R* Grand Theft Auto San Diablo

[Jack O' Brian]

Rockstar Games Presents...

Grand Theft Auto San Diablo

 

 

SETTING

 

R* Games Presents you with Grand Theft Auto San Diablo, A fictionalized version of the City San diego on the West coast of America boardering Mexico.

 

STORY

 

When Swine-flu developed in Mexico City, All Hell rose, people were dying and the city closed down. Luckily Hector Chavez wasn't in the city. Now not being able to enter the city again, He has no choice but to phone up his brother Pablo, and tell him that he is going to live with him in San Diablo America.

 

Pablo was their to pick him up at the airport on a humid day when the palms were waving in the breeze. They drove back to the Crib. The second day their was a house party for Hector and he met all of San Diablos Biggest players, Including your sister Valentina Chavez and Pablo's best friend Juan Hernandez.

 

The Next 21 mission involve helping your Brother with the drug trade, with the Colombians, Cubans, equadorians and more. Terry Perry an english man also gives you a ring wanting his dirty work done (You met him at the Party). He gives you missions that involve stealing and collecting new stock weapons for your trading buissness. You also get ilegal weapons of a corrupt army officer Moris Gonzalez.

 

One day in the hot regions of San Diablo, You get a call from your brother Pablo that their were Cubans outside opening fire at his house with Flame-throwers. You get their right away and kill all of them easilly. You are in Danger in this area, so you take a get-away boat and hide-out in a small apartment when you get to your destination. The Chavez brothers are now poor and desperate for money.

 

Pablo your Brother told you that He owed Cubans money and hadn't paid for a long time. Pablo didn't play the game by the rules and was short of money. This was bad since their was an upcoming deal with The Colombians. You, Hector Hernandez need work to get cash, so you give Juan Hernandez a call, along with Franciszek Szcoda a ilegal Polish Immigrant, and Ali Baba a refugee from Palestine Gaza (you met them at the paty). You do work for both earning you respect and money.

 

One day in the port of San Diablo, You are awaiting The colombians for a deal. You are looking over the deal with a sniper rifle. The Colombians arrive in a chopper. The deal goes well, Then just when the Colombians were about to leave, pablo phoned him up on the roof to Kill all the colombians. Hector questioned this but Pablo argued, so Hector did so, which allowed the Chavez brothers to keep both the money and the drugs. Pablo was short of cash, so he ambushed the deal. Hector knew the colombians would not take kindly to this.

 

The Chavez brothers now that they had ambushed the deal were on their way to being Rich again, and bought themself a mansion. During this time, In an failed robbery, Hector is arrested and is Blackmailed by a corrupt officer of the law called Jeb O' Donagon. Jeb has dirt on you with the colombians and Ali Baba. You do mission for him, earning you money. Unfortunatly for you, Jeb one day askes you to kill Ali Baba, who is on his Assasination list. You now Have the Choice to kill Ali Baba giving you his Crib, Heli-pad and jetty and with Jeb's respect he can get you your weapons back after being Busted, Or you can kill Jeb, and not lose a true friend.

 

One day Terry Perry gives you a call to come to his bar. When you arrived you get knocked out by colombians and you see Terry as he fades away. You then wake up in a warehouse. The Colombian Drug Boss identifies himself as Diego Colones, Pissed off at you he is for ambushing the drug deal he wants his $10,000,000 back. Hector sais he was only folowing orders and sais he will get it back. he is set free and tells Pablo. Pablo Paranoid after taking too much coke and many things on his mind refuses to Pay back the colombians. Later that night you also kill Terry Perry at his bar for setting you up.

 

Juan Hernandez you and Pablo's best friend has been dating your sister Valentina, Juan tells you this and Juan and valentina are going to get married Next week. Hector knows Juan is a good man and is happy for them, But Pablo was Very Safety conciouse for his sister and even worse Crazy and Paranoid. One day when he finds out, when he sees Juan in the mansion with his sister he shoots Juan Hernandez, his own very best friend. The wedding is called off, and Valentina will never forgive her brother pablo for doing this and goes of in tears.

 

The Colombians are becoming Inpatient and are seding waves and waves of goons to kill you. You have to fight them off. One day Diego Colon gives you a call telling you that it's your last chance, If hector is going to pay, they have to meet at Pacific beach. Hector tells Pablo, Pablo still Crazy and Paranoid due to overdozes, still refuses to pay and leaving you in a tough position with only two choices. Deal and No Deal

 

Deal

If you choose this Option, You head down to pacific beach and tell the colombians that you don't have the money. Suprised they are you tell them your plan, That you have no choice that if you were going to pay, you would have to assasinate your own brother.

