Jayd_101 Posted April 2, 2010 Share Posted April 2, 2010 (edited) SET IN PRESENT TIME Firstly, Could you Please post your thoughts on this topic after you've read this topic. This topic is in progress and I am still working on it. It's 2010 and Brian Murphy is on the streets of Northen USA. Brian runs a gang called the "Northern Aces". Brian was awating the arrival of his cousin Lester at the private airstrip just out of Seatlh, suddenly everyone hears gunshots exlosians, as they look out into the distance they see a bunch of people speeding towards them shooting, most people at the private airstrip died including Brian's cousin. But, Brian is still alive, he manages to get away from the ambushers. He finds a car not far away and speeds towards Seatlh. Brian Tries to take back the streets and get revenge on the ambushers, he also has to rebuild his gang since most of them were killed. As he builds up his gang it becomes one of Northern States Most powerful Gang/crime syndicate. BIGGER MAP COMING SOON!!! States: Ontarna- (OA)- (Based on Montana) Lincoln State-(LN)- (Based on Washington State) Canada- (CA)- Canada unlocks after a "story" mission, different laws apply here, & it costs to go to Canada if you catch a flight or drive across the border. Cities: Melena- (MA)- (Based on Helena)-Ontarna- USA Olympis- (OP)- (Based on Olympia)-Lincoln State- USA Seatlh- (ST)- (Based on Seattle)-Lincoln State- USA Vancouver-(VR)-Canada Towns: Bluemond Pincy Fort Henton Stuistown Wilbaux Nelson Vernin Counties: Stream County Queen County Slogan County Barliegh County Borders: US/Canada Border- Costs $500 to go to Canada. Unlocks after a "story" mission. You can use this border to travel between the U.S and Canada. PUBLIC PLACES: Olympis National Park Golf Club Terrain: Snowing in some parts of Ontarna and Lincoln State and Canada. Green (No Desert) (More Locations Coming Soon) Major Characters: Brian Murphy (Charater you play as) Race: White American/African American Age: 25 Birthplace: Seatlh, Lincoln State, USA Brian Murphy is a rich and powerful gang leader, but after the ambush, Brian is left poor and is no longer "powerful". But along the way he will find riches and power. Jack Murphy Race: White American/African American Age: 20 Birthplace: Olympis, Liccoln State, USA Jack is Brian's Brother, he is part of the Northern Aces. Ryan Wilson Race: White American Age: 24 Birthplace: Algonquin, Liberty City, Liberty State, USA Ryan is the Gun Specialist in the "Northern Aces" & is one of Brian's best friends. Heather McAnderson Race: White American Age: 25 Birthplace: Melena, Ontarna, USA Heather is Brian's & Jack's Cousin. Andy Robins Race: White American Age: 30 Birthplace: Los Santos, San Andreas, USA Andy is a crooked cop, he is selfish, has to have everything his way and makes people go out to get his drugs, but he will help the Northern Aces. Harold Donald Race: African American Age: 30 Birthplace: Vice City, Florida, USA Harold is Brian's Friend that is a mechanic and joins Brians gang called "Northern Aces". Lawrence Burne Race: White American Age: 30 Birthplace: Seatlh, Licoln State, USA Lawrence is Brian's best friend that you will have to do missions for aswell. Bruce Anderson Race: Canadian Age: 32 Birthplace: Vancouver, Canada Bruce is one of Lawrence's Canadian Friends, once you unlock Canada you get to do missions for Bruce. Vincent Miles Race: Canadian Age: 24 Birthplace: Seatlh, Licoln State, USA Miles is part of the Northern Aces in Canada, he is a well trained theif and Brian will have to do missions for Vincent. Minor Characters: Sean Vanders Race: British Age: 35 Birtplace: London, England Sean is one of Harold's Friends. Jordan Brandon Race: African American Age: 27 Birthplace: Las Venturas, San Andreas, USA Jordan is a police snitch. Zhan Chow Race: Chinese Age: 41 Birthplace: Beijing, China Zhan is the head of the Yang Chinese Triads. Millan Newton Race: African American Age: 50 Birthplace: Vernin, Canada Millan is the boss of the Angels of terror MC. Jordan Callan Race: American/Canadian Age: 41 Birthplace: Vancouver, Canada Jordan is a Thug, you meet him in a story mission Ray Burke Race: White American Age: 37 Birthplace: Melena, Ontarna, USA Ray is a gangbanger