Playstation_Loyalist Posted December 5, 2008 Share Posted December 5, 2008 (edited) SETTING December 2009 Liberty City PROTAGONISTS Jeremy Vermon- main character. Son of the late Liberty City mayor John Vermon. Leader of the Vermon Family Mafia and a member of the Zero Cheetos gang. Alejandro Castro- Cuban leader of the Los Cabrones in Liberty City. Best friends of Los Cabrones Vice City leader Umberto Robina, Castro met Fontaine through Umberto. Greco Vermon- Brother of Jeremy. Leader of the Zero Cheetos Gang. Also a member of Jeremy's gang. John Vermon- Late father of Jeremy, a former leader of the Vermon Family Mafia. Assassinated on a restaurant parking lot. Rivals with Vice Mayor Niccolo Montevista. Donald Love- close friend of Jeremy. He returned from Vice City to meet Toni Cipriani and Jeremy. Toni Cipriani- Leader of the Cipriani Family, after the assassination of Salvatore Leone he took over the Leone Family leadership. Miles O'Donovan- former mayor of Liberty City, now governor of the Liberty State. Thunderball- leader of Thunderz gang, assisted Jeremy on exploring Liberty City. Umberto Robina- leader of Vice City section of Castro's gang. Recommended Jeremy to Alejandro. Shawn Goofballs- leader of the Goofs, bestfriend of Jeremy. Jane Salivan- love interest of Jeremy. Phil Cassidy- the one-armed bandit who owns the Phil's Depot at Rockford, assisted Jeremy on killing Demetrio by using a boomshine. ANTAGONISTS Demetrio Von Hindenburg- leader of the Swastika gang, arch-enemy of Greco and the Zero Cheetos Gang. Zem Electrazoom- leader of the Electric Bombers, he owns the Electron Building. Allies with Demetrio. Melchor Andrade- Mexican leader of the Cholos. Mastermind on the failed ambush on Toni Cipriani. Private Stephen Arizona- undercover FBI agent who disguised as a Vice City business tycoon. Vice Mayor Niccolo Montevista- arch-enemy of Vermon Fontaine, ordered the assassination of Fontaine. Mayor Anthony Miyawaki- Mayor of Liberty City under the Swastika gang. GANGS Vermon Family Mafia Leader: Jeremy Vermon Turf: Hepburn Heights, Harwood, Red Light District Gang Car: Vermon Argento Clothes: White suits and black shades Weapons: Pistol, Brass knuckles Mission they start attacking you: n/a (even when provoked) Zero Cheetos Gang Leader: Greco Fontaine Turf: Chinatown, Red Light District (Portland), Pike Creek (Shoreside Vale) Gang Car: Zero Cheetah Clothes: Black bonnets and black jackets with white slacks and t-shirts Weapons: Pistol, Baseball Bats Mission they start attacking you: n/a (even when provoked) Los Cabrones Leader: Alejandro Castro (Liberty), Umberto Robina (Vice) Turf: Portland View, Callahan Point (Portland), Little Havana (Vice City) Gang Car: Cuban Hermes Clothes: Polo barongs and pants Weapons: Pistol Mission They Start attacking you: n/a (unless provoked) Cipriani Family Leader: Toni Cipriani Turf: Saint Mark's (Portland), Torrington, Aspatria (Staunton) Gang Car: Cipriani Sentinel Clothes: Black suits Weapons: Pistol (Portland), AK-47, SMG (Staunton) Mission They Start Attacking You: n/a (unless provoked) Thunderz Leader: Thunderball Turf: Liberty Campus Gang Car: Thunderz Stinger Clothes: White jackets and pants with a thunderbolt symbol at the back Weapons: Micro SMG, AK-47 Mission They Start Attacking You: n/a (unless provoked) Goofs Leader: Shawn Goofballs Turf: Francis International (Shoreside Vale) Gang Car: V8 Goof (modified V8 Ghost) Clothes: Red Trousers, green jackets with black helmets Weapons: AK-47, Micro SMG Mission They Start Attacking You: n/a (unless provoked) Swastikas Leader: Demetrio Von Hinderburg Turf: Cedar Grove (Shoreside Vale), Red Light District (Portland) Gang Car: Swastika Patriot Clothes: Detective's clothes w/ a Swastika sign on their shoulder Weapons: Pistol, SMG Mission They Start Attacking You: Hero Cheetos Electrons (a.k.a. Electric Bombers) Leader: Zem Electrazoom Turf: Cedar Grove Gang Car: Electron LandStalker Clothes: Executive suits Weapons: M4, AK-47 Mission They Start Attacking You: Staten