 

You then head towards the Mansion, blasting your way through those still Loyal to pablo. When you reach him, you spray bullets everywhere but pablo dodges them all and takes cover. After he runs up to the roof and one of the colombians quickly destroyes the helicopter. This means you have a violent deadly gang battle on the roof of the mansion. When pablo is injured and wounded, A cutscene begins. Hector simply cannot shoot his own brother so he asks Diego Colones to do it as he looks away.

 

Diego shoots Pablo through the Head and his body falls of the roof into the swimming pool below. This now means you give the colombians the $10,000,000 that you owe them and you are now in control of all the buisness and assets, and the colombians won't bother you again.

 

 

 

No Deal

If you Choose This option, You stick besides your brother in the Mansion and round up the body-guards. You also give Moris Gonzalez a call, The corrupt Army Officer. You will need his help and his helicopter. When the Colombians arrive, They blast through the mansion, And you are fighting for dear life. You soon run out of space with the colombians surrounding you, so you decide to run up to the roof.

 

When your on the roof, Suddenly their are already Colombians standing by your helicopter. As you fight them off, You tell Gonzalez to get his army helicopter just near by the mansion on the sandy beach. Once youve killed all the remaining colombians, You jump in to Gonzalez's army chopper and you fly away from the colombians. The Colombians don't give up easy and Diego Colones follows you in the Heli the colombians were guarding.

 

In the air a deadly fight begins, and from the enemy's shooting you chopper is on fire, and in a cutscene it plunges towards Imperial beach and crashes. Diego soon followed and a massive fight takes place on the beach. Once you come face to face with Diego you shoot him in the arm, then in the leg and in the face several times. All the colombians are dead. The Colombian drug gang fell apart without the Boss, and they never hasle you again. Pablo learns his lesson after some times, He gets help and his taste for coke decreases and he becomes better. Now you and your Brother Pablo run the Trade Buissness still and are control of all your assets.

 

 

GANGS

 

Cuban Cartel

 

Cuban cartel are a huge Organization, Mostly still refugees and Immigrants, they are part of a massive Drug Trading organization. They can be found in airports sometime and ports shiping in and trading.

 

The Chavez Brothers

 

This is you Hector Chavez and your Brother Pablo Chavez. You run one of the Biggest drug buissnesses and trading. If you choose Deal at the End, Only you will run the Buissness and not Pablo (Read story). You do deals with all the Gangs of San Diablo, Cubans,Colombians and much more. You have many connection with the Colombians and Diego Colones a true enemy.

 

Ahmedjad Gang

 

This is Gang is Run by Ali Baba, This Gang falls apart if you choose to kill him in the story. If you don't it carrys on. This man is a Ilegal Heroin dealer shiping it in from Afghanistan. If you kill him in the story, you carry on his work and own his buissness and his assets.

 

Russian Mafia

 

The same as from GTA IV, Only this time with a slightly different story. They do as they normally do, Selling and making Pornography, other than that they have no mercy, They torture, and they are Brutal.

 

The Colombians

 

They operate a Drug trafficing buissness. Not only that they also transport over weapons, with the help of a man called Terry Perry (Read storyline) and also Moris Gonzalez (read story if you don't know who they are).They become a huge enemy later on in the storyline.

 

Gameplay and Side-Mission coming soon

FeedBack please, Comment on so far, I will proceed in ths tomorow possibly.

[Sanjeem]

This is a very Good peice of work, I look forward to the gameplay. Like many people have said the deal and No deal thing has been overused although i haven't seen it in a good while now, and i find this storyline and the ending very tragic if you choose deal, it's one reason i like it. Good work, make sure you add more gameplay and features

 

 

It's not the best though, I like GTA dudes Vice better

Edited July 6, 2009 by Sanjeem

[sam33]

Im sorry but Ali Baba. That is the single most dull and cliched name for some one middle eastern. Also the Ahmedjad gang, I swear Ahmedjad is the name of the current Iranaian president. Sought out the names and then this might look halfway decent. Also the Russian Mafia, they would have a name they wouldn't just call themselves the Russian Mafia. For instance in GTA IV its the Petrovic Bratva and the Faustin crew who comprise of the Russian "Mafia". Also its pronounced Mafiya if its going on about Russian members in such a business. Mafia is the italian American pronunciation.

