Revolver1 Posted June 24, 2016 Share Posted June 24, 2016 (edited) Okay lads. Let's stop the argument with a brand new review. Today I am reviewing FTA: It Can't Be Seen made by GHozT Let's not delay any further. -Writing: Very good. There are grammar mistakes here and then, but they don't really affect the quality of the dialogue much. The use of slang is very good, I haven't played any MP so far that has such good use of slang. -Presentation: Good. The camera angles are fine, but there are some unnecessary use of slow-mo. A Beautiful Day... -Length: Good. The mission lasts for 5 minutes. It's mostly cutscene, but it's the starting mission of the MP, so it contributes much to plot development. -Difficulty: Very easy. Cutscene only, so it's quite simple. Just sit back and enjoy the show. Though it's kinda boring comparing to other MPs' starting mission. -Variety: Good. There are some objects (maybe?), as well as many skins and vehicles were used. My brother... -Length: Good. Same as the last mission, this one lasts for around 5-6 minutes. -Difficulty: Easy. Mostly drive and a small fight. -Variety: Good. I like the way how the brawling site was made. It looked good. Unseen -Length: Good. The mission lasts for 5 minutes. -Difficulty: Easy. Mostly cutscene and some driving. -Variety: Decent. A few skins were used, nothing else out of the ordinary.] The mysterious man -Length: Good. The mission lasts for 5 minutes. There are quite a few plot holes that don't connect here. It affects greatly to the plot. -Difficulty: Easy. Again, mostly cutscene and some driving. -Variety: Decent. A burned house is supposed to look more... burned, but it looks pretty intact to me. Nevertherless, good use of objects. Objects are good, but the mission still lacks other things, so I cannot give a high rating. (Color will be added later) (To be continued once the first chapter is finished) Edited July 2, 2016 by Revolver1 Rocket man FI, The John David, FRANKLINCLINTON2 and 2 others 5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hdxt_Hardluck Posted June 28, 2016 Share Posted June 28, 2016 Seems there's a few reviewer here atm, i think i'll try my best to be, so if anyore need a review PM me or just informe me to do here * Greeting... The John David and Revolver1 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commo Posted July 16, 2016 Share Posted July 16, 2016 Hello. AznKei1,I'll be very thankful if you reviewed my first Act of Military Sniper Series (Act 1)when you've the time, Thanks =) Link: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/41682 , Skins(optional) : http://www.megafileupload.com/7ab5/Desktop.rar Rocket man FI 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rocket man FI Posted July 16, 2016 Share Posted July 16, 2016 http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/43198 This is small,But can someone review this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aila Posted July 24, 2016 Share Posted July 24, 2016 http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/43198 This is small,But can someone review this? The f*ck is this mission? Just shooting without any moral story and these enemies suddenly appeared in the front of me. They're a ninja? Lel. 0.69/10 Martin_Strada 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rockstar Team Posted December 18, 2016 Share Posted December 18, 2016 Hello, dear Aznkei I'm watching your reviews for a few years already. I started designing DYOM missions at 2010, but some time ago I decided to show to the DYOM community. Can I ask you to make a review of my complete storyline called Grand Theft Auto: San Andreas Prequel? I received 5 stars rating, but I wanna know what the professional like you thinks about this. Here's the link: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/44793 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Shizuku Posted December 18, 2016 Share Posted December 18, 2016 ^ Since AznKei1 rarely active, would you like me to make written reviews for you? Rockstar Team 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aftab Posted December 18, 2016 Share Posted December 18, 2016 Oh my, where was this topic before? Can you review my missions. http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/44996 And this http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/44586 Anyone can review and guide me with my mistakes in these missions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rockstar Team Posted December 19, 2016 Share Posted December 19, 2016 (edited) Light Side Riandy - OK, that's a good idea Edited December 19, 2016 by Rockstar Team Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Shizuku Posted December 19, 2016 Share Posted December 19, 2016 (edited) Alam the FighterWritting: - Found some mistakes like "Radio got the news that some fighter planes are heading towards the country." Should be; "We've got news from the radio that some fighter aircrafts are heading towards our country." Difficulty: MediumPros:- Decent English and decent presentations.Cons:- Sometimes, the enemy plane doesn't fly at all.- From the writting section, it can be found yet another mistake that Aftab should have spawned Hydras instead of Hunters.Rating: 4.5/10 (Could be better).Good luck for your new missions Aftab! I can't review "Talking Heads" since the mission crashes at the part somewhere when I drove a bike. Next up, "GTA: San Andreas Prequel". Edited December 19, 2016 by Light Syde Riandy Aftab 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Shizuku Posted January 12, 2017 Share Posted January 12, 2017 Due to my laptop being too old to play San Andreas, I've decided to stop reviewing missions and designing until I can buy a new one. May someone keeps this topic alive... