duns23 Posted September 10, 2009 Share Posted September 10, 2009 Your perception of action and its vividness is astounding. I cannot wait for the rest of this! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VCRules86 Posted September 14, 2009 Share Posted September 14, 2009 I don't know why but that last chapter had me rooting for some bullet to blow Jack's f*cking brains out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rhoda Posted September 14, 2009 Share Posted September 14, 2009 Very classy, I like it. It's still early days I'm guessing but already this seems to be a refined effort. It's got a more gritty, realistic edge to things too. I have little to offer in terms of criticism as of yet and I hope I don't ever have to dish it as I'm enjoying this so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chunk Posted October 4, 2009 Share Posted October 4, 2009 Was I the only one who pictured Cristiano Ronaldo's head after reading this line? As it hit’s the ground, the severed head of Ronnie Willis - a famous football player - rolls across the floor. But anyway, are you continuing this Will? Jack's too good a character to waste. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TomVDC Posted October 15, 2009 Share Posted October 15, 2009 But anyway, are you continuing this Will? Jack's too good a character to waste. Well I'm agreeing with Chunk, I can't wait to see more of Jack. It's so detailed it's like I'm actually there. This makes me want to play gta III or LCS again it's insane! Anyway can't wait to see more. grtz Tom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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