) 2023 Liberty City where they drop onto Packie, Derrick, Gerry searching for Niko

5) 2013 Sandy Shores where Trevor is in disbelief about seeing a ghost when Johnny K confronts him

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7 minutes ago, The Artist said:

your first option doesn't make sense, Cole was at the gang camp with Niko, he's still there, how will he be at the braithwaite manor

That's because the stone took them to later event in RDR2s story and Cole was with them, so it only makes sence Dutch would have let him stay in the gang, so therefore, when they raid the Manor to save Jack, Cole is with them, That's how the Portal stone works

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9 hours ago, Corndawg93 said:

 

4) 2023 Liberty City where they drop onto Packie, Derrick, Gerry searching for Niko

 

 

Packie, Derrick and Gerry have just arrived in Hove Beach and head to Memory Lanes in Broker to look for Niko and Roman...

 

Packie - Niko isn't answering his phone, I bet he's busy bowling with Roman

Derrick - I hope so..

 

They arrive near the amusement park which is adjacent to Memory Lanes and an unexpected scene greets them. A couple of LCPD cars are parked nearby and a bunch of officers are talking to Mallorie, who looks like she's been crying a bit. Packie and the others exchange confused looks and walk up to Mallorie...

 

Mallorie (talking to cop) - It all happened so suddenly, poor Roman tried to put up a fight..

Cop - Who were the thugs?

Mallorie - They looked like Russians. One of them spoke in a Russian accent..

Cop - Did they say anything to you?

Mallorie - Umm no, they just knocked me out and grabbed Roman..

Cop - Alright ma'am, we'll try to track down your husband as soon as possible, try to stay calm..

Mallorie - Thanks officers, please hurry up..

 

As the cops move away Packie followed by Derrick and Gerry go to talk to Mallorie

 

Packie - Mal? What's happening? Where's Roman?

Mallorie (crying a bit) - My poor Roman, he got kidnapped by those Russians again...we had just come here to bowl a bit when those thugs came out of nowhere, shot Roman in the legs and took him away..

Packie - What? Why?

Mallorie - For gambling debts again, I suppose...he-he'd stopped gambling a couple of years ago but went back into it again, I tried to stop him, but...

Packie - sh*t! And where's Niko? He's gonna be mad about this!

Mallorie - I don't know...I haven't spoken to Niko in a while..

Gerry - But he told Packie he was coming to Hove Beach to look for Roman...

Packie - Exactly, but now he's not answering the phone, where the f*ck is he?

Derrick - I hope he's not kidnapped too...

Mallorie - Oh god, I hope not...

 

Packie dials Niko again but there's no response once again. A moment later there's a soft pop! sound and Niko along with Alessa suddenly appear on the ground beside them...

 

Packie - The f*ck? Niko? Alessa?

Gerry - What just happned?

Derrick - Did they just appear or is it the drugs making me see things again?

Niko - Oh hi Packie, Gerry, Derrick! What's Mallorie doing here?

Alessa - Phew glad to be back in 2023 again! But where's Pathos?

Mallorie - Niko! Where were you? Roman's been kidnapped!

Niko - f*ck. when did this happen?

Mallorie - We just came for bowling a while back. A bunch of Russian goons showed up, knocked me out and took him!

Niko - f*cking Russians, haven't they learned their lesson after I destroyed them back in the day?

Alessa (urgently) - Niko, Pathos is not here!

 

At this, Niko notices that indeed, Pathos has not spawned with them.....what had happened? Pathos had touched the stone too, so he should be right here with them....

 

Niko - What the f*ck happened to him?

Alessa - I have no idea...poor Pathos..

Mallorie - Niko, one of the thugs said that Dimitri is back..

Niko - What? That's impossible!

Mallorie - The guy clearly said - "Dimitri Rascalov is back, and this time he's hungry for revenge"

Niko - sh*t, this can't be happening...

 

What next?
1. Niko gets a call, it's Dimitri, who says he's going to kill Roman and take over the city

2. We cut to Trevor, Dwayne, Jason and the others who get attacked by Russian hitmen 

3. We cut to Pathos, who's been captured by the Portal Master and is being held on the planet Xeta in Andromeda Galaxy

4. We cut to Johnny Klebitz, who has respawned along with Clay, Terry in Acter and wants to kill Trevor

5. We cut to Playboy, who's teaming up with IronManny to take over the city

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1. Niko gets a call, it's Dimitri, who says he's going to kill Roman and take over the city

 

Ring ring ring ring

 

(Niko) Hello?

(Dimitri) Hello Niko, I'm back

(Niko) Dimitri, gimmy back my cousin

(Dimitri) I'd love to but I'm going to kill your cousin and takeover the city now goodbye hahahaha

(Niko) WAIT!, I can make you rich

(Dimitri) Really now, how?

(Niko) Remember the Diamonds that were making the rounds back in 2008

(Dimitri) Yes

(Niko) I have them, meet me in an hour at the Pier 45 and we'll do an exchange, the Diamonds for Roman

(Dimitri) Deal, come alone though

(Niko) I'll come alone, just have Roman or you're not getting these diamonds

 

The call ends Packie can't believe his ears

 

(Packie) Hold up, how the f*ck do you have the diamonds?

(Niko) This green gem I have here, its been teleporting everyone to different universes and different timeline and weird sh*t like that, took me and Alessa to 2008 Liberty outside of the Libertonian, it took me to 1947 Los Angeles

(Gerry) Don't you mean Los Santos

(Niko) That's not what the stone said, it also me took me to the old west

(Mallorie) What's your plan Niko?

(Niko) I'm gunna meet Dimitri, give him the stone and tell him to press the webbed patten and he'll disappear

(Derrick) There is no way in hell that works

(Niko) It will work, I'm not letting another bastard takeover this damn city

(Alessa) Want me to come?

(Niko) No, stay with Mallorie and Kate and keep them safe

 

As Niko hopes in a random car and drives off, Pathos walks out of a nearby alleyway covered in rubbish

 

(Alessa) Oh there you are, what happened to you

(Pathos) The green gem dropped me in a dumpster and I got knocked out, where's Niko?

(Derrick) He took the green stone to trade it to get his cousin back

(Packie) Dude!

