AkymarsDoc Posted October 26, 2010 Share Posted October 26, 2010 (edited) "Deleted" Sorry Edited October 27, 2010 by AkymarsDoc Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyler Posted October 26, 2010 Share Posted October 26, 2010 You don't just post a Concept thread to say You'll post more later, that's total sh*te man. That said, you didn't organise this topic too well as it is. Try adding indentation to paragraphs and making sure the BB coding you use works. Click "Preview Post" before you add reply alright man? I hope you get your idea of the ground. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LOGGYTHEMAN Posted October 26, 2010 Share Posted October 26, 2010 Hi man What year is this based in? Just a question... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pac. Posted October 26, 2010 Share Posted October 26, 2010 You don't just post a Concept thread to say You'll post more later, that's total sh*te man. That said, you didn't organise this topic too well as it is. Try adding indentation to paragraphs and making sure the BB coding you use works. Click "Preview Post" before you add reply alright man? I hope you get your idea of the ground. Exactly this. I dont like it when V section gets clogged up with pointless threads containing just weapons and a little prestory badly layed out. Also scandanavian, Russian and serbian gangs in Los Santos? really? More like Mexcian and Afro-american Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TommyMufc-Champs Posted October 26, 2010 Share Posted October 26, 2010 Yeah I think you should of thought It through before posting. A bit messed up at the moment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrownBear Posted October 26, 2010 Share Posted October 26, 2010 Why are the majority of the gangs Northern / Western European? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pac. Posted October 26, 2010 Share Posted October 26, 2010 Why are the majority of the gangs Northern / Western European? Exactly what i was thinking, ive never even heard of a scandanavian street gang or a russian or Italian one, it's ment to be more Mexican, Puerto Rican, Black, Asian. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kwandilibro Posted October 27, 2010 Share Posted October 27, 2010 (edited) Why are the majority of the gangs Northern / Western European? Yeah really. A Scandinavian gang in Detroit? Detroit is 85% Afro American. The odds are, most of it's gangs are probably Afro American. This guy is way too patriotic. My advice- scrap everything. If you refuse to do even a shred of research to even back your thread up, you might as well get rid of it completely. Forget effort, this is just plain awful. Edited October 27, 2010 by Kwandilibro Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AceRay Posted October 27, 2010 Share Posted October 27, 2010 didn't even give teh protagonist a name... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyler Posted October 27, 2010 Share Posted October 27, 2010 Afro - American? I thought that 'Afro Americans' just preferred to be called black, but hey, I'm not the diplomat here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LOGGYTHEMAN Posted October 27, 2010 Share Posted October 27, 2010 Sorry, but I sort of agree with the others. Scarp it, and start over. Do some thinking for it before you start. :-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AceRay Posted October 27, 2010 Share Posted October 27, 2010 Was the protagonist called Tommy or Jake? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pac. Posted October 27, 2010 Share Posted October 27, 2010 Afro - American? I thought that 'Afro Americans' just preferred to be called black, but hey, I'm not the diplomat here. Black, White nobody cares it's just more proffesional term to call people like African-American or caucasian or Latino. Some people may get offended if they say "That Black boy" or "That white boy" or "That mexican kid" personally i don't give a f*ck but others might. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SirPsychoSexy Posted October 27, 2010 Share Posted October 27, 2010 Haha why the Scandinavian angle? I'm from Scandinavia, maybe you are too, and we barely have gangs here, why would they get established in America? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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