drscot Posted March 20, 2010 Share Posted March 20, 2010 (edited) Setting: 2010, U.S. East coast Your Comments = My Happiness. i will take all your comments into account and please, if you dont like something, don't just diss it, tell me how to improve it! all the storylines need to be developed, i need vehicles and pedestrian speech, not to mention characters, random characters and achievements/trophies. also please do take the time to read the whole thing, cheers. EDIT: i also need storylines for the countryside in between each city. Modes of transport: By Car By Foot By Bus By Train By Helecopter By Plane By ferry By Boat By Special (skateboard, Rollerblades, ect) slang names for the State: Independence el estado [the state in spanish] Cities: Detroit - Carcer City Philidelpia - Philmont Washington D.C - Capitol City Boston - Franklinton Charlston, Charlotte - Fredricksville, Fairview Countryside: Philidelphia - Somerset, Adams County Washington D.C. - montgomery, stafford county Boston - dukes, Hampden County Charlotte, Charlston - Patterson Springs, Dover County Carcer City - Windsor County This is a map of the areas in Philmore(Philadelphia) and Franklinton(Boston) All of the areas will have sub districts. This is a map of The Fairbanks island(Based On the Southern U.S.) Monuments: The Hexagon (The Pentagon) - The Most important building in Philmont. Sign outside saying, "we tried a dodecoheadron..." The Adams Memorial (the Lincoln Memorial) - In Capitol City, sign outside saying,"Adams Memorial, The worlds most comfortable toilet!" The ST. Helens Memorial (The Jefferson Memorial) - In Capitol City, Plaque on Statue inside saying,"How come he gets to sit down!?" The Capitol Memorial (The Washington Memorial) - In Capitol City, Plaque mounted on it Saying,"Voted America's most pointy building 2010!" (reference to The Big Pointy Building in San Fierro [thats the real name lol] being voted America's most pointy building th 1992) Rosefelt Memorial (Roosevelt Memorial) - In Capitol City, Carved into wall next to it, it says,"Why come up with a cheap sexual pun when you could just write this?" The Beige House - Obviously, a parody of the White House. Featured on the Radio and T.V. Security is strict around this area. sign outside reads,"white would have sounded better, but this is america" EDIT: To avoid any misunderstandings, this isnt a racist joke, and is reffering to the colour of The Beige House's real life counterpart, The White House. If You know of any more monuments, comment! you dont need to come up with signs/plaques/inscriptions or parody names, just the real name. of course if you want to you can. PHILMONT Philmont is one of America's most historical cities, as it is the birthplace of the United States. On July 4th, 1776, the Declaration of Independence as signed at the Birollvania State House (now known as Independence Hall). 11 years later the United States Constitution was adopted on the same spot. Over two centuries later, Philadelphia has changed quite a bit but has admirably retained its historical aspects, making it a good city to visit. Its nickname as the City of Brotherly Love, however, is a bit of a misnomer, as the people of Philmont were not particularly friendly, especially those at the ball game. Philmont's downtown is where most of the attractions are located, and the roads are very crowded. There is a decent subway system that is a better idea, driving can be messy and parking can be difficult to find. One of the interesting sights to be on Wide Street (a parody of Broad street) is cars parked on the center median, something for you to spot in another city. CAPITOL CITY The capital of the United States is Capitol City, in the District of Latina. Capitol City is not only the seat of the federal government but also a major showcase for the nation's cultural achievements, the information center of the world, and a pivot of global politics. Capitol City measures about 69 square miles (179 square kilometers). Originally the city was only one of several settlements in the District of Latina, but its borders moved outward to meet and become the same as those of the district. The identity and economy of the city, however, extend well beyond the district's boundaries into the adjoining states. The business of Capitol City is information, and the machine that drives Capitol Cities business is government. Before World War II the federal government was the major employer of women in the United States work force, and for decades it totally dominated employment in the nation's capital. Chartered as a city in 1802, Capitol had a mayor appointed by the president and a council elected by the people of the city. The council selected the mayor from 1812 to 1820. Then the residents chose the mayor and the council. FRANKLINTON Franklinton is an historic city of contrasts. Ancient red-brick sidewalks twist past handsome Federalist houses on the way to soaring glass towers housing state-of-the-art technology. The sports teams are the best loved and the most hated at one and the same time. Residents are fiercely protective of their neighborhoods and fiercely critical of the MBTA, the government and the weatherIn the harbors of Franklinton lie both the majestic U.S.S. Constitution, still commissioned to fight America's battles, and scores of sleek white fiberglass pleasure boats. There are tiny restaurants tucked into rosy brick town houses on Signal Heights(Beacon Hill) and huge restaurants on the dizzying tops of skyscrapers in the downtown. Food ranges from the most radical of nouvelle chic to downhome Cajun. Franklinton is a diverse modern city of neighborhoods. From the North Side(North End) to baytown(bay Village), North Bay(Back Bay) to the South Side(South end), Cuba Fields (Jamaca Plain) to Fredrickville (Charlstown), the city shows its diversity of populations, of languages, of foods and philosophies. Immigrants from every corner of the globe have been welcomed bythe city and re-shaped into Americans whose memories and customs enrich the community. FREDRICKSVILLE A Diverse Southern Town, full of Diverse food, people, vehicles, languages, architecture and music. the home of southern rock in the state means a band can often be seen busking, or performing live. it is the home of NASCAR in in Capitol which means that you will often see a truck with a diversly painted car on the back driving past. it is a town of many things, a complex town that cannot be captured perfectly no matter how many words being used. but you should watch out for prostitution and drug dealing in the southside, as the classier stuff stays north. CARCER CITY 'Motor City' is the home of the motor trade, and manurfacturing. an industrial city with complex sidestreets, alleyways and numerous dusty tracks which should never be ventured down by a straying tourist. numerous stunts for movies have been shot in the vicinity, and that kind of driving is normal on these streets. make sure to visit the Declasse Motor Building and the U.S. Libermacht Centre before you leave town. make sure not to visit the abandoned warehouses to the north which are being converted to crack dens and heroine houses. FAIRVIEW Fairview is an amazing place to spend a day, as it is much the same as Fredricksville, but with less crime. the long term rivalry between Fairview ofdicks and the Fredricksville 'windy' fanny's means that anyone from Fredricksville will not be welcomed. A proud Liberal, Godly, Mostly Nationalist, The rest Patriotic town where 97% of households own a gun, But Surprisingly, only 89% have killed more than two people! thats a surprisingly low figure! Towns: PHILLIMORE a small gated community in Adams County. home to a church, a motel and nothing else HENDERSON Named after the President, Henderson is a typical American small town. WINDSOR A small Port town in Windsor County, south of Carcer City and north of Franklinton PLACE REFERENCES: The Northern Border - Represents the US - Canada border The Caraways - Based on The Hamptons, in New York State. Mentioned in IV Lonsdale City - Based On London, some mission bosses from this location Redwood State: Based on Oregon, Aaron is from this location Cedar State: Based on Washington State, meets Northern Border. New Angland: Based on New England, This State Crosses with Capitol State, Franklinton is on the broder between EDIT: I know this is not geographicaly acurate, but none of the GTA games are. STORYLINE Aaron Stoney is a 27 year old American from the oregon Countryside. one night, age 13, he woke up during a storm to hear his Mother and farther arguing. he went down and peered round the door to see his dad holding