Hell No.. Posted March 29, 2010 Share Posted March 29, 2010 As my hands were wrapped around his throat, he drew his last breathe, a semi grin formed across my face, I'd been waiting for this moment, and so it was done... ---- What does this make me? Why have I even thought about this? I think about it all the time, in different ways I can kill "him"....he who has tried stepping in on my family, I want him dead, but I can't do anything. The sight of him makes me angered, makes me shake and freak. I want to do it there and then, but there are more important things to life than this... My Daughter. I'm on Twitch! Are you? Come say Hi. https://www.twitch.tv/priceyryan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Don Garcia Posted March 29, 2010 Share Posted March 29, 2010 You got a while to go before you're thinking 'bout strangling boyfriends. Funny read though, as I took it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hell No.. Posted March 29, 2010 Author Share Posted March 29, 2010 But it's not fiction? Its actually how I feel and I wanted to write it down. Wasn't meant to be funny though. I'm on Twitch! Are you? Come say Hi. https://www.twitch.tv/priceyryan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Don Garcia Posted March 29, 2010 Share Posted March 29, 2010 Thought that might be so. Sorry, that was my interpretation. I liked it though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hell No.. Posted March 29, 2010 Author Share Posted March 29, 2010 S'alright! Not sure what there is to like though. Haha. --- I had a sinking feeling, not of the heart or emotion, but my fingers, sinking into his sockets. The screams were loud, loud but bearable, they didn't last long, darkness had set in. ---- Does this make me sick? I'm sorry that they are graphic. I'm on Twitch! Are you? Come say Hi. https://www.twitch.tv/priceyryan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rubba_dukie Posted March 30, 2010 Share Posted March 30, 2010 Does this make me sick? I'm sorry that they are graphic. Who is it about? The boyfriend of the mother of your daughter? If so it's perfectly fine, take him out back and shoot the c*nt. I'm sure it's hard to see someone else potentially being in that father role just because they are there. Seeing stuff your daughter does first before you. However time is precious, the time your thinking about killing him could be spent thinking about stuff to do with your daughter etc. Hope i've got this right, or ignore all that. The written pieces are pretty blunt and dark. I like it. Any accompanying pictures? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hell No.. Posted March 30, 2010 Author Share Posted March 30, 2010 No just someone who wont leave her alone, and is running on false hope. Accompanying pictures? lol, how so? --- I woke up, the horn was stuck, trying to remember what happened, I looked over my shoulder, the car was upside down. I was hurt, but alive, more than I could for the other car, I took the risk, and won. I'm on Twitch! Are you? Come say Hi. https://www.twitch.tv/priceyryan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rubba_dukie Posted March 31, 2010 Share Posted March 31, 2010 No just someone who wont leave her alone, and is running on false hope. Accompanying pictures? lol, how so? Just some gloomy pictures to set the mood, some from the Boys Village even? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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