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City of Lies (Possible GTA IV spoiler)


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Mokrie Dela

thanks guys. I'm in the process of editing the finale (split in 3 chapters), so i'm aiming to upload the rest intermittently over the next week or so.

 

The more replies, the quicker each bit will be uploaded. (i would like to try to avoid DPing*). Also, once the story's uploaded (hell even now), i would like to hear people's ideas and suggestions for the alter-ual (alternate squeal) tounge.gif

 

Thanks for taking an interest, and for your feedback, everyone.

 

 

Mati, I'm glad that's carried over. I wanted to avoid this just being a simple story, but a story based on GTA IV, as an epilogue to it, if you will.

 

I'll aim to get the next chapter up in the next few days, hopefully someone will post to avoid DPing*

 

And remember me when the awards roll into town tounge.gif

 

 

*Double posting, not double penetration. wink.gif

 

EDIT:

 

I would like to see you guys speculate and discuss how you think this will end. What will happen. Will anyone die? Who will win etc. Thoughts/Speculation please!

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The ending? I think Karen will somehow be shot and fall in Niko's arms. But all the 'bad guys' will die tounge.gif

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El Zilcho

Seriously am loving this! Especially the witty one liners like "he bleeds like any other" and the small details and intricate plot workings. Very enjoyable read, looking forward to more.

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I love Reading GTA Fan Fiction. I don't know why people don't write more on this Forum. I think Karen will send all three of them into a Trap and someone dies, Karen moves and the Survivor's are still always looking behind their back not knowing what trap will happen next.

 

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Mokrie Dela

 

I love Reading GTA Fan Fiction. I don't know why people don't write more on this Forum. I think Karen will send all three of them into a Trap and someone dies, Karen moves and the Survivor's are still always looking behind their back not knowing what trap will happen next.

Interesting thought there.

 

Next chapter - #20 - Keep Your Friends Close... is up Enjoy smile.gif

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Amazing chapter. But there must be a turn in the story soon. If Niko and others continue the 'jobs' to the end and take the baddies out and everyone has a happy ending, it would be boring. But I'm sure it won't.

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Mokrie Dela
Amazing chapter. But there must be a turn in the story soon. If Niko and others continue the 'jobs' to the end and take the baddies out and everyone has a happy ending, it would be boring. But I'm sure it won't.

The dynamic of GTA is that the character always accepts "jobs".

 

But don't worry, it's not all Mission mission mission. The end is nigh...

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*random bump* tounge.gif

 

Just waiting for the next chapter. Will Luis, Niko and Johnny stick together to the end?

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*random bump* tounge.gif

 

Just waiting for the next chapter. Will Luis, Niko and Johnny stick together to the end?

Or will something get in the way and they end up against each other in an all out battle to the Death?

 

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Mokrie Dela

Well obviously i'm not going to give away the ending tounge.gif

 

However, i've added the second half of chapter 21 - just search for :

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That signifies the "break" as it were. tounge.gif

New chapter will be up in a day or two - as soon as there's a reply really tounge.gif

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I like how fast you update the topic, almost as you'll be already done will every chapter and only wait for replys tounge.gif

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Another great chapter. A very good read. I simply love how you put everything together. This could be a real sequel to GTA IV.

About the chapter, to me it's kinda suspicious that Karen has contacts to the Russians.

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Things got very interesting. One question: I didn't read the first chapters in a while, is Kate still alive?

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Mokrie Dela

 

Things got very interesting. One question: I didn't read the first chapters in a while, is Kate still alive?

COL follows on from the DEAL ending. Therefore Kate's alive, Roman's dead.

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Mokrie Dela

Take another look at the last chapter: I've added the second half of it. Search for " * * * " for the break.

 

Also do me a favour will you guys. Promote this writing section where you can (without spamming of course). Perhaps link to it in your sig, if there's room? I feel that the entire writing section gets overlooked most of the time and if everyone KNEW what was in here they'd come down here more.

 

It's like the Forums are a building. The IV is the lobby. VC III SA etc are the 1st 2nd and 3rd floor. General chat is the penthouse/observation levels, with off topic being a smoking area on the roof.

 

The writing section is the basement, dark and dreary, with some gems tucked away. BRING SOME LIGHT DOWN ON THAT!

 

Not necessarily so my work can get more view, but so everyone elses can too!

 

Peace out biggrin.gif

 

P.S. New chapter in a day or two.

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Reading it right now. I will add a link in my sig since Justin Bieber's death got kinda old.

And, I will advert this topic in my gang if that helps.

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Mokrie Dela
Reading it right now. I will add a link in my sig since Justin Bieber's death got kinda old.

And, I will advert this topic in my gang if that helps.

Wow man, i wasn't asking or expecting you to link to my actual story on your sig! (was hoping people can just advertise the "writers discussion" forum more).

 

Thanks for that, i'm feeling quite humbled now! smile.gif

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Corndawg93

It would be amazing if this became a game, like a DLC or something like that

 

I hope mayor ochor wins the election and also is Kenny Patrovic gonna have a big role in the ending.

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