Tyla Posted August 19, 2010 Share Posted August 19, 2010 I think you should keep the currency the same, without the decimals. It's all in US Dollars anyway. But the idea about the vehicles and weapons is a pretty good way of showcasing the different models from each game. You should keep it simple though; if someone from a different city wants to buy a car from a different market they only have to pay double the price. Have you had any further thoughts about businesses and rackets? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slingaa Posted August 19, 2010 Share Posted August 19, 2010 Well, I posted my idea for increasing the number of assets you begin with to 10. Anyway, I think Tyla should replace Kaizer Chief on the staff bench, as Tyla's helped a lot recently and Kaizer Chief hasn't even shown up yet. He might even be the hacker.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Landstalker Posted August 19, 2010 Author Share Posted August 19, 2010 (edited) Ok. The monetary system was to make the different weapons and vehicles prices for the different cities. In other words; VC Sentinel $150 = LC Sentinel $300 = SA Sentinel $450 LC Burrito $240 = VC Burrito $120 = SA Burrito $480 SA Moonbeam $300 = LC Moonbeam $150 = VC Moonbeam $100 Rackets and Businesses? No. I don't any plan, right now, for them. Ideas are welcome, though. EDIT: Thanks, Tyla. Why not? Edited August 19, 2010 by Landstalker Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyla Posted August 19, 2010 Share Posted August 19, 2010 What Slingaa suggested sounds reasonable and practical concerning the businesses and rackets. With 10 assets to start off with that would pretty much amount to earning back what you paid for the racket in the first place in a space of around a month. It would make them more appealing and give them a greater role in the build up your gang concept. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slingaa Posted August 19, 2010 Share Posted August 19, 2010 Thanks. Just got this beast pinned. All credit to girishb. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Landstalker Posted August 19, 2010 Author Share Posted August 19, 2010 What Slingaa suggested sounds reasonable and practical concerning the businesses and rackets. With 10 assets to start off with that would pretty much amount to earning back what you paid for the racket in the first place in a space of around a month. It would make them more appealing and give them a greater role in the build up your gang concept. Again Slingaa also mentionned something about the story count bonusses. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slingaa Posted August 19, 2010 Share Posted August 19, 2010 I was just thinking, I can't see anyone getting 100 stories, let alone for the same gang. Plus, I'm a bit confused about what hood density is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyler Posted August 19, 2010 Share Posted August 19, 2010 Wish I was a staff member Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Landstalker Posted August 19, 2010 Author Share Posted August 19, 2010 (edited) They are nothing. I had planned something about this but I finally realized it as only going to fail. I'm going to change these rewards after I'm done with the vehicles and weapons. I was planning that if a 'hood had 1 of density, the'hood would be easily taken and that a 'hood with 100 would be really hard to take, etc... Edited August 19, 2010 by Landstalker Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slingaa Posted August 19, 2010 Share Posted August 19, 2010 Ah, alright, I get it now. I'm off to bed now, I hope I see the weapons and vehicles up when I wake up! xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WelcomeToLibertyCity Posted August 19, 2010 Share Posted August 19, 2010 This looks amazing guys. Very well done. I have decided to join the Forellis at Marco's bistro in Portland please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Landstalker Posted August 19, 2010 Author Share Posted August 19, 2010 Unoriginal44 and WelcomeToLibertyCity were added to their respective gangs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UNRATED69 Posted August 19, 2010 Share Posted August 19, 2010 I'll join the Diablos at the El Burro contact point. