DYOM Mission Reviews

[Kratos2000]

AznKei, your contribution to this section is huge, I believe mods admit it too.

But will you plan to return for mission making one day?

[Nitesh002]

Hello everyone,

 

Today, I'm going to review 8 missions made by Exekucnak . These missions are part of his The Godfather: Working for the Corleones storyline.

 

Please go to the following link in order to download the mission pack:

http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=483729

 

Now, it's time for the review,

 

- Writing:Good. The text is well written with very few noticable mistakes.

- Presentation: Good. The cutscenes in the interior were buggy. The time between cutscenes is good and also the actors have been given animations which makes the missions lively.

 

Introduction

- Length: Short, as it can be done in about 3 minutes. The player has to drive Luca to his house.

- Difficulty:Easy. The only thing the player has to do is to drive Luca to his house.

- Variety: Decent. Characters include John, Luca, Nick, Mike. Vehicles include Hustler.

 

Undertaker's request

- Length: Short, as it can be done in about 3 minutes. The player has to go to a certain location and beat up a man.

- Difficulty: Easy. The enemy is not armed and the player has the baseball bat. This makes it quite easy to beat up the guy.

- Variety: Decent. Characters include Mike, Luca and two other men. Vehicle include Hustler. Weapons include baseball bat.

 

Tattaglia takeover

- Length:Decent , as it can be done in about 4 minutes. The player has to go to a bar that is under the protection of Tattaglia, and kill some of their men.

- Difficulty: Normal. The gunfight takes place in a small enclosed bar, making it difficult to get cover. The enemies also carry pistols and have good accuracies.

- Variety: Decent. Character include Mike, Luca, owner of the bar, tattaglia men. Weapons include pistol. Vehicles include Hustler.

 

Meeting the Don

- Length: Short, as it can be done in about 3 minutes. The player has to drive to the Don's house where he meets the Don. He welcomes Mike to the family.

- Difficulty: Easy. The only thing the player has to do is to drive to the Don's mansion, and talk to a few people.

- Variety: Good. Characters include Mike, Luca, Sonny, Tom, Don, and the Don's guards. Weapons include SMG's carried by the guards. Vehicles include Hustler.

 

Angry owner

- Length:Good , as it can be done in about 5 minutes. The player has to steal a new Hustler from the Tattaglia mansion and bring it back to the Don's mansion.

- Difficulty: Easy. The car is way away from the guards so the player can easily steal the car without anyone noticing.

- Variety: Decent. Characters include Sonny, Mike, Don's guards, Tattaglia's guards. Weapons include SMG. Vehicles include Hustler.

 

Sleeping with the fishes

- Length: Short, as it can be done in about 3 minutes. Luca wants to go and meet Bruno and Solozzo. When they reach the restaurant, Luca enters and is attacked. Then Mike has to finish up the Tattaglias.

- Difficulty: Normal. The fight happens in a closed environment, but the availability of covers make it a bit easy. The player also has a shotgun which is a lethal weapons and can kill the enemies in one shot.

- Variety: Good. Characters include Mike, Luca, Bruno, Solozzo. Weapons include shotgun, pistols. Vehicles include Hustler.

 

Payback

- Length:Good , as it can be in about 6 minutes. The player meets with Tom who gives news about Don's shootout. He tells the player that its payback time and they go to the Tattaglia warehouse where Bruno is killed.

- Difficulty: Normal. The player and hiss allies attack the warehouse that is highly guarded and kill Bruno. The fact that the player has a shotgun makes it a bit easier, but also some enemies carry shotguns.

- Variety: Good. Characters include Tom, Mike, Sonny, Tattaglia's goons, Don's guards. Weapons include SMG, shotgun, piston. Vehicles include Hustler.

 

The meeting

- Length: Good, as it can be done in about 6 minutes. The player goes to a restaurant to kill McClusky and Solozzo. Then flees to Sicily via a ship.

- Difficulty:Hard. Killing the two is easy as they have no weapons. But the escape to the docks can be a bit hard under a three star wanted level.

- Variety: Decent. Characters include Mike, Sonny, Solozzo, McClusky. Weapons include pistol. Vehicles include Hustler.

 

 

 

Overall the missions were good . The story started with the basic missions and the missions got harder and more action packed as the story progresses. Most of the missions are short in terms of gameplay. Difficulty of missions are varied so, there is no problem in that. The missions were well designed by the author and hope the author continues with the good work

[Jimmy_Leppard]

Hello, guys. I would like someone to review the whole chapter 3 of my latest finished mission series ''Brian Thompson's heist''. Here is the link to the mission series topic --> http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=476920

 

Thanks in forward,

 

Jimmy

[SevilleCheng]

Reviewers, would you like to review my missions in the second multiple series The Tales of Jack Frazer?