a shotgun to his mothers forehead. he pulled the trigger and killed Aaron's mother. his uncle then walked into the room holding a desert eagle and the keys to his pickup, and told his father to get a move on. Aaron went upstairs to his parents bedroom and grabbed his fathers other gun, a hunting rifle, and loaded 1 bullet. he went downstairs to see his father was in the pickup and his uncle was checking the house. Aaron Shot his uncle through the forehead and took his desert eagle. his father had taught him to shoot at an early age and he checked the gun. there was 1 bullet in the firing chamber. he went outside intending to shoot his father for killing his mother, but he just saw his father getting back into the pickup and tossing a match into the wooden house, dowsed in petrol from the outside, and drove off. aaron managed to get out of the house and hiked to the highway. he got picked up by a Peterbilt bound for san fierro. he gets of on the calafornian border and over the course of 14 years, hitckhikes across america, camps wherever, and does a selection of dodgey work for random strangers. he lives for 5 years in missouri, but moves on to get to capitol city, wehere he has heard his father has become a corupt politician. he keeps his uncles desert eagle, with 1 bullet, to kill his father, vowing revenge for his mothers death. once he gets to Capitol State, he has nothing left, apart from a load of experiance with guns, crime and cars. he cannot get to capitol city to begin with and has to stay in philidelphia because there have been some attempts on president Henderson's life, so all the bridges and main roads are closed. He stays in a run down neighbourhood renting a small room in a flat, doing small time crime based in a garage, he applied for work at as a part time mechanic. he then gets introduced to Bill Harris, a small time all round crook, by the owner of the garage he works in. after working for bill, and asking him to talk to his boss about finding his father, they fall out over aaron going to work for one of bill's enemies, fredrick masters. he is slightly higher up in the criminal 'food chain' and after they both tell you to assasinate the other, this is the first multiple choice in the game. if you shoot masters it will block off a mission string in franklinton for longer, and if you kill harris they the only major affect to the game is the ability not to be able to become harris's friend, and using his special ability (Cheaper weapon accesories). after doing some missions for people i havent currently thought of (ideas that you could help with, people!) he moves to adams county, doing some work with hillbillies, cults, the adams county sherrif and a vietnam vet hiding out in a log cabin in adams county. he asks you to do things such as scare of tourists from the county, kill The mayor of Phlillimore, as he wants to develop a shopping mall on top of the woods that the vet is living on. he basically hates modern america and capitalism, and wants to go back to the old ways. Carcer, Being motor city, brings back the car customisation. aaron does a few missions for a corrupt buissinessman, John meyer, and then buys a petrol station, then a chop shop, then a car showroon, then a factory, all of wich can be used as assets, and to exploit motor companies. he can also get cars free from his factory. unlike san andreas, where Carl wins a chop shop and tries to rebuild a buissines, Aaron's motor garages will be upgraded throughout the game. Aaron then works for John Meyer on several more Occations, which leads to, at the end of your missions in Carcer City, entering a race and winning it, meaning that the stadium can then be used to do other races and demolition derbies, which will be available online aswell. Aaron stoney arrived in franklinton because he had been told that his father was lying low their. but when he arrives he has no clue of where to go. he gets a call from the mafia who had heard of his work in fairbanks and wants him to do a few jobs for him. mostly things like having gang wars and traffiking. after doing a few more jobs in Franklinton that involve surviving a police raid with a man who then, in the next mission, he goes on a . Aaron Tries to stop him from doing so but he kills many civilians and Police Officers that they put him on death row. Aaron then gets a call from the irish mob asking him to help Kidnap Mary 'o' Leary. after the exchange Aaron does his first mission with a Level Area. you have to fly to new Agland, to massetuchetts to deal with a small gang that are causing trouble in the irish mobs northern territory.he then gets into an argument and his boss, a Jack Mclean, who says that he has to do one more job for him that will get him into carcer city. he has to run some guns through the police blockade and, while having a 6 star wanted level, has to Drive them to a safehouse. The Patterson springs missions Are mostly For Racist gangs such as the 'triple k's'. you then get taken in by the police who say they will spare you if you kill the Triple K leader. you then have to go into the woods and kill them. you then show up at a demonstration for blacks and assasinate all the triple k there. there then is a blank space that i want filled in, and another before the triple k missions as the last assasination attempt on President Henderson was months ago, and as the election draws closer, he decides to open up the road to Capitol City. Aaron however, has managed to get over a day early, as he sneaked over a ford with a hillbilly (need a name) in his pickup. he then does a few missions sneaking moonshine, guns and drugs over the ford as the operation of removing all police from the state highway goes underway. over the course of this time, Jed Holt, a childhood friend of Aaron Appears and assists him in a perticularly daring mission sneaking a cargo of explosives and planting them in a museum in wasington, after which Aaron then shows up at Jeds Hotel in the Carcer Countryside, only to find that the police have arrested him because of the museum explosives mission. Aaron then leaves the motel and gets a call from Max Smart (sorry for the cheap pun), a corrupt government agent, who acts as a Mike Toreno/U.L. Paper type Mission man who blackmails him into stealing jets, trains, intercepting shipments, assasinating rivals if he wants to see jed again. he then tells Aaron to go to the top of a hill in Adams County And Plant a Mobile ariel. Max then phones him and acts all parinoid, telling Aaron that the President Is giving a speach on The war in Iraq in Capitol City. he says that Aaron must act as an agent and stop this. he then has to kill a sniper and a load of men with machiene guns, and drive the President back to the 'Beige House'. he then thanks you and he gives you the keys to a turismo. (I plan on calling that mission 'National Security) you then get phoned by a load of accosiates of President Henderson for missions, and once by the President himself. there is then a blank space which needs expanding, and i have an idea for the Finale. Music Shops: CD'S MUSIC ROCKIN' OUT FM Shop Gameshops: CUBEKNOCKER (Blockbuster) DSD Games (PSP Games) FOOD Stores/Bars: In GTA:CAPITOL STATE food isn't a nessecity, but it regenarates health Burger Shot Independant food Vans Well Stacked Pizza Co. Deluxe Chickens Cluckin' Bell 10 Green Bottles Ole' Bobs hole MYTHS although i would like to keep the realism factor, i want to have myths. i have compiled a list and locations of the myths. here it is: Adams Wanderers Location: Miners hole area, Adams County. Occupation: Murderers, Phycopaths Inbread group of hillbillies living in caves and holes in the ground. The 10 foot man Location: Windsor County, Near Trout Farm Occupation:N/A A misunderstood social outcast. this is probably the time to say that troughout the countryside, their will be rednecks and hillbillies, and the odd 'nam Vet (you dont know man! you wearn't there!) Tunnels Location: all over Capitol State, Especially Franklinton Occupation:N/A used as slave escape routes, the ones still standing can be used to travel quickly from location to location, and loose the police. Mass Graves Location: Countryside Occupation: N/A Nothing but a disturbing easter egg, yet somewhat cool. There will also be: Grey Hell, with interiors, including a warehouse containing the corpses of all the other GTA Characters that are dead. this will not feature in the game, but will there. Skeletons Secret Vehicles murderers immigrants hiding in the woods murderers organ traffikers and backstreet doctors other easter eggs. More to come VEHICLES all the vehicles in San Andreas