(Pathos) HE WHAT?!?!?!?!, THAT STONE IS MINE!!!!!!, Where did he go

(Derrick) Pier 45

(Packie) Dude, shut the hell up!, why would you straight up tell him, now he's gunna interrupt the damn swap

(Derrick) Just trying to be helpful

 

Pathos runs over to a nearby Hexor and rides off

20 minutes later Niko is waiting inside the pier cafe area, Niko sees Dimitri holding Roman at gun point

 

(Niko) We good to do this

(Dimitri) As long as you have those diamonds, then yes we are

(Niko) Don't worry, I got them

 

Dimitri lets go of Roman and stops him

 

(Dimitri) You're cousin doesn't go any further until I see those Diamonds, now Niko, walk over here and give them to me

 

Niko walks over and gives Dimitri the Green stone

 

(Dimitri) What's this, it glowing, where are the rest of the diamonds

(Niko) Right here

 

He pulls the rest of the diamonds out of his pocket

 

(Dimitri) Good, now hand them here

 

But before Niko can do that Pathos walks in and see Dimitri with the Green stone and makes a beeline for the evil Russian

 

(Pathos) That stone is mine jerk!!!!

 

Pathos tackles Dimitri and this causes the Stone to go off and vanish both Pathos and Dimitri out of existance

 

(Niko) HA!, Not what I had in mind but it'll do

(Roman) What the f*ck happened, they disappeared, where'd they go???

(Niko) Some place far away, but at least I still have these diamonds

(Roman) Thank you for saving me Niko, Is Mallorie and Kate ok?

(Niko) Yeah, they're fine, now cmon, lets get out of here

 

They walk off and head back to the bowling alley

 

What happens next???

1) They get T-boned by a left over hitman looking for Rocco

2) They make it back to the bowling alley successfully

3) A weasal news report comes over the radio

 

Or

 

4) We cut to Pathos and Dimitri to where or whenever they landed

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3)

 

Niko gets back into the stolen Dilliante he came in, followed by a relieved Roman. Niko drives out of the Pier 45 area, almost hitting a random pedestrian on the street

 

Roman - Damn be careful man!

Niko - Yeah yeah...let's talk about the more important thing. You started gambling again?

Roman (laughs) - Ehhh not really, cousin. I was just bored and it was calling to me again, you know I kicked the habit years ago. I thought a couple of rounds couldn't hurt...

Niko - It was calling to you? What the f*ck does that mean?

Roman - I just thought about celebrating a bit when I heard the news that the evil AI guy Cidford or whatever his name was, had been shut down by someone. The city is safe again! It called for some celebration! Even you can't deny that, Niko!

Niko (shaking his head) - Well you could have done something else to celebrate, not go back to something that nearly got you killed years ago..

Roman - How was I to know that Dimitri had respawned and was back in LC again? Cmon, cousin, can't blame me for that!

Niko - Ahhh fine fine....but still, there's a million other things to do apart from gambling in the city

Roman (laughs) - Cousin, I hear you. But something deep inside me just forced me to go gambling. But tell me about where you've been all this while? Did you shut down that AI guy?

Niko - No, I didn't. I think Playboy did, he called me a while back and said he'd killed Clifford for good. Whatever, it's good for us. I had been busy running around the city trying to survive...

Roman - With Packie and the others?

Niko - Yeah and there were a bunch of others who are dead now..

Roman - sh*t, I'm sorry to hear that, cousin...but can you tell me about the stone you gave to Dimitri. Where did you get that?

Niko - That stone is crazy, it's magical and teleports people to different time periods randomly

Roman - For real? I always thought those things were just a myth! Where did you get it?

Niko - A guy came out of nowhere in my Bohan apartment where I was with the others, he had the stone on him. I guess he was ported here from somewhere else..

Roman - And then you got ported somewhere else?

Niko (laughs) - Yeah it was crazy! I got ported to the Old West, then to 2008 LC, then to early 1900s Los Angeles , then to 2010 and then finally here! I finally got lucky!

Roman - Sounds like a grand adventure, cousin. I wish I could've been there with you and seen all that!

Niko - It wasn't that great an experience, trust me...

 

Just then the familiar jingle of Weazel News comes on the radio. "This is Mike from Weazel News" says the reporter's voice. "Lots of parties are kicking off and life is returning to normal across the city, as the news of Clifford the AI being dead has been confirmed by the Cyber Crime authorities. The identity of the hero who shut down Clifford and saved the city is still unknown, and the FBI along with the IAA and LCPD are offering a big reward to the said hero and asking him or her to come forward with proof of the codes that shut down the evil AI"

 

Roman - Hear that Niko? Everyone's out partying and celebrating, we should do it to!

Niko (laughs) - Alright, alright, we'll see

 

Another ping ping sounds on the radio as the reporter changes, "This is Jim Stanley from Weazel News" says the new voice. "We're getting some reports of a strange green glow over some neighborhoods in near Acter and Port Tudor. While this may just be some strobe party spotlights causing the effect, several people insist it's something different and that it could be UFOs. Stay safe out there and party hard, Libertonians! This is Jim Stanley signing off"

 

Roman - Green glow? Wasn't your stone a bit greenish too?

Niko - It was, but I don't think there's any connection with the stone here...

Roman (laughs nervously) - I'm a bit scared, Niko, I don't want aliens invading because of you giving away our location by using the stone or something...

Niko - Think we should go to Acter and check out this glow, whatever it is? We could take Packie, Gerry and Derrick too...

Roman - I don't know, man, I think we should just keep a low profile now...

 

 

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Meanwhile in 1899 - 

 

Dutch - Alright people, get ready, we're going to bring Jack back!

Arthur - Those damn Braithwaites, how could they take a boy?

John - Child, adult, it's all the same to them, sick inbred bastards! I'll kill em all, I swear!

Dutch - Now, now, John, I know you're angry, but don't lose your head. You need to focus properly, one mistake could end up being disastrous here...

John - I'm trying, Dutch, I'm trying!

Cole - Yeah John, try to stay calm now...

 

Cole Phelps was taken in by the gang and is trying to prove himself. The gang arrives at the Braithwaite Manor under the cover of moonlight and the tall trees that line the path to the Manor. Plantation spread out on either side, empty in the night. Dutch tells everyone to get off their horses as they near the Manor gates. The gang ties the horses nearby, grabs their guns and start moving behind Dutch...

 

Dutch (shouts) - Come out, you filthy inbred bastards! Where's the child?

Cole - Yeah bastards! Where is he? I'm an officer, I can arrest you all!

Braithwaite goon - f*ck off before we're forced to kill you all!

