Mati Posted October 17, 2010 Share Posted October 17, 2010 This is great work, Morkie! Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/447717-city-of-lies-possible-gta-iv-spoiler/page/3/#findComment-1060165322 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mokrie Dela Posted October 17, 2010 Author Share Posted October 17, 2010 Thanks Mati! Hoping to have another chapter in about a week or so... Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/447717-city-of-lies-possible-gta-iv-spoiler/page/3/#findComment-1060165474 Share on other sites More sharing options...
megahypernova Posted October 18, 2010 Share Posted October 18, 2010 just a little update to say i worked on a chapter earlier. I will not tell you what it is other then:It's a flashback. got a few chapters waiting upload - not 100% happy with them yet but hold on. also, those who want to see a sequal, or alter-ual, now's the time to say so! Post here or PM me. enough interest i will write it. not enough.... i MAY write it one day..... please sequal it Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/447717-city-of-lies-possible-gta-iv-spoiler/page/3/#findComment-1060166773 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prasdana Posted October 22, 2010 Share Posted October 22, 2010 when will you post the next chapter?I like this story Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/447717-city-of-lies-possible-gta-iv-spoiler/page/3/#findComment-1060172982 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mokrie Dela Posted October 22, 2010 Author Share Posted October 22, 2010 when will you post the next chapter?I like this story When it's finished - and by finished i mean proof read and i'm happy with the quality! Gonna work on it in a min - the first time i've had time Thanks for your interest! Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/447717-city-of-lies-possible-gta-iv-spoiler/page/3/#findComment-1060173023 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prasdana Posted October 22, 2010 Share Posted October 22, 2010 ok Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/447717-city-of-lies-possible-gta-iv-spoiler/page/3/#findComment-1060173080 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mati Posted October 24, 2010 Share Posted October 24, 2010 cant wait! Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/447717-city-of-lies-possible-gta-iv-spoiler/page/3/#findComment-1060175363 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mokrie Dela Posted October 25, 2010 Author Share Posted October 25, 2010 (edited) New chapters posted. yes i said chapters Chapters 12 (Sweet dreams) and 13 (Get this done, then we'll talk) are up. As always, post your thoughts and suggestions etc Not long left now! P.S. This story will probably be UNDER 20 chapters in length (total) Edited October 25, 2010 by Mokrie Dela Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/447717-city-of-lies-possible-gta-iv-spoiler/page/3/#findComment-1060176951 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mati Posted October 25, 2010 Share Posted October 25, 2010 I love it!!! Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/447717-city-of-lies-possible-gta-iv-spoiler/page/3/#findComment-1060177029 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mokrie Dela Posted November 23, 2010 Author Share Posted November 23, 2010 Two more chapters up! #s Fourteen - Hunting the Hunters and Fifteen - The Voice. Enjoy! Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/447717-city-of-lies-possible-gta-iv-spoiler/page/3/#findComment-1060214962 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mati Posted November 23, 2010 Share Posted November 23, 2010 Gonna read it now. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/447717-city-of-lies-possible-gta-iv-spoiler/page/3/#findComment-1060215662 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mokrie Dela Posted November 24, 2010 Author Share Posted November 24, 2010 cool, let me know what you think man Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/447717-city-of-lies-possible-gta-iv-spoiler/page/3/#findComment-1060216249 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prasdana Posted November 24, 2010 Share Posted November 24, 2010 finally, you included Luis in this story. good job Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/447717-city-of-lies-possible-gta-iv-spoiler/page/3/#findComment-1060216686 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mati Posted November 24, 2010 Share Posted November 24, 2010 Luis was amazing. Good idea to include him. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/447717-city-of-lies-possible-gta-iv-spoiler/page/3/#findComment-1060216806 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mokrie Dela Posted November 24, 2010 Author Share Posted November 24, 2010 Thanks guys. Luis has a role to play too. The Voice will be revealed very soon... Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/447717-city-of-lies-possible-gta-iv-spoiler/page/3/#findComment-1060216996 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mati Posted November 27, 2010 Share Posted November 27, 2010 Cool wonder who he is. