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2 poems about love


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1.

 

I grab you, lion, by joint

And by limb

I drag you across the

Open savannah

Against your pride.

 

I frighten you, baby, by mind

And sight

I lift you high and draw

For you a sunny death

And screw you in

By joint and limb.

 

Blood, cold, settled still for your face has gone unstretched in your solitude. I fix your hand it breaks off I don’t know what to do. I set you back on your hanger I steal your shoes. You saw me, I swallowed you.

 

 

2.

 

Diana, Nana,

As sweet as sweet bananas.

Wifey, my wifey,

As lovely as lovely loveys.

I love you to hold,

Diana, and hold

And hold and hold.

But most of all

I want us to get old

Together.

Diana, Nana,

As sweet as sweet bananas.

I love you.

 

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The Unvirginiser

Again, Frank, it's nice to see your style consistenetly maintained throughout your pieces. I kind of got the metaphors you were trying to communicate across in the first one; can't say the same for the second. Nice work anyway, intresting to say the least. icon14.gif

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