[Missions]Kratos2000's Missions

[AznKei 11]

 

Thanks for the comment ^^

what do you mean in cliche story? in a good way or in a bad way?

any other comments?

Well, cliche in a good way...

 

This is a kind of story that I can already predicted who is the main antagonist about 3 missions before (when Majd Addin was about to die...).

 

But it is a good way, since you made some detailed plot twist, adding more originality. Keeping the player more interest for what happens next.

Edited April 4, 2010 by AznKei

[Kratos2000 62]

as soon as i finish this mission pack, i will start to make many missions on GTA:United.

After i finish with GTA:United, this mission pack (Assassin's Brotherhood) will get part 2,

*Main Villain: The President*, yeah, the president would try to destroy the brotherhood once again, will he succeed?

[Platinum Card 166]

I'm loving your mission pack. The last templar was very cinematic and challenging. I can't wait to see what you come up with next-

[Kratos2000 62]

Okay, i'm a bit tired of waiting for Patrick and Dutchyy to fix the routes crashes, i will separate the last mission (Last Wish) to 2 parts.

A Helicopter part is already in there!

[Kratos2000 62]

Last wish, part 1 is uploaded, Last Wish Part 2 is assumed to be the last mission in the missionpack.

[hetment 0]

hiii kratos.. nice missions man! i will also revivie my topic that is make a new topic and start the making of missions again.. Hope u also comment in them someday

[JOJOXX 0]

I played your mission,but for me crash after this title ,,Look for some pickups, health, armor, before the other guards come." and I don't can to complete.

 

[Kratos2000 62]

hiii kratos.. nice missions man! i will also revivie my topic that is make a new topic and start the making of missions again.. Hope u also comment in them someday

have you played it? \= i guess if you did you would atleast give me some feedback.

welcome back.

 

JOJOX: yeah, i know, and i'm soooooooo tired of this sh*tty DYOM which get a new bug every time you play a mission, when i lpayed it for the first 5 times it had no bugs at all, now i had to delete a whole part of the mission, it was fine, but then it gave me a new crashing bug, tired of this sh*t.

[hetment 0]

sure i DID played it... or why would i say ur missions good? .. haha its good.. thouh i mostly sucks in shooting in others missions but rock in mine as i am the creater of those

[Kratos2000 62]

i meant feedback, like what parts did you liked, what should i fix, something like this

Evidence please. xD (joke)

i will try your new mission.

 

PS: i thought of making some parodies of songs like Ke$sha's Tik Tok, Lady Gaga's Bad Romance and such (not that i listen to Lady Gaga, i meant parodies, a funny rip off) on DYOM (not as a mission, as a video) what do you think of this idea?

[hetment 0]

LOL get evidence from a mysterious study ... Anyway i cant say about these songs

[Kratos2000 62]

LOL get evidence from a mysterious study ... Anyway i cant say about these songs

no, i don't like these either but i want to make some parodies about these, look at one:

 

 

something similar XD

[Kratos2000 62]

Okay, i have fixed the last wish, i must say, it was the hardest mission to fix, always another bug had to pop up.

Enjoy, comment please.

Next part is coming very soon.

[JOJOXX 0]

Okay, i have fixed the last wish, i must say, it was the hardest mission to fix, always another bug had to pop up.

Enjoy, comment please.

Next part is coming very soon.

Okay,I'm played but again crash.Crash after when two guy come with UZI.I kill they,and crash .

[Kratos2000 62]

Okay, i have fixed the last wish, i must say, it was the hardest mission to fix, always another bug had to pop up.

Enjoy, comment please.

Next part is coming very soon.

Okay,I'm played but again crash.Crash after when two guy come with UZI.I kill they,and crash .

you have played the older version, before i fixed.

i have fixed the mission, Get to the first page, "Last Wish (Fixed)" and download the link, i didn't crash, i've tried it like 5 times(now. not while making the mission).

 

[JOJOXX 0]

you have played the older version, before i fixed.

i have fixed the mission, Get to the first page, "Last Wish (Fixed)" and download the link, i didn't crash, i've tried it like 5 times(now. not while making the mission).

Ok.I'm gonna play fixed version

[Kratos2000 62]

i meant first page of my topic, not the DYOM site

[AznKei 11]

I tried the mission a week ago (older version), worked well to me though .

 

Anyways, the mission is a little bit short comparing your older missions (5 minutes), but I guess that's understandable because you mentioned that the route points give you a lot of trouble. It's mainly a gunfight mission with a reasonable difficulty. Nice fog effect to give the player an "I want to kill you!" effect .

 

Oh yeah on a side note, the word "SLUT" is a pejorative word designed for women. I found it weird that it's used to an old men, unless he's homosexual. It's just a minor detail though, otherwise your writing is excellent as usual .

 

Good job, can't wait to see how the main bad guy dies !

 

PS: I know it might be off-topic, but did you already tried to do a mission where the action takes place somewhere in LS downtown where it had electronic escalators? I'm working on a new detailed storyline and those places really annoyed me, as it crashed my game constantly even in DYOM editor mode .

[Kratos2000 62]

I tried the mission a week ago (older version), worked well to me though .