 

Here's the list:

 

1. San Fierro - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=12907

2. San Fierro is ready for a war ! - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=13246

3. The same thing in different way - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=13499

4. Is China playing a role in ? - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=13797

5. No mercy !! - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=13921

[Nitesh002]

Hello everyone,

 

Today, I'm going to review 8 missions made by Jimmy_Leppard. They're part of his Brian Thompson's heist series.

 

Please click on the link below in order to view the topic and find links to download them:

http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=476920

 

Now, it's time for the review,

 

- Writing: Very good. The text is understandable with no noticable mistake in grammar.

- Presentation: Very good.. The cutscenes have been timed well, and actors have been given different animations to make the cutscenes even more lively.

 

The taker

- Length: Decent,as it takes about 4 minutes. The mission is a flashback, telling us what happened before the actual heist took place.

- Difficulty: Easy. as the player only has to drive to Zack's house where they plan for the heist. The rest is cutscenes.

- Variety:Decent. The characters include Brian, Garry, Zack.

 

Dealing in absolutes

- Length: Very good, as it can be done in about 8 minutes. The two are at Fort Carson where they are attacked by some carjackers. They beat them up and go to meet Morita who gives them four job. We also see Tyler arriving in Las Venturas.

- Difficulty: Normal. The player and Garry gets into a fist fight with the carjacker. Then they have travel to Las venturas.

- Variety: Very goodCharacters include Brian, Garry, Morita, Tyler, the carjackers, an old man. Weapons include the knuckles. Vehicles include elegant

 

Russian precaution

- Length: Excellent, as it takes about 11 minutes. Brian and Garry do their first job: Destroying three vans of russians. The vans are found at different locations.

- Difficulty: Normal. The vans are protected by the russians who have powerful weapons like AK-47

- Variety: Good Characters include Brian, Garry, Morita, Russian members. Vehicles include NRG 500, and the three vans of the russians. Weapons includes SMG, Ak-47.

 

Total camouflage

- Length: Long, as it can be done in about 15 minutes. Time for the second job. Morita wants Brian and Garry to get a black Sultan from a highly guarded warehouse.

- Difficulty: Hard. The warehouse is highly guarded and the player has to use stealth to get to the Black Sultan. However, there is another way which is very easy to complete the mission.

- Variety: Good Characters include Brian, Garry, Morita, Russian members. Cars include Jester, Sultan. Weapons include Silenced pistol, knife. Pickups include armour.

 

Guesses

- Length: Decent, as it can be done in about 4 minutes. Time for the third job now. Morita wants Brian and Garry to kill a journalist. Just one problem, no one has ever seen the journalists face.

- Difficulty: Easy. The player has to snipe the journalist after identifying him.

- Variety: Good. Character include Brian, Garry, Morita, journalists. Vehicles include PCJ-600. Weapons include the sniper rifle.

 

Business specialists

- Length: Very good, as it can be done in about 7 minutes. Time for the last job now. Morita wants Brian and Garry to kill the leader of the Russian when they are having their meeting with a local gang. Then Brian and Garry tries to think of a plan to save Diane without giving the diamond to Morita.

- Difficulty: Normal. There are 8 members that the player has to kill, and they all carry weapons with fairly good accuracies. But the fight takes place in an open area, lowering the difficulty a bit.

- Variety: Good. Characters include Brian, Garry, Morita, Russian members, members of the local gang. Weapons include SMG, desert eagle. Vehicles include Turismo.

 

Good, bad and in between

- Length: Good, as it can be done in about 5 minutes. Brian and Garry finds a suitable place for the exchange and call both Tyler and Morita to come there at midnight for the exchange.

- Difficulty: Easy. The player has to drive to the Bandits Baseball stadium. What follows after that is cutscenes.

- Variety: Decent. Characters include Brian, Garry, Tyler and his goons. Vehicles include turismo.

 

The exchange

- Length: Very good, as it can be done in about 8 minutes. Brian and Garry go to Bandits Baseball Stadium amd Brian hides the diamond. A shootout follows whereby all the Tyler's goons and Morita's goons are involved. Then a cinematic ending follows.

- Difficulty: Normal. A shoot out occurs between Brian, Garry, and the goons. The goons have SMG's with them.

- Variety: Very good. Characters include Brian, Garry, Tyler and his goons, Morita and his goons, Diane. Vehicles include a turismo and a Helicopter. Weapons include SMG's, rocket launcher. Pick-ups include armour and health.

 

 

 

Overall the missions are good . The story has been told with great detail. Variety of gameplay, cutscenes, vehicles, weapons throughout the chapter makes the mission enjoyable. Animations given to actors also makes the mission enjoyable. And not to forget the cinematic ending given to the mission pack. The author did a good job in designing the missions and must keep up the good work.

