Mokrie Dela 2,987 Posted June 20, 2010 Author Share Posted June 20, 2010 UPDATE: Chapter Nine - Ace of Spades has been uploaded in its entirety now. It's not my best but i wanted to give you guys something. As always comments are appreciated. Link to post Share on other sites
nufc.neilo 0 Posted June 20, 2010 Share Posted June 20, 2010 Johnny's a bad-ass poker player! Lol Link to post Share on other sites
Mokrie Dela 2,987 Posted June 24, 2010 Author Share Posted June 24, 2010 Johnny's a bad-ass poker player! Lol Haha not as good as Marston, New chapter's in the works people.. hang tight! Link to post Share on other sites
megahypernova 0 Posted July 19, 2010 Share Posted July 19, 2010 Mallorie inherited the business. So Does this story spin of the deal branch at the end of gta 4? Link to post Share on other sites
Mokrie Dela 2,987 Posted July 19, 2010 Author Share Posted July 19, 2010 Mallorie inherited the business. So Does this story spin of the deal branch at the end of gta 4? Yes it does. Niko has chosen to forgive Dimitri, taken the deal. Roman has died and Niko is left feeling empty. Apologies to everyone who's following this. THIS IS NOT DEAD, I have been quite busy lately, writing for GTA:Thames City, and my own projects, while trying to fit it all around work etc. I do have a chapter half done, and i will be posting it soon. Also, i have a concept for a follow up - but that will ONLY be written if there's enough interest, so the more people post, the more likely i am to A priorities this over other things, and B write the follow up. Thanks for reading, please share it with anyone oh and comments/questions/suggestions/observations are encouraged Link to post Share on other sites
megahypernova 0 Posted July 20, 2010 Share Posted July 20, 2010 (edited) I Also added you to my respect list, you and the guy who made the tales from liberty city concept forum EDIT: i also added you on xbox live! Edited July 20, 2010 by megahypernova Link to post Share on other sites
megahypernova 0 Posted July 20, 2010 Share Posted July 20, 2010 i noticed you have two reserved posts, since you already got nine chapters in the first why not start the next one? i also had an idea if you do this they should be divided as sequences, the first would be the first nine chapters, and the next would be for new ones, and if you title the sequences had an idea for the name of the first one "OLD ALLIES, NEW ENEMIES" What do you think? Link to post Share on other sites
Mokrie Dela 2,987 Posted July 22, 2010 Author Share Posted July 22, 2010 I Also added you to my respect list, you and the guy who made the tales from liberty city concept forum EDIT: i also added you on xbox live! Ah, THAT's who that was! I had no idea who it was so i didn't accept.That said i don't play online much, but if i'm feeling kind i may add you again Seriously though, thanks for the respect list add, and for checking out the story. Due to work commitments, i'm struggling to find the time ATM to write this. My efforts are going into the story of GTA: Thames City, so this has taken a back seat. However, i am giving you all my word that this story is not dead, and i'm still making slow progress with it. The story itself is starting to near its end too. things are going to get crazy.... at the risk of a double post, i'll post when i've uploaded any Thanks for reading guys and please, share it! If anyone wants to see the sequal, please send me a PM message, or post on here so i can gauge how much interest there is. The 2nd one will only be written if enough people want it Link to post Share on other sites
The Lolwut Pear 5 Posted July 29, 2010 Share Posted July 29, 2010 Wait a second, could that hispanic in a car that Johnny recognized possibly be Luis? Link to post Share on other sites
Mokrie Dela 2,987 Posted July 30, 2010 Author Share Posted July 30, 2010 Wait a second, could that hispanic in a car that Johnny recognized possibly be Luis? A car horn screamed, throwing Johnny off balance. He fell back, his hand breaking his fall."Get out of the way bro!" A hispanic called leaning out of the window. He looked vaguely familiar, but Johnny couldn't place the face. He didn't respond though, just stood and crossed the road If you mean that bit - then yes, it was Link to post Share on other sites
