Build Up Your San Andreas Gang 0 Posted June 16, 2010 Share Posted June 16, 2010 (edited) THEME OF THE WEEK (July 11): "Violence with a family member." Read here for details. Welcome to Build Up Your Gang: San Andreas Edition, the famous game created solely for the gangs of San Andreas state. The game is simple: pick a gang and write stories about them; you get graded and paid for each story, the money can be used to buy guns, vehicles, locations, rackets and businesses, drugs, and new gang locations. All of these can be used to make your stories more interesting; more interesting stories means more money. Do you have what it takes to build your gang to rule over San Andreas? Have fun and enjoy the game Landstalker and the BUYSAG Staff As I, Landstalker, am a big fan of the GTA games, you can expect to see many updates. However these kind hearted fans also contribute to the game, the BUYG staff consists of: Landstalker, mrpain, Kaizer Chief Vercetti27 WelcomeToLibertyCity Rules1. Read all rules carefully before enlisting into a gang.2. Proofread your work, all stories must be typed up on Microsoft Word or another equivalent writing program that can pick up small mistakes.3. Don't post half finished stories or stories with half a plot; make sure it has a beginning, middle and end.4. Flaming: if you flame anyone, your character and stories go up in flames with you, and you receive permanent banning from the game as well. Also, no non-BUYSAG-related talk, you can discuss ideas, threads and plans for future BUYSAG stories.5. No double posting; if you have something else to say, re-edit your post.Guidelines1. Each gang starts out with 1,000 dollars, a few weapons and a minimum of one vehicle. Some vehicles are listed in red and may only be used after the tenth story posted for that gang.2. You may not use any weapons, vehicles, or other gang trades which you have not purchased; if you want to sell anything your gang owns you will receive half the price you purchased it for.3. Any BUYSAG staff (upon confirmation from Landstalker) may choose to randomly confiscate items, weapons, vehicles and rackets and businesses. Take note that your gang will only receive confiscations if you have begun buying drugs. Confiscations will be dealt every Sunday, along with asset cashback distribution.4. The BUYSAG staff will PM you if you have been inactive for a significant amount of time asking for you to post in the topic within the week; if you do not, then you will be wiped from the tables.5. If you decide that you want to switch gangs, then your story count so far is bracketed. Each new story you write is added to the bracketed number, as well as starting afresh with an unbracketed number. The bracketed number is used for multiple of five bonuses. The unbracketed number is used for other rewards, such as weapons and vehicles, as well as unlocking the bonus vehicles for your gang.6. If you wish to expand, then you must buy property off of other gangs. You may only purchase property if it’s unoccupied. If the gang has an active member writing, only under a different property, then you must have their consent. If you’re buying a property which is in a city where your gang is already established, then it’ll cost $300. If you wish to expand to another city, it’ll cost $600. Story Count BonusesStory Count Prize(s) Multiple of five For every fifth story you post, you recieve $100. 10th Story Free weapon or drugs under $200 15th Story Free weapon under $400 20th Story Vehicle of your choice under $300 20th Story for your gang Any car free 50th story Free Racket or Business under $2,000 Grove Street FamiliesLocation Property Gang Member Story Count Los Santos Johnson House MattDet 2 Los Santos Sweet's House donkeyfunker 12 San Fierro Wang Cars Dog Of War 1 Weapons 9mm, Baseball Bat, Micro SMG, Tec-9, Desert Eagle, Silenced 9mm, Molotovs, Sniper Rifle Vehicles Greenwood, Voodoo Money $1376 Rackets and Businesses Strip Club Assets 1 stripper Drugs Gallon of Love Juice Ballas LocationPropertyGang MemberStory CountLos Santos The Pig Pen -- 0 Los Santos Glen Park WelcomeToLibertyCity 0(2) Los Santos Idlewood Crack House lynchem'all 20 Weapons 9mm, Baseball Bat, Tec-9, Grenades, SMG, Sniper Rifle Vehicles Tahoma, Majestic, Sabre Money $11682 Rackets and Businesses -- Assets -- Drugs -- Varrios Los Aztecas LocationPropertyGang MemberStory CountLos Santos Cesar's House Osric 1 Los Santos El Corona Low Rider Meet -- 0 Los Santos Sex Shop -- 0 Weapons 9mm, Brass Knuckles, Tec-9, Shotgun Vehicles Broadway, Savanna Money $9474 Rackets and Businesses -- Assets -- Drugs -- Los Santos Vagos LocationPropertyGang MemberStory CountLos Santos East Los Santos Gang House marlord911 3 (11) Los Santos Colonel Furhberger's House -- 0 Los Santos East Los Santos Basketball Courts -- 0 Weapons 9mm, Baseball Bat, Knife, Micro SMG, Desert Eagle Vehicles Tornado, Oceanic Money $1237 Rackets and Businesses -- Assets -- Drugs -- Russian Mafia LocationPropertyGang MemberStory CountLos Santos Grey Imports -- 0 Los Santos The Atrium ToyotaPrius 6 Las Venturas V-Rock Hotel -- 0 Weapons AK-47, Knife, Silenced 9mm, Grenades, Chainsaw, Desert Eagle, SMG, Combat Shotgun Vehicles Sentinel, Buffalo Money $7962 Rackets