City Takedown Haitians Leader: Melchor Andrade Turf: Harwood (Liberty City), Little Haiti (Vice City) Gang Car: Cholo Sabre Clothes: white sandos and blue pants Weapons: Pistol, Micro SMG Mission They Start Attacking You: Melchor's rampage (and when you drive a Cuban Hermes) Edited December 5, 2008 by Playstation_Loyalist Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Playstation_Loyalist Posted December 5, 2008 Author Share Posted December 5, 2008 MISSION 1: THE RETURN (cutscene) A Plummet Airlines plane is shown landing on the runway in Francis International Airport. (cutscene) Then, Jeremy Vermon is shown going down the staircase. Greco: Brother! Jeremy: Greco! Greco: Oh brother!(hugs) What took you so long?! Jeremy: Well, I have been on Vice City, some 562 miles south of Liberty. That's the reason. Greco: Well, I know. Let's just go. (gameplay) The player enters Greco's Cheetah. He then passes over the Shoreside Vale Lift Bridge. (cutscene) Greco (inside the car): Oh sh*t. We've been followed by boobs! Press the gas Jeremy. I ain't want myself to be sh*tted. (gameplay) The player needs to ram Greco's car to a pair of Swastika Patriots. Then he needs to escape ambush attacks by Swastikas. You must make a quick route to Portland because the Swastikas are armed with grenades. Then, you must reach Toni Cipriani's resthouse in Portland. A yellow marker marks the location. (cutscene) Greco: sh*t! My car is f*cked. f*ck those assholes. Jeremy: Who the hell are they? Greco: Them? The crappy Swastikas. German sh*ts who began boggling Liberty with stupid grafittis. (Toni then appears outside the resthouse) Toni: Greco! Jeremy! Oh you meddling gangsters! Gimme a hug! Greco and Jeremy: Toni! I thought you're snoring again in there. Toni: Oh shut up. Hey, what happened to your car? Greco: sh*t. Those Germans booby trapped us. Toni: Those sh*ts. Go fix your car, Greco. Jeremy. I'll show your temporary house. Jeremy: Anytime, Toni. (gameplay) You'll drive Toni to a Cipriani-owned casino in Saint Mark's. There you'll be able to save data, get your health bar filled up, and change clothes. You may also grab cars and save it to your garage. (cutscene) Toni: Hey Jeremy. I will not wait until Salvatore is reincarnated! Jump back here! (gameplay) Drive Toni back to his resthouse. Award: $50 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ret-RAT Posted December 6, 2008 Share Posted December 6, 2008 Good Storyline but... sorry but imagination should be engauged, everyone just wants to have the same characters and same setting (liberty city, vice city, san andreas and carcer city), maybe a completely different perspective should be put in place, new setting maybe, Chicago, London, Sydney, Boston, Dallas, Johannesburg, Melbourne, Tokyo, Auckland, Paris, Moskow. like completely different characters from the GTA III series, face it, it is vertually dead, GTA IV is the new thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DriftNismo Posted December 6, 2008 Share Posted December 6, 2008 Nice so far, has a nice GTA III Liberty City sense about it, and I like the GTA III Liberty City MUCH better than the GTA IV Liberty City . However, the first mission seems a bit hard for a first mission. It's fine for people who have played the GTA franchise games before, but for newcomers it may be a bit too tricky. Take a look at some other games' first missions: GTA III - Drive 8 Ball to the safehouse (then to Luigi I think, can't remember) GTA San Andreas - Ride the BMX away from the ballas back home (bit harder, not too hard for a first mission) GTA IV - Drive Roman to his apartment A first mission could be something like Toni goes to pick you up from Francis International Airport, but his leg is hurting, so you have to drive to his place. Nice idea though, would like to hear about more missions . