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My Chain Story

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Corndawg93
Posted (edited)

Oh cool, a new page

 

5) Cut to Team Luis at the power station.

 

Luis and Tony pull up to the power station, it seems empty but I'm sure there are Baggettes all over place, Yusef in his Gold Buzzard lands several feet away from them

 

(LuisOy ye, where the hell have you been?

(Gay Tony) Heard you went missing

(Yusef) The bastard Pathos had his men put me in a psych ward for crazy people in Canada, so he could run the city threw Bernie and Bryce Dawkins, I hope they're okey

(Luis) They're fine bro, I'm sure Bernie will be exited to see you

(Yusef) My city looks like sh*t, let clean up the place, what's wrong with the power station

(Tony) Powers out and the french jerks run this place 

(Luis) We gunna get the power running again, you in

(Yusef) I was in before your mamma f*cked you dad, let's go nigga

(Luis) 🙄🙄

 

Luis with his 44. and a Advanced MG and Yusef with his Golden Uzi head in with Tony hanging back to be safe, they find several Baggys messing with the main power transformer, looks like they are trying to connect it with a series of laptop, their perpose remains unknown, Luis says to hold back

 

(Yusef) What are they doing?

(Luis) I don't know bro, maybe they're using the laptops to gets a derect feed to France, boost a signal 

(Tony) I don't like this, take them out

(Luis) Done

 

Luis and Yusef jump out of cover and go ham on the Frenchies who never stood a chance, L and Y then walk over and take a look at the Laptops, and see they are doing the exact thing Luis suggested

(Luis) Well look at that, I'm right, I wonder why they needed all this equipment

(Tony) It look far to techy for a simple hacker

Yusef then shoots the laptops, disconnecting the connections the transformer had to the laptops, he yanks the power switch on lighting the city back up, Tony, now happy that he finally has reception again, bleets it on his Bleeter 

 

(Luis) We should lock up the place so this doesn't happen again

(Tony) Agreed

They leave and lock the fence to the power station and leave 

 

What happens next???

1) They get run off the road by the Baggys 

2) They notice Niko and Playboy and decide to help them in what they're doing 

3) We cut back to the Prison

4) We follow Packie and Chester walking back to LS

5) Luis falls over a banana

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Carbonox
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10 hours ago, Corndawg93 said:

5) Luis falls over a banana

Luis falls right on his ass from stepping on a banana peel. Bet he thought it only happens in comics.

 

Luis: F*ck, it hurts! What monkey left its lunch on the sidewalk?

 

Another thing that's only supposed to occur in comics is a character conveniently overhearing something that concerns them, but it just so happens that JuWanna was passing by, still feeling smug about her oh-so-righteous act of gifting Pathos a sports car, when her ridiculously sensitive sensories pick up on a trigger word.

 

JuWanna: You f*cking racist! Calling POC's monkeys like it is the 19th century!

Luis: Uhh, there was a banana on the street, and people usually associate them with monkeys. That was just snark.

JuWanna: "Just snark" is precisely how rampant racism has been justified by this society for centuries! I will not let you get away with this, but first I gotta - ungh - get into this f*cking power station! Why is every gate always locked?! Because white people are selfish f*cks who lock everything valuable behind gates, that's why.

Tony: You're a little late to the party, lady. We already restored the city's power and cleared out the Baguettes.

JuWanna: Morons! I don't want to restore the city's power, I want it off again! White people have always lived in such comfort that it's about time they recognized how inconvenient it is to be a POC. If my actions result in the loss of social media for even a few hours, or even better, kill at least one white man relying on electronic hospital equipment to survive, it'll be a great success to my social justice campaign.

Yusuf: But there are those, uh, POC's all over this city too, in great numbers. Like me! You'll be hurting them as well.

JuWanna: An unfortunate side effect, yes, but they'll understand it's for the greater good. In our dream society it will no longer pose a problem, when full segregation has been achieved and all white men have been banished to an island while a brave new POC society thrives. With much greener electricity than what we have now, I would add. And no gates or private property.