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Landstalker Posted August 19, 2010 Author Share Posted August 19, 2010 (edited) UNRATED69 added to his gang. EDIT: Sorry for the double post. I thought I was editing. EDIT 2: Could someone code me these things? I'm a little bit tired of typing and I want to start my chapters with the Red Jacks. I made, by myself, BUYSAG V1 and BUYSAG V2, alone. It is now my turn to sit back and relax. I'll add the artwork for the categories. Just add colors to the "Land, Water, Toy and Air sections". Also, if you want, put them (cars and sections) in alphabetical order. Thanks. For the prices, give them one that is fitting the car value. For the availability, just put 3. San Andreas Vehicles: Land: Alpha Banshee Buffalo Bullet Cheetah Comet Euros Hotknife Hotring Racer Infernus Phoenix Super GT Turismo ZR-350 Windsor Bobcat Huntley Landstalker Mesa Patriot Piccador Rancher Romero Sadler Walton Yosemite Blade Broadway Remington Savanna Tahoma Tornado Voodoo Elegy Flash Jester Stratum Sultan Uranus Berkley's RC Van Burrito Hotdog Mr. Whoopee Newsvan Pony Rumpo Securicar Benson Boxville Black Boxville Cement Truck Combine Harvester DFT-30 Dozer Dumper Flatbed Linerunner Mule Packer Roadtrain Tanker Tractor Yankee Blista Compact Bravura Buccaneer Cadrona Clover Club Esperanto Feltzer Fortune Hermes Hustler Majestic Manana Previon Sabre Green Sabre Stallion Tampa Virgo Admiral Elegant Emperor Glendale Greenwood Intruder Merit Nebula Oceanic Perennial Premier Primo Regina Sentinel Solaire Stafford Stretch Sunrise Vincent Washington Willard Baggage Brown Streak Bus Cabbie Forklift Freight Sweeper Taxi Tow Truck Trashmaster Tug Tram Utility Van Bandito BF Injection Bloodring Banger Caddy Camper Dune Journey Kart Monster Mothership Mower Quad Sandking Vortex Bike BF-400 BMX Faggio FCR 900 Freeway HPV1000 Mountain Bike NRG-500 PCJ 600 Pizzaboy Sanchez Wayfarer Ambulance Barrack OL Enforcer FBI Rancher FBI Truck Police Car (LSPD) Police Car (SFPD) Police Car (LVPD) SWAT Tank Air: Andromeda AT-400 Beagle Cropduster Dodo Hydra Nevada Rustler Shamal Skimmer Stunt Plane Cargobob Hunter Leviathan Maverick News Chopper Police Maverick Raindance Sea Sparrow Sparrow Water: Coastguard Dinghy Jetmax Launch Marquis Predator Reefer Speeder Squalo Tropic Toy: RC Bandit RC Baron RC Goblin RC Raider RC Tiger RC Cam ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Liberty City Vehicles: Land: Borgnine Taxi Banshee Cheetah Deimos SP Infernus Phobos VT Stinger Bobcat Landstalker Patriot Blista Moonbeam Panlantic Pony Rumpo Securicar Toyz Flatbed Linerunner Mr. Wongs Mule Trashmaster Yankee Esperanto Hellenbach GT Idaho Kuruma Manana Perennial Sentinel Stallion Stretch Thunder Rodd V8 Ghost Angel Avenger Faggio Freeway Manchez Noodleboy PCJ 600 Pizzaboy Sanchez Bickle '76 Bus Cabbie Coach Mr. Whoopee Taxi Ballot Van BF Injection Campaign Van Hearse Cartel Cruiser Diablo Stallion Forelli Excess Hoods Rumpo XL Leone Sentinel Sindacco Argentino Triad Fish Van Yakuza Stinger Yardie Lobo Ambulance Barrack OL Enforcer FBI Cruiser Firetruck Police Car Police Maverick Rhino El Train Water: Predator Reefer Speeder Ferry Ghost Missing Air: Maverick VCN Maverick Police Maverick Dead Dodo Toy: RC Bandit ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Vice City Vehicles: I'll make it! Edited August 20, 2010 by Landstalker Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Landstalker Posted August 20, 2010 Author Share Posted August 20, 2010 (edited) Alright! Everyone's three first chapters are going to be rated in a special way. The staff member that will post his or her rates will only hand out cash and add a little comment if they want. The staff member will not take in count the errors made the writers'. Tyla~ Three chapters; $39, $43, $48! mrpain~ Three chapters; $30, $34, $41 Slingaa~ Chapter one; $15! This is a sh*tty attempt to be the leader of the San Andreas Army. Hope to see you write better chapters. The buyings and sellings will be made when the vehicles list will be made. ~Cheers, Landstalker~ ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- These