GTA_SA_FREE's missions

[GTA_SA_FREE]

My missions:

 

Where is Sweet?

 

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=517

 

 

That is your job

 

 

http://patrickw.gtagames.nl/DYOM/?act=show&id=558

 

 

Life as swat

 

 

 

http://patrickw.gtagames.nl/DYOM/?act=show&id=567

 

Edited March 27, 2009 by GTA_SA_FREE

[Sniputer]

Jeez. I don't like the style, when everybody make 1 mission and 1 topic for every f*cking each mission... > Well, you haven't made many topics, but, ah damnit forgot what I was writing.

[GTA_SA_FREE]

i bet my missions suck (

[123robot]

I've played the first one. It crashed after CJ and the other guy finished talking.

 

Here are a few suggestions to help with future missions:

 

Before you make a cutscene objective, teleport the player somewhere you can't see him, but also somewhere close. I drove my car into the Checkpoint and ended up with another CJ standing on top of my car talking to this guy standing infront of him and everyone thinks it's normal.

 

At the part where you go up to the door to visit Sweet, you could of atleast had a cutscene in Sweet's house where CJ looks for him or maybe even teleport the player there and get him to go into a checkpoint.

 

Just incase you didn't hide CJ and the other guy after the cutscene, (don't know if you did or not cause it crashed after that,) hide any actors used in a cutscene after it. Select the cutscene, then stand near CJ and go on Actors and Hide Actor. Then stand near the other guy and do the same.

 

Well, those are the only suggestions I have for now. Let me know what happens after CJ and the other guy talks please and note of any noticeable mistakes.

 

btw you can edit your mission and fix these mistakes. Simply, download your mission, (if you don't already have it,) and fix these mistakes, then go onto the DYOM site and find your mission. Click on it. Then, change the show in the URL to edit. Find your DYOM mission and click on it and Open. Now upload the new and improved mission.

Also, please let me know everything that happens after the cutscene where they talk. All the actors, all the objects, all the cars, etc.

 

If you use my suggestions, maybe your missions won't suck.

[GTA_SA_FREE]

I've played the first one. It crashed after CJ and the other guy finished talking.

 

Here are a few suggestions to help with future missions:

 

Before you make a cutscene objective, teleport the player somewhere you can't see him, but also somewhere close. I drove my car into the Checkpoint and ended up with another CJ standing on top of my car talking to this guy standing infront of him and everyone thinks it's normal.

 

At the part where you go up to the door to visit Sweet, you could of atleast had a cutscene in Sweet's house where CJ looks for him or maybe even teleport the player there and get him to go into a checkpoint.

 

Just incase you didn't hide CJ and the other guy after the cutscene, (don't know if you did or not cause it crashed after that,) hide any actors used in a cutscene after it. Select the cutscene, then stand near CJ and go on Actors and Hide Actor. Then stand near the other guy and do the same.

 

Well, those are the only suggestions I have for now. Let me know what happens after CJ and the other guy talks please and note of any noticeable mistakes.

 

btw you can edit your mission and fix these mistakes. Simply, download your mission, (if you don't already have it,) and fix these mistakes, then go onto the DYOM site and find your mission. Click on it. Then, change the show in the URL to edit. Find your DYOM mission and click on it and Open. Now upload the new and improved mission.

Also, please let me know everything that happens after the cutscene where they talk. All the actors, all the objects, all the cars, etc.

 

If you use my suggestions, maybe your missions won't suck.

ok thx