2 Mission Packs - "Starting Again" and "Copy That"

[Spyro955]

My first two mission packs that are actually going to be distributed and I am hoping for some good reviews.

 

First Prologue mission is out! Check it out now!

And so is the second one now! Finally without problems!

 

 

"Starting Again" Storyline

 

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Mission 0 - The Beginning of New Life (Prologue)

 

Year 2006. You and your brother arrived into Los Santos from Vice City about a month ago, to escape from the problems with some local criminal organizations. You found a house, got a second-hand car. Everything goes the way you want it to go. Until now... You are Joseph Green, and you seek revenge.

 

The missions tie up with the storyline of "Copy That", so it is highly recommended that you play both of those parallel (number of missions will be the same)

 

 

"Copy That" Storyline

 

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Mission 0 - Back To Work (Prologue) - Due to some techincal issues, the release of the prologue will delay. After all the problems, this mission is out!

 

 

It's Year 2006. Your name is Inspector Matt Stewards. You are a regular cop, Unit 5, LSPD. After your holiday, its your time to come back to work. But you'll see that your task isn't easy...

 

Player will go through missions of various kinds, from crime scene blocking, through all-wanted pursuits, up to the robberies and barricade-hostage situations.

The missions tie up with the storyline of "Starting Again", so it is highly recommended that you play both of those parallel (number of missions will be the same)

 

 

 

Characters:

 

Joseph Green

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Playable Character in "Starting Again" storyline.

 

Airen Green

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Airen Green is Joseph's brother.

 

Vladimir Tupnicky

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Playable Character in "Starting Again" storyline, Mission ? - "Back to then"

Vladimir Tupnicky - 40 years old, head of Russian Mafia in Liberty City. The police couldn't do much to such a power back there. Lending money to people on huge interest was their main source of profit, same as harrassing and taking tribute from the commercials. One of the huge-interest loans was taken by Joseph and Airen Green, when they

 

Inspector Matt Stewards

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Playable Character in "Copy That" storyline.

Matt Stewards - 32 years old, cop in Unit 5 of LSPD. He's an Inspector after saving 6 hostages in the town hall hold-up. Working in PD for 14 years. His partner is Mike Lions for the last 10 years, and before that his partner was Chris Blake, killed in bank robbery, 14 May 1996. He's from a regular family. His parents, Mr and Mrs Stewards live in Vice City. Matt used to serve in VCPD, but then, after about 3 days he's got moved to Los Santos due to lack of policemen in that area. He was happy of the moving though.

 

Lieutenant Mike Lions

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Mike Lions - 30 years old, a regular cop, quite fatty donut-eater, also Matt's partner in Unit 5. Working in LSPD for 10 years, he's got to his Lieutenant rank.

 

Jane Howards

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Jane Howards - 29 years old, she's the LSPD dispatcher. Working in LSPD for 4 years, after studying law in San Andreas University. Always lived in Los Santos,

 

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Conclusion

 

I'm waiting for both positive and negative comments, and for the people to list some improvements for me. I'll look at those and include the help in the next missions.

Edited August 20, 2010 by Spyro955

[UNRATED69]

The missions are pretty good. There are a few grammatical errors, but nothing too major. One thing I would suggest is making the mission longer, with more things to do, but that's just my opinion.

 

Keep up the good work. I'm looking forward to more of these mission.

[Spyro955]

 

The missions are pretty good. There are a few grammatical errors, but nothing too major. One thing I would suggest is making the mission longer, with more things to do, but that's just my opinion.

 

Keep up the good work. I'm looking forward to more of these mission.

They will be much longer, those are just prologue missions, which are supposed to be short, just to briefly outline the storyline.

There will be more out tomorrow, Tuesday 17th August. Remember to come back!

[Jimmy_Leppard]

nice missions dude.

[Spyro955]

There will be no advance in the storylines for now, as I'm going on vacations to a place where SA+DYOM will be unavailable. But I promise the storylines will be continued further stage after the vacations and I'll write a message to follow my comeback.