and IV will Appear, please feel free to suggest more. of course all the cars in San Andreas will mostly be the Newer versions, as Capitol State is set in 2010. any vehicle repeated isnt just because i copied it off the internet, its because there will be a newer versions of the vehicles. URL FOR SA CARS: http://www.g-unleashed.com/index.php?jump=27 URL FOR IV CARS(including Stats): http://www.gta4.net/vehicles/?Type=0&Unit=...ic&Sort=VehNam2 Police - ford crown victoria Police Police Ranger - Chevrolet Tahoe police ranger Ranger - Chevrolet Tahoe Ranger Rancher - 1974 Chevrolet Short Wheelbase 4X4 Rancher Diamond - Old Rolls Royce (oold Super Diamond) Diamond Siesta - 1995 Ford Fiesta Siesta Abandoner - Ford Escort (I'm sorry, I couldnt resist...) Abandoner Dumbo - Mercedes Smart Dumbo NightDriver - GMC Dayvan NightDriver grenouille (french for frog) - Pergeot 206 Grenouille Insetto (Italian for Bug) - Fiat 500 Insetto Insetto (Italian for Bug)C - Fiat 500C Insetto C Coche Dorado (spanish for Guilded car) - Cadillac Eldorado Coche Dorado Asiento (spanish for seat) - Seat Ibiza Asiento Brit - Austin Mini Metro Brit Merodeador (Spanish for Marauder) - Mack truck Merodeador Citizen - 1995 Honda Civic Citizen yoyota - 1995 Toyota Camry Yoyota Jerry - 1992 Volkeswagen Golf Jerry Jerry C - 1980 Volkeswagen Golf Convertible Jerry C Outback - FRV Mondeo Custom Outback Turismo GT000 - Ferrari GT0 Turismo GT0 Harley - Harley Davidson 16GL Harley Phenomonom - Mitsubishi Eclipse Phenomonom Bull - Ford Taurus Bull Integridad(Spanish for integrity) - 2000 Acura Integra Integridad Integridad(spanish for Integrity) Custom - 2000 Acura Integra Custom Integridad Custom Haikumai X1 - Hyundai Matrix Haikumaix1 Haikumai X2 - Hyundai Santa Fe Haikumaix2 Maibatsu - Mitsubishi Pajero Exceed Maibatsu Mystic - 2005 Honda Accord Mystic Yosemite - Ford F150 lightning Yosemite Santa Cruz - Prototype Open top Racer Santa Cruz Mainlander - Land Rover Discovery Mainlander Rubicon - Jeep Wrangler Rubicon Millenium - Old Ford PickupMillenium Century - Old Ford Sedan Century FBI Alpha FBI Cruiser PUBLIC SERVICE PM Taxi FT Taxi FV Taxi CP Taxi CA Taxi CC Taxi CC Cabbie CA Cabbie PM Cabbie FV Cabbie FT Cabbie PM Bus PM Police PM Ambulance PM Coastguard Cavalcade PM Firetruck FT Bus FT Police FT Ambulance FT Coastguard Cavalcade FT Firetruck CP Firetruck CP Police CP Coastguard Cavalcade CP Ambulance CP Bus CC Ambulance CC Police CC But CC Coastguard Cavalcade CC Firetruck FV Bus FV Police FV Ambulance FV Firetruck FV Coastguard Cavalcade PM Highway Patrol FT Highway Patrol CP Highway Patrol CC Highway Patrol CS Highway Patrol PLANES Raptor - Eurofighter Typhoon Vulture - Stealth Plane Wasp - F/A-18 Fighter Eagle - Eagle F-15 Fighter Dodo - Ceasner 66 Carrier - light Passenger Aircraft Nevada - Heavy Passenger Aircraft Florida - Heavy Passenger Aircraft HELICOPTERS Anhaillator Buzzard Maveric Police Maveric News Maveric Levithan (is that right?) Hunter Pidgion swift Skylift OLD CARS BF-400 Bike Bmx Faggio FCR-900 Freeway Mountain Bike NRG-500 PCJ-600 Pizzaboy Quad Sanchez Wayfarer Comet Feltzer Stallion Windsor Blade Broadway Remington Savanna Slamvan Tahoma Tornado Voodoo Bandito BF Injection Dune Huntley Landstalker Mesa Monster Patriot Rancher Sandking Coastguard Dinghy Jetmax Launch Marquis Predator Reefer Speeder Squallo Tropic Admiral Bloodring Banger Bravura Buccaneer Cardona Clover Elegant Elegy Emperor Esperanto Fortune Glendale Greenwood Hermes Intruder Majestic Manana Merit Nebula Oceanic Pheonix Premier Previon Primo Sentinel Stafford Sultan Sunrise Tampa Vincent Virgo Willard Washington Baggage Brownstreak (Train) Caddy Camper Combine Harvester Dozer Dumper Forklift Freight (Train) Hotknife Hotdog Hustler Kart Mower Mr Whoopee Rmero Securicar Stretch Sweeper Towtruck Tug Vortex AT-400 Beagle Cropduster Hydra Rustler Shamal Skimmer Stuntplane Cargobob Hunter Leviathan Raindance Seasparrow Sparrow Benson Bobcat Burrito Boxville Cement Truck DFT-30 Flatbed Linerunner Mule Newsvan Packer Picador Pony Roadtrain Rumpo Sadler Tanker Tractor Trashmaster Utility Van Walton Yankee Yosemite Cabbie HPV1000 Ranger Enforcer Rhino Barracks FBI Rancher S.W.A.T. Alpha Banshee Blista Compact Buffalo Bullet Cheetah Club Euros Flash Hotring Racer Infernus Jester Sabre Super GT Turismo Uranus ZR-350 Regina Solair Stratum Moonbeam Perenniel Admiral AirTug Banshee Benson Biff Blista Compact Bobcat Boxville Buccaneer Burrito Bus Cabby Cavalcade Cavalcade FXT Chavos Cognoscenti Comet Contender Coquette DF8-90 Dilettante Dukes Emperor Emperor (Rusty) Enforcer Esperanto Faction Feltzer Feroci Feroci VIP FIB Buffalo Firetruck Flatbed FlyUS Feroci FlyUS Perennial Forklift Fortune Futo Futo GT Habanero Hakumai Huntley Sport Infernus Ingot Intruder Landstalker Laundromat Lokus Manana Marbelle Merit Minivan Moonbeam Mr. Tasty Mule NOOSE Cruiser NOOSE Patriot Oracle Rhapsody Packer Patriot Perennial Peyote Phantom Pinnacle PMP 600 Police Stockade Pony Super Diamond Super Diamond Drophead Super Diamond Custom Premier Presidente Primo Rancher Rebla Ripley Roman's Taxi Romero Ruiner Sabre Sabre (Rusty) Sabre GT Schafter Securicar Sentinel Sentinel XS Solair Speedo Bullet Bullet GT Stallion Steed Stratum Stretch Sultan Sultan RS Super GT Trashmaster Turismo Uranus Vigero Vigero (Rusty) Vincent Virgo Voodoo Washington Willard Yankee Schafter Custom NOOSE APC Serrano Brickade Gang Burrito Stretch E Tampa ] Slamvan ] Regina ] TLATD Versions Towtruck ] Prison Bus] BOATS Floater Crasher Marquis Resistance (parody of Marquis) Wave Rider Jetski Yacht Cruiser Trawler Jetmax Racer Tropic Smuggler Blade NEW BIKES All Bikes from the previous games will appear, including Episodes From Liberty City. Streetfighter [not new but hasnt featured since VCS ] Mountain Bike Racing Bike Push Bike Freeway Sanchez BRX-600 PJC-700 VEHICLE MANURFACTURERS These are the car manurfacturers in GTA V Imponte - Based roughly on Pontiac Brute - Possibly Mack Bravado - Unknown Vapid - Ford (one vehicle made by Range Rover, one chrysler) HVY - Erf, Mack Dinka - Hyundai, Toyota Albany - Cadillac Declasse - GMC, Dodge Schyster - Chrysler Enus - Mercedes Pfister - Porche Pfister Firr - Porche Riff Custom Inuetero - Chevrolet MTL - Erf, Scania Karin - Toyota Pecassi - Lamborgini Vulcar - Volvo Dundreary - Landrover Dreary - Rover uidu - Kia Zav - Vaz Walton - American Pickup Manurfacturers tulos - Lotus aiody - Audi Willard - Buik Maibatsu - Mitsubishi Mammoth - Hummer Übermacht - BMW Jobuilt - Mack Annis - Nissan, Toyota Benefactor - Mercedes Benz Classique - Mix of muscle car manurfacturers Zirconium - Nissan, Toyota Dewbauchee - Aston Martin Grotti - Ferrari RADIO Most Suggestions, Within reason, will be accepted for this section 109.7 THE WILDERNESS Broadcasted from a pickup truck with an ariel stuck in it in adams county, this radio is for country music. it also features a show where the DJ drives about the countryside at night looking for myths in the game. (there will also be a television channel featuring mythbusters) I Can't Stop Loving You - Ray Charles I'm So Lonesome I Could Cry - Hank Williams Crazy - Patsy Cline I Will Always Love You - Dolly Parton Stand by Your Man - Tammy Wynette Ring Of Fire - Johnny Cash Forever And Ever, Amen - Randy Travis Always On My Mind - Willie Nelson The Dance - Garth Brooks Coal Miner's Daughter - Loretta Lynn Let Me Touch You for Awhile - Allison Krauss Blue Moon Of Kentucky - Bill Monroe Boulder To Birmingham - Emmylou Harris I Fall To Pieces - Patsy Cline Your Cheatin' Heart - Hank Williams He Stopped Loving Her Today - George Jones Will The Circle Be Unbroken - The Nitty Gritty Dirt Band Hurt - Johnny Cash K-DRT after K-DST lost their broadcasting licsence for casting sexually explicit material, Timmy 'the nightmare' smith and his agent founded a new radio under the name K-Dirt, as oppose to K-Dust. they play Classic/Driving rock DJ: Timmy 'The Nightmare' Smith Co-Host: Liberty Rock F.M.'s Iggy Pop My Life - Bon Jovi 14 Years - Guns 'N' Roses Lynrd Skynrd - Simple Man Eric Clapton - Layla Boston - Smokin' Elton John - Street Kid Creedence Clearwater Revival - Born on the bayou Stevie Nicks - Edge of 17 My Generation - The Who Crazy Train - Ozzy Osborne Stay With Me - Faces Creedence Clearwater Revival - Green River Sultans Of Swing - Dire Straits The Beatles - All Together Now Boston - More Than a Feeling Guns 'N' Roses - Dust And Bones The Ju Ju Hounds - Shuffle It All Lead Zeppelin - Immigrant Song Creedence Clearwater Revival - Fortunate Son Radio X When Radio X went bust 'Sage's Drug Problem Grew and She Rapidly Declined In mental Ability. But now she has been to rehabilitation