LOGGYTHEMAN Posted October 26, 2010 Share Posted October 26, 2010 (edited) *THIS CONCEPT THREAD ISN'T ABOUT THIS CAR. IT LEADS OFF INTO A STORY* THEME: or (Mid 1977) Denis Engelshus, born in Norway and was transported to America after his mother died while giving birth to him; but his father left him. He lived on his Uncle and Aunts farm in the countryside of San Fierro. The year was 1977. His Uncle, a great man. His Uncle's car, was his life. Denis rarely ever saw his Uncle inside, he was alway in his garage. Eventually, his Uncle died from old age. Denis was given his Uncle's job in car manufacturer, the highest spot in the business. Years past, the year now is 2008 and Denis has the job in car manufacturer, a nice car and a nice house. Before Denny knows it, he's beaten up by a mob, waken in another mobs warehouse and meets a new friend named Lorri (Jerry). Denis shows Lorri his Uncles ancient muscle car. Lorri explains it's to valuable to be sitting in an ab-banded garage in the middle of the bush. Denis and Lorri improve the car, give it a new paint job and take it for a spin. Gangs and mobs want to rare car, at the same time; have to protect VC SAINTS from the BaySide Crew. Denny must now protect his uncle's legacy and take down the city. Present day: 2008, April 3rd It's a car/action shooter. Taking out gangs to improve yours, while racing away from the cops in your LAZMAX. It's an intense game based in The Civical State (The state of San Fierro). New citys arrives, such as Van Civic and more countryside. With it's brilliant shoot-outs to it's car drifting/off road racing... 'Crime, crime never sleeps'. The game arrives by showing the protagonist, 'Dennis Engelshus' staring down the 78th floor, glaring over downtown San Fierro. The screen shows a long-range shot of Dennis, in the dark with his back turned; he turns and walks forward. It shows him swinging his key chain, from a close shot. The credits start to appear, like on IV. He quickly tidy's papers, then turns and locks the door. This shot shows Denis at the top of a stair case, then slowly zooms down the stair case. Dennis hops into an elevator and presses, 'CP' (Car Park). The scene shows the (see through) elevator as it drops down to the bottom on the screen and disappears, showing another credit name. Dennis walks over to his Toyota FT-HS Hybrid Sports Car. A shot shows a puddle then Dennis steps in it, showing a few more credit names. The camera shows the protagonist come out of the underground car park, the car fly's past the screen on an angle. Denny stops a a red light, but know no other cars are around. A huge black cloud is hovering over the city, it starts to sprinkle. His car slows and stops, no fuel/petrol. 'Sh*t!' he mutters. He climbs out of the car and takes his phone out of his pocket. Not to long after that, a fireball flame burst out of a building with people screaming. Two men run out with 5 other guys after them. Denny ducks for cover near by his car, it's a shoot-out. 'Give us the cash, and will leave your ass,’ one of the men on the opposite side of Dennis yell. ‘Yeah, for what?’ a man next to Denis asks. ‘Nothing, now die!’ the enemy screams. It becomes a first person view, The two men were over powered, one was shot in the forehead, ‘It’s all over Jerry!’ the men in the distance yelled. Denis turned around to see a “bad guy”, ‘nighty night’ he yelled while hitting him with a bat in the face... the screen blacks out. ‘He should be fine, his lucky we found him’ a voice echoed. Denis slowly opened his eyes, blinking his eyes repeatedly. He was lying on a table, gazing up at a man. ‘Where...where am I,’ he stuttered. ‘In Van Civic,’ the man said. The man had a 6 ‘o’clock shadow, same as Denis. ‘Man, you cheated death,’ another man said walking over. This time, the other man had a full beard. Van Civic was a city on the other side of the bay to San Fierro. ‘We saw you in the neighbourhood and picked you up, and your friend as well,’ the man with the beard said while lifting Denis up off the table bench. ‘Friend,’ asked Denis looking around to see where he was. They seemed to be in a garage. Denis sat there, wondering what day it was. ‘What’s today?’ Denis asked. ‘Wednesday... morning’ the man said. It was one day after the accident, but another question was on his mind, ‘where’s my car?’ he asked as he jumped of the table. ‘It’s just around the block, will go get it after,’ they both said. The man at the shoot-out walked into the room and smiled at Denis. ‘You lived,’ he laughed while sipping a glass of milk. ‘You want to go get your car?’ the man, ‘Jerry’ asked. ‘If that’s ok,’ Denis replied. ‘By the way, my names Rufus,’ the man with the beard added. ‘And I’m Chris, nickname: Creist’ the man with the 6’oclock shadow said, 'Feel free to stay here when every you want' he added. Jerry led Denis into another room. A Rolls-Royce; Ghost 2011 edition, not even out in stores yet. ‘How the hell did you get your hands on this?’ Denis asked. ‘Rufus and Chris said I could keep it as they need more space for more, important cars,’ he said. ‘You mind driving. I still feel out of shape,’ Jerry asked. Denis drove out and onto the road, heading to the mechanics garage. LazmaX Denis here Denis was born in born in Oslo, Norway. Living on the streets, learning how to survive. Denis met an old guy named, 'Craig'. Craig taught everything about cars to Denis, so when Denis was old enough... he bought a nice car, a house and got a job in the car manufacturer business. Teaming up with a new friend named, 'Lorri' they take down the Civical State. Lorri here Lorri (or Jerry, Jerry because he get's into a lot of fights) was born in his home state 'New England'. He moved over to Liberty City because of family problems then moved over to San Fierro because of criminal records but uses the excuse, 'the weather was bad'. A first grade criminal, pro at weapons and behind the wheel. His mission is to protect Denis. Rufus Deminchi here Rufus deminchi, the leader of the well known gang, 'VC saints'. He had lost his memory in a car accident when he was 32 years old. Rufus doesn't remember his family or old friends so is in denial about the whole thing. He met a guy named, 'Chris Welonbe' from a back alley shootout in Vice City. They moved to the Civical State and created there own gang named, 'VC saints' (Which means Van Civic). Denis and Lorri are held in by Rufus and Chris in there garage. What will Rufus's future come with Denis and Lorri. Should he trust him, or kill em'. Chris Welonbe here Chris was born in Fiddlemon, a town near by the Autumn Forest (15 miles from Van Civic). He was brought up in a strict family on a farm. The farm was for Chris's dad and Chris's dad only. No playing around, no TV, no going out. Chris began to smoke marijuana and cocaine when he was 14. In no time, he ran away from home to find a dream he had to fulfill in Vice. Chris (his nickname, 'Creist') met Rufus in Vice City, claiming he didn't remember his family or friends. They became friends and wanted to rise, so San Fierro was their only option. Chris was much younger then Rufus, but their friendship was true. The VC saints began to evolve, as friends from far and wide came. The gang lives on today, as they live and create the story of Fierro Lights. Lando Broonks Lando Broonks, the most greediest bastard in all of America. Born in Carcer city, Lando moved to England to design a new car. He had been working on this car since he was 15. Lando came along a humble man named Marko Chachor. Marko and Lando never were the best of friends, considering Lando was always up to something not good. Marko had been working on a car named, 'Phoenix'. The car was to bring out the best in the 80's Marko always stated. Lando decided to turn in Marko for the illegal garages that they worked in. Marko over heard Lando and fled the country but, left his blue prints of 'Phoenix' behind. To stop the heat, he moved the Van Civic, 'a city close to San Fierro'. Pete Murphy here An ex-gang member of the 'BaySide Crew'. Born in San Fierro and lived a normal life of any person. It was until he was 17 until he got a drug addiction and moved over into his brother's gang. His brother, 'Jeremy Murphy' controls the East side of the bay with his gang. Originally named, 'The Black Bullets' the gang was all Negro with only some whites as they had a strong hate towards them, using racial slurs around their white friends. There was a gang war against all the bay gangs and VC saints. The whites in the Black Bullets turned on the Negro's and killed most of them. The living negro's all rushed away to Los Santos, living in packs know days. Jeremy was one of the gang member's that fought against the opostite race. Killing the