Arthur - Oh it's like that is it? Well look here boy, we've got more experience in killing than all of you combined here, and won't hesitate to feed you some lead if you don't give us the kid right now!

Braithwaite goon 2 - We don't have any boy here, get lost you dumb cowboys! This is your last warning!

Dutch - Ok that's it, give em hell boys!

 

The fight starts and Arthur quickly takes out a bunch using Deadeye, good thing he had made his cores full before starting this mission....John, Dutch and Bill wipe out the rest of the goons. The gang breaks the Manor doors and makes its way inside, fighting more Braithwaite hired thugs in the rooms

 

Dutch - Where's the woman? I don't see here anywhere!

Arthur - Keep looking, must be hiding upstairs!

 

At this point Dimitri and Pathos spawn right in the room upstairs where Lady Braithwaite is hiding in fear...

 

Lady Braithwaite (screaming and pointing a gun at them) -Who are you? Where did you come from?

Dimitri - Where the f*ck are we? What happened?

Pathos (looking around the room)- sh*t, I think I'm back in the old west era!

Lady Braithwaite - What?

Dimitri - The green stone Niko gave, what was it?

Pathos - It was a portal stone, it teleports people into different eras!

Dimitri - f*cking Niko Bellic, I knew he would try to pull something! How did he get the stone?

Pathos - I found it first, it was mine. I got ported into the old west, some guy took it from me and got ported to where Niko was, I guess. Niko must've taken it from him!

Dimitri - This is all crazy! What do we do now?

 

The sounds of shooting and screaming outside the room are getting closer...Lady Braithwaite looks at Dimitri and Pathos in fear...

 

Lady Braithwaite - Please, you have to help me, this gang is coming to kill me! Grab some guns here quickly!

Pathos - Which gang? And why are they coming to kill you?

LB - The have an old guy called Hosea and their leader is called Dutch or something, they're murderous bandits and want to loot me!

 

Dimitri thinks this situation could be favorable for him...if he helps the woman fight off the gang, he could get some money from her and maybe make it big in this era....meanwhile Pathos remembers that guy Arthur had mentioned their leader was Dutch...was this the same gang? Why were they attacking this nice old woman?

 

What next?

1. Dimitri and Pathos decide to help Lady Braithwaite and fight the gang, killing Dutch and changing the RDR 2 timeline

2. Pathos decides to help the gang instead and knocks out Lady B. Dimitri gets mad at this and attacks Pathos. Cole also spots Pathos and attacks him

3. We cut to Niko, Roman, Packie, Gerry, Derrick as they go to check the green glow over Acter, when something strange happens

4. We cut to Niko who gets a call from Boris Ivanovich, Dimitri's right hand man, asking where Dimitri is

5. We cut to Avon, who's developing some crazy new tech with Iron Manny to take over the world

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3. We cut to Niko, Roman, Packie, Gerry, and Derrick as they go to check the green glow over Acter when something strange happens

 

The group of 5 travel there all in one car big enough, make their way threw the tunnel and into Alderney and quickly gain ground on the green glow, when they finally get to Acter their car breaks down

 

(Packie) What the hell?

(Niko) Probably the green glows doing

 

Just then the green glow shows itself and the group of 5 are left speechless, what they see is a 6 foot alien who looks like he's seen a ghost scared out of his mind

 

(Niko) Well.... that's new

(Alien) I bring you love

(Packie) What else do you bring?

(Alien) Uh... I bring you love

 

Just the Alien lose's its glow, revealing it to be The Evil Mr Burns

 

(Roman) That's anticlimactic

(Mr Burns) Oh hell, I seem to be lost

(Derrick) Why's he yellow?

(Packie) That green stone must have brought him here

(Niko) It had to

 

Niko shoots Mr Burns dead

 

(Roman) Guess we know who shot Mr Burns

(Gerry) Yeah big f*cking reveal right there

 

What happens next???

1) They grab a bite to eat

2) The FIB kidnap them and force them to spy on the IAA

3) They go play paint ball

4) Cole Phelps drops out of no where with the Green stone along with Dutch

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4) Cole Phelps drops out of nowhere with the Green Stone along with Dutch

 

As the last echoes of the gunshot that felled Mr. Burns fade away, a strange hum vibrates the air around Niko, Roman, Packie, Gerry, and Derrick. The green glow in Acter Park, once a macabre beacon in the night, fades, replaced by an increasingly intense swirl of emerald energy. The very fabric of reality seems to tremble and distort before their eyes, creating a ripple that coalesces into the form of two men, tumbling through the air - suddenly, with a dissonant snap, Dutch Van Der Linde and Cole Phelps appear from thin air, their bodies propelled by the force of their interdimensional journey. They crash onto the rickety wooden bench where Niko had first crossed paths with Derrick McReary, shattering the weathered planks upon impact. Splinters fly in all directions, the bench collapses, and the two unexpected arrivals roll onto the cool grass of Acter Park.

 

Stunned, but still alert, Dutch and Cole scramble to their feet, their instincts kicking in. They whip out their weapons, the menacing gleam of Dutch's engraved Schofield Revolvers mirrored by the dull, practical sheen of Cole's 1911A1 service pistol. They stand back-to-back, disoriented but ready for a fight, their guns aimed at the astonished group before them.

 

"Who the hell are you?" Niko demands, his hand hovering towards his own weapon as he eyes the strangely familiar duo.

 

"Dutch, keep your guns on them," Cole commands, his gaze never leaving Niko. He sees a flicker of recognition in Niko's eyes too, but it's not clear whether he remembers his name.

 

"What in the hell is going on?" Dutch growls, his revolvers steady in his hands. He looks around, squinting at the unfamiliar surroundings, the modern cityscape a stark contrast to the rolling vistas of his time.

 

"You're Niko, right?" Cole asks, keeping his sights on Niko's center mass.

 

Niko's eyes narrow. He remembers Cole, but his memory of Dutch is hazy, a ghost of a face from a time he hardly spent any time in. "Cole Phelps," he mutters, recognition seeping into his tone. "And you're Dutch?"

 

"That's none of your concern," Dutch snaps, his grip on his revolver tightening.

 

Their standoff is interrupted by the crunch of gravel underfoot, followed by a flickering beam of a light cuts through the darkness. The beam lands on the group, illuminating the grim expression of a Liberty City Police Department Officer. His eyes widen at the sight of the body of Mr. Burns, still sprawled on the ground from Niko's earlier shot.

