SilentSeas Posted September 4, 2010 Share Posted September 4, 2010 A solid effort so far, keep it up:^: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuisBellic Posted September 5, 2010 Author Share Posted September 5, 2010 i might have roy die somewhere near the end of the story and sammy kills giovanni after @illnessgta thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Notorious MOB Posted September 5, 2010 Share Posted September 5, 2010 Looks good so far.. keep at it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuisBellic Posted September 7, 2010 Author Share Posted September 7, 2010 does anyone have any ideas for the first mission? btw the story will start when niko starts working for packie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akavari Posted September 7, 2010 Share Posted September 7, 2010 does anyone have any ideas for the first mission? btw the story will start when niko starts working for packie Maybe the story could start when Jon Gravelli dies in the hospital. Sammy could come out of hiding to come up to LC for the funeral, reunite with his son and whatnot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maxopower Posted September 7, 2010 Share Posted September 7, 2010 WOW! Coolest Rocket Launcher EVER! Rest of it... nah... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuisBellic Posted September 8, 2010 Author Share Posted September 8, 2010 (edited) does anyone have any ideas for the first mission? btw the story will start when niko starts working for packie Maybe the story could start when Jon Gravelli dies in the hospital. Sammy could come out of hiding to come up to LC for the funeral, reunite with his son and whatnot. i want it to start early in gta iv so i can add a few crossovers and later close to the end of the game sammy gets a phone call about jimmy pegorino's and jon's death and goes to jon's funeral also there will be alot of people who die in the story also sammys son dies in the code of the streets Edited September 8, 2010 by LuisBellic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuisBellic Posted September 8, 2010 Author Share Posted September 8, 2010 i added some clothes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
killer6699 Posted September 8, 2010 Share Posted September 8, 2010 stop double posting! • There is an edit button to stop double and triple posts, so please use it. http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=137906 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sckarface Posted September 8, 2010 Share Posted September 8, 2010 Wow, everything that was done by you, sucked to be honest. The rest that was made by 5 or so members are really good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mati Posted September 8, 2010 Share Posted September 8, 2010 Wow, everything that was done by you, sucked to be honest. The rest that was made by 5 or so members are really good. It isnt that bad. I like your ideas Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuisBellic Posted September 8, 2010 Author Share Posted September 8, 2010 (edited) @Sckarface this is is first gta story i put on here so its not that good i'll try making it better though @mati1501 keep up the good work on your topic Edited September 8, 2010 by LuisBellic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TommyMufc-Champs Posted September 9, 2010 Share Posted September 9, 2010 You have done a great job! Well done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akavari Posted September 9, 2010 Share Posted September 9, 2010 why'd you change the logo, i liked the older one tbh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuisBellic Posted September 9, 2010 Author Share Posted September 9, 2010 why'd you change the logo, i liked the older one tbh i thought the new one looked more mafia but i might change it back EDIT @TommyMufc-Champs thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drift-Kingz Posted September 9, 2010 Share Posted September 9, 2010 Yeah the logo you have currently isn't that... "GTA". Plus, why did you remove my headings? More on the topic, I don't even like it that much. Don't take it personal but maybe you should organize it better and add color and more GFX and whatnot. All I see is nothing.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuisBellic Posted September 10, 2010 Author Share Posted September 10, 2010 (edited) i added some of the music does anyone have any songs for JNR? EDIT: i might change my logo back and i might add phil bell and ray boccino as characters they will appear on jimmy pegorinos missions EDIT: and i might add random characters EDIT: I also added the first mission tell me if you like it Edited September 10, 2010 by LuisBellic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Lolwut Pear Posted September 10, 2010 Share Posted September 10, 2010 Have you thought about the idea that Jon Gravelli can get you to buy Mafia Fronts or Assets, like in VC? Would be a good idea. Add some sons into The Journey too, since it could also have classical-like songs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuisBellic Posted September 10, 2010 Author Share Posted September 10, 2010 Have you thought about the idea that Jon Gravelli can get you to buy Mafia Fronts or Assets, like in VC?Would be a good idea. Add some sons into The Journey too, since it could also have classical-like songs. yea i might add that and i might add the journey Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuisBellic Posted September 11, 2010 Author Share Posted September 11, 2010 (edited) post any ideas you have for my topic if i like them i will add them to the topic and credit you EDIT: i need ideas for missions that could cross over with gta iv tlad and tbogt Edited September 11, 