leader which made Jeremy the boss... for now. Denis, Lorri, Chris, Marko and Smurf capture Pete and use him as bait. Robbing a bank in the country side of Civical, who will make it out alive? Marko Chachor here Marko Chachor, worked in illegal garages in London, England. A most powerful man, taking down Britain one by one. Marko's co-worker, an overweight American man named 'Lando Broonks' asked if he could work out at his garage. Marko was planning on making a car named the, 'Phoenix'. Lando became paranoid and called the cops on him. Marko over heard and fled the country, forgetting to pick up his Phoenix blue prints. He boarded a plane to Liberty City, the city of hope. Denis meets Marko after to agree to deal drugs and cash. Marko was all in with it so off he went, quickly made his way to San Fierro. Now, it's time to get the money, get the drugs, kill Lando and get the HELL outta' there! Smurf here Smurf, a sneak. Born only with his rich and greedy father, he had no time to talk to him. Strangely, always disappearing. A born spy. Smurf never reveals his name, just a quiet calm guy. Denis asks Smurf to do some dirty work for them. To go spy on the other mobs, to figure out what’s going on. Smurf shows his emotion in the mission, ‘One eyed friend’. He is last seen on the final mission, but leaves to Vice for an unknown reason. Smurf, all together is America’s biggest spy. Missions Intro Mission: To Close For Comfort Dennis meets trouble when he is beaten up by a gang the wakes up in the VC SAINTS safehouse. They revived Denny and the other guy at the shoot-out, a man named 'Lorri'. Denny and Lorri need to go pick up Denny's car, but when they arrive back... VC SAINTS are dead, Rufus and Chris have vanished. Reward: Save location •Mission 1: Ashes to Ashes, Dust to GUTS Denny and Lorri return, to find the VC SAINTS dead and Rufus and Chris have strangely diapered! It's time to met a new friend, his name Smurf. Denny and Smurf need to figure out who killed the guys, and take who ever they are out. Reward: -$25 Mission 2: Bad Memories, Good Time After Smurf and Dennis find out the gang who killed the SAINTS, Dennis takes a trip down memory lane. Showing Lorri his Uncles accident muscle car, it's time to call a mechanic. It's going to be a few days. Relax, explore... Reward: LazmaX (Car) Mission 3: Diner Dance Denis revives a call from Lorri. Your first time with weapons? Great. It's time to grab your pistol and rush to the Diner in Downtown Fierro. You meet Lorri's friend their, time to take out the trash. The best line in this mission is, 'Diner Dance!' Dennis yells as you shoots the bullets in front of the enemy. SH*T, 2 star. Race the cops back to the garage, and we can 'cut ourselves a nice slices'. Reward: $100 + lorri gives you an extra $150 for trouble with cops Admiral Bravura Buccaneer Cardona Clover Elegant Elegy Emperor Fortune Glendale Greenwood Hermes Intruder Majestic Manana Merit Nebula Oceanic Phoneix Preimer Previon Primo Sentinel Stafford Sultan Sunrise Tampa Vincent Virgo Willard Washington Presidente Primo Rancher Rebla Ripley Roman's Romero Ruiner Sabre Sabre (Rusty) Sabre GT Schafter Securicar Sentinel Sentinel XS Solair Speedo Stallion Steed Yankee Boxville Packer Flatbed Packer* Dozer* Yankee Biff Benson Securicar Steed Mule Laundromat Flatbed Burrito Speedo Pony Minivan Packer Moonbeam Phantom Benelli_M3 (Pump shotgun) Beretta (Combat shotgun) RPG Desert Eagle M4 Carbine AK-47 Pistol (Glock 17) Asult rifle (SCAR-L) Sniper Rifle (CheyTac M200) Combat sniper (SR-25) Uzi (IMI) Shotgun (M1014) Grenade launcher (M79) Molotov Grenade Baseball bat Katana Chainsaw K.O FM 'We Take no Cheap Shots...' DJ: Adrian Forrest AC/DC - Highway to Hell Anberlin - The Feel Good Drag Five Finger Death Punch - Bad Company Nickelback - Animals Oasis - Wonderwall NaughtyTec2.0 'We All Speak Naughty' DJ: MrGrooveyGravy Yolanda Be Cool & DCUP - We No Speak Americano .Dj Javisst - to the bass .EastClubbers - drop .Dj Splash - crying soul .Dj Satomi - Waves .Paffendorf - Lalala Girl .Akin - let_me_freak_you_out .Partyraiser DJ Triax - Massacre .Dj Raaban - Anima Libera .Settler Project - Le .Scarf - Odysee Deep-PumpsFM 'Designing The Wave' DJ: Robert (KOOL) Bell Kool & the Gang- Summer Madness P Funk- Come In Out The Rain Gang Starr's- DJ Premier in Deep Concentration Blue Six- Music & Wine Deep House- Go That