Jules Verne Posted January 22, 2009 Share Posted January 22, 2009 Well, i was bored and decided to design a news paper about tommy's death, and yes i know there are spelling mess up's in places but as i said i was bored and did not re'do it because i would have to completely rewrite it, but i guess it's alright, but i hope you injoy my report Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/393612-tommy-vs-death/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shof Posted January 22, 2009 Share Posted January 22, 2009 text is very hard to read, atleast for me Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/393612-tommy-vs-death/#findComment-1058899625 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mainland Marauder Posted January 22, 2009 Share Posted January 22, 2009 Sorry, as somebody who's worked on a newspaper copydesk, I'm not feeling this as it is. Make it look like somebody who finished high school wrote it. Failing that, it's probably better as it is with the blurry, hard-to-read text. I like the concept though, all in all. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/393612-tommy-vs-death/#findComment-1058899702 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Omnia sunt Communia Posted January 22, 2009 Share Posted January 22, 2009 Aren't newspapers usually organized into columns as well? The way it's formatted makes it look more like an essay. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/393612-tommy-vs-death/#findComment-1058899714 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mainland Marauder Posted January 22, 2009 Share Posted January 22, 2009 Aren't newspapers usually organized into columns as well? The way it's formatted makes it look more like an essay. They are, at least on paper. Without the columns it looks like some third-rate paper's Web edition. In fact, the whole layout looks like a webpage rather than an actual newspaper. But then again a lot of print edition layouts are starting to reshape themselves to look more like Web pages. Go figure. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/393612-tommy-vs-death/#findComment-1058899757 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jules Verne Posted January 22, 2009 Author Share Posted January 22, 2009 Thanks for the comments guys, it looks like it does because it was supposed to be on gta iv's little newspaper website, i might improve the concept a little later and make it better Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/393612-tommy-vs-death/#findComment-1058901504 Share on other sites More sharing options...
eDad. Posted January 23, 2009 Share Posted January 23, 2009 Try using enters. Right now it's just a slab of text, that makes it daunting to even begin to read. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/393612-tommy-vs-death/#findComment-1058902682 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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