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DYOM Mission Reviews


AznKei
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Okay lads. Let's stop the argument with a brand new review.

Today I am reviewing FTA: It Can't Be Seen made by GHozT

Let's not delay any further.

 

-Writing: Very good. There are grammar mistakes here and then, but they don't really affect the quality of the dialogue much. The use of slang is very good, I haven't played any MP so far that has such good use of slang.

-Presentation: Good. The camera angles are fine, but there are some unnecessary use of slow-mo.

 

A Beautiful Day...

-Length: Good. The mission lasts for 5 minutes. It's mostly cutscene, but it's the starting mission of the MP, so it contributes much to plot development.

-Difficulty: Very easy. Cutscene only, so it's quite simple. Just sit back and enjoy the show. Though it's kinda boring comparing to other MPs' starting mission.

-Variety: Good. There are some objects (maybe?), as well as many skins and vehicles were used.

 

My brother...

-Length: Good. Same as the last mission, this one lasts for around 5-6 minutes.

-Difficulty: Easy. Mostly drive and a small fight.

-Variety: Good. I like the way how the brawling site was made. It looked good.

 

Unseen

-Length: Good. The mission lasts for 5 minutes.

-Difficulty: Easy. Mostly cutscene and some driving.

-Variety: Decent. A few skins were used, nothing else out of the ordinary.]

 

The mysterious man

-Length: Good. The mission lasts for 5 minutes. There are quite a few plot holes that don't connect here. It affects greatly to the plot.

-Difficulty: Easy. Again, mostly cutscene and some driving.

-Variety: Decent. A burned house is supposed to look more... burned, but it looks pretty intact to me. Nevertherless, good use of objects. Objects are good, but the mission still lacks other things, so I cannot give a high rating.

 

(Color will be added later)

(To be continued once the first chapter is finished)

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Hdxt_Hardluck

Seems there's a few reviewer here atm, i think i'll try my best to be, so if anyore need a review PM me or just informe me to do here ;)*

Greeting...

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Rockstar Team

Hello, dear Aznkei :D I'm watching your reviews for a few years already. I started designing DYOM missions at 2010, but some time ago I decided to show to the DYOM community. Can I ask you to make a review of my complete storyline called Grand Theft Auto: San Andreas Prequel? I received 5 stars rating, but I wanna know what the professional like you thinks about this. Here's the link: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/44793

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Super Shizuku

^ Since AznKei1 rarely active, would you like me to make written reviews for you?

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Rockstar Team

Light Side Riandy - OK, that's a good idea :)

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Super Shizuku

Alam the Fighter

Writting: - Found some mistakes like "Radio got the news that some fighter planes are heading towards the country."
Should be; "We've got news from the radio that some fighter aircrafts are heading towards our country."

Difficulty: Medium

Pros:

- Decent English and decent presentations.

Cons:

- Sometimes, the enemy plane doesn't fly at all.
- From the writting section, it can be found yet another mistake that Aftab should have spawned Hydras instead of Hunters.

Rating: 4.5/10 (Could be better).

Good luck for your new missions Aftab!

 

I can't review "Talking Heads" since the mission crashes at the part somewhere when I drove a bike.

 

Next up, "GTA: San Andreas Prequel".

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Super Shizuku

Due to my laptop being too old to play San Andreas, I've decided to stop reviewing missions and designing until I can buy a new one.

 

May someone keeps this topic alive...

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Super Shizuku

Did you even pay attention that my laptop cannot run sa smoothly just as it used to be?

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Did you even pay attention that my laptop cannot run sa smoothly just as it used to be?

Well, did it run smooth before or?

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Now it doesn't.

It does not work well only with San Andreas? If yes, reinstall it. If with all games, reinstall windows.

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Super Shizuku

No, I've reinstalled the os and the game for more than once and still runs slow. It's just that my laptop is too old.

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Rockstar Team

Hi there, Leon :D I've played those 2 missions you sent and I gotta say they were pretty interesting. Especially since I'm the biggest fan of Resident Evil :D

 

OK, so now it's time for the details:

 

The idea - Amazing (it's good to see some rare mission pack at last)

 

Mission length - Average (but don't worry, the beginning missions shouldn't be long, so good job)

 

Difficulty - Very easy (but as I said before - these are the beginning missions, so don't worry)

 

The grammar - Good (could be some improvements, but it's still understandable)

 

Overall rating: 4/5! Keep up the good work :D Just try to improvise the english a little bit :)

 

Good luck in your missions, Leon :) Can't wait to play part 3!

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@Rockstar Team - Thanks for the Review my friend :D. Well i'm also one of the biggest fan of Resident Evil. My favorite is it's Part 4 and 7 (which is released right now). the good thing is that i bought RE7 in first day when it released and complete the same game in the next day and 33 times i finished the RE4 :).

 

Well anyway, coming to the point that i already uploaded the Third Mission. You can go in the topic name: Resident Evil: Biohazard. It's pinned right now. Here is the link: http://gtaforums.com/topic/876075-resident-evil-biohazard/. I'll try to improve my grammar more.

 

Once again Thanks for playing it. Stay tuned for complete version. :^:

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Wondering what their sales plan looks like.

 

40 Mission RS bikes .. available this year? Federal 10 credit cap at 2500 should be available. I think the credit requires the bikes to be street-legal?

 

Mission R bikes .. street-legal .. available after all 40 Mission RS bikes have been sold, next year? Federal 10 credit will have expired.

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PyThOn #TakeItEasy

@Nafil - Looks like you came to wrong section, this is for reviews

 

AND A QUESTION TO ​PLEDGE OF CHAOS, why other peoples are not allowed to make this topic alive, why can't normal users review each other mission? No offence just asking....

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AND A QUESTION TO ​PLEDGE OF CHAOS, why other peoples are not allowed to make this topic alive, why can't normal users review each other mission? No offence just asking....

 

 

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IMPORTANT NOTICE!!!(as for 26/03/2014)

 

 

You don't have to request my permissions to be a reviewer anymore. Everyone can post reviews at this topic freely.

 

That's all I have to say. For the future reviewers, I wish you the best of your reviews.

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