megahypernova 0 Posted August 13, 2010 Share Posted August 13, 2010 this is dead Link to post Share on other sites
Mokrie Dela 2,987 Posted August 15, 2010 Author Share Posted August 15, 2010 this is dead Nah, it's not. I've vowed to not let it die. I've been very busy with work and working on 02fishera's "GTA Thames City" recently, that, regretfully, this has suffered from. I am still writing on it, but have fallen way behind schedule on both GTA TC and this story. But i can promise you - it's not dead, and i'm going to try to make the next update BIG Link to post Share on other sites
Mokrie Dela 2,987 Posted August 16, 2010 Author Share Posted August 16, 2010 Chapter Ten is up.... well, most of it. it's not perfect but i wanted to get this out here. Link to post Share on other sites
megahypernova 0 Posted August 20, 2010 Share Posted August 20, 2010 Chapter Ten is up.... well, most of it. it's not perfect but i wanted to get this out here. it was perfect! btw when are you going to introduce luis, you've made a few references to him already Link to post Share on other sites
Mokrie Dela 2,987 Posted August 20, 2010 Author Share Posted August 20, 2010 Chapter Ten is up.... well, most of it. it's not perfect but i wanted to get this out here. it was perfect! btw when are you going to introduce luis, you've made a few references to him already Link to post Share on other sites
nufc.neilo 0 Posted August 21, 2010 Share Posted August 21, 2010 Wayhey! As Harry Hill would say... FIIIIGGGGHHHTTTT! lol classic. Are we nearly at the end? Link to post Share on other sites
Mokrie Dela 2,987 Posted August 21, 2010 Author Share Posted August 21, 2010 Wayhey! As Harry Hill would say... FIIIIGGGGHHHTTTT! lol classic. Are we nearly at the end? getting there. about 3/4 there i think. everything is planned out An update to everyone, i have written the final chapter - the end has been written. all that remains are a few steps leading to the final revaluation, if you will, and its done. When the story's done i will be asking people if i should write the "sequal" which would follow the REVENGE story of IV..... feel free to post your thoughts now - the more replies the better. And please spread the word, not just for my story, but for this little hidden section that it seems not many people visit... As always, thanks for reading, and ANY thoughts or comments are welcome, so long as you're respectfull... Link to post Share on other sites
megahypernova 0 Posted September 6, 2010 Share Posted September 6, 2010 when are you gonna add the next part? Link to post Share on other sites
Mokrie Dela 2,987 Posted September 6, 2010 Author Share Posted September 6, 2010 when are you gonna add the next part? simply when i get time to write it. Work's a bit busy atm and, without going into details, i am simply unable to let this take precedence over work, and staring at a computer screen all day at work don't help. Also, my priority is writing the Thames City story - when i've written the next part of that (the story's in parts) i can focus on this a little more. It's not a question of WANT but time. I'd love to blow work off for a week and write but, not only can i not afford that, the work i do i am simply unable to just leave.... Link to post Share on other sites
Mokrie Dela 2,987 Posted September 20, 2010 Author Share Posted September 20, 2010 NEW CHAPTER IS UP! I hope there's still interest in this. It's nearing completion! Spread the word! Tell your friends. Things are heating up! Answers are coming, the climax is building! as always, please comment, thoughts suggestions, speculations... ! and please tell your mates! Link to post Share on other sites
megahypernova 0 Posted September 21, 2010 Share Posted September 21, 2010 like always...EPIC, lol now i have to wait for the next chapter Link to post Share on other sites
Mokrie Dela 2,987 Posted September 21, 2010 Author Share Posted September 21, 2010 like always...EPIC, lol now i have to wait for the next chapter thanks! as i said, the end is looming, i have written the finale, and the chapters that lead up to it (The major events). now all that's left is to fill the inbetween Link to post Share on other sites
Prasdana 1 Posted September 22, 2010 Share Posted September 22, 2010 cool,I'm waiting for the next chapter Link to post Share on other sites
