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Deal to End all Deals


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fearedofear

ok here is my opion you need a little more detail except that you story get a cookie.gif and a icon14.gif

good job

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Please don't bump your stories, especially twice. That bump you hit just added a chip in your windscreen.

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CharmingCharlie

I will give you my opinion, bump this again and I will close it. If there is no interest in your story then there is no interest, stop bumping this to the top of the page. Oh and don't double/triple post.

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Face McDougal

Welcome to the WD board, man! Not satisfied with the level of feedback? Deal with it, you'll have to around here. Most of the time unless something is really short or just has something to it that people latch on to there wont be much feedback. Believe me, I've spent much time working on things that I personally thought was some of my better stuff that got zero response... it doesn't matter?

 

This forum serves one main purpose, to let people air out their sh*t. You have something inside you so you write it down... just to let it sit there? No... you post it somewhere to let it breathe. I personally enjoy feedback (and would REALLY love more critical feedback but I never get that--I think people think I'd bite their head off for it, but actually I'd love it) but that's not why I post here... if it was I'd have stopped long ago.

 

Just work on it for yourself, it's a selfish game my friend--a selfish game. I'm not going to read your story because I'm not in the mood and more often than not I'm not in the mood... but sometimes, just sometimes, I am in the mood and try to offer the best criticism that I can. Certain stories on here are badass but just never caught on... and I really do try and scope out the pieces that have no replies... it makes me feel bad for the OP.

 

Have FUN! The best part of writing anyway is writing in itself and then editing the finished product a couple times and enjoying your own creation. Just do it for you and be your own judge. I know where my strengths and weaknesses lie, you can offer more criticism than most outsiders a lot of the time.

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