HuangLikeALee Posted June 30, 2009 Share Posted June 30, 2009 His palms are making it difficult to hold the assault rifle. Dodging shots he ran from pillar to pillar inside the burning warehouse. Quickly glancing from outside of cover he spots two, no, three gunmen exchanging gunfire from about 35 yards away using some metal crates as cover. One final grenade lay inside the wide pocketed jacket, with high end bullet proof vesting under. Holding his breath, he pulls the pin, waits two and a half seconds, and reveals himself as he tosses the pineapple. They tried to run, but he gunned two down, and the bouncer finished the job. Uncovering himself sprinting for the stairway, his breaths heavy and head down. There was no escaping now. Dropping the now empty automatic rifle, sweat falling like rain from his forehead, he pulled a 9mm off of a body and kicked down the door of the only office in the deserted storage facility. "Will this be worth it? Killing hundreds of men for your own selfish crave for my slaughter? You will rot in hell!" "I will meet you there Bulgarin!" "Will this make you feel any better? Will any demons be erased?" "You are a demon, and I am erasing you" "Know this, Niko Belic, your beloved Kate is dead, and your fat f*cking cousin is next!" A bullet rang out and echoed throughout the warehouse. Then there was silence. The Price of Liberty. Coming soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HuangLikeALee Posted June 30, 2009 Author Share Posted June 30, 2009 Niko Belic arrived in Liberty City in rags, and as an illegal immigrant, who killed and smuggled people to survive. He came to American to live the American Dream, but the dream was a lie. On his rise to the top of Liberty City, he killed many people who had all fallen victim to the trap that was the American Dream. Will he suffer the same fate? The Triads have risen back up the ladder and control large parts of the city now, slanging drugs on street corners to 15 year olds and gunning down each other in an epic internal war for leadership of the sacred group. In Algonquin, Huang Lee and the Scorpion Triads have the police in their hands, Police Commissioner Wade Heston is thought to be associated with the Scorpions. In Broker, however, the Red Dragon Triads led by Ling who faked her death and started her own gang, ordering hits on various well known Scorpion Captains. The Five Families however are at peace, waiting for the perfect time to move in on Huang Lee and take back Liberty City with the Burroughs to be split evenly between the Ancelottis, the Gambetti's, the Pavano's, Bell's Crew, and the Valentinos. Roman Belic sold his cab business to a South Korean real estate developer and it is now called We Pick You Up. Him and Niko Belic have created a classy successful restaurant called Lahodný potravín. Kate is doing well and Roman has been an excellent father, and the Belic Cousins have both cleaned up their acts. Gerald McReary was busted out of prison and his current whereabouts are unknown. Derrick McReary was found dead in an alleyway in Dukes with a needle in his arm. Packie is currently in rehab for drug and alcohol dependency. Ma McReary passed months ago and was buried next to Kate McReary. Little Jacob now owns a gentleman's club, One Love, in South Algonquin. Brucie had an incident of roid rage and attacked and beat 43 people in a mall and is being released from prison is a few weeks. Liberty City is not the same place it was at all Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rhoda Posted June 30, 2009 Share Posted June 30, 2009 Just as a side note in future, please refrain from double posting with a seperate chapter so soon after your opening post. There's barely half an hour between the two. Cheers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HuangLikeALee Posted June 30, 2009 Author Share Posted June 30, 2009 (edited) Just as a side note in future, please refrain from double posting with a seperate chapter so soon after your opening post. There's barely half an hour between the two. Cheers. Yeah, but this was pre-written. A little taste of the main storyline, an introduction to the main characters Police File for Keane, Michael (CONFIDENTIAL) Name: Michael Keane Age: 28 State: Alive and healthy Locale: Northern Alderney. Height: Est. 5'8 Weight: Est. 169Lbs Last known criminal activity: Armed Roberry, S. Algonquin, was wounded in the incident but escaped when police were busy with other armed perps. Only the LCPD can't pin him because of lack of evidence. Nicknames: Saint Michael Common misbelief that parents were brother and sister, but records indicate his real parents put him up for adoption to some inbred morons. Known to be eager to please the men he is working for, in other words he is a suck up. Served in the Middle Eastern Conflict for four years, knows how to use a gun. Used to associate with Packie McReary but has been laying low for a year to avoid police troubles. Now believed he is working for Bell's Crew in Alderney. In his high school intelligence test he scored a 130IQ. Known Scars: Scar on the right side of his chest after taking a 9mm bullet, missing his heart by an 1". Has a tatoo of an eagle on his right upper bicep. Currently Housed: Phil Bell Hotel in Northern Alderney, a known hot spot for criminals. Edited July 1, 2009 by HuangLikeALee Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chunk Posted June 30, 2009 Share Posted June 30, 2009 Just as a side note in future, please refrain from double posting with a seperate chapter so soon after your opening post. There's barely half an hour between the two. Cheers. Yeah, but this was pre-written. What does that have to do with it? If you have 2 chapters written, you post one and then wait. If no one posts, edit your original post with the next chapter. That's how it works around here, mate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VCRules86 Posted June 30, 2009 Share Posted June 30, 2009 To be honest man, this is ok but I think you should go back and try to continue some of your older pieces rather than starting a new one. It seems that every week you have something new and the next week you stop working on it and it drifts 5 pages back into the WD. I actually would prefer it if you revisited your Max Payne story, it was very well written and its a shame you have stopped working on it. Not telling you what to do, just offering my 2 cents. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HuangLikeALee Posted July 1, 2009 Author Share Posted July 1, 2009 Just an update guys, this is only an introduction. I have decided to post the actual scripts in GTA NeXt to get more feedback and response. It indeed will be script/walkthrough and if this was real, it would be a PlayStation exclusive DLC. I have set a mark for about 40 missions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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