Face McDougal Posted July 6, 2009 Share Posted July 6, 2009 (edited) you are a rhinestone Edited July 16, 2009 by Face McDougal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted July 6, 2009 Share Posted July 6, 2009 Very nice, and not just the raw description that verged on being racist. I can't tell whether Casey is the product of Mommy and Kenya, or if he was the woman's kid from before. Or even if Mommy was the woman with Kenya in the first scene! But I like it; I like the ambiguity and the way it feels really random. It's an odd little piece but somehow it works and does... whatever it is it does. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eminence Posted July 6, 2009 Share Posted July 6, 2009 I sit here trying to figure the connection between the two fragments, and it's just not clicked yet. Maybe it will, maybe it won't... I have a few connections and ideas, but nothing that really strikes me as being 'the one'. Hmm. As always, the least your pieces do is to make me think, long and hard, about the true values being conveyed; and above all else, I absolutely love that. What's more, the description in the first fragment was superb. Just the flow of everything, the way it was so - just so natural. As Andy described it, it was 'raw', yet poignant at the same time. Every word just seemed to fit rightfully. Very nice work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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