[El Zilcho]

What strikes me here is that you've copied my GTA: Fortuna lay out, coloring, design and formatting right down to a T. Please, if you want to copy all the lay out from my own work, at least have the courtesy to ask me first. However, I like your idea and I'll read up on it soon, it looks quite good so far.

[reform]

It's a bit silly to have to ask permission to type in the same colour someone else typed in. I think you're just being petty.

 

As for the idea, I like it. There's other ideas I like more, but I like it.

[El Zilcho]

It's a bit silly to have to ask permission to type in the same colour someone else typed in. I think you're just being petty.

 

As for the idea, I like it. There's other ideas I like more, but I like it.

It was more than just coloring, it was the whole lay out.

[Omnia sunt Communia]

Get over it El Zilcho. You didn't have a copyright on it.

 

The only problem I have with this thread is the gangs (or lack there of). I think that the south-west could be exploited well if used to it's full potential. I'm not too hip on the gangs down that way though I know that Mexican drug cartels are quite big (with San Diego being near the border I think it would be brilliant to have a America/Mexico border map).

 

I read an article in The Guardian (British tabloid) the other day about a teetotal Mexican drug cartel who use religion to ensure loyality:

 

 

Teetotal Mexican drugs cartel claims divine right to push narcotics

 

The rival cartels battling for control of Mexico's multibillion-dollar narcotics trade are as notorious for their consumption of drugs as their use of extreme violence. But the fastest-growing faction in the country's bloody drug wars is a quasi-religious sect that celebrates family values and keeps its members teetotal.

 

According to a steady leak of intelligence documents to the Mexican press, La Familia recruits members from rehab clinics and forbids them from drink and drugs. Advancement within the organisation depends as much on regular attendance at prayer meetings as on target practice.

 

The cartel's leader, known as El Mas Loco, the Maddest One, preaches his organisation's divine right to eliminate enemies and insists the group only traffic drugs outside their home territory. According to local press reports, he carries a "bible" of his own sayings and insists that his army of traffickers and hitmen avoid the narcotics they sell.

 

"La Familia uses religion as a way of forcing cohesion among its members," said Raúl Benítez, an expert on Mexican trafficking organisations. "They are building a new kind of disciplined army that we have never seen here before. It makes them more dangerous."

 

The first hints that something unusual was afoot came in November 2006 with the appearance of a newspaper advert in which La Familia formally announced its existence.

 

"Some of our strategies are sometimes strong but this is the only way to impose order for the good of the people," the advert said. "Maybe some people won't understand at first, but they will."

 

Since then, the group has spread throughout Mexico from its base in Michoacán state, and is believed to have operations in dozens of US cities.

 

From trading in cocaine, marijuana and methamphetamine, La Familia has diversified into kidnapping, armed robbery and counterfeiting. It is also alleged to have financed and supported dozens of local politicians. Once a local partner of the powerful Gulf cartel, La Familia is now considered one of the country's five largest trafficking organisations.

 

Its rapid expansions is deeply embarrassing for the government of President Felipe Calderón who made curbing the activities of the cartels a central aim of his administration when he took office in 2006. Despite the deployment of tens of thousands of troops, beginning in Michaoacán, the violence has got worse.

 

An unofficial count kept by the Milenio newspaper reported this week that 3,492 people were killed in the first six months of the year, up 60% on the first half on 2008 and nearly three times the number from January to June in 2007.

 

Last week 14 charred bodies were found in a mass grave close to where 12 hitmen died in a shootout with soldiers days earlier in the normally tranquil central state of Guanajuato. The execution-style murders continued in the usual hotspots along the northern border. The head of a decapitated local electoral official was found on a road in the southern state of Guerrero.

 

Calderón last week responded to growing questions over his military-focused strategy by saying: "We can either continue the struggle and accept the costs. Or we can go backwards and allow a return to the old practices of tolerance, corruption and impunity."

 

But some analysts see his call for patience as misguided.

 

Edgardo Buscaglia, an organised crime expert, said that without rooting out political corruption and cracking down on money-laundering, Calderon's offensive was doomed. "What we are seeing is an ineffective act of bravery," he said.