Luis: What does POC stand for? Piece of crap?

JuWanna: *gasp* OHMYGOSH YOU HORRIBLE PRIVILEGED WASTE OF LIFE! IT'S - PEOPLE - OF - COLOOOOOOOOR!

 

Luis half expects her to pull out a knife, but instead she just falls on her knees and has an absolute nervous breakdown. It's really uncomfortable to look at, particularly when this adult starts flailing and then repeatedly hitting the ground like a child. While Luis, Tony and Yusuf debate on whether to kill her or just move on, their question is answered for them by a Triad car making a stylish entrance from behind the street corner by drifting, and coming to a stop near them with two Triads jumping out right away.

 

Triad 1: There she is!

Triad 2: We have the target! You three, stand back or die!

Luis: You can have her, we don't give a sh*t.

Triad 1: Good, good!

 

They load JuWanna into the car. It takes her a good bit of time to catch up to what's going on.

 

JuWanna: Let go of me, you freaks! I'm only looking out for your basic f*cking rights! I even bought one of your phones so that the Chinese government can survey me, because there's no reason a white person should refuse it from a less privileged group of people unless we have something to hide, like racist bleets from 6 years ago!

Triad 2: We're not "less privileged", you dog f*cker. And you're gonna tell us where Pathos is, or you're gonna be a cripple before you know it.

JuWanna: The word is "differently abled" and it should be ingrained in every POC's mind since birth! You need to be much more woke than this, or you'll be no better than the white people holding you back!

 

There's probably more to it, but they're well out of Team Luis' hearing range by now, so it's not really their problem. Luis calls Playboy, but his phone's on sleep mode due to him and Niko being sneaky at the moment, so he tries Yeager. That call does go through.

 

Luis: All done with the power station. Not sure if we should stay to defend it from other gangs, though. JuWanna already tried to sabotage it right in front of our faces.

Yeager: Does Yusuf still have ammo left in the Buzzard? He could buzz around, no pun intended, and not only see any attackers from a mile away, but rain death on them too. You and Tony should help us with the prison in the meantime. I'd ask Johnny, but he and the Lost wouldn't be a popular sight if they came here, according to this guard I'm speaking to.

Luis: I thought it had infinite ammo.

Yeager: That's only a gameplay mechanic.

Luis: Game- ugh, I'd rather not ask.

 

Luis gives Yusuf the instructions and speeds off with Tony. Outside the prison, there's an even bigger mess of parked Baguette vehicles, completely blocking the road and sidewalks.

 

Luis: I hope you're not bored of the Baguettes yet, Tone, 'cause all of the rest seem to be attending this party.

 

1) The teams of Luis, Gordon and Yeager rendezvous in the courtyard, with Manny getting his suit back.

2) Another gang's members start parachuting into the prison.

3) Cut to Yusuf, who spots the ERG driving an explosive-filled truck towards the power station.

4) Cut to Niko and Playboy.

5) Cut to Chester and Packie.

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4) Cut to Niko and Playboy.

 

Niko and Playboy were having trouble wondering how to get the elevator working, so they gave up went to walk off but then the elevator made a bunch of notice again, it was coming back up, so they rushed over to and waited for it to come back up, the ground open and there it was, the elevator, 2 men came out and were then murdered by Playboy

 

(Playboy) Cmon money

They rushed over and got in the elevator but Niko fell over, this caused the stupid audience to laugh, the elevator went down and after 20 minutes it stopped 

 

(Niko) That was long, far too long

(studio audience) Hahahahaha

(Playboy) Would you all f*ck off

(studio audience) Uh oh

They leave as well as the canned laughter, Niko opens to door to the elevator and see a extremely long tunnel with a golf kart to ride on, they get in and drive off and Niko noticed a red button, he without thought presses it and the kart fires a rocket down the hall they're driving down 

(Niko) That's what that does?