with the M.O.B gang. (More Characters Soon) HUD HUD Health (red bar) is on the left of the mini-map, Stamina (green bar) on the top right, and armour (blue bar) is on the bottom right. POLICE Army FIRE EMT Boats Motorcycles STPD Cruiser OPPD Patrol OPPD Cruiser MAPD Patrol MAPD Cruiser VRPD Cruiser VRPD Calvacade CRP Cruiser (Canadian Royal Police) Unmarked Patrol OASP Patrol (Ontarna State Police) LNSP Patrol (Lincoln State Police) Highway Patrol Sheriff Patrol Sheriff Ranger SWAT Enforcer SWAT Cruiser FBI Cruiser FBI Calvacade FBI Buffalo OASP Maverick LNSP Maverick STPD Maverick Sheriff Maverick FBI Maverick SWAT Maverick Predator STPD Motorcycle OASP Motorcycle LNSP Motorcycle USBA Sentinal CBSA Cruiser Parks Canada Warden's Admiral Ports Canada Police Rancher WVPS Cruiser Canada Sheriff Service Buffalo ERT Moonbeam BarricksPatriot Hydra HunterSTFD FiretruckFDMA Firetruck FDLM Firetruck OPFD Firetruck State Firetruck Fire Tanker Fire Paramedic Fire Ranger Fire Chopper Fire Paramedic ChopperST ParamedicMA Paramedic LM Paramedic OP Paramedic State Paramedic Paramic Rancher Air Ambulance Coastguard BoatSpeed-maxCruiser Yacht Sailor Predator DingyNRG-600PCJ-600 PCJ-1000 Manchez Ventoso faggio Sanchez Chopper Angel Quad Cars Vans 4WD/SUV & OFF-ROAD Local Service/Transport (The Protaganist can use these transportation services) Aircrafts Other RV's & Motorhomes (Can use these as savepoints) Comet Turismo Sabre Sabre GT Hellenbach Hellenbach GT Jester Sultan Formula 1 Peyote Chavos Admiral VoodooRumpoPony Yankee Newsvan Moonbeam Blista Cluck 'n' Van Burgershot Van RancherRanger Calvacade Mesa Grande ATV Launch DIRT SnowmobileOP TaxiST Taxi MA Taxi OA State Taxi Vans CT State Taxi Vans OA State Buses ND State Buses LN State Buses Cabby City Buses Pizzaboy Noodleboy Pizza City CarMaverickChopper Cargobob Leviathan Raindance Dodo Skimmer Shamal ATF-747 NevadaBicycleMountain Bike BMX Unicycle Skateboard (can carry Skateboard in inventory) Rollerskates (can carry Rollerskates in inventory) Snowboard (For use on snow, can carry snowboard in inventory)HolidayCamper(More Vehicles Soon) PUBLIC TRANSPORTATION You can use these transpotations. 1) Taxi- Brian (protaganist) can hail a taxi by holding Triangle/Y and then get in the back by pressing Triangle/Y, and choose the destination you want to go to. 2) Bus- You can wait at the bus depot or bus stops to catch a bus, choose the bus stop you want to stop at. 3) Train- Wait at any Train station to catch a train. 4) Subway- Wait at any Subway to catch a underground-train. 5) Airplane- Go to any Airport to fly to any City. Costs $200 to catch a flight. MORE TRANSPORTATION SOON!!! CLOTHES Shirts Jackets & longsleeves Pants & Shorts Shoes Pendants & Chains Watches & Glasses Hats Special Bag/holdalls, Backpacks, Breifcases, Gun Holsters (Can carry things in these bags/Briefcases & Gun Holsters) White TankBlack Tank White polo Northern Aces Shirt Bowling Shirt Madd-T shirt White coler longsleeve shirt USA Shirt Seathl Shirt Canada Shirt Vancouver Shirt Camo Shirt Snow JacketBiker Jacket Hiker Jacket Camo Jacket Camo PantsBlue Jeans Green Jeans Blue Jeans Shorts Heart Boxers Boxers Hiker Pants Biker Pants Cowboy bootsSnow boots Black Low-tops Black High-tops Brown shoes White Sneakers Flip flops Sandals America PendantCanada Pendant Dollar Pendant Cross Pendant Gold Chain Silver Chain Platinum Chain Gold WatchSilver watch Platinum Watch Black watch Black Sunglasses Grey Sunglasses Swimming Goggles Cowboy HatNorthern Aces Cap Red Cap Black cap Blue Cap Green Cap Trucker hat Beanie Seatlh Police Department UniformOlympis Police Department Uniform Lincoln State Police Uniform Ontarna State Police Uniform U.S Highway Patrol Uniform U.S Sheriff Uniform FBI Suit U.S/Canada Border Patrol Uniform Vancouver Police Uniform Canada Sheriff Service Uniform Ports Canada Police Uniform Business Uniform Valet Uniform Security Uniform Northern Aces Gang Uniform Robbery Suit Black & Red BackpackBlack Backpack Blue Backpack Brown Holdall Black Holdall Brown Breifcase Black Breifcase Black Pistol/gun Holder Brown Gun holder MORE CLOTHES COMING SOON!!!! Backpacks, bags/Holdalls, Briefcases, & Gun Holsters You can buy Backpacks, Holdalls, Gun holsters & Briefcases at