Prasdana Posted August 29, 2010 Author Share Posted August 29, 2010 but I will post story when Nick mets Claude,Tommy,CJ,Toni and the last mision when he kill Fred Sampson Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prasdana Posted August 29, 2010 Author Share Posted August 29, 2010 Nick mets claude "4 Off-Road ZR350" (Nick phone is ringing and he answers it) Nick:hello? ?:you must be Nick Rosenberg Nick:yes,I'm.who are you? ?:I will tell you about myself if you win a race Nick:a race?What the f*ck?! ?:you better come to Tierra Robada,and I have a car for you Nick:what the hell you want?! ?:see you soon(close the phone) Nick:helo?helo?!!damn! (Nick arrive in Tierra Robada and the unknown person call him again) ?:good kid,you will have a race with 3 others street racers,all of you have same car.it call ZR-350 Nick:cool.I like that car :"yeah,if you win you can take it,but you beter get ready all of them have experience,espesially a guy who wears a black jacket (Nick stares at him) Nick:who is he? ?"his name is Claude,he is a top racer in illegal race,so good luck(close the phone) (Nick approaced Claude) Nick:so you must be Claude? Claude:(nod) Nick:I know you are a great racer but I know I will beat you in this race (Nick and Claude stare of eachothers until several mechanics separate them) Mechanic:this is a race not a wrestling match Nick:my bad (Nick,Claude,and 2 others racers get ready and they start the race and Nick wins the race) Nick:yeah!! Claude:(applaus and he wants shake Nick's hand) Nick:you are very good racer,maybe we can get a race sometimes(Nick shakes Claude's hand),will you say something? Claude:(back to his pink elegy and goes) Nick:is he a mute? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuisBellic Posted August 31, 2010 Share Posted August 31, 2010 keep up the good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prasdana Posted August 31, 2010 Author Share Posted August 31, 2010 keep up the good work thanks man,I'll post when he mets Tommy,CJ,and Toni and the last mission when he kills Fred Sampson Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prasdana Posted August 31, 2010 Author Share Posted August 31, 2010 "The Cousin Rosenbergs" (Nick's phone is ringing and he answers it) Nick:hello? Ken:hey Nick,how's Los Santos? Nick:Ken?good to hear you,I aint in Los Santos now.how's Vice? Ken:I'm in Las Venturas now,so where are you now? Nick:Las Venturas?really?ok,I'm in Tierra Robada,I'l go to Venturas now Ken:great,my new office close to Four Dragons Casino Nick:ok (Nick arrive in Ken's office and Ken hugs Nick) Ken:hehey,my favourite cousin long time no see you since 1985.are you a cop now? Nick:nah,my superior officer is an asshole and because of him I got fired,but now I'm working for jerks Ken:don't worry you'll get new job soon Nick:thanks Ken,how's Vice City?I was born and grew up in Vice City and I missed that city.Is Diaz still runs Vice? Ken:no,but.. (Tommy comes to Ken) Tommy:Ken I need you to.. Ken:oh Tommy,this is my cousin Nick and Nick this is the man who runs Vice City now.Tommy Vercetti Tommy:(shakes Nick's hand) nice to meet you,but me and Ken are busy now Nick:no problem Tommy:so Ken,I need you to.. (A Vercetti Gang member comes to Ken's office) Vercetti Gang member:boss,we have a problem! Tommy:what?! A Vercetti Gang member:Forelli Family attacked us in Las Venturas Airport now we still fight againt us,you better run now Tommy:I never back down and I never surrender!espesially from Forelli c'mon bring me to Las Venturas Airport! Nick:wait,Mr Vercetti,I'm a former cop so I know how to use guns Tommy:so what are you waiting for?!c'mon Nick! (Nick and Tommy arrive in Airport) Nick:damn,Police also in here! Tommy:relax,you are a former cop aren't you? Nick:yeah,I'm (Nick and Tommy shot all Forellis and Police then SWAT and a police Helicoper comes,Tommy have a Rocket Launcher and shoots them) Nick:damn!!what the hell are you thinking?!! Tommy:shut up!!they lost us now ok?! Nick:ahh man Tommy:c'mon get me back to Ken's office (they arrive in Ken's office) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
asdf1234asdf1234 Posted June 5, 2011 Share Posted June 5, 2011 Damn, dude, this is awesome make another part of the story 10/10 though the spelling is a bit bad but otherwise its good ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xgtamontariox Posted June 10, 2011 Share Posted June 10, 2011 It seems like you've chosen to write in script form, quite unique EDIT: Just edit your post insted of multiple posting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dannyz Posted June 11, 2011 Share Posted June 11, 2011 More Please! Good Work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KilnerLUFC Posted June 12, 2011 Share Posted June 12, 2011 You do realise this is an old topic, of which was ended by the OP. But whilst am here, WTF is this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ziggy455 Posted July 2, 2011 Share Posted July 2, 2011 Why do I get the feeling he paid all these people to compliment it? "I might have laughed if I'd have remembered how." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mrpain Posted July 2, 2011 Share Posted July 2, 2011 Why do I get the feeling he paid all these people to compliment it? Ahah I know right? Apparently people do not know how to read anymore. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ziggy455 Posted July 2, 2011 Share Posted July 2, 2011 Why do I get the feeling he paid all these people to compliment it? Ahah I know right? Apparently people do not know how to read anymore. OR actually know how to put two sentences together without making it work properly. "I might have laughed if I'd have remembered how." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rhoda Posted July 2, 2011 Share Posted July 2, 2011 I'm going to lock this to avoid useless comments building up. If the topic starter returns to finish his "story", I'll unlock it and see how things go, as this is shoddy and clunky at the best of times. I wouldn't hold my breath though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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