two chapters are my two first out of three for the writers bonus since the V2 was hacked. Also, these two chapters are two I am writing since the last ones which were about the 'hood war with the Grove Street Families. I know they are short and, surely, having many errors. I'll try to get my writing "style" back by the time. Red Jacks - Wichita Gardens Chapter one - Welcome To Liberty City My name is Ale Porton. I was 18 years old and was coming from San Fierro, San Andreas. I was taking vacations. I was working at Otto's Autos and lived with a freind of mine. We were in 2001. The first day of 2001, in fact. I was on a plane going to Liberty City to see my family in Portland. I was in Saint Mark's district when a corrupted cop found me "suspect" and arrested me, just in front of my family's house. I spent a couple of weeks, in a cell of the Trenton Police Station, getting dialy visits from my family, before they sent me to Staunton Island. I was on a convoy, protected by two police cars, in a Enforcer. This is when my true life started. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Red Jacks - Wichita Gardens Hideout Chapter two - Give Me Liberty In the middle of the Callahan Bridge, nearly the three quarter of the bridge made, the convoy got attacked. Some Uptown Yardies wanted to free a prisoner who was important to them. Even if the cops were 12 with .357 handguns, the attackers managed to kill them all, with their Colt .45. I took the opportunity to flee with a friend that I had made in the Trenton Police Station cell I had lived for the four last weeks. When we reached Staunton Island, my friend, D-Ice, the brother of D-Ice the leader of, and a leader himself of the Red Jacks, proposed me to go to Shoreside Vale. I accepted without hesitation. Luckily, for us, a member of the Red Jacks, who heard of the convoy moving us here, was in a car. D-Ice identified the car as a Hoodz Rumpo XL. The driver parked the car near us and we entered in the back of the van. On hour after, we reached Shoreside Vale and were at the Wichita Gardens. They told me to follow them into a building. This is what I made. Edited August 20, 2010 by Landstalker Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mrpain Posted August 20, 2010 Share Posted August 20, 2010 Expect a PM from me about the lists very soon Landstalker. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slingaa Posted August 20, 2010 Share Posted August 20, 2010 Could I switch to the Loco Syndicate at the Crack Palace please? I didn't realise you'd put it up again and I can't think of any realistic stories for the Army. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Landstalker Posted August 20, 2010 Author Share Posted August 20, 2010 mrpain~ Alright. Slingaa~ That's ok. Can you rate my chapters? Jus post them and I'll add the cash to my gang. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slingaa Posted August 20, 2010 Share Posted August 20, 2010 Landstaker Chapter 1 - $15. Very short and no description. Chapter 2 - $15. Same as before. I hope you get back to your usual style soon! EDIT: Same as before, could I sell my Rocket Launcher, Burrito, Picador, Tahoma, Speeder and Micro SMG please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Landstalker Posted August 20, 2010 Author Share Posted August 20, 2010 Any buy and sell changes will be made when the Liberty City vehicles and Vice City vehicles will be added. Liberty City Vehicles: Land: Borgnine Taxi Banshee Cheetah Deimos SP Infernus Phobos VT Stinger Bobcat Landstalker Patriot Blista Moonbeam Panlantic Pony Rumpo Securicar Toyz Flatbed Linerunner Mr. Wongs Mule Trashmaster Yankee Esperanto Hellenbach GT Idaho Kuruma Manana Perennial Sentinel Stallion Stretch Thunder Rodd V8 Ghost Angel Avenger Faggio Freeway Manchez Noodleboy PCJ 600 Pizzaboy Sanchez Bickle '76 Bus Cabbie Coach Mr. Whoopee Taxi Ballot Van BF Injection Campaign Van Hearse Cartel Cruiser Diablo Stallion Forelli Excess Hoods Rumpo XL Leone Sentinel Sindacco Argentino Triad Fish Van Yakuza Stinger Yardie Lobo Ambulance Barrack OL Enforcer FBI Cruiser Firetruck Police Car Police Maverick Rhino El Train Water: Predator