Canofceleri Posted January 12, 2009 Share Posted January 12, 2009 1. I grab you, lion, by joint And by limb I drag you across the Open savannah Against your pride. I frighten you, baby, by mind And sight I lift you high and draw For you a sunny death And screw you in By joint and limb. Blood, cold, settled still for your face has gone unstretched in your solitude. I fix your hand it breaks off I don’t know what to do. I set you back on your hanger I steal your shoes. You saw me, I swallowed you. 2. Diana, Nana, As sweet as sweet bananas. Wifey, my wifey, As lovely as lovely loveys. I love you to hold, Diana, and hold And hold and hold. But most of all I want us to get old Together. Diana, Nana, As sweet as sweet bananas. I love you. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/391824-2-poems-about-love/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Unvirginiser Posted January 13, 2009 Share Posted January 13, 2009 Again, Frank, it's nice to see your style consistenetly maintained throughout your pieces. I kind of got the metaphors you were trying to communicate across in the first one; can't say the same for the second. Nice work anyway, intresting to say the least. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/391824-2-poems-about-love/#findComment-1058876305 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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