Mokrie Dela 2,986 Posted March 4, 2011 Author Share Posted March 4, 2011 So, the battle is going to start soon, isn't it? You ready? HERE WE GO! The Battle For Liberty City: Part I Hope you enjoy. @billy james101, this is set 2 years after GTA IV, so Ochoa is no longer mayor - someone else is. Link to post Share on other sites
Mati 13 Posted March 4, 2011 Share Posted March 4, 2011 Amazing chapter. I can't believe it's gonna end up soon. Link to post Share on other sites
Mokrie Dela 2,986 Posted March 4, 2011 Author Share Posted March 4, 2011 Amazing chapter. I can't believe it's gonna end up soon. Thanks! Tbh with you, the "battle" chapters COULD be split into 3 chapters (like i've done) or even 4 or 5. I think 3 works the best though, more would slow it down. You may remember i said to someone (may have been in a PM, cant remember) that : 1 - a couple of Characters from IV/TLAD/BOGT were going to re-appear - THAT was reffering to Armando and H' 2 - Some "old favourites" from previous games are returning - that will be in PART II or III of TBFLC. 3 - Some old Characters from previous games were appearing - that was reffering to 'Claude' 'CJ' and 'Tommy' (and 'Catalina') from AMBUSHED. New chapters in a day or so. maybe later tonight - dont want to make you wait too long! I'll post new chapter only after anothter reply tho to avoid DP. Link to post Share on other sites
Mati 13 Posted March 4, 2011 Share Posted March 4, 2011 I wonder how exactly you're gonna do the 2nd point(old favorites). Link to post Share on other sites
Mokrie Dela 2,986 Posted March 4, 2011 Author Share Posted March 4, 2011 I wonder how exactly you're gonna do the 2nd point(old favorites). I'll give you a clue, we';re going into WOWAI territory here (aint played THAT for ages! HAve you caught up with me and Tycek yet?) I'm talking less conventionally. You're immediately thinking of a person, i bet. if you want the answer? You may have to hunt for Status Quo's Groover. Link to post Share on other sites
Mati 13 Posted March 4, 2011 Share Posted March 4, 2011 Just a few correct answers, the I catch up with Tycek Anyways: Bomb shops? Car tuning? Link to post Share on other sites
Mokrie Dela 2,986 Posted March 5, 2011 Author Share Posted March 5, 2011 Just a few correct answers, the I catch up with Tycek Anyways: Bomb shops? Car tuning? Lady Ga-Ga? oh wait, wrong topic! You'll see who the "old Favourites" are. My next reply here will include the chapter! Link to post Share on other sites
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Mokrie Dela 2,986 Posted March 5, 2011 Author Share Posted March 5, 2011 ...And here's part II! Link to post Share on other sites
Corndawg93 1,148 Posted March 5, 2011 Share Posted March 5, 2011 Golden Buzzard, well it sounds like part 3 is going to be very intence Also you can only fit 2 people in a buzzard not 3, Im just saying Link to post Share on other sites
Mokrie Dela 2,986 Posted March 6, 2011 Author Share Posted March 6, 2011 Golden Buzzard, well it sounds like part 3 is going to be very intence Also you can only fit 2 people in a buzzard not 3, Im just saying I know about that. The third is simply standing in the gap. That is noted either in part 2 or 3 (a passage says about them being cramped.) For all intents and purposes, Niko's sitting on Johnny's lap. Or if you cant buy that, lets just say yusuf modified it.... Link to post Share on other sites
Mati 13 Posted March 6, 2011 Share Posted March 6, 2011 I'm waiting for the next chapter. Is the Buzzard one of the old favorites? Link to post Share on other sites
Mokrie Dela 2,986 Posted March 6, 2011 Author Share Posted March 6, 2011 I'm waiting for the next chapter. Is the Buzzard one of the old favorites? Nope. Couldn't work out the cryptic clue huh? Link to post Share on other sites
Mati 13 Posted March 8, 2011 Share Posted March 8, 2011 When's the next chapter coming? Link to post Share on other sites
Mokrie Dela 2,986 Posted March 8, 2011 Author Share Posted March 8, 2011 When's the next chapter coming? You know what? Here you go! The Battle for Liberty City - Part III 3 more chapters to go! Link to post Share on other sites
dannyz 4 Posted March 8, 2011 Share Posted March 8, 2011 This is Great keep it going. Something big is going to happen in the End. Link to post Share on other sites
Mati 13 Posted March 8, 2011 Share Posted March 8, 2011 Hunters and tanks were the old favorites Amazing chapter Link to post Share on other sites
Corndawg93 1,148 Posted March 9, 2011 Share Posted March 9, 2011 Bloody cliffhanger, oh well R.I.P Golden Buzzard, by any chance can you bring the AA12 with Explosive shells in to play. And also have them find a room with all sorts of guns in there, that would be awesome Link to post Share on other sites
Mokrie Dela 2,986 Posted March 9, 2011 Author Share Posted March 9, 2011 Bloody cliffhanger, oh well R.I.P Golden Buzzard, by any chance can you bring the AA12 with Explosive shells in to play. And also have them find a room with all sorts of guns in there, that would be awesome Cliffhangers are meant to keep people interested Sorry though, the story's finished. It's written and it's bad practice to change it now. I can't remember off the top of my head if the AA-12 appears or not. New chapters in the next few days Spread the word One love Link to post Share on other sites