 

Source

I think they would make for an interesting gang to include. Maybe they could align with the mysterious Kifflom or Epsilon Programs we've heard so much about in past games? I could imagine Rockstar using this idea it it's fullest potential - especially the irony held within the fact that the gang is teetotal but sells hardcore narcotics, thus fueling other people's addictions.

 

That article alone was enough to make me consider creating my own south-western-based NeXt thread but I decided against it when I realized that I don't know enough about the location, gangs, or whatever else that I would need to know about. Though I'm sure there are some people on here (like you) who would be able to make something of this gang.

 

 

[Sanjeem]

Yeah i'm planning my NeXt GTA topic in San diego aswell. Instead of the Boarder with Mexico and Diego, Since mafioso has already done that, I would just be copying in a way. So instead it's a bout a Puerto Rican Gangster helping his father with the drug trade in SD.

[tricore5]

briliant.

another west coast game would be awesome, juast what rockstar needs to balance it out between sa,lc, and vc

[Sergi]

Terry Perry? Ali Baba? The Ahmedjad Gang? Lol is this a parody of a parody or something? Seeing as their is very little and I mean very little of anything on the actual game the only thing you can go off is the gangs and the storyline and in each case the story is decent yet nothing that hasn't been done on the Next forums 1 million times and the gangs seem as if little to no effort went into them like you just put down what ever came to your head. Overall nothing really original except the setting hasn't been done often and that's about it.

[dude59]

I don't think there are many Cubans all the way on the West Coat. Also, the drug trade isn't controlled by the Colombian's anymore, they basically dies off with the death of Escobar. The major Drug Trade is controlled by the 3 Mexican Cartels. It would also be cool to add Baja California, which is thepart of Mexico where Tijuana and where much the Cartels operate out of.

[XZGamer71]

Chaves? Gonzales? Ali Baba? Bells are Ringing.

 

Xz

[Sergi]

 

I don't think there are many Cubans all the way on the West Coat.  Also, the drug trade isn't controlled by the Colombian's anymore, they  basically dies off with the death of Escobar.  The major Drug Trade is controlled by the 3 Mexican Cartels.  It would also be cool to add Baja California, which is thepart of Mexico where Tijuana and where much the Cartels operate out of.

Ehhh wrong answer. The Colombian Cartels are the biggest operation in the drug trade as they are the biggest harvester and distributor of cocaine. Places like Colombia, Peru and places in that area have a foothold on the cocaine trade. The Mexican Cartels simply get the cocaine from the Colombians and act more as the middlemen of Colombian cocaine with distribution to the U.S. Nothing more and nothing less. Also there are way more then 3 Cartels for your information. Also the Mexican Cartels may control the drug trade in the U.S. but that's simply because of the closeness of the US and Mexico and nothing more and nothing less. The Colombians are a much bigger and more powerful organization as a whole. They have worldwide influence while the Mexican Cartels have influence mainly in just North America. The only thing the death of Escobar ended was the Colombians trying to take the limelight as they had been doing from the 70s.

[Omnia sunt Communia]

You sure like saying "nothing more and nothing less" Sergi, I noticed that in your post. You're right though. The Mexican Cartels are supplied by the Colombians who produce the cocaine back in their home country and ship it to several places across the globe. I'm not sure what kind of presence they'd have in San Diego/San Diablo though, since, like you said, they simply act as suppliers.

[Sergi]

You sure like saying "nothing more and nothing less" Sergi, I noticed that in your post. You're right though. The Mexican Cartels are supplied by the Colombians who produce the cocaine back in their home country and ship it to several places across the globe. I'm not sure what kind of presence they'd have in San Diego/San Diablo though, since, like you said, they simply act as suppliers.

Lol yeah it's a new habit. But I think an interesting way Colombians could fit in the game is that maybe have a Colombian drug lord/businessman as a central character rather he be a contact, an enemy or what ever. By doing that you could have a Colombian presence in the game. By doing that you could also introduce them as 1 of the game's various organizations. I don't know about out in San Diego like you said but in NY there is a nice Colombian presence in the city.

[dude59]

I don't think there are many Cubans all the way on the West Coat.  Also, the drug trade isn't controlled by the Colombian's anymore, they  basically dies off with the death of Escobar.  The major Drug Trade is controlled by the 3 Mexican Cartels.  It would also be cool to add Baja California, which is thepart of Mexico where Tijuana and where much the Cartels operate out of.

