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Mokrie Dela

City of Lies (Possible GTA IV spoiler)

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Mokrie Dela

So it appears I'm up for three/Four awards!

(Best writer, Best story, most helpful - i think - and one other, though i may have been mistaken with the 4th)

 

So quick thanks to anyone who's nominated me, and supported this story. Couldn't have happened without interest!

 

Keep spreading the word for this story, the entire WD forum and other people's work! smile.gif

 

And vote for me! haha tounge.gif(If i win i'll work on something special for anyone who's voted, not that I'm trying to bride y'all wink.gif Up against some tough competition (eminence, President Killer for example), but i'm happy to be listed biggrin.gif

 

But no, thanks for the nominations people

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Mati
So it appears I'm up for three/Four awards!

(Best writer, Best story, most helpful - i think - and one other, though i may have been mistaken with the 4th)

 

So quick thanks to anyone who's nominated me, and supported this story. Couldn't have happened without interest!

 

Keep spreading the word for this story, the entire WD forum and other people's work! smile.gif

 

And vote for me! haha tounge.gif(If i win i'll work on something special for anyone who's voted, not that I'm trying to bride y'all wink.gif Up against some tough competition (eminence, President Killer for example), but i'm happy to be listed biggrin.gif

 

But no, thanks for the nominations people

Guess who I voted for...

I'm also in some awards, even if I didn't expect it (comedian of the year, biggest spammer, best concept story, best gang, best team player and I think best newcomer). Anyway, you said that CoL2 is the same story from a different POV (following the revenge ending). Does that mean that NB, Johnny and Luis have to work together again to stop these f*cks?

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Mokrie Dela
So it appears I'm up for three/Four awards!

(Best writer, Best story, most helpful - i think - and one other, though i may have been mistaken with the 4th)

 

So quick thanks to anyone who's nominated me, and supported this story. Couldn't have happened without interest!

 

Keep spreading the word for this story, the entire WD forum and other people's work! smile.gif

 

And vote for me! haha tounge.gif(If i win i'll work on something special for anyone who's voted, not that I'm trying to bride y'all wink.gif Up against some tough competition (eminence, President Killer for example), but i'm happy to be listed biggrin.gif

 

But no, thanks for the nominations people

Guess who I voted for...

I'm also in some awards, even if I didn't expect it (comedian of the year, biggest spammer, best concept story, best gang, best team player and I think best newcomer). Anyway, you said that CoL2 is the same story from a different POV (following the revenge ending). Does that mean that NB, Johnny and Luis have to work together again to stop these f*cks?

No comment!

 

And yeah i noticed you were in a lot of awards! You're certainly making yourself known, Mister Mod! wink.gif

 

 

Keep an eye on Thames City though guys. When the story is ALL uploaded, expect some kind of City of Lies posting wink.gif

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Mokrie Dela

I dont care about the double post or the bump...

 

Thank you everyone who voted for this story. I'm so happy to have won, and tbh i didn't think i'd beat PresidentKiller, but thanks.

 

Time to step up work on Thames so i can reward you guys with a sequal! biggrin.gif

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Mati

You earned it man. Congrats icon14.gif

Even if you're in the Hall Of Shame tounge.gif

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Mokrie Dela
You earned it man. Congrats icon14.gif

Even if you're in the Hall Of Shame tounge.gif

That was for the best writer tounge.gif Was curious to see what would happen (turns out you go on the wall of shame! biggrin.gif )

 

Thanks again peeps biggrin.gif

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drscot

Your talents don't end mate! your mapmaking, your writing.. your like well kl icon14.gificon14.gif

 

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Mokrie Dela
Your talents don't end mate! your mapmaking, your writing.. your like well kl icon14.gificon14.gif

 

have a cookie.gif

Thanks! I'm a very creative person, and writing is perhaps my strongest point, though i have let that skill slide a lot lately smile.gif

 

I remember something Victor Wooten said about birds and their songs - "where does that come from? Where do they learn that? Is there a bird school?" - it comes from within, therefore anyone has the ability to do anything and i think creative people are more inclined to be better skilled at other creative things. Writing, poetry, music, art etc. (check out the link in my sig if you wanna check out my poetry - unfortunately not much of Thames is up yet and so far (half the reason it's taking so long) im not too happy with the quality, partly due to the "concept" style)

 

I'm really proud of City of Lies. It's become everything i wanted it to be. The chapters led on well i think, the characters feel real to me, and I'm happy with it (a few errors aside of course)

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Mati

Yep, you're very talented man. Ever earned money with writing?

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Mokrie Dela
Yep, you're very talented man. Ever earned money with writing?

Nah not yet (fingers crossed)

 

I've had 2 works published in "compilation" books though while i was at school. One of them is one of the poems i got up here, the other a short story (which tbh was sh*t).

 

I hope to someday get a novel published though....

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dannyz

Where are we on the Second Part of this Great Story? I want to read more.

 

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Mokrie Dela
Where are we on the Second Part of this Great Story? I want to read more.

sorry for the late reply. I didnt know there had been any new replies.

 

Honestly, it's still in the brainstorming and ideas stage. I have about half a chapter written - which was done spur of the moment.

 

Thames City is my priority and lately i havn't been able todo much work on writing.

 

COL2 WILL come though, and when it does, i will let y'all know biggrin.gif

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dannyz

Thanks.

 

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LuisBellic

 

COL2 WILL come though, and when it does, i will let y'all know biggrin.gif

 

DO NOT READ MY IDEA IF YOU HAVEN'T READ CITY OF LIES YET.

 

Maybe Johnny could've killed Niko but he survived Niko's shot. It could somehow involve Little Jacob wanting revenge on Johnny. If you have something completly different in mind could I make something about that? It would be something completly different than City of Lies but it would follow off from the events of the story (If it's fine with you). Im already thinking of Jacob being betrayed by Badman or something also. What do you think of the idea? Good? icon14.gif Bad? icon13.gif.