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/447717-city-of-lies-possible-gta-iv-spoiler/page/3/#findComment-1060220300 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mokrie Dela Posted December 15, 2010 Author Share Posted December 15, 2010 (edited) Just a little word to all the "fans" I'm planning something special for this topic. Nothing major but a little thing. You'll see it soon! *Idea aborted* Edited December 15, 2010 by Mokrie Dela Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/447717-city-of-lies-possible-gta-iv-spoiler/page/3/#findComment-1060246996 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mati Posted December 15, 2010 Share Posted December 15, 2010 Just a little word to all the "fans" I'm planning something special for this topic. Nothing major but a little thing. You'll see it soon! Come oooon, tell us what it is Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/447717-city-of-lies-possible-gta-iv-spoiler/page/3/#findComment-1060247024 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mokrie Dela Posted December 15, 2010 Author Share Posted December 15, 2010 hahaa noooo Its just a small idea i had. Nothing major. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/447717-city-of-lies-possible-gta-iv-spoiler/page/3/#findComment-1060247205 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mati Posted December 15, 2010 Share Posted December 15, 2010 ...is it done yeeeet? Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/447717-city-of-lies-possible-gta-iv-spoiler/page/3/#findComment-1060247221 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mokrie Dela Posted December 15, 2010 Author Share Posted December 15, 2010 ...is it done yeeeet? Nope! Itll be a while - a few days at the least (time permitting) Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/447717-city-of-lies-possible-gta-iv-spoiler/page/3/#findComment-1060247378 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Izzi Posted December 15, 2010 Share Posted December 15, 2010 This is brilliant Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/447717-city-of-lies-possible-gta-iv-spoiler/page/3/#findComment-1060247407 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mokrie Dela Posted December 15, 2010 Author Share Posted December 15, 2010 This is brilliant Thanks! Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/447717-city-of-lies-possible-gta-iv-spoiler/page/3/#findComment-1060247468 Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuisBellic Posted December 28, 2010 Share Posted December 28, 2010 This is f*ckin awesome man. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/447717-city-of-lies-possible-gta-iv-spoiler/page/3/#findComment-1060267195 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mokrie Dela Posted December 29, 2010 Author Share Posted December 29, 2010 This is f*ckin awesome man. thanks! Vote for me when the awards come around! haha In all seriousness though, GTAF didnt notify me of your reply, so sorry for the late reply Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/447717-city-of-lies-possible-gta-iv-spoiler/page/3/#findComment-1060268594 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mati Posted December 30, 2010 Share Posted December 30, 2010 Hey man, How many chapters do you plan? Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/447717-city-of-lies-possible-gta-iv-spoiler/page/3/#findComment-1060270983 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mokrie Dela Posted December 31, 2010 Author Share Posted December 31, 2010 Hey man, How many chapters do you plan? Probably 20. Maybe less. Everything's planned out - its just a case of writing it! come new year im planning on writing more. Hopefully have something good up soon! Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/447717-city-of-lies-possible-gta-iv-spoiler/page/3/#findComment-1060271803 Share on other sites More sharing options...
SilentSeas Posted January 3, 2011 Share Posted January 3, 2011 I've nominated this for the best story award, keep up the good work Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/447717-city-of-lies-possible-gta-iv-spoiler/page/3/#findComment-1060276783 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mati Posted January 3, 2011 Share Posted January 3, 2011 I've nominated this for the best story award, keep up the good work Me too Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/447717-city-of-lies-possible-gta-iv-spoiler/page/3/#findComment-1060277011 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mokrie Dela Posted January 3, 2011 Author Share Posted January 3, 2011 (edited) Wow, thank you guys - that really does mean alot! Thanks BTW can someone link me to the "nominating" thing? I havnt seen it - found it. Edited January 3, 2011 by Mokrie Dela Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/447717-city-of-lies-possible-gta-iv-spoiler/page/3/#findComment-1060277613 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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