 

Edited August 12, 2011 by Nitesh aka AAAAAAA

[Jimmy_Leppard]

Wow. Thanks for the quick review, Nitesh. You're becoming very good at this

[IX-MJ-XI]

Good day Mr.AznKei and to all the DYOM - mission Reviewers, I would like to request or ask if you could review my mission entitled, Dark Synopsis. Thank you in advance and looking forward to it. If you need anything concerning me or my mission, I'm just a PM away .

[Nitesh002]

Hello everyone,

 

Today, I'm going to review 3 missions made by SevilleCheng. They're part of the multi designer project Tale of Jack Frazer series.

 

Please click on the link below in order to view the topic and find links to download them:

http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=478093

 

Now, it's time for the review,

 

- Writing: Good Although there were some grammatical errors, the text was understandable. Coloured texts were also used for different objectives and character's names.

- Presentation: Very good. The cutscenes were timed well and animations was used to make the cutscenes more realistic. Also the focusing was good.

 

San Fierro

- Length: Good, as it can be done in about 6 minutes. Logan and Jack travels to San Fierro. On there way they are attacked by Ryan. Even though the car crashes, Ryan survives. After this, They continue their way to Doherty.

- Difficulty: Normal. There is a car fight between Jack and Ryan. The player's car is set under 'Must survive' condition, and also Ryan has a fast car.

- Variety:Decent. Characters include Ryan, Jack, Logan. Vehicles include Jester, turismo.

 

San Fierro is ready for a war

- Length: Good, as it takes about 5 minutes. Clay informs Jack and Logan about the Triads leader Seville and tells them that he may be willing to help them. Seville accepts to help them as he also has his issues with Mr. Naysmith.

- Difficulty: Normal. The player has to go to the Seville village to meet him. As they go there, some bikers attack them.

- Variety:Good . Characters include Nick, Jack, Clay, Seville, Jasmine, Bikers. Weapons include uzi. Vehicles include freeways, Jester.

 

The same thing in different way

- Length: Good, as it takes place in about 5 minutes. Seville and Jasmine escapes through a tunnel after they blow up their own place. Jack goes to Seville village after landing on the Santa Maria beach. Lement kills Nick. And Logan escapes.

- Difficulty: Easy. The gameplay involved is only travelling as the mission is mainly focused on the story.

- Variety:Very good. Characters include Ryan, Nick, Lement, Jack, Seville, Jasmine. Vehicles include a bicycle and comet. Weapons include pistol.

 

 

Overall the missions are good . Gameplay and storyline has been well balanced. The gameplay also gives the missions a great replay value. The story has also been developed with great detail using cutscenes and text. The author did a good job in designing the missions and must keep up with the good job.

 

[GTAIndonesia]

http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=481199

 

Please, My duty calls

[Yorpie]

A question to the mission reviewers on this page. Do you use DYOM V6 or DYOM V6.1?

 

Cause I have a storyline (2 x 8 missions) almost ready to get uploaded but it is important that I know wich version you use. Because in DYOM V6.1 your heatlh slowly regenerates so if you use DYOM V6 (where your heatlth doesn't regenerate) some of my missions might be unfairly hard.

[Nitesh002]

A question to the mission reviewers on this page. Do you use DYOM V6 or DYOM V6.1?

 

Cause I have a storyline (2 x 8 missions) almost ready to get uploaded but it is important that I know wich version you use. Because in DYOM V6.1 your heatlh slowly regenerates so if you use DYOM V6 (where your heatlth doesn't regenerate) some of my missions might be unfairly hard.

I don't about the others, but I use 6.1

[General Scrotum]

I use DYOM V6.1, though it makes a long time I didn't review a mission...

[alucardiff]

Hey Azn, could you please check out my Aftermath missions pack?

[General Scrotum]

Hey Azn, could you please check out my Aftermath missions pack?

I call this one out.

[Nitesh002]

Sorry for lack of reviews lately, but I had been busy. I will start reviewing them and hopefully finish all of them before september. Here's the list:

IXMJXI- Dark Synopsis

GTAIndonesia- Duty calls

alucardiff- Aftermath

Edited August 28, 2011 by Nitesh aka AAAAAAA

[IX-MJ-XI]

Sorry for lack of reviews lately, but I had been busy. I will start reviewing them and hopefully finish all of them before september. Here's the list:

IXMJXI- Dark Synopsis

GTAIndonesia- Duty calls

alucardiff- Aftermath

I'm not in a hurry, so take your time Mr. Nitesh. And Thanks in advance.

[General Scrotum]

Hello everyone,

 

Today, I'm going to review four missions made by alucardiff. These are part of The Aftermath mission pack.

 

You can download the four missions there: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=14104

 

Now to the reviews;

 

- Writing: Very Good. There are a few mistakes, but they are not a big deal to mess with the understanding of the missions.