and Businesses Theft Ring Assets 5 thieves Drugs -- San Fierro Rifa LocationPropertyGang MemberStory CountSan Fierro Doherty Crack Lab -- 0 San Fierro Pleasure Domes -- 0 San Fierro Cranberry Station -- 0 Weapons 9mm, Brass Knuckles, Micro SMG, Satchel Charges, Sawn-Off Shotgun Vehicles Stallion, Blade, PCJ-600, Elegy Money $770 Rackets and Businesses Restaurant Assets 2 waitresses Drugs --- San Fierro Triads LocationPropertyGang MemberStory CountSan Fierro Wu Zi Mu's Office -- 0 San Fierro Ran Fa Li's Lockup -- 0 Las Venturas Four Dragons Casino mrpain 9 Weapons Desert Eagle, Katana, AK-47, Silenced 9MM, Molotovs, Tear Gas, Satchel Charges Vehicles Stratum, Sabre, Maverick Money $1351 Rackets and Businesses -- Assets -- Drugs -- Da Nang Boys LocationPropertyGang MemberStory CountSan Fierro Pier 69 -- 0 San Fierro Bay Cargo Ship -- 0 San Fierro Easter Basin Docks Drift-Kingz 2 Weapons 9mm, Katana, M4 Vehicles Buccaneer, Manana Money $1070 Rackets and Businesses -- Assets -- Drugs -- Cuban Flames(info) LocationPropertyGang MemberStory CountSan Fierro City Hall -- 0 San Fierro Tuff Nut Donuts -- 0 San Fierro Santa Flora Apartments Kaizer Chief 7 (17) Weapons Baseball Bat, Desert Eagle, Tec-9, Chainsaw Vehicles Faggio, Phoenix Money $10,928 Rackets and Businesses -- Assets -- Drugs -- Last Dime Motel Eses(info) LocationPropertyGang MemberStory CountLas Venturas Last Dime Motel -- 0 Las Venturas Las Venturas Police Station Landstalker 0 (17) Weapons Brass Knuckles, AK-47 Vehicles Moonbeam Money $1900 Rackets and Businesses -- Assets -- Drugs -- Leone Mafia Family LocationPropertyGang MemberStory CountLas Venturas Caligula's Casino Ottae 2 Whetstone Chiliad Hideout Unoriginal44 0 Weapons AK-47, 9mm, Micro SMG, Desert Eagle Vehicles Sentinel, Stretch Money $2357 Rackets and Businesses -- Assets -- Drugs -- Forelli Brothers LocationPropertyGang MemberStory CountLas Venturas The Visage -- 0 Weapons Baseball Bat, Desert Eagle, AK-47, Combat Shotgun Vehicles Elegant Money $1000 Rackets and Businesses -- Assets -- Drugs -- Sindacco Family LocationPropertyGang MemberStory CountLas Venturas Sindacco Abattoir Tyla 4 Las Venturas The High Roller -- 0 Weapons Knife, Desert Eagle, M4, Shotgun Vehicles Admiral Money $2071 Rackets and Businesses -- Assets -- Drugs -- Los Santos Police Department LocationPropertyGang MemberStory CountLos Santos Los Santos Police Station jkmd 0 Los Santos C.R.A.S.H. Benjimino234 3 Weapons 9mm, Night Stick Vehicles Police Car Money $1123 Evidence Locker -- San Fierro Police Department LocationPropertyGang MemberStory CountSan Fierro San Fierro Police Station Ziggy455 1 San Fierro N.A.R.C. -- 0 Weapons 9mm, Night Stick, Sawn-off Shotgun Vehicles Police Car Money $1036 Evidence Locker -- Las Venturas Police Department LocationPropertyGang MemberStory CountLas Venturas S.W.A.T. -- 0 Weapons 9mm, Night Stick Vehicles Police Car Money $1000 Evidence Locker -- San Andreas Army LocationPropertyGang MemberStory CountLos Santos Ocean Dock National Guard Depot -- 0 Emergency Code -- San Fierro Easter Basin Naval Base -- 0 Emergency Code -- Las Venturas KACC -- 0 Emergency Code -- Bone County Restricted Area --- 0 Emergency Code Red Code Weapons M4, 9mm, Minigun, Desert Eagle Vehicles Barracks OL, Hydra, Patriot, Rhino, Hunter Money $1307 Evidence Locker -- BUYSAG Incorporation LocationPropertyGang MemberRed County Blueberry Factory Landstalker Flint County Easter Bay Chemicals mrpain Tierra Robada Bayside Marina Kaizer Chief Weapons All Vehicles All Money Infinite Weapons Cost Brass Knuckles $6 Knife $7 Baseball Bat $10 Golf Club $15 Night Stick $15 Katana $45 Chainsaw $75 Handguns Cost 9mm $95 Silenced 9mm $115 Desert Eagle $130 Submachine Guns Cost Tec-9 $140 Micro SMG $145 SMG $250 Shotguns Cost Shotgun $250 Sawn-Off Shotgun $290 Combat Shotgun $400 Machine Guns Cost AK-47 $330 M4 $650 Sniper Rifles Cost Sniper Rifle $300 Rifle $170 Throwables Cost Molotovs $5 Tear Gas $30 Grenades $60 Satchel Charges $75 Heavy Firepower Cost Flamethrower $850 Rocket Launcher $1,100 Minigun $1,500 Heat-Seeking Rocket Launcher $1,800 Vehicles Availability Cost Admiral 3 $300 Angel 3 $350 Ambulance 3 $500 BF Injection 3 $450 Baggage Handler 3 $200 Banshee 3 $800 Barracks OL 3 $1,400 Benson 3 $700 Blista Compact 3 $600 Bloodring Banger 3 $750 Bobcat 3 $500 Boxville 3 $650 Burrito 3 $550 Bus 3 $1,000 Cabbie 3 $500 Caddy 3 $250 Cheetah 3 $850 Coach 3 $1,100 Comet 3 $750 Enforcer 3 $1,500 FBI Rancher 3 $900 Faggio 3 $250 Firetruck 3 $1,000 Flatbed 3 $700 Freeway 3 $500 Glendale 3 $300 Greenwood 3 $200 Infernus 3 $1,200 Landstalker 3 $450 Linerunner 3 $700 Mesa 3 $500 Moonbeam 3 $350 Mr. Whoopee 3 $700 Mule 3 $500 Oceanic 3 $500 PCJ-600 3 $600 Packer 3 $750 Patriot 3 $650 Perennial 3 $350 Phoenix 3 $650 Pizza Boy 3 $300 Police Car 3 $900 Pony 3 $300 Rancher 3 $450 Rhino 3 $3,000 Rumpo 3 $250 Sabre 1 $600 Sanchez 3 $450 Sandking 3 $800 Securicar 3 $1,300 Sentinel 3 $450 Stallion 3 $450 Stretch 3 $1,250 Taxi 3 $450 Trashmaster 3 $750 Virgo 3 $350 Walton 3 $300 Washington 3 $500 Yankee 3 $450 Boats Availibility Cost Coastguard 3 $900 Dinghy 3 $500 Predator 3 $1,000 Reefer 3 $1,000 Squalo 3 $1,200 Tropic 3 $1,100 Flight Vehicles Availibility Cost Hydra 3 $1,000,000 