Reefer Speeder Ferry Ghost Missing Air: Maverick VCN Maverick Police Maverick Dead Dodo Toy: RC Bandit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyla Posted August 20, 2010 Share Posted August 20, 2010 Just a short chapter involving some familiar faces. Can you guess what I'm doing yet? The Brothers Synthesised pop music filled the bustling floors of The Malibu, blaring out of speakers in each corner of the room. Dancers manned the stage, swaying to the beat. A man in a pearl white suit twinned with a purple shirt danced between two beautiful women, grinning as he walked the length of the dance floor, juggling two heavy briefcases in each hand. He jogged up the steps towards the booths, where two men were sat waiting for him. The man in the middle wildly knocked back tequila, pushing red rimmed glasses back up onto his nose after shaking his head over the table. The figure to his right looked far more serious, donning a dark black suit with an open collared grey shirt underneath. He didn’t share a smile with either man; he just stared blankly towards the dance floor and crossed his legs uneasily underneath the table. “Lance Vance, baby.” announced the man with the cases, shuffling into the booth next to the man in the middle. He extended a hand as he placed the cases down beside him; it was snubbed by the figure on the right but welcomed by the other. “Ken. Ken Rosenberg. This is my business associate, Giorgio Forelli.” Giorgio rolled his head in Lance’s direction, sizing him up for a few moments, and then turning away. “Did you see me out there man?” “Yeah!” Rosenberg downed another shot of tequila, “You sure can move, Lance.” “That’s why they call me Lance Vance Dance, brother.” he chuckled, “The ladies love me.” “And I’m sure they’ll love you even more if you’ve got what you say you do?” “Oh I do, man. I do.” Lance shuffled across the seat closer to Rosenberg. “Twenty keys of pure white snow, been off the market two years now. A deal with this powder in the mix won’t see no heat, man. No strings attached.” He pulled one of the cases up onto his lap and opened it up, showing off a vast quantity of Cocaine packed inside. A large shaven headed black man watched from the other side of the dance floor as Lance grinned through gold teeth, standing there to make sure the Forelli’s didn’t just take off with the drugs there and then. “You like?” “I like.” Rosenberg nodded and smiled. “We represent some very important people from Liberty City who would be very interested in dealing with you and your brother for this amount of product. How about we further discuss this matter in the presence of my partner, Juan Garcia Cortez? We’ll be at his yacht down in Ocean Beach. “I can go for that.” “Great!” Rosenberg quickly downed a final shot of tequila before tapping his associate on the shoulder. Giorgio got up from the booth and Ken followed; the two men left the club. The large figure from the shadows stepped onto the dance floor and joined Lance in the booth, taking a seat and folding muscular arms. “So...” he sighed “So...” “So who are we dealing with here, Lance?” “Rich Liberty City mobsters, bro. Suits with gold plated greens!” “Oh yeah?” the man’s attitude was far more cautious and cynical than Lance’s. “How much are they prepared to pay?” “I don’t know.” Lance took a swig from a cocktail. “We gotta meet ‘em at some yacht down in Ocean Beach.” “Okay, Lance.” “Chill, Vic!” Lance handed him a cocktail, “We’re gonna be ri-iiiiich!” Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Landstalker Posted August 20, 2010 Author Share Posted August 20, 2010 (edited) Just a short chapter involving some familiar faces. Can you guess what I'm doing yet? I can't guess it! I know it! I won't spoil it though. Tyla~ Great chapter but lack some words. You've made two errors. "Synthesised" which is suposed to be "Synthesized" and "no heat". It's suposed to be "any heat". $33 is your reward. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- This is my last chapter protected by the anti-error ratings. Red Jacks - Wichita Gardens Chapter three - D-Ice's Boys I entered the building and followed them in the elevator. We reached the tenth floor which was the last one and walked to room number 160 which was in wing number 4. Insied, they told me it was going to be my new home and that they had a job for me. I slept a little bit and, when I woke up, found some red clean clothes, a weapon, a car key and a note on my kitchen table. I put the clothes, took the Colt .45, took the note and looked at it. Some of our men are back from their vacation in San Andreas. Go pick 'em up at the airport and bring them back there. Only remember one thing; no one messes with the Red Jacks. No one! Your Rumpo will be parked near the entrance. Your pay will depend on how well you've done. I departed my room, headed to the elevator, looked for ym Hoods Rumpo XL, entered in and drove to the airport. The way to get there was confusing. Especially in Cedar Grove and Wichita Gardens. When I arrived at the airport, the car parked on the sideway, I waited for over ten minutes until they found me. We drove back to the Hideout. Since I kne wthey were coming back from San Andreas, I add to ask them, "I heard you guys are comin' back from San Andreas. How was it? Did you visited San Fierro?" "How do you know that? Aren't you a newbie?" asked the one to my right. He shacked and pulled his Colt .45 and pointed it on my head. "Yeah! I'm a newbie! I helped D-Ice to get out of jail too!" I yelled. My heart was sanking rapidly as the possibility of dying was 50%. "Don't shoot him!" yelled another one. "Alright! Yes, we've been to San Fierro. We visited Wang Cars and Otto's Autos, as a mission to investigate which one would be the best to take over." "Wang Cars is controlled by the Grove Street Families. Otto's Autos is controlled by no gangs, yet. There are the Da Nang Boys, a vietnamese gang that could take it over though. They are at war with the San Fierro Triads. I was working there too." He didn't have the time to say anything as we were back and that I parked the car and exited it. "You'll get you pay later..." mumbled the third one. I knew he did not trust me. Edited August 20, 2010 by Landstalker Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyla Posted August 20, 2010 Share Posted August 20, 2010 San Andreas Vehicles [tableb] Air Vehicle Availability Price Andromeda 3 $50,000 AT-400 3 $15,000 Beagle 3 $14,500 Cargobob 3 $14,000 Cropduster 3 $10,000 Dodo 3 $10,500 Hunter 3 $100,000 Hydra 3 $100,000 Leviathan 3 $13,000 Maverick 3 $12,500 Nevada 3 $12,750 News Chopper 3 $13,450 Police Maverick 3 $14,000 Raindance 3 $13,600 Rustler 3 $1,900 Sea Sparrow 3 $6,400 Shamal 3 $10,500 Skimmer 3 $7,000 Sparrow 3 $5,500 Stunt Plane 3 $3,000 [/tableb][tableb]Land Vehicle Availability Price Admiral 3 $300 Alpha 3 $350 Ambulance 3 $500 Baggage 3 $200 Barracks OL 3 $3,000 Bandito 3 $500 Banshee 3 $800 Benson 3 $700 Berkley's RC Van 3 $300 BF-400 3 $600 BF Injection 3 $450 Bike 3 $35 Blade 3 $450 Blista Compact 3 $350 Bloodring Banger 3 $750 BMX 3 $45 Bobcat 3 $200 Boxville 3 $650 Bravura 3 $350 Broadway 3 $350 Brown Streak 3 $5,000 Buccaneer 3 $300 Buffalo 3 $500 Bullet 3 $800 Burrito 3 $200 Bus 3 $375 Cabbie 3 $500 Caddy 3 $200 Cadrona 3 $500 Camper 3 $200 Cement Truck 3 $375 Clover 3 $150 Cheetah 3 $750 Club 3 $450 Combine Harvester 3 $2,000 Comet 3 $550 DFT-30 3 $375 Dozer 3 $275 Dumper 3 $230 Dune 3 $450 Elegant 3 $450 Elegy 3 $500 Emperor 3 $550 Enforcer 3 $1,500 Euros 3 $450 Faggio 3 $100 FBI Rancher 3 $900 FBI Truck 3 $2,000 FCR-900 3 $700 Feltzer 3 $450 Flash 3 $600 Flatbed 3 $700 Forklift 3 $150 Fortune 3 $500 Freeway 3 $500 Freight 3 $5,000 Glendale 3 $300 Greenwood 3 $200 Hermes 3 $275 Hot Dog 3 $275 Hotknife 3 $500 HPV 1000 3 $750 Huntley 3 $450 Hustler 3 $500 Infernus 3 $800 Intruder 3 $375 Jester 3 $600 Journey 3 $500 Kart 3 $300 Landstalker 3 $400 Linerunner 3 $700 Majestic 3 $250 Manana 3 $175 Merit 3 $350 Mesa Grande 3 $275 Monster 3 $650 Moonbeam 3 $300 Mountain Bike 3 $50 Mower 3 $100 Mr. Whoopee 3 $700 Mule 3 $500 Nebula 3 $250 News Van 3 $250 NRG-500 3 $775 Oceanic 3 $300 Packer 3 $950 Patriot 3 $650 PCJ-600 3 $650 Perennial 3 $225 Phoenix 3 $600 Picador 3 $350 Pizzaboy 3 $300 Police Car (LSPD) 3 $900 Police Car (LVPD) 3 $950 Police Car (SFPD) 3 $900 Pony 3 $300 Premier 3 $400 Previon 3 $400 Quad 3 $450 Rancher 3 $375 Regina 3 $250 Remington 3 $400 Rhino 3 $9,000 Roadtrain 3 $350 Romero 3 $250 Rumpo 3 $200 Sabre 3 $500 Sanchez 3 $450 Sandking 3 $800 Savanna 3 $450 Securicar 3 $1,600 Sentinel 3 $550 Slamvan 3 $575 Solair 3 $300 Stratford 3 $300 Stallion 3 $400 Stratum 3 $375 Stretch 3 $600 Sultan 3 $600 Sunrise 3 $550 Super GT 3 $800 SWAT Tank 3 $2,000 Sweeper 3 $45 Tahoma 3 $350 Tampa 3 $400 Tanker 3 $400 Taxi 3 $600 Tow Truck 3 $230 Tractor 3 $100 Tram 3 $5,000 Trashmaster 3 $750 Tug 3 $150 Turismo 3 $750 Uranus 3 $550 Utility Van 3 $250 Vincent 3 $350 Virgo 3 $200 Voodoo 3 $275 Yosemite 3 $300 Wayfarer 3 $400 Walton 3 $250 Washington 3 $500 Willard 3 $350 Yankee 3 $450 ZR-350 3 $750 [/tableb][tableb]Toy Vehicle Availability Price RC Bandit 3 $100 RC Baron 3 $150 RC Goblin 3 $175 RC Raider 3 $175 RC Tiger 3 $100 [/tableb][tableb]Water Vehicle Availability Price Coast Guard 3 $1,500 Dinghy 3 $500 Jetmax 3 $1,500 Launch 3 $1,500 Marquis 3 $1,500 Predator 3 $1,500 Reefer 3 $1,500 Speeder 3 $2,500 Squalo 3 $1,500 Tropic 3 $1,500 Vortex 3 $3,500 [/tableb] I'll take care of the LC Vehicles too in a short while. I'm typing in the dark... my bulb went Apologies in advance if there are any mistakes in the coding, I'm still learning. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Landstalker Posted August 20, 2010 Author Share Posted August 20, 2010 All the codings are seeming ok. Oh... And since you're a staff member since you took Kaizer Chief's place, you can rate chapters too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WelcomeToLibertyCity Posted August 20, 2010 Share Posted August 20, 2010 I noticed my name isn't green under the gangs list. Just saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UNRATED69 Posted August 20, 2010 Share Posted August 20, 2010 (edited) Chapter 1: Break Out Derrick paced back and forth in his cell, getting even angrier as time went by. “Yo, you better let me out of this bitch right now, or I'm gonna f*ck yo ass up!” he yelled at the guard, and was answered with a calm “Sir, please quiet down.” Derrick didn't listen, and just yelled even louder. “Shut yo bitch ass mouth, you ain't sh*t! My homies comin' down here, and they's gonna kick yo ass!” The officer just ignored him, and went back to reading his book. Derrick realized his yelling was going nowhere, so he settled for rattling the bars, hoping they would come lose so he could kill the guard. Derrick thought “He's gonna be sorry when I bust outta here. Mothaf*cker won't be so tough then.” Ten minutes of angry rattling and obscenities had done nothing to the guards calm disposition, so Derrick just kept it up hoping it would work some sort of magic, when he heard a commotion in the hall leading to the cell block. Which was followed by gunshots. The guard immediately dropped his sandwich and pulled out his gun, but was too late as he was riddled with bullets. He slumped against the wall, and slid to the floor, leaving a red streak on the concrete. Derrick watched with glee as his fellow gangsters walked into the room, grabbed the keys, and opened his cell. “Someone order a jailbreak?” Tiny said. “You sure took your time about it. Thought you'd forgotten bout me.” Derrick replied. “Couldn't forget about my bro. I ain't about to let ya rot in a cell. C'mon, let's get outta here. Tiny, Derrick, and Jackson ran outside to the still running Stallion, painted with the Diablos' signature flame paint job, and got in, Derrick taking the wheel. “Step on it man” Tiny shouted as 4 police cruisers pulled out of the lot in front of the station, sirens blaring. Derrick slammed on the gas, and the muscle car shot away from the curb and into the heavy traffic. He swerved around cars that honked as he passed, sometimes moving onto the other side of the road, testing his driving skills as he avoided the oncoming cars. The police matched him in his maneuvers, staying hot on his tail as he tried to shake them. Seeing that good driving wouldn't get them anywhere, Jackson and Tiny pulled out their Colts and started shooting at the pursuing cops. They took out the tires of two of the cars, which slid around like they were on ice, and crashed into the civilian cars. The passengers of the two remaining cars shot back, taking out the back window of the Stallion and causing the three occupants to duck down.