 

- Presentation: Very Good. The cutscene angles are generally good, though some are a little bit showing too much instead of showing only the main thing: the actors.

 

The Great Escape

- Length: Too Short. The mission lasts one minute and his only made of cutscenes showing how the main character is freed of his slave life.

- Difficulty: Very Easy. The mission is only made of cutscenes showing of the character is freed of his slave life.

- Variety: Decent. There are seven type of actors which are mechanicians, LS rappers, and few other casual ones. The only vehicle in it is a Barracks (Barrack OL).

 

A Few Years Ago...

- Length: Short. The mission lasts two minutes and his only made of cutscenes showing the main character in his savior's village.

- Difficulty: Very Easy. The mission is only consisting of cutscenes showing a discussion between one of the main character savior's and the protagonist.

- Variety: Could be Better. There are no vehicles, weapons, or objects in this one, only two actors which are a mechanician and the protagonist.

 

First Blood

- Length: Good. The mission is six minutes long and the main character must take the local dam from a band of slaves.

- Difficulty: Medium. The difficulty varies from the parts of the mission. The part where we need to clear up the slaves near the 'entry'of the dam can be hard if you don use cover, but a heashot is your best friend in this situation. The rest of the mission is easy as you can simply headshot the enemies from distance.

- Variety: Very Good. The mission has thirteen different type of actors which are LS rappers, the main character, a mechanician, two casual pedestrians, and drug dealers with the grey hoody. The cars are a Boxville and a Pony. The only object in this one is fire and it is spawned four or five times. The weapons consists of SMG, Micro SMG, 9mm, AK-47, and Shotgun.

 

Too Many Choices

- Length: Too Short. The mission lasts one minute and only consists of a few cutscenes in which the protagonist is offered a place in the three different main factions roaming the desert and driving.

- Difficulty: Very Easy. The mission is split half cutscenes and half driving. There is nothing dangerous during the driving.

- Variety: Good. The are eight different type of actors which are mafia guys, bikers, usual peds, mechanician and the protagonist. The only vehicles found in this mission are two Freeways and the same fire object from last mission is there.

 

Overall, the missions could be better... Someone looking for usual medium missions will be disaproved by these ones as they are mostly easy. The drawback in the missions is that when there's a good criteria like difficulty, there's another one lowering the rate of the missions. The designer should try to balance these factors to make them more interesting. I liked the use of cutscenes describing some of the protagonist's actions, but some of them were unecessary. The story promises to be interesting, though post-apocalyptic mission packs are the current currency nowadays. If the designer could improve what needs to be improved, he could turn out a good one. Anyway, keep improving and keep up the, hum, good work (?).

Edited August 29, 2011 by Secronom President

[Doublepulse]

Even though its not my review, you might wanna change the font man. Black is a little hard to read for some people.

[Nitesh002]

Hello everyone,

 

Today, I'm going to review 4 missions made by IXMJXI. They're part of his Dark Synopsis series.

 

Please click on the link below in order to view the topic and find links to download them:

http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=482206

 

Now, it's time for the review,

 

- Writing: Very Good There are no noticable mistakes in grammar and the text is understandle. Coloured texts have also been used.

- Presentation: Very good Cutscenes have been used in some cases to explain the story. The cutscenes are well focused and timed. The characters have been given animations to make the missions more lively.

 

Dark synopsis

- Length: short as it can be done in two minutes. A plane is transporting a dangerous hitman who is trained to kill and survive. The plane crashes and Walker assigns some officers to investigate.

- Difficulty: Easy. The mission is only cutscenes.

- Variety:Decent. Characters include officers, the hitman, pilot, Walker.

 

Prisoner on the run

- Length: Excellent, as it can be done in about 10 minutes. Gamble and Frozt start in a forest looking for some clues. As they make their way to Angel Pine, they come across strange things like dead bodies and destroyed cars. At Angel Pine they find Harry who is seriously injured and dies after sometime. Gamble and Frozt finds out that there is more than just a criminal on loose.

- Difficulty: Normal. Even though the enemies are few and easy to kill, the long walk can be tiring for players and also searching for the checkpoints with no markers can be a bit difficult.

- Variety:Good. Characters include Walker, Gamble, Frozt, Harris. Vehicles include Helicopter, Pick-up trucks.

 

Dead ahead

- Length: Excellent, as it can be done in about 13 minutes. Gamble and Frozt split up to search for clues. Gamble finds a series of notes which leads him to Mt. Chilliad.

- Difficulty: Hard. Although the enemies are few, the weapons they carry makes the mission hard. There are two enemies in a house in Mt. Chilliad who carry sprays, so if one of them gets you its very difficult to survive. There is also a surprise attack by a Zombie in a truck, and the player has to react very fast to it. There are also a series of notes the player has to look for and there are no markers kept for it.