 

Anyways, the mission is a little bit short comparing your older missions (5 minutes), but I guess that's understandable because you mentioned that the route points give you a lot of trouble. It's mainly a gunfight mission with a reasonable difficulty. Nice fog effect to give the player an "I want to kill you!" effect .

 

Oh yeah on a side note, the word "SLUT" is a pejorative word designed for women. I found it weird that it's used to an old men, unless he's homosexual. It's just a minor detail though, otherwise your writing is excellent as usual .

 

Good job, can't wait to see how the main bad guy dies !

 

PS: I know it might be off-topic, but did you already tried to do a mission where the action takes place somewhere in LS downtown where it had electronic escalators? I'm working on a new detailed storyline and those places really annoyed me, as it crashed my game constantly even in DYOM editor mode .

I would appriciate it if you would download the second version, since it is more detailed, the dialgoues are better and it's changed a bit.

 

Well about the slut part, well i didn't knew. sorry, English isn't my first language, I'm sorry.

 

So please, you mind downloading the second version? because the dialogue there is very important. (to the next mission and the next missionpack.)

 

 

and i haven't made any mission there yet, so i have no idea about these bugs.

but i think the problem is starting to be on the mod itself, since i'm having a crash every 5 minutes during the last week.

[Kratos2000 62]

Last Mission is Uploaded!

 

Last Wish (Part 2), the last mission, the mission contains:

Boss Fight

Helicopter Boss Fight

Helicopter Chase

Fights

 

 

one of my best missions so far, play it tell me if you liked it.

[JOJOXX 0]

So I played and here is my feedback:

 

The Story

-It was nice.

 

Missions

-I liked so the missions was maked with difficultly ideas

-Very nice ideas,design,tricks was used.

 

 

And at the end [The Last Wish p2]that was awesome.I loved the chopper chase.

 

Oh and I found a bug.When the boss is escaping with his Buffalo,after the cutscene spawn 2 Buffalo.But it's not a big problem.

 

So,last it can I say ,,IT WAS AWESOME MISSIONPACK"!

Good work Kratos2000

[Platinum Card 166]

The last wish missions were great Kratos. I enjoyed the cinematics and the action. Keep up the good work.

 

PS. Do you write all of your stories before making missions?

[Kratos2000 62]

The last wish missions were great Kratos. I enjoyed the cinematics and the action. Keep up the good work.

 

PS. Do you write all of your stories before making missions?

Thanks

 

Yes, I do write them all, I remember you already were posting here when I was uploading the Japanese gang\ stories, am I right? that was one of my most complicated stories, i want to keep everything under control, so many dates, years, ages, couldn't do that without writing this somewhere.

I never start a mission pack\series of missionpacks without knowing how it ends, and without a written storyline.

[Platinum Card 166]

Yeah I was here when you were doing the other JPS missions. I think thats awesome. As a writer myself your stories really make the missions worth playing. I would create more story missions but my game lags alot (disappearing and reappearing objects and etc)

[Kratos2000 62]

Yeah I was here when you were doing the other JPS missions. I think thats awesome. As a writer myself your stories really make the missions worth playing. I would create more story missions but my game lags alot (disappearing and reappearing objects and etc)

Do you remember what P stands for? JPS? I forgot, isn't it JGS?

[Platinum Card 166]

Oh yeah, my bad. Its Japanese Gang Stories lol

[Brian Walker 0]

Right kratos all its fixed , and im trying your missions right NOW!

[Kratos2000 62]

@Brian: I found some minor bugs with the teleport objective in the 3 first missions, the others are fine so if you're already playing don't let this stop you

give me some feedback

[Brian Walker 0]

I g2g cause the dinner, after it i continue, anyway, im not verry good as rewiever, Anyway i joined the gunfights, the story not so much cause my bad eng, and, man why all say italian mafia? We arent all criminals!!!

[Kratos2000 62]

I g2g cause the dinner, after it i continue, anyway, im not verry good as rewiever, Anyway i joined the gunfights, the story not so much cause my bad eng, and, man why all say italian mafia? We arent all criminals!!!

I know Italians aren't criminals, but I said 7 months ago before i quit DYOM to a while I had a topic with plans for next GTAs.

A missionpack was released where CJ had business with the new Japanese gang arrived to LS. (Which is set in 1995)

Second missionpack was released on the same universe just tells about what happened in 1989, about the first time the Japanese gang arrives at LS, a different Protagonist and characters, when the story is told by a man who is the son of a man in the Japanese gang (which was betrayed)

Third missionpack (the one they were talking about, I haven't released it) is about the Japanese Gang's golden age, the "gang" is now a whole empire rulling LS, but then came the Italians, with their Leader Martin, a stronger group, the Italian Mafia, becuase the Japanese gang's Leader was scared of Martin, they lost and combined themselves with the Italian Mafia, the third missionpack tells about a guy who is searching for his asshole father which left him when he was young, this guy later on gets a business with the Japanese "Gang" and the Italian Mafia.

the Teaser trailer is here:

 

 

I changed my mind and I'm working on it now.

these all people who mentioned the Italian Mafia and the Japanese gang are mentioning clues.