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QED Posted January 12, 2017 Share Posted January 12, 2017 Syde, don't be a bad boi and review my MP. http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/45839 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Shizuku Posted January 12, 2017 Share Posted January 12, 2017 Did you even pay attention that my laptop cannot run sa smoothly just as it used to be? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QED Posted January 12, 2017 Share Posted January 12, 2017 Did you even pay attention that my laptop cannot run sa smoothly just as it used to be? Well, did it run smooth before or? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Shizuku Posted January 12, 2017 Share Posted January 12, 2017 Now it doesn't. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QED Posted January 12, 2017 Share Posted January 12, 2017 Now it doesn't. It does not work well only with San Andreas? If yes, reinstall it. If with all games, reinstall windows. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Shizuku Posted January 12, 2017 Share Posted January 12, 2017 No, I've reinstalled the os and the game for more than once and still runs slow. It's just that my laptop is too old. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QED Posted January 12, 2017 Share Posted January 12, 2017 Try to clear the dust inside it. It just wont simple make the game slow for no reason. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Springfield Posted January 30, 2017 Share Posted January 30, 2017 Here are some missions of Resident Evil: Biohazard Part 1: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/45507 Part 2: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/45508 Part 3; COming Soon Please review them! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rockstar Team Posted January 31, 2017 Share Posted January 31, 2017 Hi there, Leon I've played those 2 missions you sent and I gotta say they were pretty interesting. Especially since I'm the biggest fan of Resident Evil OK, so now it's time for the details: The idea - Amazing (it's good to see some rare mission pack at last) Mission length - Average (but don't worry, the beginning missions shouldn't be long, so good job) Difficulty - Very easy (but as I said before - these are the beginning missions, so don't worry) The grammar - Good (could be some improvements, but it's still understandable) Overall rating: 4/5! Keep up the good work Just try to improvise the english a little bit Good luck in your missions, Leon Can't wait to play part 3! Springfield 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Springfield Posted January 31, 2017 Share Posted January 31, 2017 (edited) @Rockstar Team - Thanks for the Review my friend . Well i'm also one of the biggest fan of Resident Evil. My favorite is it's Part 4 and 7 (which is released right now). the good thing is that i bought RE7 in first day when it released and complete the same game in the next day and 33 times i finished the RE4 . Well anyway, coming to the point that i already uploaded the Third Mission. You can go in the topic name: Resident Evil: Biohazard. It's pinned right now. Here is the link: http://gtaforums.com/topic/876075-resident-evil-biohazard/. I'll try to improve my grammar more. Once again Thanks for playing it. Stay tuned for complete version. Edited January 31, 2017 by Leon_Scott Kennedy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rockstar Team Posted January 31, 2017 Share Posted January 31, 2017 OK, I will check it out, Leon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bananaking13 Posted March 4, 2017 Share Posted March 4, 2017 Can somebody check out my MP? I'm in desperate need of help for it to survive: http://gtaforums.com/topic/882286-dyom-storyline-stories-of-anthony/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GonerZZ Posted June 1, 2017 Share Posted June 1, 2017 I might just do that, I love review DYOM MPs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.GreenGoo Posted August 13, 2017 Share Posted August 13, 2017 Is this Topic alive? Just curiosity... you know... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enriquewax Posted August 20, 2017 Share Posted August 20, 2017 Wondering what their sales plan looks like. 40 Mission RS bikes .. available this year? Federal 10 credit cap at 2500 should be available. I think the credit requires the bikes to be street-legal? Mission R bikes .. street-legal .. available after all 40 Mission RS bikes have been sold, next year? Federal 10 credit will have expired. General Scrotum 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Shizuku Posted August 20, 2017 Share Posted August 20, 2017 Do you even realize what section is this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nafil Posted November 9, 2017 Share Posted November 9, 2017 http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/50441 Can you make a video about this mission ? Thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PyThOn #TakeItEasy Posted November 9, 2017 Share Posted November 9, 2017 @Nafil - Looks like you came to wrong section, this is for reviews AND A QUESTION TO PLEDGE OF CHAOS, why other peoples are not allowed to make this topic alive, why can't normal users review each other mission? No offence just asking.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Scrotum Posted November 9, 2017 Share Posted November 9, 2017 (edited) AND A QUESTION TO PLEDGE OF CHAOS, why other peoples are not allowed to make this topic alive, why can't normal users review each other mission? No offence just asking.... --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- IMPORTANT NOTICE!!!(as for 26/03/2014) You don't have to request my permissions to be a reviewer anymore. Everyone can post reviews at this topic freely. That's all I have to say. For the future reviewers, I wish you the best of your reviews. Edited November 9, 2017 by Pledge of Chaos PyThOn #TakeItEasy 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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