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Mokrie Dela
COL2 WILL come though, and when it does, i will let y'all know biggrin.gif

 

DO NOT READ MY IDEA IF YOU HAVEN'T READ CITY OF LIES YET.

 

Maybe Johnny could've killed Niko but he survived Niko's shot. It could somehow involve Little Jacob wanting revenge on Johnny. If you have something completly different in mind could I make something about that? It would be something completly different than City of Lies but it would follow off from the events of the story (If it's fine with you). Im already thinking of Jacob being betrayed by Badman or something also. What do you think of the idea? Good? icon14.gif Bad? icon13.gif.

City of Lies 1 takes place two years after GTA IV.

It extends from GTA IV's "Deal" ending, With Roman dead.

 

City of Lies 2 will also take place two years after GTA IV

It will extend from GTA IV's "Revenge" ending, with Kate dead.

 

I will not rule out a third, but that will likely be set in GTA V's world, if i do that.

 

COL2 will not follow on, so as to whether Johnny or Niko (or both, or none) died, that's up to the reader to decide.

 

If you want to write something that follows on from COL, you're welcome to do so of course. If it heavily refers to or is based on COL, then having a little note at the start or something saying so might be a good idea. Ultimately it's up to you. Rockstar own the characters etc, not me so you can write what you want biggrin.gif

 

 

 

 

As for your idea, it's not bad at all. I personally wouldn't have written that myself because COL ends in the exact place i want it to, but I'll be interested to read your story when it's done. Let me know when it's up biggrin.gif

 

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LuisBellic
COL2 WILL come though, and when it does, i will let y'all know biggrin.gif

 

DO NOT READ MY IDEA IF YOU HAVEN'T READ CITY OF LIES YET.

 

Maybe Johnny could've killed Niko but he survived Niko's shot. It could somehow involve Little Jacob wanting revenge on Johnny. If you have something completly different in mind could I make something about that? It would be something completly different than City of Lies but it would follow off from the events of the story (If it's fine with you). Im already thinking of Jacob being betrayed by Badman or something also. What do you think of the idea? Good? icon14.gif Bad? icon13.gif.

City of Lies 1 takes place two years after GTA IV.

It extends from GTA IV's "Deal" ending, With Roman dead.

 

City of Lies 2 will also take place two years after GTA IV

It will extend from GTA IV's "Revenge" ending, with Kate dead.

 

I will not rule out a third, but that will likely be set in GTA V's world, if i do that.

 

COL2 will not follow on, so as to whether Johnny or Niko (or both, or none) died, that's up to the reader to decide.

 

If you want to write something that follows on from COL, you're welcome to do so of course. If it heavily refers to or is based on COL, then having a little note at the start or something saying so might be a good idea. Ultimately it's up to you. Rockstar own the characters etc, not me so you can write what you want biggrin.gif

 

 

 

 

As for your idea, it's not bad at all. I personally wouldn't have written that myself because COL ends in the exact place i want it to, but I'll be interested to read your story when it's done. Let me know when it's up biggrin.gif

Im already writing the first chapter. I don't think it will be that long of a story, it would be about 13 chapters that each have about 2 or 3 parts. Jacob would work for his Hillside Posse buddies and Badman in the beggining. While doing that he tries to get help from some of his buddies to assault the Lost MC (Who have finally built their clubhouse back up). I don't think im really gonna use any characters from your story.

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Mokrie Dela

Cool. Feel free to post a link in here and I'll check it out smile.gif

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LuisBellic

Alright. Maybe i'll get it posted today if I have the time.

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dannyz
Alright. Maybe i'll get it posted today if I have the time.

So your Story is like a Follow up to City of Lies?

 

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LuisBellic
Alright. Maybe i'll get it posted today if I have the time.

So your Story is like a Follow up to City of Lies?

Pretty much. I've been thinking of changing stuff around so that Johnny and the Lost MC aren't the main antagonists.

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KilnerLUFC

This is f*cking amazing work, good job man. Admittedly only just noticed the topic now, but rarely I visit this part of the forum.

 

Read the first chapter and the amount of detail you put into your words sets the full atmosphere for what's going on, so good work man. Will read the rest when I get chance. smile.gif

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BGModder

Really good work man. Keep it up. icon14.gif

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Mokrie Dela

thanks guys. I'm glad you liked it, and hope you enjoy the rest of it biggrin.gif

 

Sorry for delayed reply, for some reason my subscriptions list wasn't showing up properly... tounge.gif

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Peter Brezovan
Nice man. Liking the story. Really nice work. icon14.gif

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dannyz

Alright City of Lies 2.

 

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Mokrie Dela

It's still a long time coming though. I'm trying hard to rewrite all of the Thames City stuff i lost to catch up.

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Mati

Damnit, after zooming in I couldn't read the text tounge.gif

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Mokrie Dela
Damnit, after zooming in I couldn't read the text tounge.gif

a sneaky move on my part!

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Corndawg93

Can we expect anytime soon that you will type/write City Of Lies 2 in the near future???

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Mokrie Dela
Can we expect anytime soon that you will type/write City Of Lies 2 in the near future???

Well it's in the planning stages. The first chapter is done but it's an intro. The story will span from there.

It's NOT a sequel of COL. I'm calling it an 'alteruel' as it takes place at the same time as COL but this time follows the REVENGE endin of IV. The coin is flipped.

THAMES remains my priority; I need to get it done, and the recent setback has not helped. I'll still work on COL2 intermittently but TC is the focus.

Unfortunately I can't say 'it'll be done by xxx'

I can suggest to follow THAMES and that'll give an indication as to how close col2 is

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