- Variety:Good. Characters include the Zombies, Gamble, Kutch, Frozt. Weapons include chainsaws, SMG's, spray cans.

 

Mysterious cliff

- Length: Excellent,as it can be done in about 10 minutes. Gamble climbs to Mt. Chilliad where there are more zombies. He finds a lot of information in a computer.

- Difficulty: Normal. Although there are many Zombies, the fights takes place in the open so giving a place for the player to keep distance from them. The notes are also not that difficult to find because of very few houses.

- Variety:Decent. Characters include Gamble, Zombies. Weapons include chainsaws, spray cans, knife.

 

 

Overall the missions are good . Gameplay and storyline has been well balanced. The story has also been developed with great detail using the time out and phone objectives. The missions have a great aspect of originality by the use of notes and diaries to explain the story. This mission pack involves a lot of thinking to do as to where the next checkpoint is because there are some which have no markers. Nevertheless, the author did a good job in designing the missions and must keep up with the good job.

 

 

 

 

 

[Nitesh002]

Hello everyone,

 

Today, I'm going to review 4 missions made by GTAIndonesia. They're part of his Raw Danger: Duty Calls series.

 

Please click on the link below in order to view the topic and find links to download them:

http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=481199

 

Now, it's time for the review,

 

- Writing: Good Even though the text was not so many, there were no noticable mistakes. Also coloured text was used.

- Presentation: Could be betterVery few cutscenes have been used.

 

Living quarters outbound

- Length: short as it takes about 3 minutes to complete. Officer Thompson talks to some officers.

- Difficulty: Easy. The only thing the player has to do is to walk around and look for officers.

- Variety:Decent. Characters include Thomson, Timothy and some other random officers.

 

Insecurity

- Length: short as it can be done in about 2 minutes. Thompson has to make his way to the lift and fix it. Later the whole place starts to blow up.

- Difficulty: Easy. The only thing the player has to do is to make his way to the lift under a 5 star wanted level. The mission is still easy because the police are not that effective and is easy to escape them.

- Variety:Decent.Characters include Thompson and some scientists.

 

Duty calls

- Length: Very short as it can be done in about 1 minute. Thompson has to go to the top floor and look for a scientist who later gives him a password.

- Difficulty: Easy. Although there is a 5 star wanted level, the police are not effective if you just run past them.

- Variety:Decent. Characters include Thompson, scientist, and the police. Many random objects also included.

 

Surface

- Length: Very short as it can be done in less than one minute. Thompson has to escort Riley in to room.

- Difficulty: Easy. The only thing the player has to do is to escort Riley to a room.

- Variety:Decent. Characters include Thompson, Riley. Many random objects also included.

 

 

 

There is still a need to put more effort in the missions as most of them have just 'Go to .....' objective. The story is not understandable as there are very few texts used. The author has not included any detail of the story. Nevertheless, the author tried to design the missions and should improve on his missions next time.

 

 

 

 

[Gorgonit]

Can someone review chapter 2 of episode 1 from my mission pack?

 

Here

 

[Nitesh002]

 

Can someone review chapter 2 of episode 1 from my mission pack?

 

Here

I will do that one. Asked AznKei to do it.

 

Can someone please review missions 9, 10, 11, 12 of my Hitman series.

Edited September 4, 2011 by Nitesh aka AAAAAAA

[General Scrotum]

As I posted this review on alifjenius thread and he asked me to post it there, here it is. A complete review of his first chapter of SA Noire. http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=485561

 

- Writing: Very Good. The missions generaly contain basic and advanced English, but there are some repetitive errors here and there. Still, it doesn't mess the understanding of the mission, for most of the cases.

 

- Presentation: Very Good. The cutscenes present in the missions have good angles and each of them has their own feeling; war, sorrow, etc.

 

First Case

- Length: Good. As the mission can be done in five minutes, the player plays as John while he is walking around Las Barancas then hears a gunshot.

- Difficulty: Easy. There is no shootout or car chase involved in this mission. The player have ten minutes to find a gun that will prove he didn't murder the person Paul, a friend of John which is also a Sheriff, says he killed. The gun is close of the player.

- Variety: Decent. The actors include John, Paul, the priest, the ex-army and the two paramedics. The weapon and object used in this mission are a Desert Eagle and a breakable barrier.

 

Behind the Patrol Desk

- Length: Very Good. As the mission lasts seven minutes, the mission mainly base itself on one of John's souvenirs of the Civial War in 2009.

- Difficulty: Medium. The player launch an assault on a terrorist base and most enemies have good weapons with good accuracies and somewhat good health. The best way to get rid of them is to shoot them from distance and use cover when possible.

