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Mokrie Dela

City of Lies (Possible GTA IV spoiler)

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Mati

This is great work, Morkie!

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Mokrie Dela

Thanks Mati!

Hoping to have another chapter in about a week or so... smile.gif

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megahypernova
just a little update to say i worked on a chapter earlier. I will not tell you what it is other then:

It's a flashback.

 

got a few chapters waiting upload - not 100% happy with them yet but hold on. smile.gif

 

also, those who want to see a sequal, or alter-ual, now's the time to say so!

 

Post here or PM me. enough interest i will write it. not enough.... i MAY write it one day.....

please sequal it biggrin.gif

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Prasdana

when will you post the next chapter?I like this story

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Mokrie Dela
when will you post the next chapter?I like this story

When it's finished - and by finished i mean proof read and i'm happy with the quality!

Gonna work on it in a min - the first time i've had time

 

Thanks for your interest!

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Prasdana

ok icon14.gif

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Mati

cant wait!

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Mokrie Dela

New chapters posted.

 

 

yes i said chapters

 

Chapters 12 (Sweet dreams) and 13 (Get this done, then we'll talk) are up.

 

As always, post your thoughts and suggestions etc smile.gif

 

Not long left now!

 

P.S. This story will probably be UNDER 20 chapters in length (total)

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Mati

I love it!!!

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Mokrie Dela

Two more chapters up! #s Fourteen - Hunting the Hunters and Fifteen - The Voice.

 

Enjoy!

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Mati

Gonna read it now.

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Mokrie Dela

cool, let me know what you think man

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Prasdana

finally, you included Luis in this story. good job icon14.gif

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Mati

Luis was amazing. Good idea to include him.

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Mokrie Dela

Thanks guys. Luis has a role to play too. wink.gif

 

The Voice will be revealed very soon...

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Mati

Cool wonder who he is.

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Mokrie Dela

Just a little word to all the "fans"

 

I'm planning something special for this topic. Nothing major but a little thing.

 

You'll see it soon! tounge.gif

*Idea aborted*

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Mati
Just a little word to all the "fans"

 

I'm planning something special for this topic. Nothing major but a little thing.

 

You'll see it soon! tounge.gif

Come oooon, tell us what it is suicidal.gif

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Mokrie Dela

hahaa noooo tounge.gif

 

Its just a small idea i had. Nothing major.

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Mati

...is it done yeeeet? biggrin.gif

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Mokrie Dela
...is it done yeeeet? biggrin.gif

Nope! tounge.gif

Itll be a while - a few days at the least (time permitting)

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Izzi

This is brilliant cookie.gif

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Mokrie Dela
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Thanks!

 

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LuisBellic

This is f*ckin awesome man. icon14.gif

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Mokrie Dela
This is f*ckin awesome man. icon14.gif

thanks! Vote for me when the awards come around! haha tounge.gif

 

In all seriousness though, GTAF didnt notify me of your reply, so sorry for the late reply tounge.gif

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Mati

Hey man, How many chapters do you plan?

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Mokrie Dela
Hey man, How many chapters do you plan?

Probably 20. Maybe less. Everything's planned out - its just a case of writing it!

 

come new year im planning on writing more. Hopefully have something good up soon!

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SilentSeas

I've nominated this for the best story award, keep up the good work icon14.gif

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Mati
I've nominated this for the best story award, keep up the good work icon14.gif

Me too icon14.gif

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Mokrie Dela

Wow, thank you guys - that really does mean alot! Thanks smile.gif

 

BTW can someone link me to the "nominating" thing? I havnt seen it - found it.

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