Hunter 3 $4,000 Maverick 3 $2,000 Police Maverick 3 $4,500 Skimmer 3 $5,000 Newschopper 3 $4,000 Rackets, Assets, and BusinessesRackets, Assets, and Businesses are a great way to earn your gang large sums of money, Rackets are the illegal way to earn cash while Businesses are more or less the formal and legal way to earn cash. However, they all go to the gang's cause and if the feds find them, they will be confiscated. How to work rackets and businesses and assets is very simple, it only requires two things: a building and an asset - the asset is the only income you receive as the buildings themselves generate no income. Each Business or racket costs an initial fixed price. Upon purchasing a racket you gain one free Asset. Once you purchase a building and asset, they will be displayed in your gang's box. All Assets cost one quarter of their racket or business's initial price. Also, if you ever want to earn more from your racket or business, then you have to buy another building. Only three rackets or businesses can be owned by a gang at one time. Assets themselves also earn your gang money from their jobs, your gang can constantly keep these workers running, the cash flow is infinite and every week each asset will generate 10% of their cost; e.g., One Drug dealer asset costs $400, so every Sunday $40 will be distributed into that gang's cash amount. You can have a maximum of five assets to a racket or business. The weekly income generated from each type of asset is listed in brackets after the cost of each asset. Racket Cost Asset Cost Income per Asset Weed Farm $1,200 Harvester $350 $35 Crack Den $1,400 Dealer $400 $40 Brothel $1,600 Whore $500 $50 Protection Ring $1,800 Enforcer $550 $55 Cocaine Ring $2,000 Smuggler $600 $60 Theft Ring $2,200 Thief $750 $75 Burglary Circuit $2,600 Burglar $800 $80 Business Cost Asset Cost Income per Asset Cafe $1,200 Waitress/Waiter $350 $35 Bar $1,400 Bartender $400 $40 Restaurant $1,600 Waiter/Waitress $550 $55 Docking Depot $2,100 Sailor $650 $65 Taxi Service $2,300 Driver $700 $70 Strip Club $2,500 Stripper $800 $80 Car Dealership $2,800 Car Salesman $800 $80 Casino $3,500 Croupier $1,000 $100 Drug Rules and Regulations1. Once your gang purchases drugs, the only problems are with the authorities of vice (BUYSAG Staff).2. In order to be able to use drugs functionally within your gang, you must post two stories: One describing you buying the drugs, the other shwoing you selling the drugs.3. BUYSAG Staff will act as San Andreas Feds, FBI and police. We have the power to confiscate weapons, cash and vehicles, randomly. However if you feel like you are being treated unfairly, any of the staff will be more than happy to cooperate. If you don't like something being confiscated, maybe you should have stayed out of the drug game, Playa.4. Money from the Wholesale amount will immediately be added to your gangs money status. However depending on the quantity, a roll of dice shall determine a 'Tax' turn in which 25% of your money will be distributed to higher-ups.5. Do NOT abuse the drug system, buying increased amounts over and over will result in the Feds finding you and confiscating all of your stash. You are limited to 3 drug purchases a week. Product Amount of Product Cost Wholesale Amount Love Juice 1 Litre (0.26 Gallons) $35 $50 Love Juice 2 Litres (0.52 Gallons) $70 $140 Love Juice 1 Gallon (4 Litres) $180 $360 Boomshine 1 Litre (0.26 Gallons) $40 $80 Boomshine 2 Litres (0.52 Gallons) $80 $160 Boomshine 1 Gallon (4 Litres) $220 $440 Marijuana 3.5 Grams $25 $40 Marijuana Ounce (28 Grams) $1,000 $1,400 Marijuana Pound (16 Ounces or 448 Grams) $2,000 $2,600 Marijuana Kilo (2.2 Pounds or 998 Grams) $2,300 $3,000 SPANK 1 gram $55 $100 SPANK Teener (1.5 grams) $80 $145 SPANK Ball (3.5 grams) $160 $285 SPANK Ounce (28 Grams) $900 $1,600 SPANK Pound (16 ounces) $6,000 $10,250 Ecstasy 1 Pill $5 $10 Ecstasy 100 Pills $1,100 $1,800 Ecstasy 1000 Pills $4,000 $7,000 Ecstasy 10,000 Pills $7,000 $10,000 Crack Cocaine 1 Gram $70 $130 Crack Cocaine Ounce (26 Grams) $800 $1,500 Crack Cocaine Pound (16 Ounces or 448 Grams) $4,500 $8,750 Heroin 1 Gram $230 $380 Heroin Ounce (28 Grams) $800 $1,450 Heroin Pound (16 Ounces or 448 Grams) $3,700 $6,900 Crystal Meth 1 Gram $90 $140 Crystal Meth Ball (3.5 Grams) $250 $490 Crystal Meth Half-Ounce (14 Grams) $580 $900 Crystal Meth Ounce (28 Grams) $4,700 $9,000 Crystal Meth Pound (16 Ounces or 448 Grams) $8,000 $13,500 Other solid ways to make money... Theme of the WeekEvery Sunday, a staff member will post a new THEME for the week. The theme will usually be a common gang activity, such as "breaking out of jail" or "heavy shootout". Each theme will be accompanied by a few rules, and during the week, all writers can post stories related to the theme, and earn a small bonus. The amount of the bonus will be dictated by how good your theme story/stories are. Some themes will require a single story, while others might require more than one. For the current theme of the week, look at the top of this post.Gang WarsGang wars are another great way to make money; the rules of a gang war are simple. A gang war is initiated by one gang member adressing another, if the gang member accepts then it will