and has regained her memory, but her drug problem is still present, But Dosen't Give as long as she can continue to play Hard/Alternative Rock DJ: 'Sage' Co-Host: Fresh from Missouri city's Cloverleaf F.M. its Johnny 'J.W' Booth Muse - Starlight Oasis - Supersonic Oasis - Morning Glory Arcade Fire - Keep the Car Running Zox - Fading Pearl Jam - Alive Green day - Boulevard of Broken Dreams Green day - Holiday Muse - Hysteria H.I.M. – Heartkiller Spaulding – Careless Whisper Ozzy Osbourne – I Don’t Wanna Stop Scorpions – Someone To Touch L.A. Guns – I Wanna Be Your man Liberty N’ Justice – Greed Slaughter – Get Used To It Zan Clan – Go, Go, Go Crazy Lixx – 21 ‘Til I Die Aerosmith Feat. Run DMC - Walk This Way Linkin Park - Don't Stay Linkin Park - Crawling Capitol FM (lol) Capitol Cities equivilent of Radio Broker. Plays Modern Music (not my area of expertise) DJ: Andi 'slutty' Lawson Co-Host: All the way from Londond Capital FM, its Mr. Johnny Vaughan Lady Gaga - Pokerface Owl City - Fireflies Pixie Lott - Gravity Black Eyed Peas - I Gotta Feeling Pixie Lott - Cry Me Out Robbie Williams - Bodies Cheryl Cole - Parachute Rhianna - Rude Boy Calvin Harris - You Used to Hold me Sade - Soldier of Love Black Eyed Peas - Boom Boom Pow Young Moned - BedRock Leona Lewis - I Got You Cheryl Cole - Fight For This Love K-Jah East The East Coast Version Of K-Jah West, or the Capitol Version of liberty City's K-Jah DJ: Bob 'marley' Thompson Co-Host - Bob 'Dizzie' Madman No Woman, No Cry - Bob Marley and the Wailers Israelites - Desmond Dekker Stir It Up - Bob Marley Pressure - DropToots & The Maytals The Harder They Come - Jimmy Cliff One Love - Bob Marley/The Wailers 54-46 That's My Number - Toots & the Maytals Satta Massagana - The Abyssinians Funky Kingston - Toots & The Maytals Montego Bay - Freddie Notes & The Rudies Many Rivers To Cross - jimmy Cliff Marcus Garvey - Burning Spear Legalize It - Peter Tosh Redemption Song - Bob Marley Here I Come - Dennis Brown Get up, Stand Up - Bob Marley Rudy Got Soul - Desmond Dekker & the Aces The Tide Is High - The Paragons Three Little Birds - Bob Marley and the Wailers Other ideas For Radios are: emocore punk Ethnic (eastern european , latino, asian ect.) goth rock classical Within Reason, i will accept any other suggestions. Peds Hillbilly Car Stolen: How am i Going to annoy enviromentalists now!? Back to Horses... I need this to get to the donkey show! My Retard Children ain't going to inherit anything now! you Gotta Learn some respect! You Dick! Mai Ride! Yous Damn City Folk! Let me get my pigs from in there! My kat ain't gonna like this! aaarrrrrrgggghhhhh! Damn Yous High Finance city gang banging sh*tface! iys' Maybe inbread but iys' not stoopid! Give Me Back My iron horse! That horse has a drinkin' prahblem Have it! the gum holding the engine together is worth more than the actual car you! damn you! Yous f*ck'n dickhead WE DONT LIKE YOUR KIND ROUND HERE! my eye is on my ass! (WTF?) Let me get my ma's Corpse! Seeing Police chase: Them pigs ain't looking, get the moonshine and shoot the b*tch! i love high violence police chases! hey officer!! he ran down mai pig! whooaa! hey billy! bob! billy bob! bob billy! look at this! this is how bob billy bob died! whooooohooooo, now thaits what iy call a wild riade! look, ma, look! i gotta tell mai donkey 'bout this go! go! go! don't let the pigs get the moonshine I'y'a Feel Like an extra in one'a' 'dem films on the talking picture box! hold still, i gotta paint this! Seeing Murder: Hey Kids! guess whats for dinner! disrispecful sh*tty ma'i'n jesus, what are you? aaarrrrgggghhhhhh i will chainsaw your ass off! dont attack me! In Fight: AAAARRRGGGHHHHHH Hailp! Hailp! I will pop your F*cking balls! Ma! look! I'y's' Makin' dinner! Wow! i gotta warn you i'y's' watch those fighting films on the speaky speaky box! Running Away: AAARRRGGGHHH help me! I'y's' dont wanna die! dont kill me! are you ma'i'd? You, sir are the devil! HIPPY A Few Non Specified Suggestions Man, your the Man, Man! Make peace, not War! Wow[stumbles, im trippin' man A British man: Having a car stolen: Why I say! This young ruffian appears to have jacked my automobile! Well thats okay, the queen was going to pick me up anyway. Oh dear, I knew I would require travel insurance. Spiffing, this means I can que to buy a new automobile, and whilst in that que i shall moan about it! Oh b**locks Watching a police chase: Why I say, good show, good show. I wonder why the yanks call these chaps "pigs". You would never expect thiskind of behaviour in buckingham palace. Why all this american gangstar action is making up for the lack of a chish and fips shop! When being shoved: What a positivly rude ruffian! well, at least the russians dont hate my country! Why sir, I challenge you to fisticuffs! A new york resident: when having a car stolen: Hey, Im driving at the designated speed limit so the police have no reason to stop me here! Hey, My cars being stolen here! thats okay, I was only going to go and show people my junk on chat roulette anyways! OH NO! NOT GREASE LIGHTNING! NOT GREASE LIGHTNING! being shoved hey what the f*ck do you think your doing you mother f*cking lovlife piece of s*it Oh just you wait till tommy, bobby, lommy, oragami and dave here about this right here! what the hell do you think your doin' man? watching a police chase: f*cking pigs couldnt catch chlymidia at a techno party! f*ck you pigs! f*cking pigs waste f*cking time a computer nerd: having a car stolen: this is a bigger outrage than terminator salvation! this is almost as bad as george lucas' late movies wait! my inhaler is in there! wait! my comic books are in there wait! the corpse of the b*tch who turned me down to prom is in there! being shoved: Dont hurt me! when this goes on my blog im putting an angry face there! Argh i dropped my glasses! I cant see without my glasses! watching a police chase: Oh this is soooo going in my facebook status! f*ck! I forgot my 14 megapixel cameras fish angle lense! wow, this has more action than the first three star wars movies! Any Suggestions for dialogue will be accepted. Scottish Man Car Jacked Oy! W*nker! This isnt F*cking Glasgow, you know, IT ISNT LEGAL HERE! MAN!, YOU WANNA DO THIS? Let me get my porn! Let me get my beer! In Fight Back in The highlands I was a Heavyweight boxer! This is worse than trying to gain independance from those southern pigs! I dinnae' need the fuzz! Held Up We got a parliment to expand! Damn you typical american t*ssing f*ck! (no offence Yanks) GET OUT OF THE WAY OR I WILL F*CK YOU UP! if you did this in Aberdeen you would have your balls Popped! Walking [to other ped] Yeah, and the British royal Family are actually german!...oh wait a minute.... A misst ye sae muckle! [i missed you so much] Ho ye! [excuse me] Ya Crabbit Dunt, Ya Dropped ya breeks down the brae! Ya Eeit! [you idiot] Ya kenning Jag [ you All knowing prick] suggestions that i, or you could do: Preppy girl drunk (i...iys loooveeeeeeeeee youu!!!!!!!!!!!) buissiness man Calafornian tourist aisan tourists policeman country policeman (ma!, Look! im arresting someone!) GANGS Apart from a few unnamed small redneck gangs, the main are either racists, corrupt politicians and buissinessmen or violent street gangs Triple K's A parody of the Klu Klux Klan, extremists and nationalistic lunatics that are feared even by members of the white community. American Irish Mob Self Explanitory, really. an American-Irish mob. specialises in kidnappings and drug and gun traffiking. English mob A Mixture of cockneys and posh southsiders. specialises in murders and robberies The Mcreary Mob Although Packie and Gerry are mentioned in the game they are not featured exept in the DLC. this is the only gang that you HAVE to stay friendly with from when you meet them to the end of the game. Specialises in Unorganized crime and Bank robberies The Gravelli Family Pretty much the same as in IV. specialises in smuggling and kidnappings The Gambetti Family Italian Mob Family. Specialises in drug dealing and kidnapping The Spanish Lords Like the Varrios Los Aztecas in Grand Theft Auto: San Andreas. Specialises in Drug Dealing The Lost M.C Biker. Specialises in Unorganized crime and Murders. Angels Of Death M.C. Has chapters all over the U.S. Specialises in Drug Dealing. New Angland Saints A New England based gang, spreading down south to expand their empire. specialises in prostitution and violent crime WEAPONS PISTOLS Walther PPK - a small german pistol with ok accuracy and ok stopping power. price depends where it is supplied Desert Eagle - a powerful weapon with limited range, ok accuracy and brilliant stopping power. heavy