- Variety: Very Good. The mission contains John, soldiers such as Luis, county sheriff, many different terrorists, Rhino's, M4, SMG, Shawn-Off Shotgun, and many objects that constitute the base.

 

Armed and Dangerous

- Length: Very Good. As the mission lasts for nine minutes, John and his partner Luis respond to a bank rob in Las Barancas.

- Difficulty: Hard. Most enemies outside the bank have weapons capable of shooting from distance and the rest have powerful close range weapons. The best way to deal with them is to shoot them from a distance and use of their vehicles' explosions to deal extra damage. Inside the bank, enemies carry powerful weapons and the best way to get rid of them is to stick to one of the walls and headshot the enemies, note that they are not headshotable, to knock them down on the ground then doing the same with another one making it easier for the player to finish the mission.

- Variety: Good. The mission contains Shotgun, 9mm, Landstalker, AK-47, The wrecked up truck, Rancher, Luis, John, Boris, one or two more weapons, and a few cover and bank objects.

 

Fallen Idol

- Length: Very Good. As it lasts seven minutes, the player needs to head to a radio station in Fort Carson to assist in the protection of a politician.

- Difficulty: Medium. The player needs to protect a politician making an interview at the local radio station of assassins hired to kill him. Although the enemies have good weapons, the best way is to blow up their cars and take cover in the Pay n Spray shop which is nearby.

- Variety: Good. The mission contains the usual wrecked up trucks owned by the criminals, the 'Brand New' car, the usual weapons; a 9mm and a Shotgun, John, Luis, Brando, the police officers, a Stretch, objects; doors, the usual terrorists skins, and their usual weapons.

 

Memories

- Length: Good. As it lasts five minutes, it shows a flashback of John attacking a terrorist farmhouse two years ago in the Civil War.

- Difficulty: Easy. The mission consists of attacking a terrorist base, in one of John's souvenirs of the Civil War, with your allies. The enemies have good weapons, but yet again, you can simply shoot them from distance and use cover if they are to close.

- Variety: Excellent. The mission has many objects making the base, around fifteen, John, Luis, Vito, Boris, the 101st division, the 95th division, the three usual terrorists skinned enemies, a Rhino, a plane which I don't remember the name, the usual weapons used by the terrorists, about four, plus the weapons used by John and his allies.

 

Money Talks

- Length: Very Good. As the mission lasts seven seconds, the player must attack a terrorist base to take back the truck containing the money from the bank rob of a previous mission.

- Difficulty: Medium. You must assist some Sheriffs assaulting the Tee-Pee Motel where the Securicar having the money from the bank rob of Armed and Dangerous. The enemies have good weapons, but you can shoot the ones near the entrance easily from distance. Once you are inside, use cover because they can wound you badly easily and pretty quick. There's also an hidden Sniper Rifle on the nearby bridge.

- Variety: Very Good. The mission contain John, Luis, Paul, Boris, some county sheriffs, the three usual terrorists skins, at least six different objectto make the base, a Sniper Rifle, the usual weapons you get; a Shotgun and a 9mm, and other weapons such as a AK-47 and the usual used ones by the 'Traitors'.

 

Funeral Situation

- Length: Very Good. Lasting eight minutes, the mission is pretty straightforward. You are at Luis funeral and the 'Traitors' attack you.

- Difficulty: Hard. The 'Traitors' attack you while you are 'celebrating' Luis funerals' at the police station. The ones with the vehicles can be dealth with easily, the ones on the roof requires you to take cover, and the final wave consists of three Hunters attacking you with a suck-ass RPG team assisting you.

- Variety: Very Good. The mission consists of Paul, John, a priest, some county sheriffs, four different type of terrorists, some objects, two or three, the usual wrecked up trucks of the terrorists, three Hunters, Body Armor pickups, M4's, Rifles, Rocket Launchers, and some more weapons.

 

Roll Over Podolski

- Length: Very Good. As it lasts eight hours, John and the San Fierro Police Department launch an attack on Podolski's Ranch.

- Difficulty: Medium. There are two groups assisting John and Paul in the assault on Boris's Ranch; the County Sheriffs and the SFPD. The best way to complete the mission is to shoot Podolski's bodyguards from away and to use cover when in close combat. Most of them can be killed from distance leaving a few ones to be killed from close combat.

- Variety: Very Good. In this mission, we can find some SFPD cars, some Ranchers, some Police Mavericks, M4's, Tear Gas, Grenades, Molotov Cocktails, the usual weapons and vehicles used by the enemies, a moderate ammount of objects such as crates, garage door, etc., Paul, John, George, the hostage girl, and Boris.