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maciel Posted December 7, 2008 Share Posted December 7, 2008 Good story man, but the first mission is a bit harder, can i suggest something? Maybe you need to mencion some past gta characters, like CJ, or Claude i dont know, maybe you can say on a mission: Phil: and why you come to Liberty? Jeremy: For my family Phil: yes, your family, the family is a very important reason Jeremy: Why are you telling this to me? Phil: because i had a friend who lost his brother in Vice City. hes talking about Victor Vance, well, is just a suggestion good story. Sorry for my BAD BAD english Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Playstation_Loyalist Posted December 7, 2008 Author Share Posted December 7, 2008 I'll try to change some things. Anyway, I had this thing before VCS was even out. Mission 2: Sight seeing. (gameplay) Go to Toni's rest house at Saint Mark's, the former mansion of Salvatore Leone. (cutscene) Toni: Jeremy! Hey, nice to see you again. So, you've explored much of Portland Island? Jeremy: Yeah. Many square buildings and stuff. Toni: Yeah. Hey, meet Thunderball. He's the leader of the Thunderz, a mafia close to us in Liberty Campus. Thunderball: Hey, homie. Come on, let me show you the different sceneries in Liberty City. Toni, I'll see ya later. Bye! Toni: Whacko. (gameplay) Enter Thunderball's Stinger and follow the yellow marker which leads to Callahan Bridge. After you reach the place a cutscene activates. (cutscene) Thunderball: Ah, good grief. They're closing the damn bridge! Storm is threatening Liberty. Come on, let's take the tunnel. (gameplay) Drive him to the Porter Tunnel. Another cutscene... (cutscene) Thunderball: Damn crapload. The tunnel's closed too. Take me to my house. (gameplay) Drive to Hepburn Heights. (cutscene) Thunderball: Hey. Maybe Toni's looking for ya. I'm also busy today. I'll be in touch. Award: $75 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DriftNismo Posted December 8, 2008 Share Posted December 8, 2008 Nice second mission , I like the way you have given a reason for the bridges being closed in the beginning. You should write some missions, I'd be happy to play them . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jordy. Posted December 8, 2008 Share Posted December 8, 2008 Liberty City AGAIN?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigbear_2609 Posted December 9, 2008 Share Posted December 9, 2008 i think its a good storyline over all, and the two missions you have mentioned are pretty good HOWEVER i think that having it in liberty city again is abit repetative, why not have it somewhere else like Ret-RAT suggested? i think having it in Tokyo or Melbourne would be fun, maybe somewhere European, say Switzerland or Sweden for example. if you base it in Switzerland, and have a dramatic car chase resulting in a crash throough the Barrier and down the cliff for a mission, then make the rest up from there or just an idea pal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sammyman88 Posted December 9, 2008 Share Posted December 9, 2008 As much as I'd love to see Tony again in the next GTA.. Tony is like my second favourite main character but.. R* moved on.. new characters, maybe old ones taking place in it a little bit. But other than that you got a great storyline so far.. really good. Toni taking the chance of the Leone family leader is a great idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GamerJerome Posted December 10, 2008 Share Posted December 10, 2008 if there comes in the futhere a new gta V then i think it will have the same grafics as gta iv but a other land some other cars and weapons and maby more options but yeah the first 3 years there will not be a new gta for the pc i guess Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steve30x Posted December 10, 2008 Share Posted December 10, 2008 (edited) What I would love to see in GTA V (if it ever happens) is to have all the cities all seperated by the sea and bridges from the previous GTA games from GTA III - GTA IV (and all between) with GTA IV graphics , but with the features of all the GTA games that are missing. Like the ability to buy busines's