recoil .44 Magnum - a powerful weapon with bad range bad accuracy but the best stopping power. very heavy recoil. Colt.45 - cannot be bought, just found in the coubntryside. good range, good accuracy and bad stopping power. low recoil Browning 9x19mm Hi-Power - good range brilliant accuracy and ok stopping power. medium recoil Walther P99 Semi-Automatic - good range, good accuracy and good stopping power. medium recoil Compact Semi-Automatic Smith & Wesson.45 - Bad range good accuracy and bad stopping power. very low recoil. SUB-MACHINE GUNS MPT-9K - Good range, accuracy and firing rate. medium recoil Thompson - good range, ok accuracy and bad firing rate. low recoil Type 50 - cheap, good accuracy, good range and ok firing rate. high recoil T68 SMG - high powered Automatic. brilliant range, brilliant accuracy and low firing rate. high recoil AEG Electric CYMA MP5 - high powered Electric. good range, accuracy and brilliant firing rate. med-high recoil UZI - good range, accuracy and high firing rate. low recoil P90 - High Tech Automatic - ok range, good accuracy and Brilliant Firing rate. High recoil Scorpion - bad range, good accuracy and very low firing rate. med-high recoil SHOTGUNS Double-Barrelled Shotgun - Bad range, accuracy and firing rate. brilliant stopping power and high recoil. 12 Gauge Shotgun - bad range ok accurracy and bad firing rate. good stopping power and med - high recoil Remington Automatic Shotgun - Ok range, bad accuracy and good Firing rate. brilliant stoppiing power and a medium recoil weatherby single barrelled Shotgun - bad range, accuracy and firing rate. very high recoil and amazingly brilliant stopping power Valtro's Automatic Shotgun - Ok range, accuracy and a good firing rate. high recoil and good stopping power MACHINE GUNS AK - 47 Kalashnikov - Ok range, accuracy and a steady firing rate. good stopping power and medium recoil. very cheap and easy to get. M60 M60E3 M60E4 - Brilliant range, accuracy and fifing rate, high recoil and immense stopping power. slows player movement BAR - good range, accuracy and steady firing rate. good stopping power and high recoil M85 Assult Rifle. Brilliant range, accuracy and ok firing rate. high recoil and good stopping power Tavor TAR-21 - Bad range, ok accuracy and a brilliant firing rate. medium recoil and ok stopping power AR-15 Assult Rifle - Good range,accuracy, firing rate and stopping power, low recoil MAB5 Assult Rifle - Amazing range and accuracy but a bad firing rate and high recoil. good stopping power though HEAVY WEAPONS AND THROWABLES Grenades Satchel Charges Famethrower - ok range, bad accuracy and an immensly brilliant firing rate. no recoil and very bad stopping power Bazooka - Amazing range, ok accuracy and firing rate. very, very high recoil and amazing stopping power Panthershrek - Amazing range, Bad Acuracy and firing rate. Very high recoil and Immensly amazing stopping power MELEE Baseball bat - Can cause 1 hit kills Electric Guitar - Listen to the sweet music you cause by smaking someone with this! Acoustic Guitar - The beautiful sound of untuned notes flows from this when you use it! Katana - A ninja sword with massive power The butt of a gun - can be used if you run out of ammunition. Crowbar - Can be used to open locked doors (and heads) Fire Axe - Ouch... Wood with a nail in - Cannot be bought, only found. All Guns and other heavy weapons can be used as melee when ammo runs out, but heavy weapons slow you down when holstered. Weapon Add-Ons Scope - 5x magnification Laser scope - 10x magnification, but horribly visible Agog scope - 50x magnification, but very expensive Surpressor - like breaking necks and dragging away bodies, this won't alert the police. Strap - increases running Speed When Holstering a heave weapon or machine gun ELECTRONICS Laptop Whizz wireless mobile Other Mobiles IPAD touch MP3 Gamestation Gamestation portable GPS PDA CHARACTERS Name: Aaron Stoney Age: 27 Description: Tall, Blue Eyed, long blonde hair, stubble and a thick accent The Protoganist, seeking revenge for his mothers death Name: James Stoney Age: 51 Description: tall, Blue Eyed, short iron gray hair, stubble and a thick accent After killing his wife, he moved to Capitol State to become a polotician. Name: John Meyer Age: 40 Description: Brown hair, going gray (dyed brown), brown eyes and an east coast accent a mission boss in Carcer City Name: Jack Mclean Age: 29 Description: Shaven head, brown eyes, no stubble and a Cork accent. a mission boos in Franklinton, a member of the American-Irish Mob Name: Fredrick Masters Age: 45 Description: Black Hair, Green eyes, Clean shaven with a straitforward American accent A mission boss in Philmont Name: Bill Harris Age: 35 Description: Bald, clean shaven, blue eyes with a normal american accent a small time crook in Philmont, and a mission boss, early on in the game Name: John ??? Age: 23 Description: long brown hair and short beard, brown eyes and a new england accent a character who is only seen a few times early on, but appears as a random character in Carcer City Name:??? Age:49 Description: a short, fat, short haired and messy faced brute who bullies Aaron into crime. a bit like Sgt. Martinez in VCS Name: Jebadiah 'Jed' Holt Age: 28 Description: Looks mainly like Aaron, But with green eyes. he moved from alabama to oregon and has never really lost the accent. jed is a mission boss About the time Capitol City is unlocked. he becomes a friend after the end of the game, so you can then do activities with him Name: President Henderson. Age: 56 Description: Based on George Bush, From Texas (San Augustine State) he is incredibly stupid He is a mission boss for 2 missions and introduces Aaron to some Government agents, which, not to the knowledge of henderson, are corrupt. Name: Paddy 'o' Leary Age: 44 Description: Waterford born, this man is bold, blue eyed and still has a strong accent he is the father of Mary 'o' leary, a girl you kidnap for the irish mob. Name: Mary 'o' Leary Age: 20 Description: no irish accent. short, dark hair and blue eyes. she is a girl you kidnap during the Franklinton (Boston) missions Characters included in Franklinton(ones already mentioned are Featured or affect majorly the another parts of the game SUGGESTIONS NEEDED!! DISTRICTS PHILMONT Middletown - Center City: Middletown is pretty much self explanitory. the Sub Districts include, avenue of the musics(avenue of the arts), fallowhill(callowhill) Chinatown(Chinatown) Eflereth's Sidestreet (Elfreth's Alley) Drainpipe Square(filter Square)Franklinton(Franklintown)Ganol Square(Logan Square) Robbers Row(Jewelers Row) Market West(Market East) Old City(Old City) Museum Hill(Museum District) ensyl Center(Penn Centre)/Pensyl's Landing(penn's Landing)Capitol hill(Society Hill) Capitol Square(washington Square) South Philmont - South Philadelphia: Bella seven(Bella Vista[i am so sorry about my cheap puns])Central South Philmont(Central South Philadelphia)Satans Thong(Devils Pocket[another cheap sexual pun])Roosevelt Hill(roosevelt Park)Blacks Ferry(Grays Ferry)Gizzard Estate(Girard Estate)Grenwich(Greenwich)Siy Camore(Haw Thorne) Italian Market(Italian Market)Pasta Square(Macaroni Plaza)Oldknot(Newbold)Packer Park(Packer Park)Pussypunk Square(Passyunk Square)PensylsPort(Pennsport)[irish american neighbourghood]Point Wind(Point Breeze)Kingstown(Queen Village) Westminster(southwark)Southwest Middletown(Southwest Center City) Quester (Tasker)Wartown(Wharton)Blackman(Whitman)Wade Park(Wilson Park) West Pussypunk(west Pessyunk) Southwest Philmont - Southwest Philadelphia WEST PHILMONT - WEST PHILADELPHIA Collegeville - University city NORTHWEST PHILMONT - NORTHWEST PHILADELPHIA Jerryville - Germantown Sycamore Hill - Chesnut hill Rixborough - Roxborough NORTH PHILMONT - NORTH PHILADELPHIA Lower North Philmont - Lower North Philadelphia Groomsville - Bridesburg Chelsea - Kensington Richman - Richmond Upper North Philmont - Upper North Philadelphia newney - olney Oak Lane - maple lane THE NORTHEAST - THE NORTHEAST The long northeast - The Far Northeast The Short Northeast - The Near Northeast FRANKLINTON (Need Ideas) Brixton - Taunton Birmingham - Manchester Warshire - Warwick Flie River - Fall River Gloucester - Worcester New Sheffield - New Bedford Fitchville - Fitchburg CARCER CITY (Need Ideas) Blueford - Redford Capitol Hill- Washington Falkirk Heights - Sterling Heights Northburg - Northville Fierro - Oakland Blackwater - White Lake Oldford - Milford Riversight - Riverview StonHeaven - Woodhaven Hillyrock - Flatrock FREDRICKSVILLE AND FAIRVIEW Need Ideas CAPITOL CITY (need Ideas Reef Chase - Coral Hills Pontiac Drive - Chevy Chase Capitol - Washington