Deep BellTunes24.0 'Every folk's favorite tune' DJ: Jethro Binks Rascal Flatts - Take Me There Safe houses in the game, are straight to the point. At the start of the game, your safe house is a garage in the Red Light district of Van Civic. Hotel room's are also an option. With your own private parking, great TV. In the countryside of TCS (The Civical State), are more outlandish home's were you can store weapons. You can move some objects around in your home such as, small chairs, tables, TV or carpet. You will eventually rise to the top, keep your head down... you may become the hunted. GANG'S BaySide Crew The Bayside Crew, Originally named, 'The Black Bullets. Formed in the 60's, but a full Negro gang but rarely any whites. They used racial slurs against there white friends, which was very strange. The VC SAINTS and the BaySide Crew 'Black Bullets' have been fighting for 50 years. Generation after generation. The whites in the Black Bullets turned on the Negro's. The year was 1976, it was the biggest gang war in America. Named, 'The 12th year'. The 12th year, meaning it was 12 years before the whites rebelled against the Negro. All the Negro's vanished to Los Santos, creating their own small gang's and still live on to this very day. The whites evolved from the ash of, 'Black Bullets'. Now its, VC SAINTS v.s BaySide Crew... White's v.s whites! Flashbacks Flashbacks a cure throughout the game. Flashbacks become side missions, exploring back into the 70's. You play as a guy named Jethro, a long lost friend of Deni's who died from a drug overdose. In these side mission, you deal drugs at 70's concerts. Do drag racing down the streets of San Fierro and a whole of other stuff. At the end of the game, you can unlock flashbacks when you reach "anxiety' stage which creates the screen to fuzz out. You wake up under a tree in a park, or in a back alley being beaten up for e.g. The flashbacks last only 15 minutes in (real time) and rarely happen. LOGO'S MADE BY NARCIS_SPEED6 BOXART MADE BY UNRATED66 Edited November 2, 2010 by LOGGYTHEMAN Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TommyMufc-Champs Posted October 26, 2010 Share Posted October 26, 2010 Not much detail at the moment, the logo Is awesome though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrownBear Posted October 26, 2010 Share Posted October 26, 2010 I don't think O'Neil is a Norwegian name. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TommyMufc-Champs Posted October 26, 2010 Share Posted October 26, 2010 I don't think O'Neil is a Norwegian name. Of course It Is Yeah you should change the name to something Norwegian, research some Norwegian names Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
san andreas state Posted October 26, 2010 Share Posted October 26, 2010 arent you the guy that tried to steal everybodys ideas?? well if you are then hello lockage(after you steal) if your not then nice logo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TommyMufc-Champs Posted October 26, 2010 Share Posted October 26, 2010 Yeah he Is. Don't see any stole ideas In this topic though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
san andreas state Posted October 26, 2010 Share Posted October 26, 2010 Yeah he Is. Don't see any stole ideas In this topic though. just wait ..........................................keep waiting.....................i thought i told you to wait!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryan Posted October 26, 2010 Share Posted October 26, 2010 Yeah he Is. Don't see any stole ideas In this topic though. just wait ..........................................keep waiting.....................i thought i told you to wait!!!!! He hasn't stole anything this time so just drop it. If he does so again, we'll deal with it then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuisBellic Posted October 26, 2010 Share Posted October 26, 2010 looks pretty good so far here's some cookies Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LOGGYTHEMAN Posted October 27, 2010 Author Share Posted October 27, 2010 arent you the guy that tried to steal everybodys ideas??well if you are then hello lockage(after you steal) if your not then nice logo man, Can't we all live in the present? Everyone make's mistakes and I hope this will prove I'm not bad Either tell me what you think of this topic or please, get out -Michael Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuisBellic Posted October 27, 2010 Share Posted October 27, 2010 arent you the guy that tried to steal everybodys ideas??well if you are then hello lockage(after you steal) if your not then nice logo man, Can't we all live in the present? Everyone make's mistakes and I hope this will prove I'm not bad Either tell me what you think of this topic or please, get out -Michael He was new here he didn't know I dont think you should get on new members right away for something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QwertyAAA Posted October 27, 2010 Share Posted October 27, 2010 Well, what the hell did he expect? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LOGGYTHEMAN Posted October 27, 2010 Author Share Posted October 27, 2010 Well, what the hell did he expect? QWERTYAAA Please, can he just continue with the topic? I'm sorry for what I did, I'm moving forward Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LOGGYTHEMAN Posted October 27, 2010 Author Share Posted October 27, 2010 Updated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LOGGYTHEMAN Posted October 27, 2010 Author Share Posted October 27, 2010 Updated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LOGGYTHEMAN Posted October 27, 2010 Author Share Posted October 27, 2010 Woops. sorry, I Accidently double posted Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mati Posted October 27, 2010 Share Posted October 27, 2010 Nice start man! You could add some more weapons in my opinion. BTW you just triple posted by explaining your double post Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ViceCity09 Posted October 27, 2010 Share Posted October 27, 2010 This is great so far, love the graphics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SilentSeas Posted October 27, 2010 Share Posted October 27, 2010 arent you the guy that tried to steal everybodys ideas??well if you are then hello lockage(after you steal) if your not then nice logo Have you not heard of the phrase "Innocent until proven guilty" Anyway a fairly decent start but rather than just listing the vehicles, why not use a table? That way your concept will look tidier. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TommyMufc-Champs Posted October 27, 2010 Share Posted October 27, 2010 Nice triple post lol. Nah really well done some really good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LOGGYTHEMAN Posted October 27, 2010 Author Share Posted October 27, 2010 LOGO UPDATE TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rojo89 Posted October 27, 2010 Share Posted October 27, 2010 I like the logo, it's nice. You should add more weapons to your list, i dont know, the katana, chainsaw, automatic pistol, etc. Other than that is looking pretty good so far. Keep the nice work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LOGGYTHEMAN Posted October 28, 2010 Author Share Posted October 28, 2010 Character UPDATE Radio stations coming soon; theres no header for that at the moment. To be continued... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LOGGYTHEMAN Posted October 28, 2010 Author Share Posted October 28, 2010 BUMP... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TommyMufc-Champs Posted October 28, 2010 Share Posted October 28, 2010 You call that a bump? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mati Posted October 28, 2010 Share Posted October 28, 2010 Nice character profiles. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LOGGYTHEMAN Posted October 28, 2010 Author Share Posted October 28, 2010 Nice character profiles. Thanks mati I love your concept thread about 'The Ghost'. Anyway, thanks again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vertical limit Posted October 28, 2010 Share Posted October 28, 2010 nice dude i like the way how u put the HUD in the money section Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LOGGYTHEMAN Posted October 28, 2010 Author Share Posted October 28, 2010 nice dude i like the way how u put the HUD in the money section Yeah, trying not to put too many headers in at the moment. Nice and tidy . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vertical limit Posted October 28, 2010 Share Posted October 28, 2010 ok cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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