radicell Posted February 8, 2009 Share Posted February 8, 2009 Looking good, that last mission was a nice setting up of the storyline. However, you've still got some mistakes here and there (including one in your latest chapter: 'I own a friend' should be 'I owe a friend'). I also don't understand why you've chosen BRN and BDUP as icons instead of for example, B and BD. Aside from that, I'd say to keep updating and developing this, the storyline is shaping up pretty well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lethal Nizzle Posted February 8, 2009 Share Posted February 8, 2009 Very nice last mission. I'll be sure to track this as it progresses. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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