start. They're a great way to add some exciting action into your gang members' lives. A gang war consists of 3 stories: a beginning, a middle, and an end. Each member must write three of them; the winner will win a cash prize of $500 and a vehicle of their choice in the opposing loser's garage. One BUYSAG staff will moderate the gang wars. Them and only them can solely decide the winner, depending on detail, grammar, and punctuation, among other criteria.Hood AttacksA hood attack consists of 3 stories: a beginning, a middle, and an end. A hood attack is different from a gang war in that a piece of territory is at stake. Each member must write the three parts of the story. The winner will win the hood attacked, a price of $1000, and a vehicle of their choice in the enemy garage. One of our staff will moderate the hood attack and he or she will be the only one to choose who's the winner. It will depend of the detail (strategy, etc.), grammar, punctuation and, if necessary, the "shape" of the chapters.Hood PurchasingBuying hoods consists of a gang willing to pay to have an additional hood wherever they want. Depending of the size of the hood, the price will range from $500 to $2000. In those hoods, it will be possible to "create" new properties for your gang. Simply request to buy a new hood, specify the locale or general area, and a staff member will give you the price.Hood FightsA hood fighting consists of two gangs fighting for the control of a territory which is not under control of any gangs. The two gangs must write three chapters like when selling drugs and buying them. The winner earns: the hood, $500, and a special price chosen by the staff member who moderated the fight. Hood fights only occur when one or more gangs want to purchase the same new territory for themselves.Locker Evidence MissionLocker Evidence Missions requires someone from a Law and Order group to write 3 chapters. In the first one, the writer must introduce his characters in the case. In the middle, it must be an investigation. At the end, it must be the end of it. Locker evidence missions can be used to strip the San Andreas gangs of their weapons, vehicles, rackets, businesses, or drugs. To begin writing these missions, you must buy them. Prices are to be discussed with one of the staff members.Bounty HuntingBounty Hunting Missions are bounties posted by the BUYSAG Incoporation. To hunt a bounty, you will need to write four chapters. The first one is when you get the briefing. The second is when gathering informations about the target's whereabouts. The third one is when you are trying to kill or to arrest the bounty. The last one is when you get paid. You get full cash when the bounty is alive and half the cash when the bounty is dead.Create Gangs In this version of the game, you have the possibility to create new gangs that you must join in when you created them, which means that you must say "Adios" to your previous gang for 10 chapters. It'll cost $500, which will be taken from the new created gang's account. That means that the new gang will start with $500. The zones that they'll have will be your decision but weapons and cars must be approved by the staff. You can only create a new gang and join it if you have written 10 chapters for your old one or if you have a total of ten chapters with your bracketed chapters number. The following gangs have been created so far: Cuban FlamesLast Dime Motel Eses Edited July 18, 2010 by Build Up Your San Andreas Gang Link to post Share on other sites
Landstalker 0 Posted June 16, 2010 Share Posted June 16, 2010 Yep guys! This is the new BUYG game in town. I hope it'll be frequented alot. Not bad for my first try, heh? I know there are some weird things. I'll try to fix them all. I am now recruiting for staff and for those who didn't know, I am BUYSAG! Link to post Share on other sites
Build Up Your San Andreas Gang 0 Posted June 16, 2010 Author Share Posted June 16, 2010 Sorry for the bugs. I'll try to fix them. Link to post Share on other sites
Landstalker 0 Posted June 16, 2010 Share Posted June 16, 2010 (edited) I'll take the San Andreas Army at Testricted Area. Edited June 16, 2010 by Landstalker Link to post Share on other sites
Build Up Your San Andreas Gang 0 Posted June 16, 2010 Author Share Posted June 16, 2010 Those are sig for our staff members: Link to post Share on other sites
Osric 160 Posted June 16, 2010 Share Posted June 16, 2010 I will join the Sindacco Family at the High Roller. Link to post Share on other sites
Build Up Your San Andreas Gang 0 Posted June 16, 2010 Author Share Posted June 16, 2010 You can start to write stories. Announce: Looking for staff members! Link to post Share on other sites
