The Unvirginiser Posted August 21, 2008 Author Share Posted August 21, 2008 Yeah, there was quite a lot of vaginal abuse And about the nitpicks you made, it goes back to the willing suspension of disbelief... bare in mind it's not a serious piece, retarded in nature.. so a whore with a teeny fanny just adds atmosphere to the character's situation.. beats saying "Her vagina was.. average.. I've had better" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hybrid88 Posted August 21, 2008 Share Posted August 21, 2008 Yeah, there was quite a lot of vaginal abuseAnd about the nitpicks you made, it goes back to the willing suspension of disbelief... bare in mind it's not a serious piece, retarded in nature.. so a whore with a teeny fanny just adds atmosphere to the character's situation.. beats saying "Her vagina was.. average.. I've had better" i dont actually think there was a lot of vaginal abuse as such. however the sex was very spontaneous and animalistic and woman was in charge, here, here! i think there was just a bit of a muddle with the consistencies and areas of the vulva area, if anything, in my opinion, the abuse was up the bum! haha with that lack of lube-age. but yes, this is the short story of the month, not some booker prize competition, this is all amatuers writing what they want and stuff, so ye, its not going to be publishers perfection, lol and ye, the whole "average vagina" would have dampened the reading mood, because in sex, no one really wants average, they want the best, and if they do get average, they lie about it.. and ye, with him sleeping around, he probs has had better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Unvirginiser Posted August 21, 2008 Author Share Posted August 21, 2008 At one stage in the pre-production there was going to be sucking of period blood As somebody said earlier, it's intentionally mingin' purely for effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted August 21, 2008 Share Posted August 21, 2008 At one stage in the pre-production there was going to be sucking of period bloodAs somebody said earlier, it's intentionally mingin' purely for effect O mii dayz! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Unvirginiser Posted August 21, 2008 Author Share Posted August 21, 2008 At one stage in the pre-production there was going to be sucking of period bloodAs somebody said earlier, it's intentionally mingin' purely for effect O mii dayz! And I thought I was sick You've obviosuly had menstrual slurpies before Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted August 21, 2008 Share Posted August 21, 2008 At one stage in the pre-production there was going to be sucking of period bloodAs somebody said earlier, it's intentionally mingin' purely for effect O mii dayz! And I thought I was sick You've obviosuly had menstrual slurpies before Who hasn't? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eminence Posted August 21, 2008 Share Posted August 21, 2008 Come on guys, let's not get spammy, please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted August 21, 2008 Share Posted August 21, 2008 You've obviosuly had menstrual slurpies before Who hasn't? If I have it was unintentional. I don't even know what a menstrual slurpy is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hybrid88 Posted August 21, 2008 Share Posted August 21, 2008 At one stage in the pre-production there was going to be sucking of period bloodAs somebody said earlier, it's intentionally mingin' purely for effect O mii dayz! And I thought I was sick You've obviosuly had menstrual slurpies before haha. apparently it just tastes like iron vitamin tablets, but as a girl, i would never expect or particular want a guy to stick his willy in me or suck out the menstrual blood. i seriously think it would scar a man if he wasnt prepared. there are some things guys just dont need to know, see, smell, feel, experience, and sexing girls up when menstrual is one of them... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Unvirginiser Posted August 21, 2008 Author Share Posted August 21, 2008 At one stage in the pre-production there was going to be sucking of period bloodAs somebody said earlier, it's intentionally mingin' purely for effect O mii dayz! And I thought I was sick You've obviosuly had menstrual slurpies before haha. apparently it just tastes like iron vitamin tablets, but as a girl, i would never expect or particular want a guy to stick his willy in me or suck out the menstrual blood. i seriously think it would scar a man if he wasnt prepared. there are some things guys just dont need to know, see, smell, feel, experience, and sexing girls up when menstrual is one of them... And that is exactly the reader reaction that a sick, twisted, cum filled vampire sex tale is meant to create! Win! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sanjeem Posted October 27, 2008 Share Posted October 27, 2008 that was amazing! and i mean amazing!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Unvirginiser Posted October 27, 2008 Author Share Posted October 27, 2008 Thanks Let's be clear, this isn't a SSOTM entry for this month guys, it got bumped. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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