(Playboy) You like a little child ain't you money

(Niko) Meh

(Playboy) Hey I hear there's a Red Dead Chain Story

(Niko) Meh

(Playboy) You so full of energy and joy 

(Niko) Meh

 

What causing Niko's lack of interest???

1) The lack of writers

2) No story DLC for GTA V

3) No GTA IV remaster

4) He hasn't had a chance to watch Stranger Things yet

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Domand
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Never mind

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Posted (edited)
1 hour ago, Domand said:

What????😔

When we found out you were using multiple accounts, I rewrote I said and change it to that, I was mad, I honestly forget I said that, my apologies sir

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Posted (edited)
9 minutes ago, Corndawg93 said:

When we found out you were using multiple accounts, I rewrote I said and change it to that, I was mad, I honestly forget I said that, my apologies sir

Oh. It’s ok. That was a long time ago any way when I was in a very different place mentally and made a lot of bad choices. 

I’m Sorry by the way and you guys are doing great with this chain story👍

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6 hours ago, Domand said:

Oh. It’s ok. That was a long time ago any way when I was in a very different place mentally and made a lot of bad choices. 

I’m Sorry by the way and you guys are doing great with this chain story👍

Feel free to contribute

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On 7/8/2019 at 2:57 PM, Corndawg93 said:

1) The lack of writers

Playboy: Yeah, I get it, the situation ain't ideal. But that's no excuse to go all out of character, man, we got important work to do.

Niko: You're right, but just who the hell are we dealing with here?

Playboy: If only I knew, I'd thoroughly lecture you about them, money.

Niko: And how could anyone have built this tunnel system?

Playboy: Crazier things have happened.

Niko: I was thinking there might be an answer behind one of these doors.

Playboy: They ain't gonna keep any useful information lying around, not behind an unlocked door at least. Let's just... move forward, I wanna see my Z-Type again.

Niko: You think it's still the priority, and not the mysterious men in suits?

Playboy: It depends. If they've f*cked with it, things are gonna get personal. If not, I won't make an active effort to kill all these f*ckers when we make our escape.

 

There's an apparent big room up ahead, which must've been where the rocket went, because there's a gaping hole in the back wall and a search party inspecting it. Niko brings the golf cart to a stop as quietly as possible.

 

Playboy: We could take them, you know. All gathered up and sh*t - a perfect target for another rocket, money.

Niko: I dunno, shouldn't we be stealthier? We have no idea what we're up against.

Playboy: Act now or miss the golden opportunity, your choice.

Niko: Yes, there's always a variety of choices, like at the end of this post.

 

1) Niko fires the second rocket and kills everyone - or at least, everyone that he could see.

2) Niko accidentally presses the wrong button and blares the horn, giving away their position.

 

or

 

3) Some of the search party leave the scene, leaving just two. Niko and Playboy sneak up on them, perform stealth kills, and search their bodies.

4) Same as 3, but only one guard stays. Niko and Playboy catch him by surprise and interrogate him.

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1) Niko fires the second rocket and kills everyone - or at least, everyone that he could see.

 

(Niko) Here we go

Niko dirty finger press's the button, Thwoosh goes the rocket and blow everyone up

 

(Playboy) Oh sh*t money, you cold

 

(Niko) Ice cold mutha f*cker

 

Playboy signals to walk over and they aim down sites for any more bad guys and they see several doors, one that says DANGER and the other 3 door say Security

 

(Niko) I wonder what's in the Danger door

 

He opens it to see a Demogorgan guarding PLXs Z Type

(Playboy) Oh crap

(Niko) Yever no easto

 

What Happens next???

1) The Demogorgan kills Playboy

2) The Demogorgan drives off in the Z Type

3) Niko goes red army on the Demogorgan

 

or

 

4) We cut to The prison

5) We cut to 6 months from now when someone finally picks up the story

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