Arlingtown - Arlington Alexander Hills - Alexandria Hottum - Chillum College Drive - College park Hattsburg - Hyattsville Lucyeda - Bethesda Downington - Huntington (soz..) jersey - Suitland(not funny...) HIGHWAYS, BRIDGES AND TUNNELS For the next two sections I need Suggestions Interstate 59 - Interstate 95: South to Fredricksville and fairview, North to Franklinton Interstate 39 - Interstate 93: South to Capitol City, North to Philmont Interstate 79 - Interstate 97:West to Capitol City, East to Fredricksville and Fairview Interstate 49 - Interstate 94: West to Franklinton, East to Philmont Cahallan Tunnel - Callahan Tunnel AIRPORTS AND SEAPORTS Lincolnton Memorial Airport (LMA) Franklinton International Airport Philmont National Airport Carcer International Airport Carcer Goods Port Philmont Port Capitol Trading Post Franklinton Historical Dockyard Trailer Anything you dont like feel free to say so A black screen fades out into a cutscene of aaron walking through oregon, aged 27, with a giant redwood to his fight and some shrubs to his right. it is about 11-00 clock at night. Narrator: Aaron Stoney has been through hell... Screen fades out and into a scene of him, aged 13, stumbling away from his burning cabin Narrator: His life Span out of control... Screen fades out and into a scene of him aged 22 stealing a pickup somewhere near Mobile alabama. Narrator: his childhood dreams of starting a family shattered Screen fades out and into a scene of him aged 27 at the wheel of a different pickup crusing down the interstate towards Philmont. Narrator: But he wants revenge Static then christians inferno by greenday plays from the beggining, stopping at the end of the advert before the chorus Screen fades out and into a scene of him beating up a man down an alleyway asking him where his father is Narrator: and he will get revenge screen flashes to one of him in a 4X4 speeding down a dirt road following a limo (hint, hint...) then flashes to a plane flying over the state, then to a motorbike speeding of a ramp and through a helicopter. music stops and screen fades out then a V in the GTA font fades in. Intro. anything you dont like tell me and within reason i will change it. basically the first paragraph happens cutscene fades(feel free to refer back to it). a screen fades in to him geting out of a pickup and your first run down safehouse, or should i say room, in Philmont. the screen fades out and then in to the garage that you get a job at. Mission one - A Cheap Deal starts and the dialogue is as follows: Mechanic: So.. you know what to do Aaron: yeah, i guess so Aaron puts down a toolbox. Mechanic: you should probably tell the boss you've arrived. Aaron: uhuh. they walk in to the bosses office. Boss: so, uh, your the new mechanic, huh? Aaron: yeah, i was wonderin' if you could set me up with some better wheels Boss: you could get a part ex with that iron horse you drive, but that is probably only worth about $500 Aaron: i guess so Boss[talking to mechanic]: john, go now Mechanic: sir... mechanic walks out. Boss: so, Aaron, thats your name? Aaron: you got a problem with that? Boss[chuckles]: nah, son Aaron: good Boss: i can get you more money than you would doing what johns doing Aaron: How? Boss: i need you to retrieve a package Aaron: whats in it? Boss: i like the look of you, so i'll tell you. its dru... Aaron: Forget it man, no way! Boss: i hear your looking for someone Aaron: yeah, why you askin'? Boss: if you do this for me i'll put my word in to some very influencial people, of you don... Aaron[muttering]:god sake...[starts talking properly] ok man...i guess so but if... Boss: dont worry. boss motions for Aaron to leave. he does what he is told. boss shakes his head and then sits down for some paperwork. that is when you can first take control of Aaron. you are standing next to your pickup, a broken, unreliable yosemite, until you upgrade this it will occationally stall and the steering or brakes will sometimes go for about a second, but the first upgrade can be brought after the 2nd mission. another new feature is that the yosemite will spawn outside your safehouse until you buy a new car, then that will spawm. if you choose to part exchange your previously owned car, depending on the model and garage, you get a discount. if you dont it will spawn beside your new car outside the safehouse. if you own two safehouses it will not spawn outside the other one untill you move it there, then it will start spawning there, and stop spawning at the other one. you get into your car and drive to the deal. a straitforward mission intended for you to get to know the streets of Philmont. when you get to the deal you meet a man called Andy Rock. on the way back there is a brightly painted Volkeswagen Microbus across the width of the road, smashed beyond repair with smoke pouring out. you see a group of drugged up hippies arguing with a driver. later on in the game, in adams county, you work for these hippies, one of them being The Truth, giving up trying to convince people in San Andreas, has come to Capitol State. Mission 2 - Repo Man This mission is started by walking into the mission icon at the side of the garage. when this mission is complete you will notice that where this mission marker was, a new one has appeared. this one opens a garage door to modify and buy cars. as this is the firts garage, the choice of cars and parts is very limited, but very cheap. Aaron walkes in to the garage, nods politely at john the mechanic, and walks into the bosses office Boss: well well well... Aaron: So, I delivered the drugs, I gave you the money, what you got me? Boss: i need you to do a few more things.. Aaron: F*ck you! I came to this state for revenge to kill the Bastard who Shot my mother and burned down my home and you tell me this? B*llsh*t! you told me you would put your word in! Boss: Hey [Chuckles] calm down!. i like you. thats why i am giving you work. when i have finished with you, i will put my word in if you have done a good job. i could have you doing what you applied to do on less than minimum wage! Aaron: What...What The F*ck do you want? Boss: In the current ecinomical state buisinesses are losing money. thats good, but unfortunately, we are one of those buissinesses. i want you to 'reposses' some vehicles that we shall dismantle and sell, you got me? Aaron: i'll Do it you usless F*ck! Boss: good, [Aaron turnes to leave, but the boss grabs him by the collar] and dont speak to me like that. Aaron: Ok you maniac! Boss: seriously, i dont know how you do things in red county, but here, you show some respect, capiche? Aaron: yeah [Aaron leaves] this is the first mission in which you aquire a wanted level. it is a tutorial on what to do on a one or two star. the wanted level system is as follows: ONE* Police will pull you out of your car, but dont have permission to shoot yet. you could get this for manslauter TWO** Police will now open fire, but you are not their top priority. you could get this for mass-manslauter, running from a ONE* or manslaughter of a cop THREE*** Police Maveric joins in, more reinforcements come. You could get this for robbing a store or Mass-manslauter of Cops FOUR**** FIB join the chase, another maveric arrives, you could get this for robbing a bank or small museum, or drug dealing FIVE***** NOOSE join in, reinforcements for normal cops and FIB, maverics dissapear and an anhiallator Joins in. get this for robbing museums, flying under 5000 feet above Capitol city or entering a military compound. Army Join in, light roadblocks, medium tanks, jeeps. 6****** If you are in the sky, Raptors and Vultures join in, 2 more anhailators arrive, this can only be caused by multiple crimes, killing large numbers of police, or at certain points in the game that are unavoidible. 7******* Heavy weapons are brought in, civilians are evacuated, they dont just dissapear, they are evacuated, more reinforcements, NOI join and NOOSE relax their efforts. 