"That Man Named Francis"

[Canofceleri]

Retracted for privacy issues.

Edited January 31, 2009 by Candarelli

[Lochie_old]

Cand, you are a enigma.

 

Never stop writing.

[Wanted Assailant]

Or else we'd have to kill you.

 

Really touching, man. All summed up.

 

 

 

 

 

 

He kept the bullsh*t up until he died, trying not only to find loopholes in his settlement and suck more money out of the deal, oh no. He, no sh*t, acted as if he were retarded going into various doctor’s offices and got them to write letters on his behalf.

 

 

 

 

[Rhoda]

Cand, you are a enigma.

 

Never stop writing.

This.

 

Something about your work almost dares or goads me to read on, and I'm glad I do everytime. Writing about the loss of a parent, metaphorical or literal, is always tough, I've been there myself in a matter of speaking. Fantastic piece of writing Frank.

[Struff Bunstridge]

Wonderful. This is pretty much spotless. The Wal-Mart lawsuits were genius. I've got old relatives sort of like that, the ones who write twenty complaint letters a week and never get bored of trying to make life as awkward as possible for the pen-pushers. Nice work mate.

[Vercetti21]

Awesome. Very personal and deep, I can see you're passionate about this piece. And that's why it's one of my favorites from you.

[Eminence]

Absolutely fantastic; genuine. I never have been able to find flaws in the writing technique, but we both know I've sometimes questioned the content... with this, though, you've found a real voice and something that rings so true. When you've got something to say, you certainly possess the skills to say it, and it makes for an amazingly engaging read. Bravo, man, truly.

[Canofceleri]

Thanks to everyone for the generous feedback. It really is appreciated.

[Struff Bunstridge]

Congratulations mate, thoroughly deserved.