AceRay Posted November 5, 2010 Share Posted November 5, 2010 Denis is a pretty lame name for a protagonist. needs to change to something harder or more bad-ass than "Denis Eggbert" or whatever his name was. Look back at protagonists in the past. they were pretty hard names. Denis isn't. and what does he look like? You haven't described him much. Other than that, good work!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrownBear Posted November 5, 2010 Share Posted November 5, 2010 I'm guessing you are not from an English speaking country but the term Negro I'm sure is black in your language (Italian?), however in England, USA etc. Negro could be considered offensive, try changing it to Black or African American. I understand and don't particularly care but it's is probably best not to offend anyone . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kwandilibro Posted November 5, 2010 Share Posted November 5, 2010 (edited) I'm guessing you are not from an English speaking country but the term Negro I'm sure is black in your language (Italian?), however in England, USA etc. Negro could be considered offensive, try changing it to Black or African American.I understand and don't particularly care but it's is probably best not to offend anyone . Nobody goes by "Negro" anymore. Even African American is pretty inaccurate, since there's Hispanics that look black, but actually have no African blood. Might wanna just try "Black". You don't see white people referring to each other as "Caucasian". Anyway, in America, White gangs are almost irrelevant in terms of size and, pretty much everything, compared to Black and Hispanic gangs. The odds of having a war between white gangs are just pathetic. Edited November 5, 2010 by Kwandilibro Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LOGGYTHEMAN Posted November 5, 2010 Author Share Posted November 5, 2010 Negro's racist? I never knew, sorry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
--Vega-- Posted November 6, 2010 Share Posted November 6, 2010 Game takes place in 1977 yet there's music released in recent years on the radio stations? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrownBear Posted November 6, 2010 Share Posted November 6, 2010 I'm guessing you are not from an English speaking country but the term Negro I'm sure is black in your language (Italian?), however in England, USA etc. Negro could be considered offensive, try changing it to Black or African American.I understand and don't particularly care but it's is probably best not to offend anyone . Nobody goes by "Negro" anymore. Even African American is pretty inaccurate, since there's Hispanics that look black, but actually have no African blood. Might wanna just try "Black". You don't see white people referring to each other as "Caucasian". I think black is a fine term but some people can be overly sensitive. Loggytheman: Well some people may find it racist, you never know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
san andreas state Posted November 7, 2010 Share Posted November 7, 2010 I'm guessing you are not from an English speaking country but the term Negro I'm sure is black in your language (Italian?), however in England, USA etc. Negro could be considered offensive, try changing it to Black or African American.I understand and don't particularly care but it's is probably best not to offend anyone . Nobody goes by "Negro" anymore. Even African American is pretty inaccurate, since there's Hispanics that look black, but actually have no African blood. Might wanna just try "Black". You don't see white people referring to each other as "Caucasian". I think black is a fine term but some people can be overly sensitive. Loggytheman: Well some people may find it racist, you never know. the only people sensitive to the word black is igorent white people who are racist themselves but dont even know it by trying say they "know" what it feels like, feel uncomfortable around people with a different skin color, try to avoid people with a different skin color, try to keep people with a different skin color from having to work or even walk for that matter, and lastley they always try to pretend the past never happened, for example-stealing us natives land away and using black people as slaves. ok im finished ranting and to everybody, not all white people are bad, just some, just like there are bad black people, native people, yellow people, and brown people, and good black people, native people, yellow people, and brown people. o yeah, i forgot to mention COLOR DONT MATTER IN THE FIRST PLACE, its skin deep. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LOGGYTHEMAN Posted November 7, 2010 Author Share Posted November 7, 2010 I'm guessing you are not from an English speaking country but the term Negro I'm sure is black in your language (Italian?), however in England, USA etc. Negro could be considered offensive, try changing it to Black or African American.I understand and don't particularly care but it's is probably best not to offend anyone . Nobody goes by "Negro" anymore. Even African American is pretty inaccurate, since there's Hispanics that look black, but actually have no African blood. Might wanna just try "Black". You don't see white people referring to each other as "Caucasian". I think black is a fine term but some people can be overly sensitive. Loggytheman: Well some people may find it racist, you never know. the only people sensitive to the word black is igorent white people who are racist themselves but dont even know it by trying say they "know" what it feels like, feel uncomfortable around people with a different skin color, try to avoid people with a different skin color, try to keep people with a different skin color from having to work or even walk for that matter, and lastley they always try to pretend the past never happened, for example-stealing us natives land away and using black people as slaves. ok im finished ranting and to everybody, not all white people are bad, just some, just like there are bad black people, native people, yellow people, and brown people, and good black people, native people, yellow people, and brown people. o yeah, i forgot to mention COLOR DONT MATTER IN THE FIRST PLACE, its skin deep. I see what your saying. White's don't know, (considering I'm a white). If your explainng what they look like and you use the term "Black', they may cover there mouths and . That's just racist thinking that talking about black people are racist. It's hard to understand first but I think we can all relate to it. BACK TO THE TOPIC PLEASE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AceRay Posted November 7, 2010 Share Posted November 7, 2010 lol, this kind of turned into a rights speech or something. anyway, It would be better if Denis' uncle dies in the present, then Denis has to learn to protect the car and its new experience to him. and I've adding all the dates together, and it shows that Denis is about 55-60 years old. I'm not sure about how close his family was, but Uncle Ben wouldn't just give his car factory to his inexperienced 18 year old nephew, whom he barely ever saw. he'd have to be at least 25, and some experience in the business, which means him becoming an awesome GTA Protagonist doubtful. and if Denis never saw Uncle Ben, why would he care about what happens to his car? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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