toni cinpriani Posted December 23, 2009 Share Posted December 23, 2009 (edited) thanks my dog! maybe i have some more ideas later Also, if I put in the new Patriot, I don't know if I'm going to call it "Extended Patriot". Maybe I'll name it after a gang ("Vitelli Patriot", "Yakuza Patriot", etcetera) or name it "Limo Patriot" or something like that. or maybe stretch(ed) patriot Edited December 23, 2009 by toni cinpriani Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyDog Posted December 25, 2009 Author Share Posted December 25, 2009 New vehicles are out! I've put your in, and I've named it Stretch Patriot, thanks toni! And, you're in the Credits list;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Narcis_speed6 Posted December 25, 2009 Share Posted December 25, 2009 very nice amount of colors you used Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JeNvEy Posted December 26, 2009 Share Posted December 26, 2009 This is really good, tones of detail, must of taken you ages!. One thing you should do is a map, if you dont want to do it you should ask someone. I'm sure someone will be willing, There are a few topics like this now, another good one was the Vice City version. But this is up there Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyDog Posted December 26, 2009 Author Share Posted December 26, 2009 This is really good, tones of detail, must of taken you ages!. One thing you should do is a map, if you dont want to do it you should ask someone. I'm sure someone will be willing, There are a few topics like this now, another good one was the Vice City version. But this is up there I suck at computer drawing and graphics designing and all that stuff...so my map would suck lol, and that's why I'm not going to make it myself... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
toni cinpriani Posted December 26, 2009 Share Posted December 26, 2009 (edited) New vehicles are out! I've put your in, and I've named it Stretch Patriot, thanks toni! And, you're in the Credits list;) happy you like them edit: if you ever need more help i'm going to offer you Edited December 27, 2009 by toni cinpriani Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyDog Posted December 29, 2009 Author Share Posted December 29, 2009 New updates are made! 1. Changed some mission names 2. Added a new gang (and a mission string) 3. The Introduction is changed Enjoy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rigo14 Posted December 29, 2009 Share Posted December 29, 2009 h o l y - s h i t.... you should join rockstar as my cousin did. hes cool but the asshole doesn't lett any info out. f*ckin' A i just want to know...some stuff... like next gta, sh*t i'l just keep dreamin' for now..*sigh*.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyDog Posted December 29, 2009 Author Share Posted December 29, 2009 (edited) h o l y - s h i t.... you should join rockstar as my cousin did. hes cool but the asshole doesn't lett any info out. f*ckin' A i just want to know...some stuff... like next gta, sh*t i'l just keep dreamin' for now..*sigh*.. Ok, ok, now what are you trying to say?? Edited December 29, 2009 by MyDog Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
toni cinpriani Posted December 29, 2009 Share Posted December 29, 2009 i don't know but his cousin seems to have lots of information Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnthMUFC-Champs Posted December 30, 2009 Share Posted December 30, 2009 Very god topic mate i would love this to be a real gta game well done the only thing it really needs is images of the HUD and such. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyDog Posted December 30, 2009 Author Share Posted December 30, 2009 (edited) Very god topic mate i would love this to be a real gta game well done the only thing it really needs is images of the HUD and such. Well, I'm not the one who can make them..... PS. I added some more weapons peeps. Also, I will add a new final mission. After One Last Wish, you're able to choose who will you kill, Jesus Alvarez or Frankie Nissi. Casino pictures added, and some Las Vegas pictures. Edited December 31, 2009 by MyDog Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyDog Posted December 31, 2009 Author Share Posted December 31, 2009 Sorry for the pic stretching the page! sh*t, sorry for double-posting! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