 

Overall, the mission are good. While they are not too hard, they can still entertain the players. Some cutscenes such as the protagonist presenting himself in the first mission were good, though the repetitive cutscenes with reference to DYOM can be a little bit annoying after while (i.e. RPG team saying they have stupid AI, the sky saying to us to prepare for a two years back or ago, etc.) The story is interesting though some factions or characters could have been developed more (background story, and all the like). Anyway, the story is pretty good. I'll definitly play more missions and don't forget: keep up the good job. I give this mission pack a 8/10.

Edited August 31, 2011 by Secronom President

[GTAIndonesia]

 

Hello everyone,

 

Today, I'm going to review 4 missions made by GTAIndonesia. They're part of his Raw Danger: Duty Calls series.

 

Please click on the link below in order to view the topic and find links to download them:

http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=481199

 

Now, it's time for the review,

 

- Writing: Good Even though the text was not so many, there were no noticable mistakes. Also coloured text was used.

- Presentation: Could be betterVery few cutscenes have been used.

 

Living quarters outbound

- Length: short as it takes about 3 minutes to complete. Officer Thompson talks to some officers.

- Difficulty: Easy. The only thing the player has to do is to walk around and look for officers.

- Variety:Decent. Characters include Thomson, Timothy and some other random officers.

 

Insecurity

- Length: short as it can be done in about 2 minutes. Thompson has to make his way to the lift and fix it. Later the whole place starts to blow up.

- Difficulty: Easy. The only thing the player has to do is to make his way to the lift under a 5 star wanted level. The mission is still easy because the police are not that effective and is easy to escape them.

- Variety:Decent.Characters include Thompson and some scientists.

 

Duty calls

- Length: Very short as it can be done in about 1 minute. Thompson has to go to the top floor and look for a scientist who later gives him a password.

- Difficulty: Easy. Although there is a 5 star wanted level, the police are not effective if you just run past them.

- Variety:Decent. Characters include Thompson, scientist, and the police. Many random objects also included.

 

Surface

- Length: Very short as it can be done in less than one minute. Thompson has to escort Riley in to room.

- Difficulty: Easy. The only thing the player has to do is to escort Riley to a room.

- Variety:Decent. Characters include Thompson, Riley. Many random objects also included.

 

 

 

There is still a need to put more effort in the missions as most of them have just 'Go to .....' objective. The story is not understandable as there are very few texts used. The author has not included any detail of the story. Nevertheless, the author tried to design the missions and should improve on his missions next time.

 

Do you have time to review the other missions?

The police wasnt supposed to be there so use No police cheat

 

 

Anyway thanks

[AznKei]

Hello everyone,

 

Today, I'm going to review 4 missions made by Gorgonit. They're part of the 2nd episode of his Harry Gibson's story series.

 

The missions can be downloaded at: http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=482514&st=0 .

 

Now, it's time for the review,

 

- Writing: Very Good, as most dialogues and descriptions are very well written, although a few of them have structural and typing mistakes. Also, nice text colorings in order to facilitate the readings.

- Presentation: Excellent. Nice viewing and timing between different cutscenes. There's also a noticeable amount of objects, vehicles and actors that can be found in these missions, which make the missions much more alive and massive.

Time Bomb

- Length: Excellent, as it can be done in 10 minutes. The player plays as Harry and has been tasked by Ryan to kill one of his loan sharks named Mr. Carl by luring him inside a decoy car armed with explosives in which looks identical to his car. Most of the mission involves lot's of road travelings.

- Difficulty: Hard. This mission can be very confusing, especially the decoy car explosion part, as the player might fail the mission without knowing what is going on. To avoid this, the player must spread the police cars away from the explosion radius, as they have the "must survive" options. Anything else is average, such as killing the enemies with average accuracies and less tight time limits.

- Variety: Very Good. The characters include Harry, Ryan, Mac, Mr. Carl and his guards. The weapons include desert eagle, shotgun and pistol. The vehicles include police bikers, Harry's, Ryan's decoy and Mr.Carl cars. The objects include crates and boxes.

 

Home retake

- Length: Excellent, as it can be done in 10 minutes. The player Harry has been tasked by Ryan to protect his Las Venturas quarry by killing a invading army soldiers and their commanders and must escape the area from an ensuing explosive sequence from ground level. This mission involves massive gunfights and racing through checkpoints around narrow obstacles.

- Difficulty: Hard. Most enemies have strong accuracies and carry m4s. Fortunately, the player has a sniper rifle for a range advantage and most enemies can be headshotted. Unfortunately, the first time limit part is the hardest part of the mission as the time limit is very small and the enemies there have a large amount of health without headshot options. Also, there's alot of platforming elements which tolerate less screw ups.

- Variety: Excellent. The characters include Harry, Ryan, the army soldiers and their commander. The weapons include desert eagle, m4, ak-47, sniper, rocket launcher. The vehicles include patriots, bunkers, cement trucks and sparrow helicopter. The objects include crates, cranes, ramps, metallic platforms, fences and boxes.