“We almost there, but you gotta take out those f*ckin' cops!” Derrick said as he approached the Hepburn Heights district where their gang had made their base. Tiny and Jackson reloaded their pistols, and continued their assault on the cars. One of the cars tried to swerve to avoid the bullets, but crashed into another car, and flew into the air, landing on it's roof at the side of the road. The other car had gotten alongside the three Diablos, but was decommissioned as both the occupants were killed by the people they were chasing. The gangsters cheered as they pulled into the parking lot of the apartment building where they all lived. “Damn, that was some crazy sh*t!” Derrick said, stepping out of the car with his homies. They stepped back to asses the damage. “That sh*t ain't rollin' again” said Jackson. “F*ck!” exclaimed Derrick “I liked that car. “Don't worry man, I'll get you a new one tomorrow.” Tiny said, as they all stepped into the building, each going to their respective apartments. As they parted, Tiny said “Hey Derrick, next time you go to kill someone, make sure they're dead before you leave. I don't wanna have to do this again any time soon.” “Whatever man, you full of sh*t” Derrick joked, and headed down the hall to his door, unlocked it, and stepped inside. Edit: I'm going to buy the Mac 10 and Grenades. Edited August 20, 2010 by UNRATED69 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Landstalker Posted August 20, 2010 Author Share Posted August 20, 2010 (edited) UNRATED69~ Nice lenght for a first chapter nice description. Since it's your first chapter out of three which is protected by the anti-error ratings, I will rate you chapter as if there was no errors at all. $45x10=$450 EDIT: Sorry for the double post I am bad lucked today. Edited August 20, 2010 by Landstalker Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Landstalker Posted August 20, 2010 Author Share Posted August 20, 2010 I noticed my name isn't green under the gangs list. Just saying. The gang leader will be the first one to post a chapter between you and Unoriginal44. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Osric Posted August 20, 2010 Share Posted August 20, 2010 I can't think of anything for the Purple Nines, so I will switch to the Liberty City Army at Staunton Military Surplus. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyla Posted August 20, 2010 Share Posted August 20, 2010 Liberty City Vehicles [tableb] Air Vehicle Availability Price Dodo 3 $10,500 Maverick 3 $12,500 Police Maverick 3 $14,000 [/tableb][tableb]Land Vehicle Availability Price Ambulance 3 $500 Angel 3 $650 Avenger 3 $1,000 Ballot Van 3 $500 Banshee 3 $800 Barracks OL 3 $1,400 BF Injection 3 $450 Bickle '76 3 $700 Blista 3 $400 Bobcat 3 $500 Borgnine Taxi 3 $1,000 Bus 3 $1,000 Cabbie 3 $650 Campaign Van 3 $700 Cartel Cruiser 3 $500 Cheetah 3 $750 Coach 3 $1,100 Deimos SP 3 $650 Diablo Stallion 3 $550 El Train 3 $5,000 Enforcer 3 $1,500 Esperanto 3 $150 Faggio 3 $250 FBI Cruiser 3 $1,000 Firetruck 3 $1,000 Flatbed 3 $700 Forelli Excess 3 $600 Hearse 3 $400 Hellenbach GT 3 $650 Hoods Rumpo XL 3 $400 Idaho 3 $150 Infernus 3 $1,200 Kuruma 3 $475 Landstalker 3 $400 Leone Sentinel 3 $600 Linerunner 3 $700 Manana 3 $150 Manchez 3 $600 Moonbeam 3 $300 Mr. Whoopee 3 $700 Mr. Wongs 3 $500 Mule 3 $500 Noodleboy 3 $250 Panlatic 3 $400 Patriot 3 $650 PCJ-600 3 $650 Perennial 3 $225 Phobos VT 3 $750 Pizzaboy 3 $300 Police Car 3 $900 Pony 3 $300 Rhino 3 $9,000 Rumpo 3 $250 Sanchez 3 $450 Securicar 3 $1,600 Sentinel 3 $550 Sindacco Argentino 3 $600 Stallion 3 $400 Stinger 3 $750 Taxi 3 $600 Thunder Rodd 3 $650 Toyz 3 $500 Trashmaster 3 $750 Triad Fish Van 3 $400 V8 Ghost 3 $1,400 Yardie Lobo 3 $400 Yakuza Stinger 3 $800 [/tableb][tableb]Toy Vehicle Availability Price RC Bandit 3 $100 [/tableb][tableb]Water Vehicle Availability Price Ferry 3 $1,200 Predator 3 $1,500 Reefer 3 $1,000 Speeder 3 $2,500 [/tableb] There 'ya go Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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