Landstalker 0 Posted June 16, 2010 Share Posted June 16, 2010 (edited) San Andreas Bone County Restricted Area December 1, 1992 14:35:01 Rainy San Andreas Army Prologue: The amnesiac "Wake up, you bunch of weaklings!", cried someone. "Yes sir!", replied another voice. "You too!", the person who woke us all cried to someone. "Hey, dude, wake up", said another voice. "Soldier Jason Flyll!"cried again the crying man. "Who's this?", I asked. "You, you damn dickhead!", cried the man in front of me. "Me?", I asked surprised. "Yes, you!", he cried again. "Who am I? Where am I? Who are you?What time is it?", I asked nearly at the same time. "Huh?", he said for the first time without using his loud voice, a little bit surprised. "That is not a answer, mister", I said to him before fainting. When I woke up, I was in a luxurious chamber with war portraits, green walls, and all military weird stuff. I was confortable but I had a headache. I tried to get up but I was nude so I decided to hide under the bed after taking some clothes. While I was dressing up, I saw a tattoo in roman number "XXX" or maybe it was the sign for sex on my stomach. I returned on the bed. When I heard some noise, I decided to get off the bed and make like if I was contamplating the portraits on the walls. "Well well, well, look at what we got here", said the man happy. "Where am I?", I asked before he could say anything. "In the military base of Bone County my boy", he said proudly. "What!", I exclaimed. "You heard well boy", he replied calmly. "Ok...", I said not to sure about what to say. "Follow me", he said with a strange tone in his voice. We took a Patriot and I enjoyed the ride because I was driving. We got to a place called the Sherman Dam. We were in the middle when something exploded behind of. The car flipped on the side and we took cover behind it. He passed me a M4 and he took a M4 too. They were at least twenty. Sudenly, another group arrived from behind so had to get on the ground. One of the two gards who were with us jumped down into the Sherman Reservoir. After some minutes, an helicopter arrived and killed the other bodygard. Two against twenty five was not fun at all. We fought for at least another ten minutes when the man was about to receive a bullet in the heart. I ran to him and.... All became black. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Here are the link for the staff members sig: http://i46.tinypic.com/2d0m3r5.png http://i47.tinypic.com/169rr75.png http://i49.tinypic.com/2r26gyw.png Edited June 16, 2010 by Landstalker Link to post Share on other sites
Build Up Your San Andreas Gang 0 Posted June 16, 2010 Author Share Posted June 16, 2010 (edited) Landstalker: Story's not bad but alot of grammar mistakes. Hell even the first sentence has a grammar mistake. Also check your spelling. You mispelled words such as Sudenly and Bodygard. Overall, I hope to see you improve as you progress. $35 added to the San Andreas Army Rated by mrpain Edited June 16, 2010 by Build Up Your San Andreas Gang Link to post Share on other sites
mrpain 43 Posted June 16, 2010 Share Posted June 16, 2010 Chapter OneDragons Are Born “Alright, Wu Zi Mu wants both of us to quickly sneak through and collect the package. No bodies.” Jacky Tan was instructing me on what Wu Zi Mu had ordered us to do. I was literally bored and almost fell asleep while Jacky was busy blabbing about how we should execute the plan perfectly. We were just waiting in my Elegy for the Da Nang Boys to take a break so we could sneak into their warehouse. The weather was raining heavily and it was climate to take a quick nap. I dozed off and my head dropped dead on the honk of the car. I awoke to the loud honk of the car and Jacky gave me one big slap. “Lee Chao, you dumb f*ck! Now we got their attention!” My vision was blurred and I could not make out was what Jacky saying. He pointed me to the direction of the warehouse and as I soon I got my vision back, I nearly shat my pants. The Da Nang Boys were armed with guns and were aiming at us. I hesitated and immediately told Jacky, “Well, only one way to collect the package now.” And before he could say anything, I was already out of the car firing my Desert Eagle at them. I’m not sure why I got out, the safety of being inside the car was much better than getting shot at. Jacky came out with his AK47 and was tempted to smack me on my head. But his temptation had to wait for awhile as he busy trying to dodge the gunfire. We got into cover by some abandoned school buses that were just outside the warehouse. As the gunfire starts to increase, it began to wonder for me what the f*ck was so important about the package. To my ignorance of the Da Nang Boys trying to kill me, I asked Jacky curiously, “Hey Jack…” I was interrupted as I needed to take cover from the shooting, “What’s inside the goddamn package?” Jacky was annoyed, “Can we care about that later and shoot our way out of this?” My mind came back to me and I quickly got down on the ground before someone shot me. I hitched up a plan and told Jacky, “Alright, you distract them while I sneaked in through to get the package.” He then got furious, “Why must I distract them?” I tried to sound as sarcastic as possible, “Because you got a f*cking AK47!” Without a word, I ran to the back of the warehouse without anyone watching me. I climbed my way over the fence and got inside without any attention. Jacky must had been pretty good at distracting them as all of the Da Nang Boys who were guarding the warehouse were too busy trying to kill him. I tried to remember what Wu Zi Mu told us about how the package would look like. He stated that it will be in a crate shipped from Beijing, China. I found a room full of crates and searched for the one labeled with China on it. I found the crate and decided to open it just to cure my curiosity. I grabbed a crowbar nearby and jammed open the crate. What I found in the crate made me so mad for risking my life for it. I was too furious that I shouted in my Chinese language, “阿他妈的金龙雕像？！？?!?” Link to post Share on other sites