clothes shops or in Supermarkets. These are visible on the Protaganist, you can leave the bags or backpack in your car or at your safehouse if you don't want to carry it around. VIGILANTES, MOST WANTED, & POLICE PATROL These missions are similar to the previous GTA Games. But you also have the option of arresting them aswell, you might have to beat the suspect up a little then slap the handcuffs on them and put them in the back of the car, then take them to the police station and put 'em in a cell. When you unlock the Printworks and Clothing Works, you can order Police uniforms and Badges to be made for you, you can also get a police radio, Handcuffs, Police Nightstick (baton), and pepper spray added to the inventory when you get the police uniform. You also unlock the ability to respond to crimes reported in the area when you recieve calls on the Police Radio when you start the "Police Patrol". With the Police Radio you can divert Police to a different location and make the police got to your position if you want one of their cars, you can wear & have the police uniform, Handcuffs, Pepper Spray, Police Badge, & Police Radio anytime you want to, just go to the Police Station or Safehouse to pick them up. WAREHOUSE, GANG MANSIONS UPGRADES & VEHICLE UPGRADES Warehouse and Gang Mansion Upgrades: You can upgrade your Warehouse, TV studio, Mansions, printworks, and some safehouses on GTA: Northern States. You can put up security Camera's and order more rooms in your buildings, you can make a security room, the security room contains Computers wired up with the cameras so your gang can watch and listen to everything around the buildingto make sure no one is breaking in or snooping around your place. Vehicle Upgrades: You can upgrade your vehicle just like San Andreas, you can change paintjobs and vinals, mount a gun on the front of your car, tint the windows, change car rims & tires, and loads more! CAR CRASHES & BUILDING DESTRUCTION & VANDALISM CAR CRASHES: In GTA Northern States when Cars crash and roll over they don't blow up, it's more like realistic because the car don't blow up when they crash. BUILDINGS & VANDALISM & PROPERTY DAMAGE: You can tag on building on this game, you can make your own tags and don't have to tag over other tags. You can also blow up Some building you want to by blowing it up with a rocket launcher, you can burn down buildings also, and smash windows on buildings, the properties you damage will be re-buit again. LAW ENFORCEMENT STPD- Seatlh Police Department OPPD- Olympis Police Department MAPD- Melina Police Depatment OASP- Ontarna State Police LNSP- Lincoln State Police USBA- United States Border Agency RCP- Royal Canadian Police CBSA- Canada Border Services Agency VRPD- Vancouver Police Department Parks Canada Park Wardens Ports Canada Police Service WVPS- West Vancouver Police Service Canada Sheriff Service U.S Highway Patrol CA Highway Patrol Sheriff SWAT (USA Only) ERT- Emergency Response Team. (Canada Only) FBI DEA ARMY NAVY AIR FORCE BUSINESS & SAFEHOUSES (Note: All of these businesses you will own, and your gang will help run the businesses.) Clubs/sport Places: Stream County Golf Club Seatlh Football Stadium Safehouses/Gang Buisnesses: 61 Safehouses 7 Ganghouses 5 Warehouses Shops/Garages & Car Modification Garages: Save Smart Supermarket in Downtown Seatlh 24-7 Supermarket in The Shopping Square in Olympis Pizza City in Shopping Mall in Melena Tranzmodification Garage in Seatlh- Some of your gang members will go out and steal cars and bring back here to your garage, these cars will be modificated by your gang mechanics and your gang will be able to drive these cars. Gang Turfs/store takeovers: 110 gang turfs 10 Shops 2 Banks Airports/Travel Places: Private Airstrip southwest of Seatlh Vancouver City Travel Olympis Private Airport Seatlh City Buses Ontarna State Taxis TV & THEATRE BUILDINGS: Lincoln TV Studios in Downtown Seatlh- You can buy this place after a "story mission". There will be a Newsvan parked outside for you to do missions in When doing the Newsvan sidemission you have to drive to the selected destination and then with a video camera, record everything at the scene. After you've finished recording, take the camera back to the