 

"Hold it right there!" The officer pulls out his Glock, his hand steady despite the surprising circumstance. "Drop your weapons now!" he orders, his thumb hovering over the call button of his radio as he eyes Dutch and Cole.

 

Cole's face tenses, his gaze darting between Niko's group and the officer. In his periphery, Dutch too wears a look of alarm. Sensing an opportunity, Cole abruptly grabs Dutch by the collar. "We're leaving," he whispers sharply, and together, they bolt down the street, disappearing into the foliage of the park.

 

The police officer, caught off guard by their sudden flight, starts to give chase but stops short. He glances back at Niko and the group, then at the lifeless Mr. Burns, then back towards the direction Cole and Dutch had fled. Cursing under his breath, he clicks his radio.

 

"Dispatch, this is Officer Doggins. Shots fired, I repeat, shots fired. Possible 187, need immediate backup," he says hurriedly. The sound of his trembling voice fills the quiet park.

 

As the officer continues his conversation with dispatch, Niko quickly beckons Roman, Packie, Gerry, and Derrick into a huddle. Their faces are illuminated by the soft glow of the moon, their expressions a mixture of confusion, shock, and a hint of excitement.

 

"We can't stay here," Niko whispers, his eyes flicking to the officer. "We need to get out before his backup arrives."

 

Roman frowns, glancing back towards the path that Cole and Dutch had taken. "What about those two?"

 

"f*ck them" Niko snorts, shaking his head. "They were pointing guns at us a minute ago, Roman."

 

"No talking, put your f*cking hands up now!" Officer Doggins demands, noticing the whispering.

 

What Next?

1)  Niko, Roman, Packie, Gerry, and Derrick are put under arrest. They're booked and thrown in prison at the Alderney State Correctional Facility for a few months, until a riot eventually happens.

2) Johnny K, Clay and Terry see the group's in trouble and roll up on the cops and knock them out for the group.

3) Packie pulls out his handgun and opens fire on the cops where a shootout ensues.

4) We cut to Dutch and Cole as they hide out in the old abandoned Sprunk Factory where they notice that the Portal Stone is missing.

5) We cut to Trevor, Agent 14, Dwayne, Jason and Lucia (who were last seen in this post) as they're in the Subway, completely unaware that CLIFFFORD's long gone (supposedly). They stumble upon a fleeing Cole and Dutch.

 

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1)  Niko, Roman, Packie, Gerry, and Derrick are put under arrest. They're booked and thrown in prison at the Alderney State Correctional Facility for a few months, until a riot eventually happens.

Well I guess that's what happens when no one touches the Chain Story for god knows how long, with the group of 5 get thrown in the clink, notorious evil guards Brock and Issac seperate them into separate cells, expect Packie as he's been thrown into the hot box and left there for a unknown amount of time

A week goes by before something happen, the aforementioned riot goes down when someone pushes Niko, Nikky then roundhouse kicks Prisoner 2405 in the head causing sh*t to go side ways, just then Riot from Three Days Grace starts playing over the intercom probably thanks to Brock

(Isaac) That's just gunna make sh*t worse
(Brock) So, nothings happened in so long, then we finally get these hero dorks to have fun with, cmon, let me have this
(Isaac) Yeah alright.... hey that guy is getting his head smashed open
(Brock) By a bowling ball

On the camera shows Bowling Ball Roman flattening several prisoners

(Isaac) This is amazing

Just then the prison guards get involved knocking out every prisoner in sight including our heros, sending them back to there cells

5-8 months or so later

Niko and co are sitting in the main courtyard wondering what do do next

(Niko) This is getting tiresome
(Gerry) Agreed, I'm so over these walls
(Derrick) You've been here plenty of times Gerry, any escape route we could use
(Gerry) If I knew any, we wouldn't be here right now dumbass
(Roman) Niko, can't you do some main character magic
(Niko) Just shut up Roman
(Packie) Anyone have there one call
(Gerry) They won't let us, we're special appriantly

Who do we cut to next???
1) Johnny, who stole Luis's phone, is replaying Get Lost
2) Who ever has the Green Gem
3) Dwayne coming up with a plan to rescue the gang
4) D'arcy in Los Santos preparing to rob some rich celebrity
5) Jason and Lucia, preparing to make a go of it in the little town of Vice City

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  • 4 months later...

Thought I'd hammer out a chapter before New Years, can't have this thread coming into 2024 dead on arrival lmao

 

3) Dwayne coming up with a plan to rescue the gang

 

8 long months have passed since Dwayne was last seen walking down a lone road in Alderney with Trevor Phillips, Agent 14, Phil Collins, Jason and Lucia.

 

Over the past year, Liberty City had seen its fair share of chaos, but now, as the sun set over the Governor Greg Johnson Projects in Northwood, a semblance of normality had returned to the city.

 

Inside the projects was Dwayne's apartment, where the group; Dwayne, Trevor, Agent 14, Phil Collins, Jason and Lucia - laid low since the rise and fall of CLIFFFORD. Their unity was a strange twist of fate; each had found one reason or another to stick around;

 

- Dwayne had become the unlikely leader of this makeshift family.

 

- Agent 14 had become Dwayne's second-in-command, maintaining his IAA connections. He was sat in a corner, meticulously cleaning his service weapon.

 

- Trevor, always a wild card, found a strange sense of camaraderie in this group and once again left Ron to steer the Trevor Phillips Industries ship back in San Andreas. He paced around, his manic energy barely contained.

 

- Phil Collins, still afflicted with his peculiar condition, hummed some random Miley Cyrus song he heard when he was riding around in a Cabby earlier.

 

- Jason and Lucia, nomadic in nature, decided to stick around with this band of misfits and build some connections in Liberty. They sat on the couch, chilling.

 

Orange sunset lighting filled Dwayne's living room as Agent 14 broke the relative peace. "We got trouble," he announced. "Word is, Niko Bellic and his cousin Roman, and the McReary boys are all in prison at the Alderney State Correctional Facility. They've been rotting in there for quite some time" 

 

Dwayne leaned back in his chair, rubbed his chin thoughtfully. "Alderney State, huh? I've lost count how many nights I've spent in that sh*thole," Dwayne leaned up in his chair. "Packie's my boy, same with Niko. We gotta do something".

 

Trevor paced restlessly, his energy palpable. "I say we storm the f*ckin' place, guns blazing, explosions, all that SH*T!"

 

Agent 14 shook his head. "The old Johnny K special? That's a suicide mission. Besides it's too noisy."