Ehhh wrong answer. The Colombian Cartels are the biggest operation in the drug trade as they are the biggest harvester and distributor of cocaine. Places like Colombia, Peru and places in that area have a foothold on the cocaine trade. The Mexican Cartels simply get the cocaine from the Colombians and act more as the middlemen of Colombian cocaine with distribution to the U.S. Nothing more and nothing less. Also there are way more then 3 Cartels for your information. Also the Mexican Cartels may control the drug trade in the U.S. but that's simply because of the closeness of the US and Mexico and nothing more and nothing less. The Colombians are a much bigger and more powerful organization as a whole. They have worldwide influence while the Mexican Cartels have influence mainly in just North America. The only thing the death of Escobar ended was the Colombians trying to take the limelight as they had been doing from the 70s.

I looked into what you said and yes the Columbians are the suppliers, but the Mexican Cartels are the ones causing all the violence right. Also, whoever controls the drug trade in the US is making the most money, the US is bigger than the whole UK I think. There are more than 3, but I think there 3 major ones and the rest are small outlets. I don't think the Columbians are more powerful as a whole though. The most powerful criminal organization in the world is easily the Russian Mafia, but that only if you don't count the CIA as criminal organization. Read this it is pretty interesting read on what going on with the cartel and violence http://mexidata.info/id2224.html

[Sergi]

 

I don't think there are many Cubans all the way on the West Coat.  Also, the drug trade isn't controlled by the Colombian's anymore, they  basically dies off with the death of Escobar.  The major Drug Trade is controlled by the 3 Mexican Cartels.  It would also be cool to add Baja California, which is thepart of Mexico where Tijuana and where much the Cartels operate out of.

Ehhh wrong answer. The Colombian Cartels are the biggest operation in the drug trade as they are the biggest harvester and distributor of cocaine. Places like Colombia, Peru and places in that area have a foothold on the cocaine trade. The Mexican Cartels simply get the cocaine from the Colombians and act more as the middlemen of Colombian cocaine with distribution to the U.S. Nothing more and nothing less. Also there are way more then 3 Cartels for your information. Also the Mexican Cartels may control the drug trade in the U.S. but that's simply because of the closeness of the US and Mexico and nothing more and nothing less. The Colombians are a much bigger and more powerful organization as a whole. They have worldwide influence while the Mexican Cartels have influence mainly in just North America. The only thing the death of Escobar ended was the Colombians trying to take the limelight as they had been doing from the 70s.

I looked into what you said and yes the Columbians are the suppliers, but the Mexican Cartels are the ones causing all the violence right. Also, whoever controls the drug trade in the US is making the most money, the US is bigger than the whole UK I think. There are more than 3, but I think there 3 major ones and the rest are small outlets. I don't think the Columbians are more powerful as a whole though. The most powerful criminal organization in the world is easily the Russian Mafia, but that only if you don't count the CIA as criminal organization. Read this it is pretty interesting read on what going on with the cartel and violence http://mexidata.info/id2224.html

What does the Mexicans causing all the violence have to do with anything? Look at places in Colombia like Bogata who easily had the current Mexican drug war numbers in murders even when they're was no real drug war going on. The US is the biggest drug market in the world yes but it's far from the only.Mexico is in a war with the government so the violence is a given. The Mexicans only have a foothold in America and that's it. Yes the Mexican Cartels have a large percentage of American drug distribution but its far from a complete monopoly when it comes to America in terms of drugs. The Colombians are far more powerful then the Mexican Cartels especially in a world wide basis. Also Russian OC is very large but the Russian Mafia doesn't exist. It's just a name the media gave it. Russian OC in Russia is levels above what it is in America. Yes Russian OC that does exist in America is quite large but they aren't at the top of the table in America. When it comes to world wide dominance it's a toss up because every country has numerous OC outfits and each is usually very powerful so saying Russian OC is the biggest worldwide would just be speculation.

 

But back on Mexicans. The Mexican Cartels have been opperating for decades and the only reason they've gotten news in the last 3 years was because of the drug war. Mexico is a extremely corrupt government like alot of governments and it's a known drug trafficking location. It's a given that if any place tries reform and it's a known drug trafficking spot that alot of violence will occur. However due to the closeness of proximity to America and Mexico that's the only real reason it's getting that much news attention. Then people hype the Cartels up saying they go against the Mexican Army. Are you serious? The Mexican Army is akin to a US city SWAT Team if even that. They've never been in any real conflict in modern times and them needing assistance by the US shows their sh*ttiness.