studio. You can also do other missions inside the studio. West Olympis Show Theatre- You run this place, you can schedule shows and earn money from selling tickets for people to come and watch the show. Canada News Studio- Similar to the Lincoln TV Studios OTHER: The Northern Printworks- You can make up fake cash and Identificatin ID and Police/FBI Badges Clothing Works- You can make/order uniforms to be made for you, anything from Police to burgler uniforms MISSIONS (Before and After the missions there will be cutscenes that will play) #1. (The start of the game): After being ambushed, Brian manages to get away and find a car. The first thing you will have to do is get in to the car and drive to Jack's (Brian's brother) house (his house will be marked on the map). MISSION PASSED REWARD: N/A Jack Murphy: #2. Lay low: Drive with Jack to a safehouse in Sunset Hills, Seatlh. MISSION PASSED REWARD: $50 and a Safehouse Harold Donald: #3. Recruiting Drive: Drive around and look for people to recruit for the gang, once you've found three people, head over to the ganghouse in Henderson, Seatlh, and drop the new recruits off. Now go to meet Harold in Downtown, drive him to the warehouse in Industrial. MISSION PASSED REWARD: $150 Jack Murphy: #4. Farewell Lester: Drive Jack, Harold and Lawrence over to the Cemetery in Seatlh, Protect everyone at the service from the El Corona gang. After the service drive Jack, Harold and Lawrence back to the ganghouse. MISSION PASSED REWARD: $200 Andy Robins: #5. Bad Cop: You have to go over to Downtown to help the crooked police Officer Andy Robins from getting attackted from the El Corona gang. You have to kill all of the El corona's that are trying to attack Andy, and hold them off until the Cops come. MISSION PASSED REWARD: $200 Andy Robins: #6. The Burndown: Head over to one of the El Corona gang's hideout over in West Suburbs, through petrol bombs at the gang house until it says at the bottom of the screen "Return to Andy's office at Downtown Seatlh Police Station". MISSION PASSED REWARD: $300 MORE MISSIONS ARE COMING SOON ROBBERIES BANK ROBBERIES To rob a bank, just walk in, then pull out a weapon, then walk up to the teller and press the up button to trigger the mission (You can only trigger the mission only if you have the weapon out at the time). Press the left button for a Negative response like: Give me the f*cking money now or i'll shoot you!!! Or a Postive Response by pressing the right: Give me the money now and everything will be ok. You can also break into the bank safe, you will need an acomplice to make the hostages keep their hands up and make sure they don't alert the cops. As soon as you recieve the money you can shoot the teller or just leave before the cops get there. SHOP ROBBERIES To trigger a shop robbery walk up to the Checkout operator and pull out a gun and aim the gun at the operator and press the up button (you have to have a gun to start the robbery). To give a negative response press the left button or a positive response by pressing the right button. You can either wait for him to give the money, shoot the operator, or leave if the cops come. HOUSE ROBBERIES To trigger a houuse robbery, smash a window of a house with a gun or baseball bat by manually aiming the gun or bat at the window then shooting or bashing at it, or trying to pick the door lock, then climb through the window by pressing the square/x button, or walk into the house through the doorway when you've broken the lock. Once you've gained entry grab anything you see that you can pick up by pressing the triangle/Y button and then get out the window you came through or going out the front door before the cops arrive if they are dispatched. GANG RECRUITING When walking around the streets you can try to recruit anyone, some people will want to join the gang, some people won't. Some people have different abilities like, car mechanics & Gun technicians, computer experts, people with good combat skills and good shooting skills etc., it is best to have a gang with people that have good abilities but it is good also to have some members that have no abilities because you can get them trained up at a gym or at one of your gang assets. You Can recruit people from in USA & in Canada. Ranks: Mechanics [NO LOGO YET] Computer Experts [NO LOGO YET] Gun Technician [NO LOGO YET] Expert Car thief Expert Thief Food: Pizza Stack Pizza City Noodle Palace Cluck 'n' bell Burgershot Jack's Diner PUB Club Clothes: Dider Sacher Criminal Victim Binco Pro Laps Hot Shot R* Clothing Suburban Gadget Shops: Laptops Galore Hi-tech Hardware Mobile Fruit Iplod Other: Internet cafe's AUTO CARS BICYCLES Skates MINIGAMES/SIDE MISSIONS Newsvan Random People Missions Drug Dealing Gang Wars Street Racing Vigilante Paramedic Fireman Tow Trucker Trucker Bus Driver Pilot Pizza Delivery Noodle Delivery Dice Roulette Wheel Pool Chess Checkers Basketball Football (American) Soccer GANGS OF GTA: NORTHERN STATES Northern Aces Vancouver Mobsters M.O.B Irish Mobsters Jewish mob El Corona Vago Angels of Terror MC British Gangbangers MC English mob Seatlh Triads Yang Chinese Triads Yazuka Russian Mafia Italian Mafia ITEMS Electronics (Portable): Winzow Laptop (Windows Laptop) Fruit Laptop (Apple Laptop) Mobile Phone Fruit Iplod Mano (Apple Ipod Nano) Fruit Iplod Touch (Apple Ipod Toch) Digital Camera Video Camera TV Video Camera Weapons: M4 Carbine Ak47 SMG Mini SMG Desert Eagle pistols Twin Pistol Pistols Shotgun Double Barrell Shotgun Sawn-off Shotgun Flame Throwers Bazooka Heat Seeker Missile Grenades Satchel Charges Chain Gun Nightstick Baseball bat Crow Bar Taser ENTERTAINMENT TV: On GTA Northern States, you can watch In-game TV like GTAIV. Watching sporting events: You can go out to stadiums or such places to watch sports, you can even place traps before the game starts and watch the game come to destruction! Nightclubs: You can go out to nightclubs and dance and even have a glass of beer. Got to car events: You can go and watch anything fromstreet racing to Demolition Derby, and Legal racing. Watch live shows at Theatres: Go out and enjoy watching shows at any theatre, and before the show starts you can rig the stage with mines or dynamite! Or you can just sit back, relax and watch the show. MORE ENTERTAINMENT COMING SOON!!! TV SHOWS Channel CBC (based on BBC): REPUBLICAN SPACE ALIENS: Watch Republican space Aliens on In-game TV DEMOCRATIC SPACE RANGERS: Is similar to Republican Space Aliens CBC LIVE NEWS: Watch NNC Live News for the latest news from around Northern States. ACTION COPS: Action Cops is a cop show with all of the latest crime around Northern States. NCN (Based on CNN): CNN NEWS GET A LIFE!: Is a comedy show FAST AUTOS: Fast Autos is a show with fast cars and hotrods for sale & on show! Licoln TV (Brian (the protaganist) runs this channel): Lincoln TV news: Is a Lincoln State TV news show. CSU LC: Is a show based on CSI NY CSU Vice City: Is a show based on CSI Miami SUV: Is a show based on SVU (Special Victims Unit) Comedybase: Shrubs- Shrubs is a comedy show based on scrubs. Two men and half- based on Two and a half men According to tim- Based on According to Jim The small explosion theory- Based on the big bang theory USATV (Can only watch this channel in USA): Enemies (Based on Friends): Is a comedy show based on Friends. Everybody Hates Ray (Based on Everyone loves Raymond): Is a comedy show based on Everyone loves Raymond. The Simpletons (Based on Simpsons): The Simpletons is a comedy cartoon based on the simpsons. Canada On Air (Can only watch this channel when in Canada): Frontline Police: This is a Canadian Police show. ICE!: This is an Ice skating show. Canadian LIVE News: A Canadian News Channel MORE TV SHOWS SOON! RADIO STATIONS Seatlh Radio Type: Jazz Ontarna LIVE Type: Talk Radio ROCK IT OUT Type: Rock Rockin and Rolling Type: Rock 'n' roll Lincoln 24-7 99.8 FM Type: Alternative RADIO VANCOUVER Type: Orchestra On the road Radio Type: Country (Soundtrack & Radio Logo's Coming soon) Website Name Website type Description Based On Friends without Faces Social/chat Keep in-touch with your GTA: Northern States contacts Facebook Tweeter Social/chat keep in-touch with your GTA: Northern States Contacts just like Friends without faces Twitter Fastautosonline Vehicles Purchasing You can buy vehicles online at Fast Autos online, the cars that you purchase will be delivered to anywhere in the city that you select - Pizzastack.com Food/delivery Order pizza online