toni cinpriani Posted January 1, 2010 Share Posted January 1, 2010 maybe you should add some more information about the six girlfriends. such as the rewards and what they like Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnthMUFC-Champs Posted January 1, 2010 Share Posted January 1, 2010 Mate this is great i love it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
{[superCJ]} Posted January 1, 2010 Share Posted January 1, 2010 if someone saw the Vice city thing for GTAneXt, they know what i will say: If u got some good modders together u could make this into a GTA IV mod? like a DLC exclusive for PC version just an Idea. I really like the idea Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Narcis_speed6 Posted January 2, 2010 Share Posted January 2, 2010 i would suggest to take out this pic because is causing a masive page stretch and it dosent look good btw i made and artwork http://i49.tinypic.com/x3wso4.png Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cheat Posted January 2, 2010 Share Posted January 2, 2010 It's okay. Pretty basic but okay. No radio channel playlists? I could give a try with the rap channels if ya want (= Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyDog Posted January 2, 2010 Author Share Posted January 2, 2010 i would suggest to take out this pic because is causing a masive page stretch and it dosent look good btw i made and artwork http://i49.tinypic.com/x3wso4.png Thanks, it looks okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leeg1931 Posted January 4, 2010 Share Posted January 4, 2010 (edited) I like this alot, but I think I may have just found a hole in your story: Mike is 28. He did a 10 year bit in prison. He was "made" BEFORE he was incarcerated. He's a hired gun for the mafia this means he regularly commits murder for the family. To be "made" in a family you must commit at least 1 hit, Murder. On top of this you must be a member for a few years, not sure how long exactly, before you can be made (The story of Donnie Brasco proved all of this) but lets say 5 years, that seems long enough, right? Families do not trust "unmade" members to commit murder, usually. 28-10-5=13 Mike would have been 13 when he was brought into the mob! And 16-18 when he was made! That doesn't seem right, does it? You should either make him older or make his prison sentence shorter. Edited January 4, 2010 by leeg1931 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyDog Posted January 4, 2010 Author Share Posted January 4, 2010 I like this alot, but I think I may have just found a hole in your story: Mike is 28. He did a 10 year bit in prison. He was "made" BEFORE he was incarcerated. He's a hired gun for the mafia this means he regularly commits murder for the family. To be "made" in a family you must commit at least 1 hit, Murder. On top of this you must be a member for a few years, not sure how long exactly, before you can be made (The story of Donnie Brasco proved all of this) but lets say 5 years, that seems long enough, right? Families do not trust "unmade" members to commit murder, usually. 28-10-5=13 Mike would have been 13 when he was brought into the mob! And 16-18 when he was made! That doesn't seem right, does it? You should either make him older or make his prison sentence shorter. Dude, you're right. I haven't even noticed. So, is it okay if I change the prison time to four years? That means he joins the mob when he's 19 years old. Also, I'm gonna take out some colors, because the whole page looks to me like a rainbow lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leeg1931 Posted January 5, 2010 Share Posted January 5, 2010 I like this alot, but I think I may have just found a hole in your story: Mike is 28. He did a 10 year bit in prison. He was "made" BEFORE he was incarcerated. He's a hired gun for the mafia this means he regularly commits murder for the family. To be "made" in a family you must commit at least 1 hit, Murder. On top of this you must be a member for a few years, not sure how long exactly, before you can be made (The story of Donnie Brasco proved all of this) but lets say 5 years, that seems long enough, right? Families do not trust "unmade" members to commit murder, usually. 