8******** All doors locked, all but NOI, NOOSE and the U.S. Military give up, very hard to survive, not usually possible. MISSION 3 - To kill a Cop This mission is started by entering the marker at the front of the garage. Aaron walks strait into the bosses office Boss: Aaron, just the man i wanted to see!, how are you? Aaron: Cut the crap, man, what d'ya want Boss: your a clever man Aaron. Aaron[muttering]: f*ck you to Boss: please, dont anger me, i dont want to kill you Aaron[sarcastically]: yes, Boss Boss: their is a pig, a cop who is getting to close to the 'illegal' buissiness we are involved in. Aaron: we? i just want to find my... Boss: I know. take this cop for a ride. get a suit and drive him to the countryside, and into a river. Aaron: if this guy is just a cop, then why does he have a driver? Boss: he isn't just a cop. he is a plain clothes detective. he is corrupt and he has money. Aaron: i'll do it. Boss: good. Aaron walks out before the boss can speak again. this is the first mission where you get into the countryside. it gives you a basic tutorial of the different road surfaces and how different vehicles react to them. it gives you a tutorial of 4X4's and driving at speed on winding roads. once you have killed the corrupt cop, you have to take a photo for evidence and take it back to the boss. you get $1000 for your troubles. While working for the government, Aaron gets sent on several missions in liberty city, san andreas, vice city and even other countries. each one will have a small 'level area'. Mission 4 - Shaken, not stirred The boss wants you to enter a motorbike race. This is the first mission where you are racing. When you complete this mission you unlock the GP stadium for use outside missions. Aaron Walks in and rests his hands on the bosses desk Aaron: What d’ya want? Boss: I need you to prove some guy isn’t the best out there Aaron: so you want me to kill him? Boss: NO! On no account must you kill him Aaron slumps in a chair in front of the desk Boss: I want you to race him. Aaron: Forget it, man, no way! Boss: $1000 Aaron: Then you will leave me to my own devices? Boss: Yes. Aaron: pffft Aaron walks out and the mission starts. You drive to the stadium, race and if you win, you complete it. Mission 5 – Come dine with me In this mission you have to go to dinner with one of bill harris’, a friend of the boss, enemies. You have to be pretending to do business with him. It is a bit like the mission in IV where you date French tom. You have to stand up and shoot him. Aaron walks in and nods at bill Boss: this is my mate bill. He needs a favour done. Aaron: and? Boss: Don’t disrespect me, or bill, or I will have to kill you Aaron: I’ve had it with your sh*t, man! You such bullsh*t. Bill takes a gun out of his jacket and loads it, then replaces it. Bill: I need you to drive me to a deal. Aaron: why me? Bill: Our mutual friend says you are reliable. Boss: Just go Boss waves his hand and Aaron and Bill Exit. You drive him to a deal, and get ambushed. You have to drive him to safety to a safe house on the outskirts of Philmont. New Safehouse Acquired. DLC's Coming Soon: GTA V: Irish Blood Protoganist: Packie McReary Cities: Franklinton(boston) Philmont(Pliladelphia) Dartmouth(Plymouth) Prophecy(Providence) Country areas: Adams County Tail County(Maine) Prophecy State Dartmouth County GTA V: Sweet home Mobile State This DLC gives GTA:V an entirely new storyline, adds 2 cities and gives new vehicles and characters. Protoganist: Jed Holt New Cities: Stationary - Mobile (Alabama) Jefferson - Montgomery (Alabama) New Country Areas: Pike County Shelby County Baldwin State More Soon Edited April 29, 2011 by drscot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jayd_101 Posted March 20, 2010 Share Posted March 20, 2010 (edited) Excuse my french but, f*cking awesome, is this complete or are you still working on it because the is got lots of f*cking ideas, WOW I am impressed. Thumbs up from me You deserve a I'll tell you what, you can upload the pics onto the page by using the [img][/img] But if your trying to push the "IMG" button it won't work, just type it in. (When you press the button does it say "Error! you must enter a URL"?) Try uploading the pics with: http://www.tinypic.com/ That's a good website for it. Edited March 20, 2010 by Jayd_101 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drscot Posted March 20, 2010 Author Share Posted March 20, 2010 hey man! cheers for your support! thanks for the code (and ). yes i am still working on it, but i wanted to just get it posted. if you have anything that didnt fit, or any new ideas, please comment, Thanks man! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fishera01 Posted March 20, 2010 Share Posted March 20, 2010 Your a retarded penis............................ that's what novaY would say. But I'm gonna to say, your a retarded testicles, nah just jokes you bich, It's all good topic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drscot Posted March 20, 2010 Author Share Posted March 20, 2010 Updated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SilentSeas Posted March 20, 2010 Share Posted March 20, 2010 Its a good idea but can you make the images smaller? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cheat Posted March 20, 2010 Share Posted March 20, 2010 The story is a bit over-the-top but it's kinda good, and the map is one of the best so far, but yeah, resize the pictures (do you really need to have the pics for the houses?) and transform it into a easier-to read and better form so it's easy to get the point clear. Otherwise, good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drscot Posted March 20, 2010 Author Share Posted March 20, 2010 thanks guys for support, but im kinda new to gta forums, and i dont know how to resize the pics, i will get rid of the houses, and thanks for your comment on the map. if you want to post vehicles, dialogue, missions, myths and secrets, radios and everything else a good gta game needs, feel free to. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cheat Posted March 20, 2010 Share Posted March 20, 2010 By resizing we mean just that you save them in smaller resolution Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drscot Posted March 20, 2010 Author Share Posted March 20, 2010 ok cheers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PreciousWall Posted March 20, 2010 Share Posted March 20, 2010 good to see some nice idea! love the big map anyway carcer city is too small Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drscot Posted March 20, 2010 Author Share Posted March 20, 2010 Tried saving with a lower resolution, but it has just gone crap, the colours have merged because i did it on paint with a laptop mouse Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iLiaWneK Posted March 20, 2010 Share Posted March 20, 2010 Great work jumbling up SA's map, it really does look original until you compare it. Great work with the rest! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DanManUtd Posted March 20, 2010 Share Posted March 20, 2010 Good ideas there My only moan would be that you can make the first post looking nice with tables Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NinjaHorse Posted March 20, 2010 Share Posted March 20, 2010 I like this idea. locations seem good, except i would've put atlantic city in there as well (gives a bit of variety and las venturas feel i think) but otherwise, good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Goose Posted March 20, 2010 Share Posted March 20, 2010 Haven't read it all, but pretty damn good idea there. Nice work with the locations. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PreciousWall Posted March 20, 2010 Share Posted March 20, 2010 i love the monuments parodies classy R* Style Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drscot Posted March 21, 2010 Author Share Posted March 21, 2010 Great work jumbling up SA's map, it really does look original until you compare it. Great work with the rest! i didnt jumble up SA's map, i got SA's map onto a paint document and copied the colours from the origional map. thanks for your support guys! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drscot Posted March 21, 2010 Author Share Posted March 21, 2010 (edited) updated EDIT: Atlantic city? i will post a map with atlantic city, NJ included, and i will return to the old one if it doesnt go down well. Edited March 21, 2010 by drscot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drscot Posted March 21, 2010 Author Share Posted March 21, 2010 guys, soz for the triple post, im sorry really, but i need ideas for radio's and storylines desperately Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Goose Posted March 21, 2010 Share Posted March 21, 2010 What tone of story are you going for? What gang/s are getting the focus, and what is the starting city? Any characters or missions you want to put in? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drscot Posted March 21, 2010 Author Share Posted March 21, 2010 (edited) well, you start in philmont, then to adams county, then to somerset county, then to carcer, then to patterson springs, fredricksville and fairbanks, then to capitol north and south I dont really want the gritty crime story of liberty city, and more of the government orientated, with a splash of redneack and the southern racism of your patriot island Edited March 21, 2010 by drscot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Goose Posted March 21, 2010 Share Posted March 21, 2010 Hmm. Anyway I can help? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drscot Posted March 21, 2010 Author Share Posted March 21, 2010 after what you did with Lincoln State, how can i refuse? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RandomFishPerson Posted March 21, 2010 Share Posted March 21, 2010 A British man: Having a car stolen: Why I say! This young ruffian appears to have jacked my automobile! Well thats okay, the queen was going to pick me up anyway. Oh dear, I knew I would require travel insurance. Spiffing, this means I can que to buy a new automobile, and whilst in that que i shall moan about it! Oh b**locks Watching a police chase: Why I say, good show, good show. I wonder why the yanks call these chaps "pigs". You would never expect thiskind of behaviour in buckingham palace. Why all this american gangstar action is making up for the lack of a chish and fips shop! When being shoved: What a positivly rude ruffian! well, at least the russians dont hate my country! Why sir, I challenge you to fisticuffs! A new york resident: when having a car stolen: Hey, Im driving at the designated speed limit so the police have no reason to stop me here! Hey, My cars being stolen here! thats okay, I was only going to go and show people my junk on chat roulette anyways! OH NO! NOT GREASE LIGHTNING! NOT GREASE LIGHTNING! being shoved hey what the f*ck do you think your doing you mother f*cking lovlife piece of s*it Oh just you wait till tommy, bobby, lommy, oragami and dave here about this right here! what the hell do you think your doin' man? watching a police chase: f*cking pigs couldnt catch chlymidia at a techno party! f*ck you pigs! f*cking pigs waste f*cking time a computer nerd: having a car stolen: this is a bigger outrage than terminator salvation! this is almost as bad as george lucas' late movies wait! my inhaler is in there! wait! my comic books are in there wait! the corpse of the b*tch who turned me down to prom is in there! being shoved: Dont hurt me! when this goes on my blog im putting an angry face there! Argh i dropped my glasses! I cant see without my glasses! watching a police chase: Oh this is soooo going in my facebook status! f*ck! I forgot my 14 megapixel cameras fish angle lense! wow, this has more action than the first three star wars movies! thats all i got for now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Goose Posted March 21, 2010 Share Posted March 21, 2010 Okay. Too late now, but tomorrow I'll try coming up with some story arcs and characters for you. If you want anything specific done, just ask. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drscot Posted March 21, 2010 Author Share Posted March 21, 2010 A British man: Having a car stolen: Why I say! This young ruffian appears to have jacked my automobile! Well thats okay, the queen was going to pick me up anyway. Oh dear, I knew I would require travel insurance. Spiffing, this means I can que to buy a new automobile, and whilst in that que i shall moan about it! Oh b**locks Watching a police chase: Why I say, good show, good show. I wonder why the yanks call these chaps "pigs". You would never expect thiskind of behaviour in buckingham palace. Why all this american gangstar action is making up for the lack of a chish and fips shop! When being shoved: What a positivly rude ruffian! well, at least the russians dont hate my country! Why sir, I challenge you to fisticuffs! A new york resident: when having a car stolen: Hey, Im driving at the designated speed limit so the police have no reason to stop me here! Hey, My cars being stolen here! thats okay, I was only going to go and show people my junk on chat roulette anyways! OH NO! NOT GREASE LIGHTNING! NOT GREASE LIGHTNING! being shoved hey what the f*ck do you think your doing you mother f*cking lovlife piece of s*it Oh just you wait till tommy, bobby, lommy, oragami and dave here about this right here! what the hell do you think your doin' man? watching a police chase: f*cking pigs couldnt catch chlymidia at a techno party! f*ck you pigs! f*cking pigs waste f*cking time a computer nerd: having a car stolen: this is a bigger outrage than terminator salvation! this is almost as bad as george lucas' late movies wait! my inhaler is in there! wait! my comic books are in there wait! the corpse of the b*tch who turned me down to prom is in there! being shoved: Dont hurt me! when this goes on my blog im putting an angry face there! Argh i dropped my glasses! I cant see without my glasses! watching a police chase: Oh this is soooo going in my facebook status! f*ck! I forgot my 14 megapixel cameras fish angle lense! wow, this has more action than the first three star wars movies! thats all i got for now. brilliant, i will add it. EDIT: Goose, thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Goose Posted March 21, 2010 Share Posted March 21, 2010 Oh, that British man pedestrian is so over the top and unrealistic it's hilarious. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drscot Posted March 21, 2010 Author Share Posted March 21, 2010 man, if you have ever lived in surrey, England, you will know there are people like that lol, my old teacher was Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drscot Posted March 22, 2010 Author Share Posted March 22, 2010 (edited) back from school, and with new ideas. although i would like to keep the realism factor, i want to have myths. i have compiled a list and locations of the myths. here it is: Adams Wanderers Location: Miners hole area, Adams County. Occupation: Murderers, Phycopaths Inbread group of hillbillies living in caves and holes in the ground. The 10 foot man Location: Windsor County, Near Trout Farm Occupation:N/A A misunderstood social outcast. this is probably the time to say that troughout the countryside, their will be rednecks and hillbillies, and the odd 'nam Vet (you dont know man! you wearn't there!) Tunnels Location: all over Capitol State, Especially Franklinton Occupation:N/A used as slave escape routes, the ones still standing can be used to travel quickly from location to location, and loose the police. Mass Graves Location: Countryside Occupation: N/A Nothing but a disturbing easter egg, yet somewhat cool. There will also be: Grey Hell, with interiors, including a warehouse containing the corpses of all the other GTA Characters that are dead. this will not feature in the game, but will there. Skeletons Secret Vehicles murderers immigrants hiding in the woods murderers organ traffikers and backstreet doctors other easter eggs. More to come Modes of transport: By Car By Foot By Bus By Train By Helecopter By Plane By ferry By Boat By Special (skateboard, Rollerblades, ect) Also i have come up with slang names for the State: Independence el estado [the state in spanish] Usted Sadico [an easter egg for those players sad enough to look it up] GANG Apart from a few unnamed gsmall redneck gangs, the main are either racists, corrupt politicians and buissinessmen or violent street gangs Triple K's A parody of the Klu Klux Klan, extremists and nationalistic lunatics that are feared even by members of the white community. American Irish Mob Self Explanitory, really. an American-Irish mob. specialises in kidnappings and drug and gun traffiking. English mob A Mixture of cockneys and posh southsiders. specialises in murders and robberies The Mcreary Mob Although Packie and Gerry are mentioned in the game they are not featured exept in the DLC. this is the only gang that you HAVE to stay friendly with from when you meet them to the end of the game. Specialises in Unorganized crime and Bank robberies The Gravelli Family Pretty much the same as in IV. specialises in smuggling and kidnappings The Gambetti Family Italian Mob Family. Specialises in drug dealing and kidnapping The Spanish Lords Like the Varrios Los Aztecas in Grand Theft Auto: San Andreas. Specialises in Drug Dealing The Lost M.C Biker. Specialises in Unorganized crime and Murders. Angels Of Death M.C. Has chapters all over the U.S. Specialises in Drug Dealing. Albanian Mob basically does what it says on the tin. specialises in people trafficking and pimping New Angland Saints A New England based gang, spreading down south to expand their empire. specialises in prostitution and violent crime Edited August 1, 2010 by drscot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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