 

"We need a plan, something smart." Jason interjected.

 

Dwayne agreed. "Right, we need intel, a way in and a way out. 14, can you contact U.L.P?"

 

Agent 14 nodded. "Already did, after all he was the one who told me they were in prison. Apparently Niko's one of his assets so he'll supply us with whatever we need".

 

"Is there anyone that can help us with the job?" Lucia asked.

 

Agent 14 shook his head. "I did have a contact in the city that I worked with back in San Andreas, but last I heard she got herself blown up with a bunch of other people; big names, associates that could've helped us."

 

Lucia sighed, "So it's just us, huh."

 

"Not necessarily. I can think of a few names to help us." Dwayne said thoughtfully.

 

What Next?

1) We stick with the Group of 6 as they develop a plan to break out the Bellic Cousins and the McReary Brothers out of Alderney State, when Alessa suddenly shows up to Dwayne's door, wanting in on the break-out.

2) We cut to the night after as Jason, Lucia, Phil Collins and Trevor infiltrate the prison as Alderney State Correctional Officers during the night, as Agent 14 watches over them as overwatch with a sniper and Dwayne's the getaway driver, sat in an Armored Kuruma across the street from the Correctional Facility just in case things go wrong.

3) We cut to Dwayne as he's making some phone calls to people who he thinks can help them on the break-out.

4) We cut to Roman as he's bunking with Horsecock Harry at Alderney State.

5) We cut to D'arcy as she's still running with her brother D'elroy, their cousin D'anny and their associate Alberto as they're now out in San Andreas, in the middle of robbing some rich celebrity.

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4) We cut to Roman as he's bunking with Horsecock Harry at Alderney State.

Roman had numerous cell mates in his time in prison, one had a scarf wrapped around his face, one liked collecting rocks and another liked to constantly sing about tossing coins to whatever a "Witcher" was, but for the last several weeks Roman had a rather unique cell mate, his name was Harold, but his nickname amounst the other prisoners was Horsecock Harry, not because he had a huge pecker, but because he murdered horse's for their quite large genitalia for soup oddly enough

(Roman) I'm sorry, for Soup?, to eat for yourself?
(Harry) No, to feed to homeless people, and at one point to sew on to my own balls because I had a slight accident is a lawnmower a while back
(Roman) Got castrated?
(Harry) Yep, Mower blew up killing the guy using it and the blade went flying and....
(Roman) Yeah I get the picture
(Harry) God know how I'm alive

Who do we follow next???
1) ScarfFace several blocks down, wanting revenge on D'anny for pushing him out of the Majestic Hotel window
2) The Rock collecter
3) Niko, finding a loose brick in his cell, that he somehow didn't notice, that leads to an interesting location
4) Dwayne and co, they have a great but shotty plan that involves a monster truck
5) The D'arcy and co robbing Michael De Santa of all people

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4)

 

As the evening sun cast a golden glow over Liberty City, Trevor's red Bodhi truck, more rust than metal, roared across Broker Bridge that led into the Broker - Dukes Expressway. The wind whipped furiously around them, tugging at their clothes and hair.

 

Inside, Trevor manned the wheel with his usual reckless abandon, Lucia sat in the passenger seat, her eyes squinting against the gusts, and Phil Collins occupied the bed of the truck, gripping the sides of the truck tightly.

 

"You sure about this, Trevor?" Lucia shouted over the wind and the engine's roar, her voiced laced with skepticism.

Trevor, with a manic grin, yelled back, "Sure as hell! Dwayne and 14's plan might be crazy but that's what makes it perfect, and more importantly; FUN! Ain't the right, Phil?"

Phil Collins, his face scrunched up as the wind rushed him, responded in a melodic verse. "I can feel it coming in the air tonight, OH LORD!"

Trevor laughed, "I can feel something coming! f*ck the Johnny K special, and while we're at it, f*ck the Lost MC also! This is going to be perfect!"

"But a monster truck, T?" Lucia questioned, her tone a mix of amusement and concern. "Breaking into a high-security prison with a monster truck seems like something out of a bad 1980s action movie."

Trevor sneered "You been hanging with Michael? sh*t, think about it Lucia, it's so f*ckin' crazy, they'll never see it coming. Dwayne'll smash through the front gate and they'll never even know what hit 'em!"

Lucia raised an eyebrow, "The front gate? That's if they don't start lighting up the truck from the towers! And who's Michael?"

"Michael's my best friend, he's a fat snake, but he's my friend - and THAT'S why Dwayne's going to be at the helm, you think they're just going to shoot up an unarmed man of colour?".

"If it's a break-out, YES; which it IS".

"But that's the point, what Dwayne's doing isn't a break-out, it's a DIS-TRAC-TION Lucia! He'll take the heat while we sneak in from the back!"

 

As the truck descended from the bridge on the off-ramp, the skyline of Broker stretched out around them, a maze of buildings bathed in the orange hues of sunset.

 

Lucia shook her head, still not entirely convinced. "And how are we supposed to just drive out of there with them? Won't the whole department be on our asses?"

"That's where the rest of the plan comes in," Trevor said, taking a sharp turn onto a less crowded street. "Dwayne and the others will be creating multiple distractions around the city. Police will be too busy dealing with that mess to focus on us."

Phil Collins hummed a tune, then sang, "You can't hurry love, no, you just have to wait," as if to remind them of the need for patience in their wild endeavor.

 

The truck slowed as they neared Firefly Projects Park, the place where the monster truck was kept was at some place called "Hairy Al's Scrap and Auto Parts". The air grew tense with anticipation. Trevor parked the Bodhi in a on the side of the street, just outside of the scrapyard and turned to Lucia and Phil with a fierce determination in his eyes.

 

"Alright, let's get this beast and make history," he declared, stepping out of the truck into the cooling evening air.

"Who is this guy anyway, 'Hairy Al?'" Lucia asked curiously.

"Some eccentric celebrity. His name's Alan Jerome, he's the host of Arena War, you ever watch that?"

 

Lucia shook her head as they neared the open entrance of the scrap yard.

 

"Well, U.L.P knows the guy, so now he's 'lending' us one of his trucks from Arena War."

"It sounds like this isn't no normal monster truck, Trevor."

Trevor snickered, " Heh, you'll see."

 

Trevor, Lucia, and Phil Collins entered "Hairy Al's Scrap and Auto Parts", the chaotic assortment of wrecked cars and scattered parts gave the place an almost post-apocalyptic vibe.