and in vice City (I think) to modify cars. Also Like GTA III to overthrow gang leaders and take over their properties and Hitch up truck trailers like in san andreas. I know , I know , its asking a lot but maybe not have all cities but have the features I loved so much from the previous games that aint in GTA IV. Even if R* added the features in GTA IV through patches it would make the ultimate GTA game for me. Edited December 10, 2008 by steve30x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Playstation_Loyalist Posted December 12, 2008 Author Share Posted December 12, 2008 @ Ret-RAT and the others: Well, this is just a draft. I've committed a mistake on the thread title. I have a new perspective for Vice City, but I ain't even finished creating each gang and missions. So I just wanted to share this one while I prepare my "main dish". And thanks for the opinions. Keep those coming. Mission 3: Uphill Chase (cut scene) The camera will show Toni with his head covered by his hand. Jeremy comes. Jeremy: Hey, Toni. Have a problem? Toni: A big one. The police suspects me delivering some drugs coming from Vice City. I didn't even knew those drug delivery they say going here at the mansion. The family doesn't touch drugs. Drugs are for assholes. Degenerates. We've been to gun running and robbery businesses, but drugs? No way. I want you to go to Portland Harbor, get the damn van, and destroy it with your pleasure. Jeremy: Sure. (game play) The player drives to Portland Harbor, kills at least 5 Triad members and gets into the van. (cut scene) Inside the van... Jeremy: Oh sh*t, this van is rigged. Damn, 5 hours to go?! I've got to destroy this sh*t. (game play) The van is rigged with bombs. Worse is, the van is bulletproof, fireproof, and explosion proof as this was a military vehicle. You need to plunge the van to the river using faulty brakes. (If the player manages to plunge the van to the river, a cut scene shows the van sinking. Jeremy leaves the place and spawns at the Harwood fire station.) Award= $100 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Playstation_Loyalist Posted December 12, 2008 Author Share Posted December 12, 2008 MISSION 4: Arm's Race Prior to the mission proper, LCN news announces that Hurricane Penelope is threatening the East Coast resulting the Callahan Bridge, Shoreside Vale Lift Bridge, and the Porter Tunnel road ways to be temporarily closed. You need to go to Thunderball's mansion in Hepburn Heights to start Mission 4. (cut scene) Jeremy calls Thunderball from the outside telephone. Thunderball comes outside. Thunderball: Hey! It's homie! Come, let's go inside. The two are now seen at the mansion's living room. Jeremy: Pretty big place, I'm quite impressed. Thunderball: Nah. This mansion is not yet fully mine. I need to pay for the bills by giving artillery to my land lord. Bad news is that my arms are getting short. So I need you to kill him before the race begins. He's in a red Stinger. That car is full of guns and money. Take him off and bring me the guns. OK? Jeremy: OK. (game play) The driver gets the parked Banshee in front of the mansion. He hops in and goes to the starting line in Callahan Point. The other contenders are not yet there. The player must kill the guy without setting the car into flames. After that, he'll go back with the Stinger in Hepburn Heights. The Banshee used earlier will be automatically saved on the garage in the casino. Award= $500 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
