City of Lies (Possible GTA IV spoiler)

[Mati 7]

This is great work, Morkie!

[Mokrie Dela 2,845]

Thanks Mati!

Hoping to have another chapter in about a week or so...

[megahypernova 0]

just a little update to say i worked on a chapter earlier. I will not tell you what it is other then:

It's a flashback.

 

got a few chapters waiting upload - not 100% happy with them yet but hold on.

 

also, those who want to see a sequal, or alter-ual, now's the time to say so!

 

Post here or PM me. enough interest i will write it. not enough.... i MAY write it one day.....

please sequal it

[Prasdana 1]

when will you post the next chapter?I like this story

[Mokrie Dela 2,845]

when will you post the next chapter?I like this story

When it's finished - and by finished i mean proof read and i'm happy with the quality!

Gonna work on it in a min - the first time i've had time

 

Thanks for your interest!

[Prasdana 1]

ok

[Mati 7]

cant wait!

[Mokrie Dela 2,845]

New chapters posted.

 

 

yes i said chapters

 

Chapters 12 (Sweet dreams) and 13 (Get this done, then we'll talk) are up.

 

As always, post your thoughts and suggestions etc

 

Not long left now!

 

P.S. This story will probably be UNDER 20 chapters in length (total)

Edited October 25, 2010 by Mokrie Dela

[Mati 7]

I love it!!!

[Mokrie Dela 2,845]

Two more chapters up! #s Fourteen - Hunting the Hunters and Fifteen - The Voice.

 

Enjoy!

[Mati 7]

Gonna read it now.

[Mokrie Dela 2,845]

cool, let me know what you think man

[Prasdana 1]

finally, you included Luis in this story. good job

[Mati 7]

Luis was amazing. Good idea to include him.

[Mokrie Dela 2,845]

Thanks guys. Luis has a role to play too.

 

The Voice will be revealed very soon...

[Mati 7]

Cool wonder who he is.

[Mokrie Dela 2,845]

Just a little word to all the "fans"

 

I'm planning something special for this topic. Nothing major but a little thing.

 

You'll see it soon!

*Idea aborted*

Edited December 15, 2010 by Mokrie Dela

[Mati 7]

Just a little word to all the "fans"

 

I'm planning something special for this topic. Nothing major but a little thing.

 

You'll see it soon!

Come oooon, tell us what it is

[Mokrie Dela 2,845]

hahaa noooo

 

Its just a small idea i had. Nothing major.

[Mati 7]

...is it done yeeeet?

[Mokrie Dela 2,845]

...is it done yeeeet?

Nope!

Itll be a while - a few days at the least (time permitting)

[Izzi 0]

This is brilliant

[Mokrie Dela 2,845]

This is brilliant

Thanks!

 

[LuisBellic 3]

This is f*ckin awesome man.

[Mokrie Dela 2,845]

This is f*ckin awesome man.

thanks! Vote for me when the awards come around! haha

 

In all seriousness though, GTAF didnt notify me of your reply, so sorry for the late reply

[Mati 7]

Hey man, How many chapters do you plan?

[Mokrie Dela 2,845]

Hey man, How many chapters do you plan?

Probably 20. Maybe less. Everything's planned out - its just a case of writing it!

 

come new year im planning on writing more. Hopefully have something good up soon!

[SilentSeas 79]

I've nominated this for the best story award, keep up the good work

[Mati 7]

I've nominated this for the best story award, keep up the good work

Me too

[Mokrie Dela 2,845]

Wow, thank you guys - that really does mean alot! Thanks

 

BTW can someone link me to the "nominating" thing? I havnt seen it - found it.

Edited January 3, 2011 by Mokrie Dela