 

They hadn’t taken more than a few steps into the yard when a sleek black Obey Tailgator caught their eye. It looked out of place amidst the wreckage, its polished surface reflecting the dying light. The driver's door swung open, and a woman stepped out, phone pressed to her ear.

 

"Yeah, Al, the pyrotechnics are settled. No, I don't care if you think it's not enough explosives; it's what the city permits...," her voice was laced with exasperation, clearly having this argument more than once.

She hung up with a sigh that spoke volumes of her discontent and turned to face the trio. "You must be Trevor, Lucia, and Phil," she said, her tone shifting to a professional cadence. "I’m Bryony, Al’s... assistant. Let's get down to business."

 

Bryony led them through a maze of stacked vehicles and scattered engine parts, her heels clicking assertively against the gravel. Her expression was a mix of disdain and resignation.

 

They reached a secluded garage at the far end of the lot. She slid the door open, and the interior was revealed in a dramatic flourish of dim overhead lights. There it was, the "monster truck" — a behemoth that seemed to snarl even in stillness.

 

The truck was a death machine, its frame towering and aggressive, a dark metallic beast with exhausts flaring like the horns of a demon. Spikes jutted out from its wheel hubs, a menacing grill adorned the front, looking like the jaws of some mechanical predator. The tires were gargantuan, each tread seemed capable of grinding asphalt into dust. The engine rumbled like dormant thunder, promising destruction with every pulse. Mounted on its rear was what appeared to be a jet engine, giving the impression that this monster could either race you to death or simply incinerate you on the spot.

 

Bryony, seemingly unimpressed by the monstrous spectacle, leaned against the door frame. "This is the Sasquatch. Al’s pride and joy for the Arena War. Complete with reinforced steel plating, bulletproof tires, and... " she gestured nonchalantly to the back, "...the optional ‘party favor’. It's all yours for the evening. Just try not to get it scratched, Al’s very particular about his toys."

 

Trevor whistled appreciatively, his gaze fixated on the truck. "Now, that's what I'm talking about! This ain't no monster truck; it’s a damn war machine!"

 

Lucia looked at the truck with a mix of awe and fear, realizing the enormity of what they were about to undertake. "This is the distraction?"

 

"And you're just gonna let us take this out for a spin?" Phil sang out, quoting lyrics as he always did to communicate.

 

Bryony shrugged, her gaze distant. "Just another day at the office. If you want to call it 'art', sure, go ahead. Break a leg. Or don't. Preferably don't, Al would kill me."

 

With a flick of her wrist, she tossed the keys to Trevor, who caught them mid-air. The group climbed into the Sasquatch, the engine roaring to life, shaking the ground beneath them. As they pulled out of the garage, Bryony watched them leave, her expression unreadable behind her glasses.

 

What Next?

1) We stick with Trevor, Lucia and Phil as they're all scrunched into the cab of the Apocalypse Sasquatch, when they get the attention of the LCPD

2) We cut to Jason and Agent 14 as they're getting the supplies they need to sneak into Alderney State Correctional Facility.

3) We cut to Dwayne as he's meeting some familiar faces at Francis International Airport for the break-out.

4) We cut to Niko as he finds a loose brick inside his cell that leads.. somewhere.

5) We cut to D'arcy in Los Santos as she's robbing Michael De Santa.

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2) We cut to Jason and Agent 14 as they're getting the supplies they need to sneak into Alderney State Correctional Facility.


Jason and Agent 14 kept looking at the list of things they need that Dwayne gave them, neither of the two we're entirely sure the things on the list we're even obtainable

(Jason) Some of these are weird, A rope with a hook attackment, where are we suppose to get that from.... 2 head torches.... and a set of guards clothing... where the hell do we get this stuff from?????
(Agent 14) Relax, you forget who you're talking too, I'm an agent
(Jason) Of what exactly?
(Agent 14) That's classified information, to answer other the questions you have, there's a reason why Dwayne gave me this job

Agent 14 gets out his phone and calls a handler he use to work with

(The Handler) 14, how are you, I assume you're calling for a favor, what now
(14) Yeah pretty much, breaking some friends out of prison, I'm calling to get some supplys for the job
(Handler) What do you need?
(14) A rope gun with a hook attachment, prison guards uniforms and head torches
(Handler) Done and done, I will have those arrive via biplane over the West River in about an hour, I suggest you grab a boat

The call ends

(14) Ok then, gotta wait an hour, lets head to the dock to grab a boat
(Jason) A boat, why a boat?
(14) He said they were arriving via biplane travelling over the West River
(Jason) Well lets go get a boat then

They head off and we the reader follow Dwayne at the airport meeting an old friend, that old friend is Yeager

(Dwayne) Hey man, whats goin down
(Yeager) D, wassup, good to see you again brother, I'm glad I got your email, I was bored out of my mind running my casino
(Dwayne) What happened with you anyway?
(Yeager) Well after I got shot at Nikos penthouse and respawned afterwards, being sick and tired of all the bull crap, I went home to Venturas to run my casino, say what happened to Fortuna?
(Dwayne) Building fell on her, along with Lester and several others, and it hasn't been a new page yet so non of them have respawned yet
(Yeager) That's a shame, this would be a lot easier if we had Lester
(Dwayne) It would be but I'm running the job
(Yeager) Ever had the experience of doing so?
(Dwayne) I ran some jobs back in the early 90s but nothing on this scale
(Yeager) So thats why you gave me a yell
(Dwayne) Yep, come on lets go

They head off and we follow someone else
Whom do we follow???
1) The Biplane pilot getting ready to drop the supplies off
2) Isaac and Brock bullying Packie
3) The Handler over seeing a mission with Agent 15
4) Trevor, Lucia and Phil Collins
5) Niko is his cell finding a loose set of bricks, it leads to an interesting location

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5) Niko is his cell finding a loose set of bricks, it leads to an interesting location

 

Niko Bellic laid back on his bunk in the dimly lit cell he shared with Gerald McReary.

 

The prison's monotony was unbearable, and the walls of Alderney State Correctional Facility seemed to close in on him more each day. This stint in American prison was proving to be his toughest yet. He's sick of the monotonous routine, the sh*t food, and most of all, the lack of freedom.

 

His thoughts were interrupted by Gerald's hushed voice, who was leaned against the wall across from him, a cigarette dangling from his lips.

 

 "So, Niko, have you heard about Roman's new bunkmate? - Horsecock Harry," he says, almost chuckling at the absurdity of the name.