and wait for the pizza to get delivered to you Pizzahutt.com Seatlh Police Department Law Enforcement Website Seattlton Police Department (STPD) Website http://www.cityofseattle.net/police/ DLC COMING SOON DLC TITLES: GTA: Money & The Streets GTA: Ganster Life GTA Money & The Streets Protaganist: Ray Burke GTA Gangster Life Protaganist: Jordan Callan ____________ Credits: Jayd101 The Guru 02fishera Narcis_speed6 Akavari112 -------------------- REMEMBER: This is a Work in progress Topic. Post your Comments Pictures & Logo's coming soon. MORE IDEAS COMING SOON, LOADS MORE TO COME! Edited April 23, 2010 by Jayd_101 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jayd_101 Posted April 2, 2010 Author Share Posted April 2, 2010 (edited) More Weapons Weapon Name Weapon Features Weapon Strength Brass Knuckles When punching, these give an extra painful punch. Extra sore punch Silenced Pistol This gun Includes a silencer on it Short range pistol, takes two shots to kill. Double Barrel Shotgun N/A Short range gun, kills instantly with one shot. Silenced Sniper This sniper includes a silencer. This is a long range weapon, kills instantly with one shot. Repeater Shotgun N/A Short range weapon, kills instantly with one shot. Combat SMG N/A Medium Range Weapon. Burst Carbine Optional, you can get the Burst Carbine with a silencer if you want, it will cost an extra $200 Medium range weapon. Flamethrower You can go to the gas Station to fill this weapon up so you can use it again. Short range weapon, burns people. Parachute n/a n/a Chainsaw n/a Short range combat/melee type weapon Weapon Logos made by Akavari112 More coming soon Edited April 9, 2010 by Jayd_101 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
G#O$TR!D3R - 133457 Posted April 2, 2010 Share Posted April 2, 2010 Pics or it didn't happen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cilogy Posted April 2, 2010 Share Posted April 2, 2010 Pics or it didn't happen. Calm down. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jayd_101 Posted April 2, 2010 Author Share Posted April 2, 2010 Pics or it didn't happen. Calm down. So do you like my topic? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrownBear Posted April 2, 2010 Share Posted April 2, 2010 I think you need better presentation and a more in-depth story. That said, you have some nice ideas here, the setting is definatley new, however i don't like the idea of a decorated cop who builds a gang. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jayd_101 Posted April 2, 2010 Author Share Posted April 2, 2010 I think you need better presentation and a more in-depth story.That said, you have some nice ideas here, the setting is definatley new, however i don't like the idea of a decorated cop who builds a gang. I was thinking of changing the overview and that he build a gang, I'm still thinking about it. And don't forget I'm still working on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K^2 Posted April 2, 2010 Share Posted April 2, 2010 Try to be more creative on the names. I know SA names sound like they have been just mangled up from originals, but there is actually some thought put into it. Los Angeles = The Angels Los Santos = The Saints Las Vegas = The Fertile Valleys Las Venturas = The Fortunes ("Ventura" is better translated as luck, but there is no plural for it in English.) San Francisco = Saint Francis of Assisi San Fierro = Saint Fierro, fictional character whose name is actually a reference to San Fransisco's motto, "Oro en Paz, Fierro en Guerra" - "Gold in Peace, Iron in War". You see the point, don't you? They didn't just mix letters together. They took something about the name and the place, and turned it into a new name. Prior to filing a bug against any of my code, please consider this response to common concerns. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SmC12 Posted April 2, 2010 Share Posted April 2, 2010 Great ideas, keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryan Posted April 2, 2010 Share Posted April 2, 2010 Pics or it didn't happen. Try and contribute more to a topic then this please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Goose Posted April 2, 2010 Share Posted April 2, 2010 I guess Zapple and Window are parodies of Apple and Windows? They already have GTA versions if I remember correctly. Apple's is Fruit, don't remember Windows. Also, a suggestion for Bismarck could be another pre-WWII German leader (going on the city sharing a name with Otto von Bismarck.