SaintJimmy Posted July 6, 2009 Share Posted July 6, 2009 (edited) <post edited, video deleted> Basically this is the first of many to come, and yeah. We filmed it within the space of an hour. Hope you guys like it Edited December 27, 2009 by SaintJimmy Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/417210-first-proper-sketch/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Edmachine Posted July 6, 2009 Share Posted July 6, 2009 That is really funny. Great filming, too. It felt a bit obvious of what is going to be in the end judging from the beginning, but funny nonetheless. I like the accent too . Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/417210-first-proper-sketch/#findComment-1059339901 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted July 6, 2009 Share Posted July 6, 2009 Heh, nice job. The camera work was very nice and clean, so pat yourself on the back there for that. Just a couple of things though, in show shots the sink just appeared as a bright white blur, and I had a bit of trouble understanding the last line (I had to ask you on MSN what he said. ) But yeah, apart from those minor details, good job. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/417210-first-proper-sketch/#findComment-1059339931 Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintJimmy Posted July 6, 2009 Author Share Posted July 6, 2009 Heh, nice job. The camera work was very nice and clean, so pat yourself on the back there for that. Just a couple of things though, in show shots the sink just appeared as a bright white blur, and I had a bit of trouble understanding the last line (I had to ask you on MSN what he said. ) But yeah, apart from those minor details, good job. Why thankyou good sir We realized the exposure was up too much for the sink. Problem was, it was at the lowest it could be, and because of the natural lighting in the room (and being a bathroom, there was only frosted glass, no curtains or anything) it sucked even more. And yeah, shame about the last line. At least the majority of people understand it off the first go, but if they don't they can skip back Thanks for the CC Aaron Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/417210-first-proper-sketch/#findComment-1059339938 Share on other sites More sharing options...
GentlemanSquid Posted July 6, 2009 Share Posted July 6, 2009 Nice. I love the lighting makes it look professional. The camera angles are simple but effective and that's what I like about them. Can't wait to see more. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/417210-first-proper-sketch/#findComment-1059340813 Share on other sites More sharing options...
DemonKing Posted July 6, 2009 Share Posted July 6, 2009 Nice one Jimmy, good lighting, and pretty funny overall. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/417210-first-proper-sketch/#findComment-1059341510 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Omnia sunt Communia Posted July 6, 2009 Share Posted July 6, 2009 I had to go back several times before I finally got the joke, because I kept thinking that he said "Sharon Shell used it" or something. Needless to say by the time I actually heard what he said, the joke wasn't that funny anymore. Other than that the only real problem is the fact that it's quite obvious what's going on from the very beginning. The camerawork was good though, and I too loved the accents. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/417210-first-proper-sketch/#findComment-1059341616 Share on other sites More sharing options...
chris Posted July 6, 2009 Share Posted July 6, 2009 Ahaha i knew what was going to happen from the beggining but it made me laugh the way he popped his head round the door and said he shaved his pubes with it. Nice job, hopefully there will be more to come. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/417210-first-proper-sketch/#findComment-1059341649 Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintJimmy Posted July 7, 2009 Author Share Posted July 7, 2009 (edited) Just a side note, yeah, I'm the guy who shaved his pubes EDIT: yeah, I could tell that everyone would see what's coming, but it was more about the delivery/cutting of the end line. Edited July 7, 2009 by SaintJimmy Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/417210-first-proper-sketch/#findComment-1059342131 Share on other sites More sharing options...
chris Posted July 7, 2009 Share Posted July 7, 2009 but it was more about the delivery/cutting of the end line. Yeah thats what made me laugh. BTW your friend is hotter then you, sorry. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/417210-first-proper-sketch/#findComment-1059343339 Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintJimmy Posted July 8, 2009 Author Share Posted July 8, 2009 BTW your friend is hotter then you, sorry. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/417210-first-proper-sketch/#findComment-1059344391 Share on other sites More sharing options...
chris Posted July 8, 2009 Share Posted July 8, 2009 When do you plan to make your next sketch, im sure you could come up with some original ideas if you put your mind to it. Make a topic at the Enclave forums or something, im sure some of the guys could give you some ideas. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/417210-first-proper-sketch/#findComment-1059346724 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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