 

Jackin' Chan

- Length: Excellent, as it can be done in 10 minutes. The player Harry has been tasked by his friend Connor to save his brother Mac who has been kidnapped by the Yakuza members at the Esmerald Isle multi-story parking lot in Las Venturas with the sparrow helicopter. The mission mainly involves massive gunfights.

- Difficulty: Hard. The enemies carry have strong accuracies and mostly carry mp5 and ak-47. Fighting the enemies while the player is inside the sparrow helicopter is the hardest part of the mission as one enemy carry a rocket launcher which can destroy the helicopter in one hit. Kill the enemies from a distance to avoid getting hit by rockets. There's also a time limit near the end of the mission where must kill his last target very fast.

- Variety: Very Good. The characters include Harry, Ryan, Connor, Mac, the Yakuza members (Da Nang Boyz) and a Russian kidnapper. The weapons include mp5, rocket launcher, ak-47, micro-uzi and shotgun. The vehicles Yakuza cars, trucks and sparrow helicopter. The objects include crates, cranes and boxes.

 

Payback

- Length: Good, as it can be done in 6 minutes. The player Harry and Mac want to kill the remaining Russian gang members as a revenge of thier kidnapping fiasco at their base in Palomino Creek town, just south of Las Venturas. The mission mainly involves massive gunfights.

- Difficulty: Normal. The enemies are numerous, have a high health, carry mp5 and ak-47 and have average accuracies. There's a cutscene where some local allies fight against the enemies but die afterwards. Some of these soon-to-be-dead allies drop a minigun, so use it as an avantage for a quick massive killings.

- Variety: Very Good. The characters include Harry, Mac and the Russian mobsters. The weapons include mp5 and ak-47. The vehicles include speedboat, Harry and Russian gang cars. The objects include crates, cranes, security guard rails, metallic platforms, fences and boxes.

 

Overall, the content of these missions are impressive . However, these missions can be tedious to play for an average player because of the length, can be confusing (see Time Bomb mission) and have some stricter time limits. Otherwise, great job for the author and keep up the good work .

[Doublepulse]

It would be nice for AznKei (or any other reviewers) to review 5 missions From DYOM Trio Series The Title of the event is LeonCJ's Betrayal

 

Thanks in Advance, Doublepulse

[maliksusanto]

 

Can someone please review missions 9, 10, 11, 12 of my Hitman series.

I review it

 

Hi everyone,This day i review 4 Hitman mission by Nitesh

Mission can downloaded at:http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=478339

 

-Writing:Very Good,all dialog written very good,Nice Coloring text,Some Text missing/not written

-Presentation:Very Good,Nice Camera view and timing,Everything is good

 

Inside the organisation

-Lenght:Short,Done in 2 Minute,Player play as Agent 002 with Agent 001 is Check His Boss to explain anything

-Difficulty:Very Easy,Very Easy mission,The Player(Agent 002)Must Talk to His boss

-Varienty:Decent,Some item and Character(Agent 002,001,Boss,Some People in Organisation

 

Memories of the Past

-Lenght:Good,Done in 6 Minute,Agent 002 Must come to Las Pasayadas to arrest Unknow Person who had meeting with David goons

-Difficulty:Easy,PLayer must kill David goons with Sniper and Chase unknow Person

-Varienty:Good,Character Agent 002,001,David Goons and Unknow person,David goons car,Buffalo

 

Old Friend

-Lenght: Very Good,Done in 9 Minute,Agent 002 Visit his old friend John and then John tell about when he blown agent 002 house,Agent 002 MUst Kill some gang member

-Difficulty::Easy,PLayer must find John and kill some gang member

-Varienty:Good,Agent 002,John,Some gang member,A buffalo,Unknow person

 

The first hit

-Lenght:Excellent,Done in 13 Minuet,Agent 002 is accept to kill John who kill his sister,He is recruit by Hitman agency.

-Difficulty:Medium,Agent 002 must find Briefcase and kill John

-Varienty:Good,Agent 002,Unknow man,John,Agent 001,Guard

 

Overall is Impressive,Need Stealth and Accuary Skill to Play this mission easily,The First hit mission is very hard to find john in beach,Good work to Author(Nitesh

Edited September 7, 2011 by maliksusanto

[alifjenius]

Could someone review Chapter 2 of my S.A. Noire ? Here is the link

 

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=14360

 

Secronom President promised me to review the chapter 2 if I already pack it into 1 zip. But I didn't see him recently

 

Thank you for your attention

[maliksusanto]

Can someone review my mission

1st Mission

2nd mission

3rd mission

 

I hope "You" can review this day

[Satourn]

I'll take alifjenius' and Doublepulse's requests (as I'm still a reviewer).