Build Up Your San Andreas Gang 0 Posted June 16, 2010 Author Share Posted June 16, 2010 mrpain: No errors or maybe one but still. This is a good prologue for your story. What means "阿他妈的金龙雕像？！？?!?"?. For this, I give 45$ ~rating brought to you by Landstalker~ Link to post Share on other sites
Drift-Kingz 3 Posted June 17, 2010 Share Posted June 17, 2010 I'm for Da Nang Boys BTW Im interested in becoming staff Please PM me please or if appropriate I'll contact you. Gonna do a story too. Expect one soon because I'm busy with my DYOM series Link to post Share on other sites
Osric 160 Posted June 17, 2010 Share Posted June 17, 2010 We need a BUYG Liberty City for either III or LCS. Link to post Share on other sites
Build Up Your San Andreas Gang 0 Posted June 17, 2010 Author Share Posted June 17, 2010 I'm for Da Nang Boys BTW Im interested in becoming staff Please PM me please or if appropriate I'll contact you. Gonna do a story too. Expect one soon because I'm busy with my DYOM series Wich property? Pier 69? Bay Cargo Ship? Easter Basin? I'll send it to you. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Osric Posted on Jun 17 2010, 03:06 We need a BUYG Liberty City for either III or LCS. Yeah! Who would be the big boss though? Link to post Share on other sites
Kaizer Chief 0 Posted June 17, 2010 Share Posted June 17, 2010 I'll join the Russian Mafia at the Grey Imports warehouse. I'm also interested in being a staff member. Link to post Share on other sites
Build Up Your San Andreas Gang 0 Posted June 17, 2010 Author Share Posted June 17, 2010 Added to the Russian Mafia at Grey Imports. Watch out for a PM really soon. Link to post Share on other sites
Drift-Kingz 3 Posted June 17, 2010 Share Posted June 17, 2010 I'll take Easter Basin for Da Nang Boys Link to post Share on other sites
Build Up Your San Andreas Gang 0 Posted June 17, 2010 Author Share Posted June 17, 2010 I'll take Easter Basin for Da Nang Boys Done, get writing! Link to post Share on other sites
donkeyfunker 0 Posted June 17, 2010 Share Posted June 17, 2010 Having written a whole bunch of stories, I'm pretty happy this is back, so I can post them. Sign me up for Grove Street Families at Sweet's House. Link to post Share on other sites
Landstalker 0 Posted June 17, 2010 Share Posted June 17, 2010 I'm adding you. You can start to write right now Link to post Share on other sites
Build Up Your San Andreas Gang 0 Posted June 17, 2010 Author Share Posted June 17, 2010 ~Announce~ Me, Build Up Your San Andreas Gang, called sometimes BUYSAG, called Landstalker when not under this account, his announcing that I am starting to work on the special gang for the staff members and that I am also working on special things for staff members. Link to post Share on other sites
Drift-Kingz 3 Posted June 17, 2010 Share Posted June 17, 2010 (edited) Da Nang Boys Setting - Chinatown, San Fierro Date - April 9th, 1997 Time - 10:47 PM Characters - Andy Xuan Lee Xuan "Woozie" Triads Da Nang Boys Honk Honk! That's all you hear in Chinatown, San Fierro is the sounds of cars honking. But that's Present Day. Here in 1997 not only do you hear the honks but the Gunshots and Sirens.. It was early April and Things were heating up in San Fierro. It started getting really warm. Me and my brother Lee were in the mood for hanging outside. "Alright Andy lets get outta ere'" Says Lee. Walking down the street we go into a couple of "Da Nang Boys", the gang me and my older brother 'Lee Xuan' rolls with. Me and Lee decided to head up to Chinatown, even though it was 'Triads' territory. Us Nang boys necessarily hate the Triads. Arriving onto 9th Street we see 3 large chinese men putting a Nang Boy in an one of their fancy black Elegys. "Lee Look!" I yelled as I pointed to the incident. "C'mon Andy we'll get them" Says Lee with an Angry face. "But how? We have no car! What are we gonna do steal one?!" Says Andy. Just then Lee runs in front of a passing taxi. The Taxi driver angrily gets out of his Taxi with an Iron Golf Club. Looking angry and frustrated, Lee throws a knucklepunch to the Taxi Driver knocking him out. Lee gets in the Taxi and looks at me and says "Get in" Smiling, I got into the Taxi and just as I was about to close the door the Taxi went from 0-35 in 2 seconds. Closing the door on 10th Street, Lee catches up to the black Elegy. "Here take this and roll down the window. You know what to do man." Says Lee as he hands me his lucky Desert Eagle. I roll down the window and fire 2 shots to the back right tire. The Elegy continues going but then I got a good aim of the Driver and Bam! The Elegy rams into a Passing Trolley before I could pull the trigger. Getting out of the car, I walk over to the Driver. Looking at him I then realized who he was. He was "Woozie", the Triads leader. Woozie gets out of the car with a deep bloody scar on his left arm which somehow did not seem to bother him. "You son of a Bitch! You Nang Girls are always stopping our plans! Guys, take these fools out while I take the other pig away." Says Woozie. 