megahypernova 0 Posted October 1, 2010 Share Posted October 1, 2010 i made a cover for the book!!!! Link to post Share on other sites
megahypernova 0 Posted October 1, 2010 Share Posted October 1, 2010 uh don't get pissed but i added you entire article to my wiki Go Here To See The Article EXTRA HEALTH XD if you want me to i can remove it lol it took so long to add though -_- Link to post Share on other sites
Mokrie Dela 2,987 Posted October 1, 2010 Author Share Posted October 1, 2010 uh don't get pissed but i added you entire article to my wiki Go Here To See The Article EXTRA HEALTH XD if you want me to i can remove it lol it took so long to add though -_- haha that's pretty cool. I have one request: make it very clear, link any mention of my name or the title linkable to my GTAF profile and this topic respectively so no one (even idiots) can question who made it apart from that, it's fine, so long as you don't take credit for it I'm working on the new chapter... gonna take a while though Link to post Share on other sites
megahypernova 0 Posted October 1, 2010 Share Posted October 1, 2010 uh don't get pissed but i added you entire article to my wiki Go Here To See The Article EXTRA HEALTH XD if you want me to i can remove it lol it took so long to add though -_- haha that's pretty cool. I have one request: make it very clear, link any mention of my name or the title linkable to my GTAF profile and this topic respectively so no one (even idiots) can question who made it apart from that, it's fine, so long as you don't take credit for it I'm working on the new chapter... gonna take a while though the only thing i took credit for was the cover which i made in ms paint, (lol i wish i had a better program ^_^) i was wondering if you could sign up to the wiki? Go Here To Sign Up PARACHUTE XD Link to post Share on other sites
Mokrie Dela 2,987 Posted October 3, 2010 Author Share Posted October 3, 2010 uh don't get pissed but i added you entire article to my wiki Go Here To See The Article EXTRA HEALTH XD if you want me to i can remove it lol it took so long to add though -_- haha that's pretty cool. I have one request: make it very clear, link any mention of my name or the title linkable to my GTAF profile and this topic respectively so no one (even idiots) can question who made it apart from that, it's fine, so long as you don't take credit for it I'm working on the new chapter... gonna take a while though the only thing i took credit for was the cover which i made in ms paint, (lol i wish i had a better program ^_^) i was wondering if you could sign up to the wiki? Go Here To Sign Up PARACHUTE XD I'll have a ganders at it ( i don't sign up to many things though to be honest) But in future, say this in a PM, keep this topic on track please Link to post Share on other sites
megahypernova 0 Posted October 3, 2010 Share Posted October 3, 2010 uh don't get pissed but i added you entire article to my wiki Go Here To See The Article EXTRA HEALTH XD if you want me to i can remove it lol it took so long to add though -_- haha that's pretty cool. I have one request: make it very clear, link any mention of my name or the title linkable to my GTAF profile and this topic respectively so no one (even idiots) can question who made it apart from that, it's fine, so long as you don't take credit for it I'm working on the new chapter... gonna take a while though the only thing i took credit for was the cover which i made in ms paint, (lol i wish i had a better program ^_^) i was wondering if you could sign up to the wiki? Go Here To Sign Up PARACHUTE XD I'll have a ganders at it ( i don't sign up to many things though to be honest) But in future, say this in a PM, keep this topic on track please ok JETPACK XD Link to post Share on other sites
Mokrie Dela 2,987 Posted October 15, 2010 Author Share Posted October 15, 2010 just a little update to say i worked on a chapter earlier. I will not tell you what it is other then: It's a flashback. got a few chapters waiting upload - not 100% happy with them yet but hold on. also, those who want to see a sequal, or alter-ual, now's the time to say so! Post here or PM me. enough interest i will write it. not enough.... i MAY write it one day..... Link to post Share on other sites