28-10-5=13 Mike would have been 13 when he was brought into the mob! And 16-18 when he was made! That doesn't seem right, does it? You should either make him older or make his prison sentence shorter. Dude, you're right. I haven't even noticed. So, is it okay if I change the prison time to four years? That means he joins the mob when he's 19 years old. Also, I'm gonna take out some colors, because the whole page looks to me like a rainbow lol. You're welcome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cheat Posted January 7, 2010 Share Posted January 7, 2010 Okay bro, here are the playlists: Los Santos FM: • WC and The Madd Circle - West Up (Listen) • N.W.A - 8 Ball (Remix) (Listen) • Cali Life Style - Coastin' (Listen) • Ice Cube - Endangered Species (Listen) • Young Dre The Truth - I Love L.A ( )• Dr. Dre ft. Snoop Dogg, Tha Dogg Pound & Jewell - Bitches Ain't sh*t (Listen) • Westside Connection - Bow Down ( )• Cypress Hill - Hand On The Pump ( )• 2Pac & Dr. Dre - California Love (Remix) (Listen) • 2Pac ft. K-Ci & JoJo - How Do U Want It (Listen) • Xzibit - Ride Or Die (Listen) • Snoop Doggy Dogg ft. Malik - Pump Pump (Listen) Playback FM: • Gang Starr - Work ( )• Jeru The Damaja - Ain't The Devil Happy ( )• Big L - 8 Iz Enuff (Listen) • Kool G Rap - Tekilla Sunrise ( )• The Notorious B.I.G - Hypnotize (Listen) • Gang Starr - Lovesick ( )• Mobb Deep - Smoke It ( )• Nas - Life's A Bitch ( )• Wu-Tang Clan - Wu-Tang Clain Ain't Nuthin' Ta F*ck With ( )• Raekwon - Guillotine (Swordz) (Listen) • Raekwon ft. Nas & Ghostface Killah - Verbal Intercourse (Listen) • Public Enemy - Yo! Bum Rush The Show (Listen) There you go (= Just give me a spot in the credits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyDog Posted January 7, 2010 Author Share Posted January 7, 2010 Playback FM should be white-man rap Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cheat Posted January 7, 2010 Share Posted January 7, 2010 I don't quite see the point, I don't think that I'm too much of help there then.. It would become quite commercial.. Anyways, if you want, I think you should use Asher Roth's "Cannon", Fat Joe's "Music", and the new beast Lil Wayne featuring Eminem "Drop The World" but I'm not too much of help here as said.. But did you like Los Santos FM then? Any improvements needed there? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyDog Posted January 10, 2010 Author Share Posted January 10, 2010 I don't quite see the point, I don't think that I'm too much of help there then.. It would become quite commercial.. Anyways, if you want, I think you should use Asher Roth's "Cannon", Fat Joe's "Music", and the new beast Lil Wayne featuring Eminem "Drop The World" but I'm not too much of help here as said.. But did you like Los Santos FM then? Any improvements needed there? It's ok. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GTA EINSTINE Posted January 11, 2010 Share Posted January 11, 2010 (edited) javascript:emoticon('') smilie THANKS FOR THIS FU**ING STORY!!! NOBODY WILL ACCEPT IT javascript:emoticon('') smilieSO NOW STRETCH YOUR Bu***cks and keep this story in that hole!!! IF YOU WANT A GOOD STORY FOR GTA NEXT CONTACT MEjavascript:emoticon('') smilie Edited January 11, 2010 by GTA EINSTINE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyDog Posted January 11, 2010 Author Share Posted January 11, 2010 javascript:emoticon('')smilie THANKS FOR THIS FU**ING STORY!!![ /SIZE] NOBODY WILL ACCEPT IT javascript:emoticon('') smilieSO NOW STRETCH YOUR Bu***cks and keep this story in that hole!!! IF YOU WANT A GOOD STORY FOR GTA NEXT CONTACT MEjavascript:emoticon('') smilie Please learn to use BB Codes, or don't use them. I hardly even know what you're trying to say. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
toni cinpriani Posted January 15, 2010 Share Posted January 15, 2010 javascript:emoticon('')smilie THANKS FOR THIS FU**ING STORY!!![ /SIZE] NOBODY WILL ACCEPT IT javascript:emoticon('') smilieSO NOW STRETCH YOUR Bu***cks and keep this story in that hole!!! IF YOU WANT A GOOD STORY FOR GTA NEXT CONTACT MEjavascript:emoticon('') smilie wtf this is a strange guy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kamaal Posted January 15, 2010 Share Posted January 15, 2010 javascript:emoticon('')smilie THANKS FOR THIS FU**ING STORY!!![ /SIZE] NOBODY WILL ACCEPT IT javascript:emoticon('') smilieSO NOW STRETCH YOUR Bu***cks and keep this story in that hole!!! IF YOU WANT A GOOD STORY FOR GTA NEXT CONTACT MEjavascript:emoticon('') smilie Man, speak English next time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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