Eminence Posted March 21, 2009 Author Share Posted March 21, 2009 Glad you enjoyed it Andy, very glad! I'm not sure how much this has actually been read aside from by you, haha. Oh well. In any case, it'll probably follow the same route as Falcon very soon, so... you know the drill. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted March 21, 2009 Share Posted March 21, 2009 Gotcha, fella. Be a shame to see it taken down from the public domain, but needs must and all that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rhoda Posted March 21, 2009 Share Posted March 21, 2009 Shame indeed, I'm going to have to start saving your work in a Word document. I'm resuming my "lurker" role to read tales under cover of darkness. It's a defense mechanism. I'm enjoying this a damn lot, and I'm enjoying how 10 and 11 are together, suggests a parallel theme I'm not quite grasping yet. I'm also rooting for more connections, so much so I'm actually omitting the need to criticize... because I fail to find anything worth pointing out; your spelling is stellar and your grammar allows your piece to flow. The only thing I have to point out is the layout of 11. I'm not a fan of those single sentence "paragraphs", if you can even single them out like that. I understand the effect you wanted to achieve, and it feels good to read, but it's just not my cup of tea I don't think. It's great regardless though, Phil. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eminence Posted March 21, 2009 Author Share Posted March 21, 2009 Noted, although personally I wouldn't like it as a single paragraph, so I guess we'll just have to be split on that one! This is finished for now, as the arc is complete, but I wouldn't count fully against another one popping up within the city. In fact, I'd bet on it! But not for now; it'll be dormant for a little while. I'm glad you enjoyed it, though. Oh, and you really don't need to save anything. I'd PM you stuff if you were interested. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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