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Interrobangin Posted April 2, 2010 Share Posted April 2, 2010 "Seattlington- (ST)- (Based on Seattle)" — No kidding, but that is a bad name. Do you actually know anything about Seattle, where its name comes from, etc? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Goose Posted April 2, 2010 Share Posted April 2, 2010 Aside from the names, the amount of characters who have a name that is a multiple of 5 annoyed me. I'm just being picky though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SammiiDoogles Posted April 2, 2010 Share Posted April 2, 2010 Us Brit's are a race all on our own? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K^2 Posted April 2, 2010 Share Posted April 2, 2010 Us Brit's are a race all on our own? I don't know about Brits in general, but you Welsh, definitely. Prior to filing a bug against any of my code, please consider this response to common concerns. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reconite Posted April 2, 2010 Share Posted April 2, 2010 Us Brit's are a race all on our own? I loled. Nice topic, I hope to see more from it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jayd_101 Posted April 2, 2010 Author Share Posted April 2, 2010 (edited) Thanks for the nice replies , those of you who have gave bad repies just remember I have more to come and I am still working on it. "Seattlington- (ST)- (Based on Seattle)" — No kidding, but that is a bad name. Do you actually know anything about Seattle, where its name comes from, etc? You know I didn't make this topic so people can laugh at it and think it sucks, I thought it was quite good actually, I put good work into this. Edited April 2, 2010 by Jayd_101 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Goose Posted April 2, 2010 Share Posted April 2, 2010 Looking back, I forgot to say I like your idea; it's obvious you put some work into it and it's a very good start. Just spotted a few mistakes, that's all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jayd_101 Posted April 2, 2010 Author Share Posted April 2, 2010 Thanks General Goose Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K^2 Posted April 3, 2010 Share Posted April 3, 2010 "Seattlington- (ST)- (Based on Seattle)" — No kidding, but that is a bad name. Do you actually know anything about Seattle, where its name comes from, etc? You know I didn't make this topic so people can laugh at it and think it sucks, I thought it was quite good actually, I put good work into this. It's a fair bit of criticism, though. Yes, it'd be nice if people provided something a little more constructive, but still, you post something. It's obviously not going to be perfect. So people will comment on what you got wrong. Try to learn from it. I've seen what happens on forums where it was strongly encouraged to only leave positive feedback. Threads turn to utter sh*t in no time. So if you don't like negative responses, channel it towards motivation to do better. Prior to filing a bug against any of my code, please consider this response to common concerns. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jayd_101 Posted April 3, 2010 Author Share Posted April 3, 2010 Updated.... "Seattlington- (ST)- (Based on Seattle)" — No kidding, but that is a bad name. Do you actually know anything about Seattle, where its name comes from, etc? You know I didn't make this topic so people can laugh at it and think it sucks, I thought it was quite good actually, I put good work into this. It's a fair bit of criticism, though. Yes, it'd be nice if people provided something a little more constructive, but still, you post something. It's obviously not going to be perfect. So people will comment on what you got wrong. Try to learn from it. I've seen what happens on forums where it was strongly encouraged to only leave positive feedback. Threads turn to utter sh*t in no time. So if you don't like negative responses, channel it towards motivation to do better. Yeah, but it would be nice to have some good comments aswell, I changed some city's names and I've changed Coshington State to Lincoln State. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K^2 Posted April 3, 2010 Share Posted April 3, 2010 That's fair I suppose. And yeah, I like "Lincoln State". Simple, yet very GTA. Prior to filing a bug against any of my code, please consider this response to common concerns. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jayd_101 Posted April 3, 2010 Author Share Posted April 3, 2010 That's fair I suppose. And yeah, I like "Lincoln State". Simple, yet very GTA. Thanks, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
G#O$TR!D3R - 133457 Posted April 3, 2010 Share Posted April 3, 2010 To be honest I think this idea is awful, nobody would buy a game about a fired cop turned thug, all his friends would still be cops. He would still have the moral code that made him want to be a cop, that's just stupid. Also, the names of the areas...wow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
G#O$TR!D3R - 133457 Posted April 3, 2010 Share Posted April 3, 2010 It is however, excellent that the main character is a halfrican. There's nothing better that that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XZGamer71 Posted April 3, 2010 Share Posted April 3, 2010 To be honest I think this idea is awful, nobody would buy a game about a fired cop turned thug, all his friends would still be cops. He would still have the moral code that made him want to be a cop, that's just stupid. Also, the names of the areas...wow. Any suggestions then? Anyway it's a very good idea. Keep it up. I would contribute but i'm not exactly good with NeXt topics So yeah, nice one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kwandilibro Posted April 3, 2010 Share Posted April 3, 2010 this topic sounds a lot like ur other threads. and the fired cop thing, like ghostrider said, would suck horse dick. and the location, no. just no. but seriously the cop thing would be bad, a great cop just suddenly turns to crime and starts a gang? ouch Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jayd_101 Posted April 4, 2010 Author Share Posted April 4, 2010 this topic sounds a lot like ur other threads. and the fired cop thing, like ghostrider said, would suck horse dick. and the location, no. just no. but seriously the cop thing would be bad, a great cop just suddenly turns to crime and starts a gang? ouch It dosen't sound like my other threads, And I thought this game was good, you don't have to go too overboard saying that my game would suck a horses d*ck. Does anyone here like my game? I might change the cop thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryan Posted April 4, 2010 Share Posted April 4, 2010 Time to lay down the law. While positive and negative feedback is requested for the majority of these topics, you guys don't need to come in and just be like this sucks horse dick. That's nothing more then spam. He asked for feedback, not for you to tell him it's complete sh*t. With that being said, it's brings me to the old saying, "If you can't say nothing nice, don't say anything at all". For those of you who can't comprehend that; if you're just going to say it sucks balls, don't bother posting. If there are any questions regarding this, PM me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kwandilibro Posted April 4, 2010 Share Posted April 4, 2010 this topic sounds a lot like ur other threads. and the fired cop thing, like ghostrider said, would suck horse dick. and the location, no. just no. but seriously the cop thing would be bad, a great cop just suddenly turns to crime and starts a gang? ouch It dosen't sound like my other threads, And I thought this game was good, you don't have to go too overboard saying that my game would suck a horses d*ck. Does anyone here like my game? I might change the cop thing. i didnt say the game sucks horse dick i said the cop thing. and some parts of the game r good, i like the black character idea. especially with all the skinheads in the forums talkin racist sh*t Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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