Mati 13 Posted March 9, 2011 Share Posted March 9, 2011 I'm waiting for it Link to post Share on other sites
dannyz 4 Posted March 9, 2011 Share Posted March 9, 2011 Me Too. Waiting. Link to post Share on other sites
Mokrie Dela 2,986 Posted March 11, 2011 Author Share Posted March 11, 2011 Ladies and Gentlemen, I am proud to announce the final chapter(s) of GTA IV: City Of Lies are now up. Thanks to everyone who's made this possible, supported it and offered tips etc. Feel free to discuss points of the story with people, offer criticism, opinions, hopes, ideas concerning the second etc. Thanks again Chapter 28 - For Michael (With chapter 29 and the Epilogue below it. Link to post Share on other sites
TomVDC 9 Posted March 11, 2011 Share Posted March 11, 2011 I haven't posted here before but I've been following this from beginning 'till the end, and I must say this really sucked me. It's an incredible story and you should be proud of it. The ending was amazing and I just loved it. Congratulations man,that was truly epic! Link to post Share on other sites
Mati 13 Posted March 11, 2011 Share Posted March 11, 2011 This is just f*cking epic man. But all good things come to an end. I was always following this thread. Amazing job! CoL 2? Link to post Share on other sites
TomVDC 9 Posted March 11, 2011 Share Posted March 11, 2011 This is just f*cking epic man. But all good things come to an end. I was always following this thread. Amazing job!CoL 2? Now that's something I would like too, he can go anywhere he wants with this. Everything's possible... Link to post Share on other sites
Mokrie Dela 2,986 Posted March 11, 2011 Author Share Posted March 11, 2011 Thanks. @Vic Vance. I misread your first comment there as "it really sucked" haha You have my word that City of Lies 2 WILL happen, but for now all my efforts will go into the mammoth project that is Thames City. For anyone who's interested in that, click my sig (02fishera's concept). Thames city is planned to hit 100 missions, and multiple story branches with many missions having an open ended style - you can complete them in many ways. Ideas for missions for that are very welcome so feel free to pop over to Thames City for that I am also writing "friend date" dialogues, and drawing the map. That's gonna take a while! Also as said, this topic will remain open, please discuss ideas or thoughts regarding City of Lies or City of Lies "2" (Which likely will not carry the City of Lies title.... i dunno ). Once Thames City returned to the Writing stage* Planning on COL 2 will begin. *I'm taking a new approach and planning out every damned aspect before carrying on writing. Link to post Share on other sites
TomVDC 9 Posted March 11, 2011 Share Posted March 11, 2011 Well good luck with Thames city, sounds like an incredible project. I was planning for my story to be big but it will be just a little more than what you're talking about. Also my PM inbox is always open and so is my MSN account. I look forward to Thames City Link to post Share on other sites
dannyz 4 Posted March 11, 2011 Share Posted March 11, 2011 Great Story. I don't know how you make a second one with what happens Johnny and Niko Died Or Maybe not??? What ever you do with this Story I know will be great and I can't wait for COL2 and will check Thames City. Link to post Share on other sites
Mokrie Dela 2,986 Posted March 12, 2011 Author Share Posted March 12, 2011 Great Story. I don't know how you make a second one with what happens Johnny and Niko Died Or Maybe not??? What ever you do with this Story I know will be great and I can't wait for COL2 and will check Thames City. Niko and johnny: They may both be dead. They may both have missed. One might be dead. I will not tell you which one because that is YOUR job. As for the sequal, that word isn't right. City Of Lies Two will take place in parallel following GTA IV's REVENGE ending. Things will be different - it'll tell the same story from a different view Thanks for checking out Thames people - 02fishera will be happy i think. The story thats there NOW is not too good but when i get enough, i'll post the story HERE, in the W.D. Link to post Share on other sites
dannyz 4 Posted March 12, 2011 Share Posted March 12, 2011 Great Story. I don't know how you make a second one with what happens Johnny and Niko Died Or Maybe not??? What ever you do with this Story I know will be great and I can't wait for COL2 and will check Thames City. Niko and johnny: They may both be dead. They may both have missed. One might be dead. I will not tell you which one because that is YOUR job. As for the sequal, that word isn't right. City Of Lies Two will take place in parallel following GTA IV's REVENGE ending. Things will be different - it'll tell the same story from a different view Thanks for checking out Thames people - 02fishera will be happy i think. The story thats there NOW is not too good but when i get enough, i'll post the story HERE, in the W.D. I am not the best Speller. I see what you mean having the story where Roman lives and Kate dies and Niko still depressed because it should have been him. Link to post Share on other sites