2010 by LuisBellic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NinjaWJ Posted September 11, 2010 Share Posted September 11, 2010 good start but dont mean to sound like a history buff or something but why is the WW2 SMG (Thompson) in the game? A lot of them were destroyed/sold/kept as antiques after the Korean War with limited seeing action in Vietnam. The gun would be an antique by now and should be in a museum not on the streets Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuisBellic Posted September 11, 2010 Author Share Posted September 11, 2010 good start but dont mean to sound like a history buff or something but why is the WW2 SMG (Thompson) in the game? A lot of them were destroyed/sold/kept as antiques after the Korean War with limited seeing action in Vietnam. The gun would be an antique by now and should be in a museum not on the streets i know it's old but i added it because it fits the mafia theme of the story but even tho they are antiques they can still be made Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Lolwut Pear Posted September 11, 2010 Share Posted September 11, 2010 post any ideas you have for my topic if i like them i will add them to the topic and credit youEDIT: i need ideas for missions that could cross over with gta iv tlad and tbogt Let´s see... We never really know how the heroin got into the Angels of Death´s hands when the Triads had it first... But that´s for my DLC idea. There are a few plot holes in terms of how the Gambetti´s had a connection with the ULPC, or knew about the Russian´s heroin depots in Alderney. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuisBellic Posted September 11, 2010 Author Share Posted September 11, 2010 (edited) post any ideas you have for my topic if i like them i will add them to the topic and credit youEDIT: i need ideas for missions that could cross over with gta iv tlad and tbogt Let´s see... We never really know how the heroin got into the Angels of Death´s hands when the Triads had it first... But that´s for my DLC idea. There are a few plot holes in terms of how the Gambetti´s had a connection with the ULPC, or knew about the Russian´s heroin depots in Alderney. You have a DLC Idea??? what is it about? EDIT: and i might add that russian ulpc thing in my story Edited September 11, 2010 by LuisBellic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Lolwut Pear Posted September 11, 2010 Share Posted September 11, 2010 No, I´d ather not talk about.It´s more of a secret. Anyway, what timeframe is the storyline on? During the time where Niko is in Broker-Dukes-Bohan, after "Blow Your Cover", or after The Ballad of Gay Tony starts (Three Leaf Clover)? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuisBellic Posted September 11, 2010 Author Share Posted September 11, 2010 (edited) No, I´d ather not talk about.It´s more of a secret. Anyway, what timeframe is the storyline on? During the time where Niko is in Broker-Dukes-Bohan, after "Blow Your Cover", or after The Ballad of Gay Tony starts (Three Leaf Clover)? it starts about the same time niko starts working for packie and ends a few days after gta iv ends EDIT: maybe sammy could do a mission for ray bulgarin where he kills the chef who sold the diamonds to gay tony and luis then chop his head off with an ax and take it to the building Edited September 11, 2010 by LuisBellic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyler Posted September 11, 2010 Share Posted September 11, 2010 i know it's old but i added it because it fits the mafia theme of the story but even tho they are antiques they can still be made No they can't be made anymore, because no one will produce a sixty year old model of a sub machine gun. There is zero chance of ever seeing a gang member with a Thompson, mp40, or type 100... but, eating my own words I realised that there is also zero chance that a gang member would have a rocket launcher. But, a rocket launcher is much easier to come by today than a Thompson... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kwandilibro Posted September 11, 2010 Share Posted September 11, 2010 i know it's old but i added it because it fits the mafia theme of the story but even tho they are antiques they can still be made No they can't be made anymore, because no one will produce a sixty year old model of a gun. Den where dem niggaz get dem choppas from? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuisBellic Posted September 11, 2010 Author Share Posted September 11, 2010 (edited) i know it's old but i added it because it fits the mafia theme of the story but even tho they are antiques they can still be made No they can't be made anymore, because no one will produce a sixty year old model of a sub machine gun. There is zero chance of ever seeing a gang member with a Thompson, mp40, or type 100... but, eating my own words I realised that there is also zero chance that a gang member would have a rocket launcher. But, a rocket launcher is much easier to come by today than a Thompson... well i have seen some video's on youtube of people using thompson's i think they are just hard to get what if it could be a rare weapon in the game that could be found in the museum in the diamond deal or only the mafia familes have them EDIT: but gta aint a real game so it does not have to be the same as in real life EDIT: and im going to respond with personal messages because i dont want too many double posts on here Edited September 11, 2010 by LuisBellic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuisBellic Posted September 11, 2010 Author Share Posted September 11, 2010 UPDATE: I added the links to the location's of the gambetti mansion's Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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