Eminence Posted May 23, 2009 Share Posted May 23, 2009 (edited) ~! Edited July 14, 2009 by Eminence Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted May 23, 2009 Share Posted May 23, 2009 The opening paragraph has got some of the most breathtaking imagery I've seen from you in recent times; your descriptive skills are flawless here. I also, more importantly, think you've crafted a unique and well-told glimpse into a person's impulse control. I've got nothing negative to say about this one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Face McDougal Posted May 23, 2009 Share Posted May 23, 2009 Well done, Em. The first paragraph had me wondering, the detail was there but it didn't hit me and did seem clunky in some ways, but by the third I was there. Short, perhaps not quite as full as it could have been, but good nonetheless for what it is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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