"D-Generation-X" Posted December 12, 2008 Share Posted December 12, 2008 (edited) Good Storyline but... sorry but imagination should be engauged, everyone just wants to have the same characters and same setting (liberty city, vice city, san andreas and carcer city), maybe a completely different perspective should be put in place, new setting maybe, Chicago, London, Sydney, Boston, Dallas, Johannesburg, Melbourne, Tokyo, Auckland, Paris, Moskow. like completely different characters from the GTA III series, face it, it is vertually dead, GTA IV is the new thing. I'd love to see Sydney or Auckland good chapter Edited December 12, 2008 by "D-Generation-X" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Playstation_Loyalist Posted December 15, 2008 Author Share Posted December 15, 2008 Thanks... Mission 5: Paulie's Coming to Town (game play prior to mission 5) Mission 5: Paulie's Coming to Town Toni calls you after the last mission. Toni: Jeremy! Quick, get your god-damned butt over here! Jeremy: Why the hurry, Toni? Toni: NOW! (game play) Go to Momma's Restaurante in Saint Mark's. (cut scene) Inside the restaurant shows customers dining. The camera then shows Toni Cipriani, his mother and Jeremy in a table. Ma Cipriani: Toni. Would you like to introduce me your friend over there? Toni: Oh, he's Jeremy. Top-notch hitman of the family. Jeremy: Nice to meet you, Mrs. Cipriani. Ma: Oh, hi there, young man. Hmm, I think you're a tough guy. Where did you come from? Jeremy: Vice City. Down south. Ma: Ah. Hey, wait a minute. I'll just check my lobsters. Jeremy: Sure. Hey, Toni. Why did you called me? Any problems? Toni: Yeah. I just heard that Paulie Sindacco rose from the graves. Jeremy: Who's that? Toni: The 'dead' Don of the Sindacco Family, a once formidable mafia family in Liberty City. I thought I've killed that prick at Shoreside. Jeremy, I want you to go to the police station and search some files about Paulie. Then, get back at the mansion. OK? Jeremy: Sure, bud. (game play) Go to the police station in Saint Mark's. (cut scene) Jeremy: Officer, can I ask you something? Police Officer T.J. Sucker: Sure, what may I help you? Jeremy: May I seek some files from Paulie Sindacco? T.J.: For what? Jeremy: For...uh... my son's..err..report in Criminology. T.J.: Sure. Wait for 48 hours. I'll process that. Jeremy: Sure. Jeremy goes outside. He then sees a Sindacco Argento screeching off. Inside is the Don, Paulie Sindacco. Paulie: Let's go. Be sure no one is following us. Another cut scene shows Toni Cipriani answering a call on his telephone. Toni: Yeah? Paulie: Toni! Ha, good to hear your god-damned voice. What happened to the old man? Huh? Did hid balding head got shot by his 'trusted' hitman? Hahahaha! Toni: f*ck you, Paulie! I thought you're drowned in the river?! Paulie: Hey, I ain't like you Italian-American sh*t heads! Pure Italians know how to swim! I'll be in touch, Cipriani! Beware. Toni: Damn it! (game play) You need to go back to Toni's rest house, but tail first Paulie's car. He'll stop at the casino. He still don't know you, so you'll be needing to keep a low-profile. Award= $750 and the casino bar tending side mission is unlocked. (Post-mission game play) After the mission Greco calls you up. Greco: Hey bro! I need ya to come down here at my apartment here in Red Light District. We need to talk. Ciao! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rhoda Posted December 15, 2008 Share Posted December 15, 2008 (edited) No more Liberty please, it doesn't have much longevity in IV, and besides, we've never seen a repeating city yet. Edited December 16, 2008 by Masterkraft Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uzi 9mm Posted December 15, 2008 Share Posted December 15, 2008 No no no. Definately not Liberty City again. I am for a London game and even London's similar style to NY is making me want it set elsewhere like a SA style area. Still, LC again would be horrid. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Playstation_Loyalist Posted December 16, 2008 Author Share Posted December 16, 2008 For crying out loud. This is just a DRAFT... as in D-R-A-F-T. Search in a dictionary. Oh, I quit on this one. People are just getting repetitive over and over, and it's not just worth it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maciel Posted December 16, 2008 Share Posted December 16, 2008 "casino bar tending side mission", thats a very good idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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