 

Niko, lying on his bunk with his arms behind his head, grimaces at the mention of the name. He nods slowly, his face showing a mixture of concern and disgust. "I have heard things, yes. But I was hoping they were just rumors," Niko replies, his thick Eastern European accent coloring his words.

 

Gerald chuckles, the sound echoing off the barren walls. "Oh, they're not rumors my friend. Horsecock Harry is a west-coast legend. They say he's got a particular... fondness for 'shower time', if you catch my drift. Not exactly the kind of guy you'd want near you when you drop the soap." Gerald chuckles, then leans in closer, lowering his voice to a conspiratorial whisper. "They say he was the king of Boilingbroke Penitentiary in San Andreas. Had to transfer him here to Alderney State because he... let's just say he made quite a few enemies."

 

Niko's face darkens, his concern for Roman growing. He stands up abruptly, pacing the small space of their cell. "This is not good, Gerry. Roman is not like us. He can't handle that sort of thing."

 

"Niko, relax." Gerald reassures, reaching over to slap Niko's shoulder. "Remember last week? Roman flattened some f*ckin' prisoners no problem when he did that bowling ball sh*t he does, y'know what I'm talking about right?"

 

Niko isn't reassured, but he nods and forces a smirk anyway, trying to dispel the worry.

 

His eyes then drift across the brick wall that Gerry leaned on, looking for a distraction - and he sees it, one of the bricks is ajar from the wall, near the foundation.

 

"Hey, Gerald, what's that?," he says, pointing at the brick.

 

Gerald traces Niko's finger to the brick and he kneels down. With a light push, the brick moves with ease. He looks back at Niko with an exasperated expression, "Niko, what the f*ck? We've been here for god knows how long and now we find somethin' like this?"

 

"Just push it open Gerry, where does it go?"

 

Gerry picks at the wall, removing more bricks, just enough for a crawl space to open up to reveal a dark, hidden passageway.

 

"Where do you think it leads?" Gerry asks, peering into the darkness.

 

"One way to find out," Niko replies, determination in his eyes, crawling into the tunnel.

 

The tunnel, cramped and damp, leads them to a room filled with steam and the distinct smell of marijuana. As they emerge, they find themselves in the 'Hot Box', a makeshift sauna where stress relief comes in the form of weed and sweat. The room is thick with smoke, almost impenetrable.

 

Inside, Packie McReary, Little Jacob, and Real Badman are lounging, each wearing nothing but a towel and looking blissfully unaware of the world outside. Little Jacob, the ever-chill Rastafarian, passes a joint to Real Badman, whose thick Jamaican accent is almost indecipherable. "Di vibes all right in-di hot box, yuh zee mi?"

 

Packie, taking a long drag, nods in agreement, his face flushed from the heat and smoke. "This is the life, man. F*ck this place, but you guys make it bearable."

 

Niko and Gerald, still unnoticed, step out of the shadows. The smoke swirling around them makes them appear like ghosts emerging from the ether. Packie nearly jumps out of his skin, the joint flying out of his hand. "Jesus!! Niko? Gerry!? You nearly gave me a f*ckin' heart attack!"

 

Little Jacob squints through the smoke, a grin spreading across his face. "Niko star!, long time no see! And Gerald, wah'gwan?"

 

Real Badman, still in his own world, mutters something incomprehensible, his thick patois lost in the sauna's haze.

 

Niko, relieved to see familiar faces, can't help but smile. "Sh*t, it's good to see you guys. This place," he gestures around the steamy room, "it's something else."

 

Packie laughs, retrieving his joint. "You're telling me. It's the only way to survive this hellhole. The sauna masks the smell and the smoke, and the guards think we're just sweating out our problems."

 

Real Badman mumbles something then points to one of the empty spots, gesturing for them to sit.

 

What Next?

1) They continue to have a conversation and they start hatching a plan of their own.

2) Isaac and Brock enter the sauna and see Niko and Gerry. They radio for a lock-down and whip out their night-sticks and everyone braces for a fight.

3) We cut to Jason and Agent 14 as they're boating down the West River, looking for the bi-plane to drop their gear.

4) We cut to Trevor, Lucia and Phil Collins as they're dropping off the Sasquatch Monster-Truck

5) We cut to Dwayne and Yeager as they're heading back to Dwayne's Apartment when they see the Sasquatch Monster-Truck running from the LCPD.

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3) We cut to Jason and Agent 14 as they're boating down the West River, looking for the bi-plane to drop their gear

 

Jason (checking his watch for the 10th time) - It's almost an hour, where is your guy

14 - chill son, he's dependable

Jason - don't call me son...

14 - what else should I call you, boy?

Jason (angrily) - shut up!

14 (laughs) - or what? I have done big jobs and have powerful connections, what have you done apart from lame small-time jobs with your girl? From my pov you just an inexperienced boy...

Jason - You don't know sh*t about me dude...

14 - I know a lot actually

Jason (changing topic) - it's getting dark, where's your guy anyway

14 - Any moment now...

 

A minute later they hear the familiar whirring sound of a biplane approaching them. In the growing darkness they see a package drop from the plane.....it lands some distance away from the boat. the plane disappears into the distance.

 

14 - Told ya, that's my boy!

Jason - why didn't he aim the drop properly

14 - ahhh cut him some slack, it's very hard to drop something accurately from a plane. I bet you never did that

Jason (grumbling) - let's go get it then

 

Jason accelerates the boat to where the package landed, they see it floating on the surface. As they near the package, headlamps from another boat are seen approaching....

 

Jason - sh*t, who's that?

14 - oh sh*t, it's a police patrol!

Jason - what the f*ck...

14 - someone must've tipped them off...hurry grab the package quick!

 

Jason leans over the side of the boat and pulls the soaking package into the boat. Suddenly police sirens fill the air and they see more patrol boats coming up the river towards them....

 

Jason - sh*t, we done for sure!

14 - Don't panic kid, just gun it while I think of something!

 

What next?