2 Large Chinese men come out of the Elegy with Mac 10's and begin shooting at us. But right before they begin shooting me and Lee ducked low so we didn't get hit. Getting back up, I shot the Triad in the chest and ducked down again. But then I looked to my right and see Lee being choked by Woozie. I aim Lee's Eagle to Woozie but just when it hit me.. I was shot. "Andy, You alright bro?" Says Lee as I am laying down on a hospital bed. "Yeah man I'm fine don't worry about me." Says Andy. "Listen Andy, we need to try and get back our gang member. I think the Triads are planning something big and they've takes one of our gang members as a hostage" Says Lee. "Lee, You gotta do this on your own. I'm really sick and I need some rest. Good luck bro." Said Andy. Lee walks out of the hospital, Gets in his yellow Admiral, and drives off to Easter Basin. As Lee arrived to Easter Basin he pulls over besides 3 Nang Boys. Lee generally doesn't know them but as of course gang members stick together. Lee recruits the 3 Nang Boys and together they drive to San Fierro Intl. Airport. Lee suspected the Triads to be there. Just when it hit them, 3 Triads blocking the entrance to Gate 17 shoots at Lees Admiral causing an inflated front right tire. The 3 Nang Boys do a drive by as that happens killing the 3 Triads. Lee then spots Woozie sitting on a bench in front of Gate 17. He doesn't seem to be doing anything. Lee and the other 3 Nang Boys get out of the car. Walking over to Woozie, Woozie gets up and looks behind him. "You dirty bitch let my freind go!" Yells Lee. "No." Says Woozie. Lee aims his M4 at Woozie but just then 2 Triads come out of the airport and shoot at the 3 other Nang Boys. 2 of the Nang boys seem to be alive but the other was dead right when the bullet had hit him in the Chest. Lee fires at the 2 Triads, killing them. Lee then aims his M4 back to Woozie as sirens are being heard in the background. "You thought you can get away from this plan huh?" Says Lee. "HA HA" Mocks Woozie. Right then Woozie was grabbed by his neck by his "Nang boy Hostage" and was killed with the silent cut of a 6 inch switchblade tearing through Woozies neck. "Alright man, now that we've got you back, let's run from the Five-O." Says Lee. Edited June 17, 2010 by Drift-Kingz Link to post Share on other sites
Build Up Your San Andreas Gang 0 Posted June 17, 2010 Author Share Posted June 17, 2010 Drift-Kings~ It seems to have no errors. There is something that I don't like though. You use a Desert Eagle wich is not in the Da Nang Boys weapons stocks. Good shape for a first chapter. I'm giving you: $35 because of the use of the Desert Eagle. ~Rating brought to you by Landstalker~ Link to post Share on other sites
Drift-Kingz 3 Posted June 17, 2010 Share Posted June 17, 2010 Drift-Kings~ It seems to have no errors. There is something that I don't like though. You use a Desert Eagle wich is not in the Da Nang Boys weapons stocks. Good shape for a first chapter. I'm giving you: $35 because of the use of the Desert Eagle. ~Rating brought to you by Landstalker~ Ahh man. But thats ok i'll take 35 bucks. I'll make a story later but not right now cause too busy with DYOM. Anyways thanks! Link to post Share on other sites
Landstalker 0 Posted June 17, 2010 Share Posted June 17, 2010 Reserved for chapter two Link to post Share on other sites
Kaizer Chief 0 Posted June 18, 2010 Share Posted June 18, 2010 Chapter 1: Intro The small jet landed serenely on the private runway of Los Santos International Airport. Hidden from the main concourse's view by a series of plastic fences, this airstrip mainly served the less legitimate flyers of Los Santos, those whose arrival the airport officials would rather not promote. As the jet slowed to a stop, three black limousines pulled up to its doors from the side. At the same time, the door was lowered vertically, revealing a luxurious interior. Inside the airplane, twelve Russian men, clad in leather jackets and reflective sunglasses lifted themselves from their comfortable seats, grabbed their luggage, and stepped out of the plane, down the dusty metallic stairs, and onto the sun-baked tarmac. A tall old man, whose hair had grayed completely, stepped out of the lead limousine. His bodyguards accompanied him, each with one hand gripping their holstered firearms. The man spoke in near-perfect English. Had his audience not consisted of twelve Russian men, they wouldn't have been able to recognize his nearly undetectable Russian accent. "Good morning, gentlemen. Welcome to Los Santos. This is your new home for the following months. We are here to establish a foothold in the underground criminal world of the American West Coast. My name is Andrei, and you are under my leadership. These limousines are here to take you to our temporary homes; they are not far from here." Following this short introduction, Andrei was escorted back into the lead limo. The bodyguards showed the twelve Russians to the doors of the other two limos, and once everyone was seated, the doors were shut and the windows rolled up, and