1) Agent 14 calls his handler and asks him to create a diversion so they can escape

2) Jason panics and crashes into a police boat, getting them both arrested

3) We cut to Isaac and Brock enter the sauna and see Niko and Gerry. They radio for a lock-down and everyone braces for a fight

4) We cut to Trevor, Lucia and Phil as they're all scrunched into the cab of the Apocalypse Sasquatch, when they get the attention of the LCPD

5) We cut to Dwayne and Yeager who run into Dutch and Cole

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5) We cut to Dwayne and Yeager who run into Dutch and Cole

As we cut away from the boat chase with Agent 14 and Jason, we follow Dwayne and Yeager, heading back to Dwayne apartment in Northwood, reminiscing over past events

(Dwayne) So that A.I Cliffford, the story going around is Playboy shut that guy down
(Yeager) Did he now, legend has it is he killed Niko at one point
(Dwayne) Yeah that's true, there was a rumor going around that Gerry killed Niko, but they were fabricated out of nothing
(Yeager) Who would make that up... did anyone ever collect on the Rocco bounty?
(Dwayne) Man I don't know, that bastard still gotta be out there somewhere
(Yeager) We should collect on that when we finish the job here
(Dwayne) Good Idea, lets see if anyone has arrived back here yet

They finally arrive at the projects and see no one around so they get out and start walking towards the entrance where they run into Dutch and Cole, who fail to say a damn word because the Sasquatch Monster truck runs over the both of them killing Cole and Dutch, who flake into dust and are teleported back to their own universes

(Trevor) Oops, my bad, people shouldn't be standing in the parking area
(Dwayne) Trevor, good to see y'all got the truck we actually needed
(Yeager) How does this monster truck fit into your plans?
(Lucia) In a very convaluted way that I doubt will work
(Dwayne) It will work, just need to wait for Agent 14 and Jason and we'll be ready to go
(Trevor) Where are they anyway?

We cut back to 14 and Jason, who have since gotten all the way to the cemetery in Dukes,  have ditched the Jetmax and are now on foot, hiding behind several gravestone, they lost the police but are still waiting for the 2 stars to go away

(14) What's taking so long, it's only 2 stars
(Jason) Can't you call your old handler again
(14) He doesn't have that power, Lester for some reason does but he's dead

Just then the wanted level dies off and they are free to go, they see a black and gold Sabre GT sitting at the entrance and hijack the badass looking car and make off towards Algonquin

While in the Saber Jason finds a pretty gnarly revolver in the glove compartment

(Jason) Whoa, this looks dope as sh*t, imma keep it
(14) Man who ever owned this car and gun must be pretty serious, I hope they don't come back to haunt us

What happens next???
1) They successfuly make their way to the Projects
2) They get T-Boned by Pathos who's looking for Rocco
3) A Radio reports comes on over the radio about the City being back to normal

Or

4) We cut back to the Cemetary, where the owner of the Sabre GT isn't happy his sh*t got stolen, so he goes on a citywide man hunt for the bastards who stole his car, whoever this may be

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3) They get T-boned by Pathos who's looking for Rocco

 

Jason fondled the gun and smiled - Eh don't worry 14, I don't think the owner will be coming after us

14 - I wouldn't be so sure, given our luck...

Jason - Think positive, not negative

14 - Alright positive it is, we gonna pull this off and rescue them all

Jason - that's the spirit

14 - how you so confident all of a sudden btw?

Jason - I guess escaping the cops back there gave me an adrenaline boost...

14 - Well just be careful, don't crash into something and get us killed now...

 

As soon as Agent 14 said this, they  were suddenly hit by another car and sent skidding off the road. Jason managed to slam the brakes on time and avoided hitting anyone on the sidewalk

 

14 -What the f*ck now?

Jason  - let's find out...

 

Jason gripped his revolver and got out of the car. He saw the red Infernus that had crashed into them stop a few feet away from them. The door opened and out stepped Pathos...

 

Jason (pointing his gun at Pathos) - Who the hell are you? Why did you do that?

Pathos (pulled out his gun too) - I'm sorry, I didn't do it on purpose...I'm just in a hurry looking for a buddy...

Jason - Who's your buddy?

Pathos - Name's Rocco, I've been looking for him since ages now....

14 - Rocco? Oh last I heard he died in a really unlucky way....  https://gtaforums.com/topic/462751-my-chain-story/?do=findComment&comment=1072083425

Pathos - what? how exactly?

14 - spawned right on the Rotterdam tower and fell off...

Jason - Ah that's sad man...

Pathos - Damn he was always one unlucky bitch eh...

14 - Time to go our own ways then

Pathos - Alright, alright

 

With that Pathos drives off in another direction. Jason and Agent 14 jack a new parked car and head towards the projects. They reach and see Dwayne, Yeager, Trevor, Phil Collins and Lucia waiting eagerly...

 

Lucia (hugging Jason) - Glad you're safe J!

Jason - Yeah you too, where were you all

Lucia - all sorts of crazy things been happening, it's along story...

Dwayne - Stories can wait. Glad to see you here, 14

14 (fist bumping D) - You too, Big D. So, ready for this?

Trevor - Hell yeah! I think I should be driving the Sasquatch and crash into the gate, not Dwayne. It's more my style!

Phil - I'll go with Trevor too!

Dwayne - Well ok T if you insist...

14 - Yeah that's better, Trevor can also use his rage mode to absorb some damage while Phil will provide backup

Trevor - That's what I'm talking about!

Yeager - Alright everyone, don't forget to wear the bulletproof vests, don't wanna get shot to pieces

Dwayne  - and carry some extra ones for Niko, Packie, Jacob and Badman

14 - Alright everyone, let's go over the roles...Trevor will drive the Sasquatch into the front gate and start the distraction, while the rest of us sneak in from the back. Me and Dwayne will lead the way while Yeager, Jason and Lucia cover us. We get Niko and co out, escape through the river behind and regroup here...

 

Jason - Ok sounds cool

Yeager - Yeah

Lucia - Let's do this!

Phil - I'm pumped!

Trevor - I'm carrying some explosives too! I'm in the killing mood today eh!

14 - be careful T, don't kill too many cops or we would get too much attention...

Trevor - Alright, alright...

 

Trevor and Phil get into the Sasquatch and drive off. 14, Dwayne and Yeager follow in their car while Jason and Lucia bring up the rear in another car. They take different routes as they near the facility, Trevor and Phil head to the front while the others go around the back road.

 

14 - alright everyone, get ready. once we get Trevor's signal and the alarm goes off, we will be going in

Dwayne - Hope Trevor or Phil don't mess up....

Jason - I'm getting nervous.....

 

What next?

1) Isaac and Brock show up and see Niko and co before the break-out starts

2) Trevor gets a strange call on his phone

3) We cut to Roman

4) We cut to IronManny suddenly flying over the scene

5) We cut to Pathos who runs into Michael de Santa

 

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