the three limos pulled out of the secluded sector of the runway grounds. Fifteen minutes later, the limos parked on the side of the road in Ocean Docks, and the men poured out, inconspicuously entering a motel-like apartment complex and claiming their rooms. A few construction workers caught sight of this. A bearded, overly enthusiastic work man went over and tapped Andrei on the shoulder. "Hey buddy, what is this? Who do you think you are, the Mafia?" Andrei frowned, and gnashed his teeth together. He turned to one of his bodyguards, Minkowski, at his side. "Minkowski." "Yeah?" "Do me a favor, will ya? Deal with this guy." Andrei then left to check on his newcomers. As he walked, he heard behind him a gunshot, a grunt, a couple of screams. Then, more shots, and more screams. Then the sound of the limo's trunk being slammed shut. Andrei smiled; it felt completely routine to hear these sounds. One of the newcomers came running out of the room, panicked. "What was that?" he asked in a heavily accented English. "That was America." Link to post Share on other sites
Build Up Your San Andreas Gang 0 Posted June 18, 2010 Author Share Posted June 18, 2010 Ratings Kaizer Chief: Great first story. No grammar mistakes at all. I'm expecting more great stories from you.. $45 added to the Russian Mafia Rated by mrpain Attention, I will be either removing jkmd or Kaizer Chief from the staff. I dont want too mane people on the staff. Link to post Share on other sites
mrpain 43 Posted June 18, 2010 Share Posted June 18, 2010 Chapter OneDragons Are Born “阿他妈的金龙雕像？！？?!?” which translated to “A f*cking golden dragon statue?!?” I couldn’t believe my eyes. Wu Zi Mu made me risk my life for nothing just for a f*cking statue. But I still had to follow his orders even though I was pissed as f*ck. Unfortunately, while I was shouting at the top of my lungs, some of the Da Nang Boys overheard me. I frantically tried to look for a way out but I had rushed out of time and they finally found me. I checked my ammo which only had two clips left. I slid from cover to cover hoping I would catch them by surprise. When one of them was near enough, I quickly got behind him and snapped his neck. He fell down to the ground silently and it made a grin on my face. “So far so good,” I thought, not knowing they would discover a dead body lying openly. There were two other guys left and it was the perfect time to ambush them. They went over to check the body while I got into position to blast their asses off. The moment their attention drew on the body, I popped out of cover and fired at will. To my goddamn luck, my aiming was a bit off and wasted an entire clip shooting at blanks. It was very dark that night, so who could blame me. Their attention though was now on me and their attention was about to kill me. They fired their guns as I took cover behind a crate. I heard clangs of metal in the crate so I peeped what was inside the crate. Seeing the contents of the crate made me burst out laughing. It was a f*ckload of katanas. I grabbed one of them and felt like a f*cking ninja. It didn’t occur to me why would the Da Nang Boys have a crate of katanas in their warehouse but I didn’t care. It was mine now. Figuring I might as well put the katana at use, I waited for them to empty their ammo. Once I heard them clicking their guns, I rushed over to them and slit one of their throats with my newly beloved katana. He fell to the ground with blood gushing out of his throat. Before I even slashed the next guy, he fainted. I checked his pulse and there was nothing. Who would have thought a criminal would have suffered a heart attack? I called out for Jacky to ensure him that it was all clear. He drove the Elegy in and I placed the dragon statue in the back of the car. I asked Jacky, “A gold dragon statue? What the f*ck for?” “It’s for decoration in the casino.” When Jacky said that, I was about to blow my head off. “A f*cking decoration piece? Screw it, I’m gonna kill Wu Zi Mu.” I literally meant that. “Relax, I was being sarcastic.” Well thank god for Jacky for saying that. I was literally scared as sh*t to kill Wu Zi Mu. He continued on, “Some guy who flew here from Japan wants that statue. He is willingly to pay a huge sum of money for it.” Now that I heard money was involved, I got interested, “How huge?” Jacky cleared his throat to deliver the bombshell sum, “Two f*cking million.” I screamed out for joy before I was interrupted by some Da Nang Boys chasing us down the road. “This motherf*ckers never give up!” I got out of their window and started firing at them. This was going to be one long ride. Link to post Share on other sites
Benjimino234 16 Posted June 18, 2010 Share Posted June 18, 2010 Ah, this is up... I'm kind of over writing fan fiction for the GTA series anymore, I've done lots of stories and even was a staff member from the last BUYG. I've stopped playing GTA and don't write anymore, plus I can't be bothered making new characters... I've just worked heaps on my previous characters in the last BUYG. But it's good to see this up. Link to post Share on other sites
Kaizer Chief 0 Posted June 18, 2010 Share Posted June 18, 2010 *edited: ignore this post. Link to post Share on other sites
